Ikraar PART 5C Pg15 Hero's Entry - Page 12

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: red_chile

😡 such a drama queen you are , I will think of something, or maybe shali will get the very deserved Mili 😉, right under your nose *sticking tongue out *

Drama queeen....Me????? *all confused look on my face...with slight bit of hurt*😆

And what may I ask are you???!!!???😆 The queen of them all...theMaha Drama Queen....I am but.....just a small disiple...😆

I bow too your greatness.....😆😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Aur kya ahaday wafah hotay hai 😊

Part 5C:

It was an unwritten rule that nobody talks to prachi about milind. Today everybody was going to panvel (😕 from picnic) to spend their weekend together. All the ladies pack and come to pick prachi, who was not very enthusiatic for the obvious reason

Ayesha: array prachi, dont worry Milind wont be around ( reading her mind 😆)

Prachi 😡 : and why would that make me change my decision

Ayesha ( knowing her sister fully well 😉) : Well i thought since he still effects you , thats why you are chickening out 😆

Prachi: I am not chickening out for him * and turning towards ayesha * What do u mean by effecting me😡 *then turning around moving the whole body in the action of negation*, he so doesnot effect me 😡

ayesha: Really!!!, then why are you not coming

Prachi: Who said i am not coming, lets go 😡,

prachi leaves a amused ayesha 😉😆

***

Its been saturday, ( they came on friday) all of them cooking new new things, playing, spending time in the garden. Chatting catching up etc etc

Around 2 they are bored so they decide to turn of the radio and enact the song

*** they have a jugalbandi of old and new song *****

first song is

apni prem kahaniya from mera gaon mera desh

PL dances and dadi dance for it

the next one is the lastest one from omkara, the beedi song on which ayesha dances

****

Milind calls ayesha : Kidhar hai tu, aur yeah kya party horayla hai kya😃

ayesha : haan we are all in panvel, tu bhi aajaa naa😃

Milind: nahi tu rahnay dhay😕, i am already tired, i just go to sleep here, i will see you 2morrow then😕

Ayesha : array you can relax here, aur phir 2 more hours of drive couldnot tire u that much, jyada shaana math ban aur edhar aajaa chal see you prachi is calling

Mili : kaise hai prachi( little prachi)

Ayesha: Kyon miss karraha hai kya, ethna hi miss karraha hai to edhar aajaa, looks like she is missing you too 😉😆

( both talking about different prachi though😆)

so mili takes the car and gets to panvel😊

********

Its prachi turn to dance, the radio plays the song from devdas its called morey piya( since she is so talented in singing i am assuming she can dance kathak too 😕😆 or some classical dance)

More Piya

Aasman Ki Baahon Mein Chand Akela Thehra Tha
Raat Ki Jawani Pe Chandni Ka Pehra Tha
Runjhun Runjhun Hawa Ka Jhoka Ughli Ughli Raat
Taaro Ki Doli Mein Aayi Jhilmilaati Jugnu Ki Baaraat
Sab Ke Hoton Pe Thehri Thi Aake Koyi Baat
Dhol Manjire Bajne Lage Padi Dafli Par Thaap
Aur Dhumak Dhumak Kar Naach Rahi Thi Meri Radha Pyaari
Dhumak Dhumak Kar Naach Rahi Thi Meri Radha Pyaari
Jaane Kahan Se Raaz Rachane Aaya Chaila Girdari
More Piya Darrta Hai Dehko Mora Jiya
More Piya Darrta Hai Dehko Mora Jiya
More Piya

Na Bahiyaan Dharo Aati Hai Muhje Sharam
Haan Chhod Do Tumko Hai Meri Kasam
Na Na Zid Na Karo Jaane Do Mujhe Baalam
Dekho Doongi Mein Gaaliyan Bawre Chalo Hato Sataon Na More Piya
More Piya More Piya Darrta Hai Dehko Mora Jiya
More Piya Darrta Hai Dehko Mora Jiya
More Piya


Jamuna Ke Teer Baje Mridang Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang
Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang
Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang
Artho Ke Geet Mann Mein Umang
Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang
Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang
Saason Mein Pyaas Tan Mein Taran
Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang


as prachi is revovling around for ths ong, camera zooms to a person entering the house, black shoes,black trousers, as he is walking towards liviing room, we see long hair ( not so long.......) as he proceeds the backside of the black coat is seen..... he sees prachi going around.......

