FF-Till death do us apart.Last part pg63 - Page 20

Originally posted by: panache

O.k..Sweetie..now that i promised myself that i will type a lamba comment and tell you what i thought..you have to give me sometime now...and i am reserving this space for a long winding comment! 😉

😆 aw take your time sweets I hope it'll be worth the wait.

Muneeza darling,

Aww...fantastic part dear...the anguish, anger, heart brokeness of our hero...can be so felrt...poor dear....feels betrayed by two people he lvoe s the most,.......his sis and his wife.....

Aww....my darling....big hug to my Milli baby....😛😳😆

Now love your Neev....he sure is doing a fantastic job in keeping an eye on that Witch Ayesha.......

Now..can't wait to see what our big Baby does ...on seeing his wife in hte office....

He's angry and ...and beleives Prachi was acting.....urgh...he does need a whack...though I do blame Prachi too for hiding the truth from him...

Can't wait for the nes tpart from you soon......and when do we get the smashing part from you that you promiosed in Sangeeta's ff....am waiting dear......so be quick.....😆 And by smashing I do not mean...Milli baby smashing things around...thou8gh he can do that too...but I am expecting something else.....completely...😆

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: panache

I read the whole FF once more..i had missed a few parts earlier on That's sweet dear.😊

First - Milind, as a character is awesome..Milind with his own set of insecurities makes you want to rip at him and at the same time admire him. I love the confession part btw Milind and Prachi...The way it came out albiet the fact that he was in a drunken state... His insecurities are the formation of his character, being brought up in a chawl and now ending up in Shah mansion has built then up more strongly I just wanted to show that .Well they had to confess now I'm thinking of making them do it in a conscious state.😊

The end when Milind is asking the lawyers to draw divorce papers is literally how Milind would have reacted at a situation like this! predictable isn't he...😊

@ Sukriti's raaz coming out is better in your FF than in Kayamath itself! I can practically picture the scene at the hospital.. 👏 👏 👏 Perfect! aw thx dear.😊

I like the fact that Neev is does not believe that Milind slept with Ayesha..I also think that his anger is well and truly justified. Milind at that moment clearly shows how deeply he's been affected..it felt like his emotions were coming from his soul... I really wanted the reader to feel his anguish ...I'm happy I conveyed it alright.

The secondary characters of Neev and Ayesha have been handled really well..you haven't lost track of them in the entire flow of the FF. That's a great acheivement... 👏 😳 The story would be pretty bland without them.

Sukriti's story is woven so beautifully into this FF that i love it..it completely makes sense that it should be revealed to Milind in this way...But the one thing i don't get is how can he misunderstand Prachi yet again!!! Well keeping Milind in mind if Sukriti even sneezed he'd consider it Prachi's fault hence the anger from his side. But I think the point lies in the fact that he thinks she with held crucial information from him about his sister , basically it's his family he should be knowing it before her....😊


I need to know what happens next!!!!! Eagerly waiting for your next part! 😳 Honestly I hadn't even thought of writing so many parts sometimes just wonder ok what happened to the end I had thought...😆I surprise myself ...literally.

Originally posted by: kubare

Muneeza darling, Yes Krishi dear..

Aww...fantastic part dear...the anguish, anger, heart brokeness of our hero...can be so felrt...poor dear....feels betrayed by two people he lvoe s the most,.......his sis and his wife..... I understand just felt it all like him

Aww....my darling....big hug to my Milli baby....😛😳😆 Now you need to queue up for that dear 😆

Now love your Neev....he sure is doing a fantastic job in keeping an eye on that Witch Ayesha....... The only reason he's in my ff to keep a check on all supernatural beings in the story...😆😆

Now..can't wait to see what our big Baby does ...on seeing his wife in hte office....

