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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guyzz.. I was bored so i wrote a ff and i thought i should share it with u guyzz... Its for NP MA lovers.. Since now a days there aren't any scenes of them...But anywayzz guyzz tell me what u think and tell me if i should continue or not...and tell me if i need to improve anthing..anywayss here in my FF

~ ~Chapter 1 ~ ~

In Neev-Ayesha's room

Neev-Tum yahan kyun ayiho? (Why are u here?)
Prachi-Ayesha nay kahan that kay usko mujhse milna tha..(Ayesha said she wanted to meet me..)
Neev-Phir jao Ayesha say milo (Then go meet Ayesha) Neev says in a a rude and angry tone
Prachi-Neev mujhe maaf kardo (neev forgive me)
Neev- thum ne kia kia hai kay mijhe tumko maaf karna hai?..(What did u do that i have to forgive u?)
Ayesha-Prachi may yahan hoon (prachi i am here)
Ayesha-Prachi mujhe maaf kardo mainay tum ko is waqt bolaya hai laykin mujhe tumse kuch kaina hai (Sorry i called u here at this time but i need to tell u something)
Prachi-fikar maath karo Ayesha (Don't worry Ayesha)
Ayesha-Neev tum jao (Neev u go)
Neev-Theak hai app hain na mari malikin (Fine u are my boss)
Ayesha-Prachi mujhe maaf karday main samji kay tumnay Alaap ki madath ki thi jab Alaap nay meri maa ki bazzathi ki thi( Prachi forgive me i thought u helped Alaap when Alaap insulted my mom)
Prachi-fikar maath karo(Don't worry )
Ayesha-Mujha fikar karna chahiyay mainay thayra pyar cheen lia(i should worry i stole u love from u)
Prachi-Mainay bhi tho Miland say shaadi ki hai (I married Miland as well)
Ayesha- Kyun ki Miland nay tujhe aur koi rastha nahi dekaya (Because Miland dind't show u any other way)
Ayesha-Aur may chati hoon kay tum aur Neev ek dosray say shaadi kar lo (And i want u and Neev to get married)
Neev-Kabhi nahi!! Is ne mujhe dhoka diya hai,May is se Kabhi Shaadi nahi karoonga ( never!! she betrayed me.. I will never marry her)
Prachi-Neev tum kab ayay? (Neev when did u come?)
Ayesha-Prachi Neev ko Saach bathaday Maine tum se baath may baath karongi (Prachi tell Neev the truth I will talk to u later)
Prachi- Laykin Ayesha!!(but Ayesha!!)
Neev-Prachi Ayesha konsi Saach kay baray may baath karahi thi (Prachi what truth was Ayesha talking about)
Prachi-Neev Mainay Miland say Paasson kay lia nahi Shaadi ki hai (Neev i didn't marry Miland for money)
Prachi-aur Neev mainay tumse jhoot bhola tha!! Mainay kaha that kay main tumsay sirf Passon kay lia Pyr kia tha, Lykin woh jhoot tha.. May tumse abhi bhi Pyar karthi hoon (And Neev i lied to u!! I said that i only loved you for ur money..And that was a lie.. I still love u)
Neev-Kia?!?! phir yay natak kyun??
(What?!?!? then why did u do all this??)

Thats it for chapter 1.. plzz tell me what u think and if i should continue.. and if i should improve anything..Oh and guyzz plz bare with me.. I am not good at hindi so don't make fun of it..😆😆


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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx its really very awesum
pls do continue it 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanxs for the comment fatima and crstalclear..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guyzz...

Here is the next chapter...

~*~ Chapter 2 ~*~.

On the road
Ayesha- (Thinking) mainay tho Neev-prachi ko milandia hai laykin abb may kia karon??
( I have made Neev-Prachi together again.. But now what do i do..)
Back in Neev-Ayesha room
Prachi- Neev meri saggaie Sanjay saath jo hui thi woh ek jhoot tha may chati thi kay tum aur Ayesha kush raho... Kyunki papa nay kaha that kay Ayesha ki oh kushiyan dayna jo usay nahi mily.. Aur us waqt Ayesha ko mujhse badla layna tha tho meri assoon uski kosshiy thi tho mainay tum he us ko day diya
..(Neev my engagment that was with Sanjay was a lie i wanted u and Ayesha to be happy.. becuase papa said to give Ayesha all the happiness that she didn't get... And at that time Ayesha wanted revenge from me.. And my tears were her happiness so i gave her u)
Neev-Tho woh sab jhoot that?? (So that was all a lie.)
Neev-Mujhe Maaf kardo mujhe patha hona chaiyay tha kay tum aysa kabhi nahi karogi.. Kyun ki main tumhe bachpaan say jantha hoon (forgive me i should have known that u would never do something like this..because i've known u since childhood)
Neev-Prachi may Ayesha say thalak loon ga..Aur please Prachi maray pas wapas a jao (Prachi i will divorce Ayesha and please Prachi come back to me)
Prachi- Nahi neev meri Miland say Shaadi ho choki hai may usko dhoka nahi day sakthi (No Neev i am already married to Miland.. I can't betray him)
Neev-theak hay laykin Miland Ayesha say pyaar kartha hai (Fine but Miland loves Ayesha)
Prachi- tum yay kaisay jan thay ho? (How do u know this?)
Neev- Mainay un dono ko ek saath dayka tha.. Aur Miland nay kaha tha kay Ayesha nay usko dhoka day kar mujhse Shaadi ki hai ( I saw them together..And Miland said that Ayesha betrayed him and married me..)
Prachi-Theak hai phir hum ek dosray say chup ke chup ke milain gay. (Fine we will meet each other secretly)
Neev-Abb jao warna Miland ko shaak ho jayay ga (Now go or else Miland will get suspicious)

Well that is it for ~*~ Chapter 2~*~ Plz tell me what u think... and i will put up Chapter three by tomorrow...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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woooww!!! 😉
The FF is really really gud 😃
Finally Prachi told the truth to Neev
Pls yaar.. do continue!

cud u pls create a romantic scene btw NP in chapter 3?❤️

Edited by kayamath_fan2 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanxs for the comment.... Yea i will surely continue... Well i would add some romantic scens but i have already writen it out and i don't know if i can change it or not.. But i 'll see..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg!I love this FF plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Do continue....its really nice.....but hey plzz do not seperate milind-prachi 😉

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