FF-Till death do us apart.Last part pg63 - Page 21

Originally posted by: critically-sane

Muneeza dear.. absolutely loved the update.. can't believe i missed it for so long..! lol..! Thx dear...see am all smiles 😊

poor Milind.. so much anger and sorrow..! Yeah poor guy much more to go through before he gets his Prachi via me..😆

And i love the way Neev is in your story..! he's too cute and funny..! and so clever to pretend to be in Ayesha's good books..! Wish he'd be like that in the serial too.

Please update soon..! 👏

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Assuming it's a hindi serial I thought would keep it that way...how do you watch the serial I often wonder

Originally posted by: Magno

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" Main ab Milind ki patni huun or tum Ayesha key pati..Now I am Milind's wife and you are Ayesha's husband main jaanti huun humari shaadi jin haalat main hui who sahi nahin they I know the circumstances under which our marraiges took place were not right lekin is ka yeh matlab nahin keh rishta bhi ghalat hai..But that does not mean that the relations are wrong too zaruri nahin keh insaan ko zindagi main sab kuch mil jaaye. a person does not neccessarily get everything in life Kayii baar jo insaan chahta hai who nahin hota Most of the time people do not get what they want lekin jo hota hai us main upper waley ki marzi shaamil hoti hai but what ever happens is in lieu to God's will…..main apney rishtey sey buhut khush huun Neev or chahti huun keh tum bhi apney rishtey main aagey barho I'm very happy with my relationship Neev and want you to move on with your's. Tum mera ateet ho Neev or Milind mera vartaman or bhavisher You are my past Neev and Milind is my present and the future...or main nahin chahti key merey ateet ki wajeh sey merey vartaman per koi asar parey…" I do not want my past overshadowing my future.

Lekin Prachi tum Milind key saath khush" But Prachi your happiness with Milind.

" Meri khushion ki fikr kerna chor do Neev Stop worrying about my happiness Neev…ab merey pati meri khushion key zimmedar hain My husband is now responsible for my happiness or meri har khushi Milind sey shuru hoti hai or unhi per khatam".and my happiness starts and ends with Milind.

"Uska khayaal rakhna Milind….woh khush rahey is se zyaada mujhey kuch nahin chahiye"Take care of her Milind ....I do not want anything more than her happiness.


"Us ney Neev sey yeh kyun kaha keh uski khushi mujh sey hai? Why did she tell Neev that her happiness is due to me. Yeh konsa naya natak hai? Is this some new act of hers? Ya who sach much mujh sey Or is she really...with me…….nahin who aisa kaisey ker sakti hai who to Neev ko bachpan sey…No how can she do that ...from childhood she has loved Neev or mainey bhi to kabhi usko koi khushi nahin di and I too have never given her any happiness.…bas saala yeh dard bhi na oh but this pain….sahi kehti hai who agar dard deney sey khushi milti to saaley sab khush hotey yahaan…she is right if giving pain was the way to find happiness then everyone here would be happy.

"Bas thori der pehley " A short while back.

" Maa ney khana laga diya hai ..humain neechay bulaya hai".Mom has laid the food on the table...has called us downstairs.

" Acha beta raat buhut ho gayi hai ab main chalti huun It's getting late I'll get going now.…Prachi beta tum yeh sab kitchen main rakh dena Prachi keep all this in the kitchen or haan Milind kal office sey jaldi ghar aa jaana..kal ghar main puja hai."and yes Milind come home soon from the office tomorrow...there's a puja at our home.

"Ab kal konsi puja hai?" Now what puja is there tomorrow..hope you know puja means Indian relgious gathering.

"Woh baba ney rakhwai hai kal puja aapkey or ……….."Dad has arranged a puja for you and...

" Acha .." Ok

" Mainey baba sey kaha bhi tha keh aap busy hongey ….lekin woh…." I told Baba you'd be busy...but he...

" Main aa jaunga " I'll come.

" Hello ….Haan Mr Sharma Yes Mr Sharma.……kal..haan kal ki meeting schedule Tomorrow..yes tomorrow's meeting schedule. ….kal bank manager sey bhi appointment hai tomorrow there's an appointment with the bank manager too.…..sab workers ki salary all the worker's salary …..acha …ok hmm …lekin zara jaldi but a bit fast…kal mujhey zaruri kaam hai.ok"tomorrow I have some important work.
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Originally posted by: Magno

Yes Dear, I too think dialogues in Hindi seems more natural... Thank you so much for the translations, really appreciate this. I know you're not done yet with the list but please excuse me because I'm adding it up😃😳 Sweets if you can put an effort in reading it then I certainly should put an effort in making you understand it better, it's my duty as a writer so dun thank me at all.😊

"Milind beta, malum hai na aaj puja hai ghar per."Milind do you know there's a puja at home today. "Ji baba maa ney bataya tha." Yes Baba mom had informed me.