He's angry and ...and beleives Prachi was acting.....urgh...he does need a whack...though I do blame Prachi too for hiding the truth from him... Both are to be equally blamed though Milli darling bears the guilt most of the time.😳

Can't wait for the nes tpart from you soon......and when do we get the smashing part from you that you promiosed in Sangeeta's ff....am waiting dear......so be quick.....😆 And by smashing I do not mean...Milli baby smashing things around...thou8gh he can do that too...but I am expecting something else.....completely...😆 Oh now you'r expecting things....looks like it had better be smashing....I just hope it matches Sangeeta's kiss scenario.😆

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: shananubis

Muneeza darling...

you updated.. Another great part 👏 👏 👏 I love your Milind better than the one in the show.. Maybe because you can write the characters feelings in ff and you have to rely on expressions in serials... Ah sweetheart it's easier said than done I try n keep thinking how Milind would feel in a certain scenario then write it down rather I do that with all the characters.

I loved the way Milind's thought process went regarding Prachi.. He was heartbroken mainly because Prachi never felt him "belonged to her". I am more in love with Milind.. Ok that makes two of us in love with him...I'm sure others will be joining soon...😆

Neev is mindblowing in this ff... 😊 His character is that of a best friend and also a lover who wants the person whom he loves to be happy.. 😊 Thats his priority now 👏 👏 Yes I do so want him to be like that not the broken record sort that keeps on playing in the serial....such a bore really.

Can't wait to see how Milind will react when he see's Prachi at the office.. Maybe Prachi will hear his discussions with the lawyer once she reaches the office..

One thing I want to say is please don't seperate them and do a leap. I can't stand leaps nowadays. 😭 You kidding abhi to bachey nahin huey leap kahaan sey....I certainly do not want to trespass Ekta's territory here she's the leap queen and in our forum Basanthi is the leap princess no leaps for me though would so like to see Milind acting daddy to a cute sweet baby girl...now I'm dreaming.😆

Please continue soon dear.. Awaiting the next part eagerly.

PS.@krishna - you have to hug my bhaiyya in each and every post don't you 😡 😆 .. I think I will have to make Milind 'krishna proof' from now onwards.. keep that hands to yourseves lady 😆 😆 😆 You'r so right 😆

Originally posted by: Magno

*Pulls hair off*

I am maaad!! 😡 Why are there so many Hindi lines?!😡 😃😃Assuming it's a hindi serial I thought would keep it that way...how do you watch the serial I often wonder

OMG Muneeza let me say in all honesty that I simply love love love your writing. I did not browse for Hindi lines, I actually read the parts in whole and gosh how much I wish I understood Hindi... I'm simply hooked to this FF already. The way you tell the story just squeezes my heart, I feel Milind the duffer completely. And right, they positively stole the balcony scene from you. When I watched the episode I assumed that Prachi indeed didn't see Milind, and that Milind was thinking what he was thinking here, while seeing her crying. 😊 Thx dear I really do appreciate it

Ahem so here I go, dear...😃 My fellow Hindi-blind everywhere, your gratitude is welcomed anytime😃Sure sweets anytime.

Actually this is alll of the Hindi lines... Up to part 4... And I will ask for the rest for ALL other lines soon... Do take your time, Dear... Quick... 😃

[quote]Kya yeh bhi sab uska natak hai?he asked himself . Kya is main bhi us ki koi chaal hai? Magar agar hai to kiya? Woh kiya chahti hai mujhsey?

Is it all her drama?he asked himself. Does this too involve any evil design?But if there is any then what is it?What does she want from me?

" Sir woh Korean delegates aa gaye hain , hum ney unhain conference room main bithaya hai." "theek hai tum chalo main aata huun." " Saala eik to dimagh ki bhi dahi ban gayi hai soch soch ker .....

"Sir the Korean delegates have come, we have seated them in the conference room." "Ok you go ahead I'll come." "My head had become pure yoghurt because of thinking constantly...feels really dumb in english but it really is a great hindi line.😊

"Prachi beta Milind nahin aaya ab tak?"

"Prachi has Milind not come till yet?"

"Ji woh abhi aatey hi hongey ....meri baat hui thii unkey secretary sey , woh keh rahey they Milind abhi abhi nikley hain." " Acha mainey aaj halwa banaya hai Milind ko pasand hai na ..usey zarur dena ...." isi bahaney kuch kha legi

"He will be arriving shortly...I just had a word with his secretary, he informed me that Milind has just left for home." "Ok I've made dessert for him Milind likes it so do give him some...she may eat some herself this way.

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Will continue in a moment