Dheele pench , Aur toote taar!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Neev ke nahin , philhaal tho, Mishra ji ke upri hisse ke pench dheele hai aur dil ke taar hai toote hue... aise mein hosh sambhaale bhi to kaise... ki nazren dekhti hai jo bas dil chaahe!

Aur toote dil ke toh kya kehne!

Aur Ayesha ji ke tho pench itne dheele hai ki ki brahm mein jeeti hai... ki doosro ke pench unhe hi seedhe karne hai!Aur unke dil ke tho kya kehne ... taar tootna tho door... taar todne mein mahir hai...unka ye dil!

Aur Prachi Devi tho , Bhaggu ji ki ek aisi nayaab tafreeh hai ki bas poochiye mat...
Apne dil ke taar bhale hi toote hue ho... doosron ke dilon ke toote taar jodte jodte.. apne dil ke taar bhi jod leti hai! Bhale hi is nayaab koshish mein, kuch bechaare kismat ke maaron ke dil ke taar wo khud hi kyon na tod de!

Inke dil ke toote taar aur dheele pench dekhkar , roz hamaare penche dheele hai hote, aur dil ke taar hai toot the... phir bhi lage rehte hai... ki samjh gaye hai hum .. ki hogaye pench hamaare bhi dheele... aur behlalete hai khud ko... philhaal ye episode tho jeele!

Ab boliye... ye kahaani dheele pench , aur toote dil ke taaron ki nahin hai , tho kya hai bhala ??? šŸ˜†

-Sareeta

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sareeta darling, too goood dear...very apt adn beautifully written dear.😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: kubare


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*Bows to applause*

Sareeta darling, too goood dear...very apt adn beautifully written dear.😃

Thanks a lot Krishna! I jus remembered Ayesha's taunt to Neev in the party suddenly and then I penned the whole thing down ....! Didnt realize I'd manage to write so much! šŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
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🤣 That was a great read.
I just your languagešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ Always a pleasure to read ur posts
Thank u for adding to the Michians Party😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev_fan

that was funny šŸ˜†



Thanks! šŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ryka

🤣 That was a great read.
I just your languagešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ Always a pleasure to read ur posts
Thank u for adding to the Michians Party😃



Thank you soooooooo much Ryka, am really humbled that you enjoy my posts! have made many here yet on the forum, but will share some if and whenever I write! 😊

Ahoi! I am a michian myself, so party kaise na join karoongi! Haq banta hai mera yaar party pe! šŸ˜† Michi pankhi hoon aakhir! šŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ‘ oh my god, you made my day ...oops night... am going to sleep happy today.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMg Sareeta that was mindblowing. šŸ‘ šŸ‘ I wonder how you manage to write so beautifully.I used to be a silent visitor on the KAA forums sometime ago when I came across your short stories and shayaries.I fell in love with them instantly.When I saw your posts on this forum I thought I had hit a jackpot.Now I know that I am getting to be really greedy here.But Sareeta when you get some time can you please write a short story on our MICHI jodi?

A humble request from a fan of yours.
Madhavi.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: tvfan1401

šŸ‘ oh my god, you made my day ...oops night... am going to sleep happy today.....



Awww, bless my soul... that was very sweet of you to say so! Thank you... its very humbling... that something I penned casually brought a smile on to your face... thank you!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhu_vasireddy

OMg Sareeta that was mindblowing. šŸ‘ šŸ‘Thanks a lot Madhavi I wonder how you manage to write so beautifully. I dont know, its not intentional,... I jus remembered a taunt that Ayesha gave Neev in the party and jus randomly penned the lines down! I used to be a silent visitor on the KAA forums sometime ago when I came across your short stories and shayaries.I fell in love with them instantly. Awwww, bless my soul .... that is very kind and humbling! When I saw your posts on this forum I thought I had hit a jackpot. *speechless* Now I know that I am getting to be really greedy here.Oh dont say that! But Sareeta when you get some time can you please write a short story on our MICHI jodi? Michi jodi is so fab, that I am not sure I can do justice to their chemistry.... in a FF... and I jus write a story that comes randmly for me , bearing resemblance to the characters of the story...Milind is more a chawl background man and that is something I have never written on... let me see if I can write something... I will definitely give it a shot!😊

A humble request from a fan of yours.
Madhavi.

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