Hmm - let's enjoy !

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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY GUYS !

As there is not Kayamath today - I thought I would take some time write something cute about a growing relationship between Prachi and Milind ( I would have loved to say Prachi and Neev but guys - let's just go ahead with what Ekta has done - LOL ) ....

Before you read any further please think first - Milind and Prachi are not a bad couple afterall..Yeah - he is doing wrong to her but they kinda suit each other...

Okay - here it goes...

1st day after Milind Marries Prachi...

Prachi sleeps on the couch all night - more than sleeping she talks to herself about the decision she has made..She tells herself that she has taken Milind as her husband and she will give their relationship the best she can...

Milind looked at Prachi many times before falling asleep...his conciouns kept telling him that he should not treat Prachi wrongly..She is his wife now and atleast he will give her her desereved respect..

That night seemed the longest night for both Prachi and Milind..

Prachi wakes up in the morning - she goes to the shower and dresses up just like a new bride..

" Prachi - idhar ana zara - tujhsey kuch bat karni hai" calls Milind from the bedroom. Prachi drops everything from hand and gets startled..." Abhii ayi" she says..She runs fast - she was surprised herself when Milind called her..

She goes into the room and says ' Aapney mujhey bulaya?' " Ha " says Milind. " kya baat hai" asks Prachi.. Milind says - " dekh Prachi - terey liey merey dilmey koi feeling nehi hai - par abhi abhi meri Sukriti sey baat hui - usney kaha key tuney kabhi bhi alap ki side nehi lii..tuney sukriti ka madat kya..I am grateful to you..iss liey main tereyko ek taufa dena chahta hu..Mang jo mangna chahti hai" and Milind smiles at her..

prachi says - " mujhey abhi kuch nehi chahiey - par jis din zarurat parey - main mang lungii..waisey - aap nashtey main kya lengey?" she looks very shy and at the same time she is looking very fresh and just like a new bride !

Milind says - " main breakfast nehi karti - tu jakey khaley..aur sun - waisey main yeh sab keh nehi sakta - par tu bohat khoobsurat dikh rahi hai.." he looks pretty shy now..And the music plays : salam e ishq title song - anhko ankho mei !!

prachi is very happy - she thought : " achcha hua milind ney mujhsey pehley baat kii - varna mai baat kaha sey shuru karti pata nehi" Aysha sees prachi happy and can't take it she goes to neev and says " neev - -nichey jakey merey liey breakfast upar bhej dena" neev laughs and says - " kiu - prachi ko khush dekh kar jalan ho rahi hai kya ?? tum to aisey hi jalogey aysha - kisi aur key pyar ko cheen kar tum kaisey soch sakti ho ke tum khush reh paogi? Aur - ek baat kahu tumsey - mai kabhi bhi tumhey woh respect nehi dey paungii jo har patni ki haak hoti hai apney pati sey..aur patni ka darja - kabhi nehi" and he leaves the room with disgust! Aysha talks to herself " mainey jo kuch bhi kia - badley key aag mey kya - apr aab jab milind mera tab mujhey samajh mey aii key mainey kitni bari galati kar di" and she cries out loud.." par ha - uss prachi ko mai kabhi maaf nehi karne wali.."

Well guys beore continueing anymore - I would love to know if you like it ...Be frank - I don't mind critisism..!!!!!!!!!!!!! And also - I am not Indian - My hindi is not that good - I might have made gramatical mistakes -please ignore them !

Hope you will like it ..

get back to me !

Love to all,

rumki

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I didnt read coz i dont like MP 😳 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey dear

Its a gud start 👏 ... continuee writing.. aage aage comments bhi milenge tumko 😉 ....

write soooon.... wud luv to read some MP cute moments

And so wat if u are not an indian, aakhir bangladesh was a part of india once 😉

Krishi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well - bangladehs might have been a part of india - but i am not only from bangladesh - also from ireland .. ! i will write soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Rumki,

Good work. 👏 👏 I am a great fan of Mp jodi.I would like to see good moments between them.Please continue.

Madhu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys - great prediction...!

they are finally falling for each other
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok guys here is the continuation of the FAN FIC !

Prachi is sitting out in the balcony and thinking of her precious moments with Neev - and she hears a voice " Tu itni raat ko yeha kya kar rahi hai?" Prachi jumps up " Milind aap..kuch nehi bass khuli hawa mai baithney ki mann klar rahi thi" she smiles slightly!

Milind says " Prachi - mainey tereysey shadi kya sirf Aysha sey badla leney key liey - tujhey bohat bura lag raha hoga na?"

Prachi looks at Milind and gives him her hand and says : " papa ki maut key baad mai hamesha yehi socha karti thi key meri zindegi mey shayad abb kabhi khushiya nehi ayegi - par meri maa hamesha mujhsey kehtey hai - key zindegi key har lamhe ko achchey sey jeena bohat zaruri hai..Kya pata yeh pal kabhi phir miley yah na miley...Main nehi janti hamara iss samjhotye key rishta ka kya hoga par ha itna zaroor janti hu key mai poori koshish karungii iss rishtey ko koi naam deneyka - ek aisa naam jo siirf rasmo sey diya hua nehi hoga" and Prachi sees that Milind has a very guilty face..

Next day Down in the hall room...

Naintara is sitting and thinking of her prince charming as always - and suddenly the door bell rings..She goes and opens it ...And she sees a huge box - gift wrapped left on the door step...There is nobody around ....Naintara picks up the box and goes upstairs to call someone ...
Meanwhile Prachi comes down and sees the box - " yeh kiska hai - kisika gift lagta hai..Par koi card bhi nehi hai iskey saath"

And then neev comes down " hey Prachi - yeh gift meri taraf sey tumharey aur Milind key liey hai ..You know - tumney to mujhsey rishta tor diya - to kya hua..ab - formality hee soch lo"

Prachi feels like crying out loud but she does the right thing : " Achcha - mai Milind ko bulati hu ...hum ek saath gift kholeyngey.."

Milind comes down and sees Aysha looking at him from her room ...He ignores her..

Milind and Prachi open the gift and it's a model of a house..A very pretty house..

" Kiu Prachi - pasand aya?" asks Neev..

Flash back : It's the model of the house that neev chose for prachi and neev to live in after marriage..Remember?!

Prachi's eyes become watery.. And she runs up the stairs and bumps into her mother..

Premlata says " Prachi beta - mai aaj bhi nehi janti tuney kiu neev ko thukrakey milind sey shaadi kii par itna zarror janti hu - mari beti kabhi bhi koi galat faisla nehi ley sakti..Aur yeh bhi janti hu key woh aab kisibhi mushkil ko uskey shadi shooda zindegi key beechmey nehi aney degi.."

prachi goes to her room and cries out !

" Ha maa - main puri koshish karoongii" and she wipes out her tears..


Well - guys.. enjoy it and let me know if i am still in the right track ..

Love ya all!

Rumki.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice fanfic hun cntinu sn...dnt worry bwt ur hindi hun myn's not 2 gr8 either 😕 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 i like it...its so mushy-mushy..... 😳 ... do continue .....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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mushy mushy ! well - sounds sweet to me lol!

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