Saath Rahega Always...plz do read

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Posted: 18 years ago
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First of all I like to thank all the people who liked my first fiction called Ek Masoom Sa Chehra. So know I am back with another thrilling new fiction called Saath Rahega Always and this is kind of based on the current track they showed yesterday where Prachi decide to leave the Shah Mansion. So I thought of making it more thrilling and fun to read because we all know Ekta might not make us happy by keeping Prachi in the house because we all want Milind to realize his mistake in how badly he treated Prachi even it wasn't her mistake anyways the setting of this fiction will be (two months after the horrible night between Prachi and Milind. I hope everyone will enjoy reading this one because this one is pretty close to me when it reminds me of my past few months ago😭, but with a different story line so don't feel sorry about it just have fun reading it 😉.

Here I go...




Main Protagonists

Prachi Milind Mishra - Panchi Bora
Milind Mishra - Shabbir Ahlluwalia
Soham Mehra - Karan Mehra
Vidya Mehra - Divyanka Triptahi

Secondary Characters

Neev Shergill
Ayesha Neev Shergill - Sanjeeda
Sagar Kaul - Sharad Molhotra

Don't worry about these new characters because they are there to make Milind understand Prachi and same with Ayesha and Neev.





Scene One: Ayesha again brainwashing Neev's mind against Milind

"Two months passed by Neev but your Prachi didn't even return back to the Shah Mansion because of Milind."
"Ayesha, if you weren't my so called wife than I would have killed you by now."
"Oh really Neev daring!"
"Ayesha don't cross your limits or else"
Ayesha leaves the room leaving behind Neev in his thoughts while she goes and create more misunderstanding between Milind and Sukriti.

(Flashback - three weeks ago before Prachi left the Shah Mansion)
Prachi was sitting in her room reading a novel when Sukriti comes inside all tensed about the money and how she will arrange it.
"Sukriti, whats the matter?"
"Bhabhi by next two days I need those money without Milind Bhaiyya knowing."
"Don't worry about the money because we both learn from the first mistake not to be stupid enough to go same time as Milind was there."
"Right Bhabhi,
if you haded come behind me than by now Bhaiyya would have found out everything.
Once again thanks Bhabhi"
"No need to thank me and don't worry"

(Present Day)
"Sorry Sukriti but I have to separate you from your brother or else someday in future you could bring them together. Please forgive Sukriti (walks toward Milind with a evil laugh)

Scene Two: Ayesha and Milind both are peppering for the same contract

Ayesha was trying her best hacking into Milind's computer, but it was hopeless because she can't figure out his password. Soon as Ayesha heard someone's footstep she hid behind the curtains before the door open. Milind walks inside with his personal secretary Charu (Charu Shina will be played by Roshini Chopra).
"Sir, why do you do all your work in hand written than type it up on the last day?"
"First of all it's a good question Charu, but I prefer not to talk about it...understood"
"Yes Sir"
"You may leave"
Milind gathered all his important files than left his office, soon as he leave Ayesha comes out from behind the curtain.


Scene three: Next Day at the business meeting for the contract

"Thank-you for everyone coming here today for this contract, but this contract will go to the best presentation perform today.
So let the presentation begin"
Three hour passed by but presentation are still going on soon as Ayesha was done (it was Milind's turn).
Two people are walking up the stairs while Milind was sharing hid finest ideas.
"Soham all the best"
"You ain't coming inside"
"No Soham
You carry on but my wish are with you"
"Thanks!
I'll see you at home"
Soon as Soham go inside Milind comes out for a call when he was about to go back inside he saw Prachi.

I hope everyone will like this one and please forgive me if this is short or any mistake I have done.

Your's Truly,
Mikey









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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 nice start....

(Present Day)
"Sorry Sukriti but I have to separate you from your brother or else someday in future you could bring them together. Please forgive Sukriti (walks toward Milind with a evil laugh)


i m confused in the middle kinda...who says dat she has to seperate Sukriti...from Miland....was dat...Prachi 😕

Anyhow gr8 job...dnt know abt Ekta...but hope in ur FF the misunderstanding gets clear pretty soon 😳

Edited by Adildagr8 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow! That's a really good beginning!
Can't wait to read on more...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Adildagr8

👏 nice start....

(Present Day)
"Sorry Sukriti but I have to separate you from your brother or else someday in future you could bring them together. Please forgive Sukriti (walks toward Milind with a evil laugh)


i m confused in the middle kinda...who says dat she has to seperate Sukriti...from Miland....was dat...Prachi 😕

Anyhow gr8 job...dnt know abt Ekta...but hope in ur FF the misunderstanding gets clear pretty soon 😳

I agree with you..even I dun get who says tht??

but newaiz gr8 start.. 👏and u shud absoluteli continue it

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start...can't wait to read the rest...please do continue it! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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First of all I like to thank everyone for sharing their thought with me, ok Ayesha is trying to separate Sukriti from Milind because Sukriti is the only one who can clear up the misunderstanding between Prachi and Milind and that would be a biggest insult to Ayesha. I hope this will help your guys confusion!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Two months passed by Neev but your Prachi didn't even return back to the Shah Mansion because of Milind.

(Flashback - three weeks ago before Prachi left the Shah Mansion)
Prachi was sitting in her room reading a novel when Sukriti comes inside all tensed about the money and how she will arrange it.


did P leave shah mansion 2 months before or 3 weeks before???

And its great dear, continue sooon.... wud luv to read another MP fanfic

Krishi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great start. 👏 👏 ..Do continue soon

Anju

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