Ayesha sees him.......... 😊

Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang
Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang
Isse Dhak Dhak Duniya Hai Tang
Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang
Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang
Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang
Kare Krishn Raaz Radha Ke Sang

after turing round and round as the song ends..prachi loses balance, quickly opens her eyes only to stare 😳 at milind.

honestly ladies i am laughing so hard, i have never given any of my ff hero so much footage and filimi entry as milind

Hope u enjoy it😃...if not the romance atleast the comedy should work😆

Reg

Basanti 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
Akka, Mills made you give him a filmily entry 😉 …I am surprised you kept his long hair…cause I thought you took him to the Tirupathi 😆 😆 😆

Ayehsa character still shocks me, she call up Mills to inform about Prachis was too good to be true…

I have seen Prachi sing today (haha 😆 ), and in you FF I have imagined her to dance as well 😆 😆 and that too for a song from Devdas as her own Devdas is on his way to see her… 😉

It was a pleasure to read this part…enjoyed the humour.. 😃

Thanks Basanti 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 😆 ...
filmy very filmy. 👏 👏 👏 ...
please continue...
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: meli

Akka, Mills made you give him a filmily entry 😉 …I am surprised you kept his long hair…cause I thought you took him to the Tirupathi 😆 😆 😆

yenna pannaradhu, popular demand naalaa i had to leave the hair like that.....😆, and i want to still take him to tirupathi, only the day when either u or shali or krishna or nina have him..........😆, motai(shaven head) style will be the wedding or watever u want to do with him gift 😆

Ayehsa character still shocks me, she call up Mills to inform about Prachis

well i was only able to write this becoz of you, as you showed me the episode where ayesha stood infront of neev and scolded him 😆😆😆

was too good to be true…

i know meli kanna......... but i try to be good to everybody, other than alaap i think

I have seen Prachi sing today (haha 😆 ), and in you FF I have imagined her to dance as well 😆 😆 and that too for a song from Devdas as her own Devdas is on his way to see her… 😉

hmm i know why not she sang so well too........ just like asha....... so she can dance like ash......😆 well i needed to give an entry......the song was apt........so did that 😆

It was a pleasure to read this part…enjoyed the humour.. 😃

yeah i know comedy would work big time......all my ff are more of comedy than romance its my crappy writing 😭

Thanks Basanti 😛

welcome akka, any time.........

Reg

Basanthi

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shali

😆 😆 😆 ...
filmy very filmy. 👏 👏 👏 ...
please continue...

thanks i am gladyou had a good laugh, i myself was laughing so loud on my creation😆

array i thought everybody wanted mili with dhamaka, i gave him such a dramatic entry i hope that worked

Reg

Basanthi😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: red_chile

thanks i am gladyou had a good laugh, i myself was laughing so loud on my creation😆

array i thought everybody wanted mili with dhamaka, i gave him such a dramatic entry i hope that worked

Reg

Basanthi😆

it was not dramatic only filmy.... now he only needs to kick a few goons and make them fly around.... a the pic will be complete.....

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shali

it was not dramatic only filmy.... now he only needs to kick a few goons and make them fly around.... a the pic will be complete.....

Damn, I didnot think of it, well never mind will use it for the next time 😆

Edited by red_chile - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow Anju... Kya entry tha mere hero kaaa... You made Prachi dance for his entry... naach basanti naach 😆 😆 😆

nice part. I enjoyed Milind's entry immensely. Its fun to read your ff.. please put some sense into your Milind's head...

Shan
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Posted: 18 years ago

🤣

Basanthi darling......god I can't stop laughing at all🤣

The whole part from Prachi singing to her dancing...classical dance...😆has me in stiches.....😆

Aww..what a filmy entry in deed of our hero an what a filmy scene of Prachi..eyes falling on him.....😆

Now...if you are to beleived...we will have a dramatic fight sequence soon too...so can't wait ro that one...🤣

Loved it....and can't wait for more from you...🤣

Love

Krishna

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