"To beta phir zara jaldi aaney ki koshish kerna." Then try and come home early today.

"who mujhey bazaar jaana tha puja ki samagiri leney I had to go to the market to buy certain things for the puja.…….main khud chali jaati lekin abhi tak driver nahin aaya or samaan jaldi laana hai phir ghar main or kaam bhi hain." I would've gone myself but the driver has not come yet and I need the things early because then there's other work at home too.

"Theek hai " Alright.

"Milind bazaar hi jaa rahey ho to Prachi ko bhi kuch shopping kerwa dena Milind if you'r going to the market get Prachi something from there.Main dekh raha huun tum usey bilkul waqt nahin detey.I see you do not give her time at all.Kitney din ho gaye tum dono kahiin eik saath nahin gaye." It's been so many days since you both went out together."Par baba ….." But Baba...

"Nahin main kuch nahin sunna chahta, No I don't want to listen to anything bas ab Prachi beta jaldi sey tayyar ho jao or shaam key liye shopping ker lo"Now Prachi dress up soon and go do some shopping for the evening.

"Kuch pasand aaya?" Like anything yet?he inquired." Meri samajh main kuch nahin aa raha, I cannot decide anything sab hi saarian itni khubsurat hain in main sey chunna mushkil hai. All the sarees are so beautiful it's difficult choosing .Aap hi kuch madad ker dijiye." Could you help me

" Jo kuch khareedna hai jaldi khareed ley merey paas zyaada time nahin hai" Whatever you wanna buy do it fast I don't have much time.

Yeh Milind per acha lageyga This will look good on Milind.

"Main tum log ko yahaan kaam kerney paisey deta huun ayyashi kerney key liye nahin" I pay you people to work here not to have a nice time.

"Dekhiye sir company account sey.." Look sir from the company account "Company account sey ya to main paisey nikalwa sakta huun ya tuu. Yes either I can withdraw cash from the company account or you.Main ney to paisey nikalwaye nahin to phir kahaan gaye paisey. Since I haven't withdrawn any then where has the money gone. Jaldi bata nahin to aaj teri naukri key saath tuu bhi khatam "Tell me fast or else you'll no longer exist as your job from today.

" Dekhiye sir paisey mainey hi nikalwaye they lekin apney liye nahin " Sir I had withdrawn the money but not for my ownself.

" To phir kis key liye nikalwaye they terey baap ka paisa tha kiya jo mujhey bina bataye ley liya…."Then who'd you take it out for...was it your father's money that you took it without informing me." Sir who paisey mainey Sukriti madam key kehney per nikalwaye they "Sir I had withdrawn that money on Sukriti ma'ams orders.

" Sir agar aap ko mujh per yaqeen nahin to bank manager sey puch lein unhon ney hi fone per Sukriti madam sey baat ki thi." Sir if you don't believe me you can ask the bank manager he had a talk with Sukriti madam on the fone

Sukriti ney mujhey kyun nahin bataya Why did Sukriti not inform me.(now I noticed some repeated words but please bear with me, dear... With this I can get some hang of the use:) that's for the emphasis so no sweat.

Mr Sandeep main Milind Mishra bol raha hun, Mr Sandeep MIlind Mishra speaking mujhey 4 th September key merey company account sey cash withdrawal ki details chahiye." I want the details regarding the cash withdrawal from my company account on 4th of september.

" Sir purey do crore ki withdrawal hui thi , main ney confirmation key liye Ms Sukriti sey fone per baat bhi ki thi aapkey accountant ko cash handover kerney sey pehley". Sir the withdrawal was of a full 2 crores. I had a talk with Ms Sukriti over the fone before handing over the cash to your accountant.

Thank you much before!😊😊 Dun mention hun.

Originally posted by: gulrani

Hi Muneeza dear, Hi Shabnam jaan hope you'r doing good.
just drop by to read your FF again... ...with conviction I can say - IMPECCABLE ...MINDBLOWING. Thank you so much dear.😊
Finished reading both parts ten and eleven, you are so brilliant in your writing and your imagination into this FF sounds real, a beautiful romantic storyline.....it s not dragging ...just to the point. Good to hear that since it's exactly wat I want it to be not a bore.😊
part ten ...nicely portrayed Milind s feelings for his wife...knowing the bitter truth of Sukriti s secret , worried nature..... 👏
part eleven is so gripping till the end...filling for divorce...the way Milinds, breaksdown ...you have shown all the emotions , Milind s anger, avoiding Prachi s phone calls...Prachi s worrying and confused nature...so clearly explained. 👏
Keep up with this good work, darling ...you deserve 👏 👏 👏... Honestly , enjoying reading your FF...please do continue .I sure will hun after such appreciation I have to....😊

Originally posted by: shananubis

Muneeza darling when are you going to update ... I am missing ur ff *pouts*...

please continue dear

Sweety I promise soon will be doing so tomorrow hopefully..😊 thx for missing it.