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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: knumnum

hey mikey,

How are you?

No milind in this?? 😭 😭 😭 ...

Don't worry I didn't forget about Milind, but his entry will be stylist.

But dear, wonderful start... I am liking this Prachi shah... Gud tat Alaap is getting slaps even in this fan fiction 😆 ...

Thank you so much 😳

Hey do tell us the persons who are portraying Neev, Karan and Adi...

Neev is the same from Kayamath (Jay), but Karan is Lakshya and Adi is Manthan from Kyunki.

Yaar is Nikita Mishra story is something like Kasturi??? 😉 ... If yes then i wish she ends up with Karan 😆

Maybe also like Kahin To Hoga


Do continue sooo dear..I liked it very much 👏 👏 👏

I am glad that you liked it and don't worry i'll conitune soon

Krishi



Your's Truly,
Mikey
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
it sound really good
prachi doesnt even talk to neev
tottaly different from the other fanfics i read
pls cont soon
cant wait till u update again
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
ya truely huge applause for you. you are a great writer. such nice imaginations. i like this new prachi. totally different from the serial.keep it up. [:D/]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 start Janeman 😉
I realli like this diff. Prachi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Well thank you so much for liking the new improved Prachi, but I am scared of hurting people with my fan fic because Indian Air Force is flighting for truth and if I hurt anyone than I am sorry in advance.





Recap - Nikki and Prachi have great time making fun of each other while picking up Neev Prachi gets a call from air force.


Scene One: Prachi talks with Monika ma'am

During Prachi's sortie she notice three to six troop camps set up by near India's border, Prachi tried to get clear snap shot but she couldn't. Afterward Prachi return back to the base with other pilots soon as she gets dismissed from AOC's cabin Prachi went running into Monika ma'am's room. (sometimes they are aloud to stay in the headquarter.)
"Monika ma'am, where are you?"
"Prachi I am over here"
"Monika ma'am, you won't believe how I felt traveling in the air and it feels so cool that..."
"That you want to stay up there forever and by the way you are a carbon copy of me"
"What do you mean ma'am?"
"Few years ago when me and Vikram both were cadets like you we use to talk like that."
"Oh!
Hey ma'am, you won't believe what I saw during my sortie by India's border"
"Prachi, what did you see?"
"Ma'am I wasn't able to see it clearly but I saw three to six troop camps set up by India's border"
"What?"

Scene Two: Nisha and Esha wants to go with Prachi to her place

"That's true ma'am"
"Prachi thanks for sharing a important fact with me and I promise you that me and Vikram both will go down there to check it out."
"Ma'am I know that I am learning about all this, but if I get a chances to go on a mission with you or sir I will be so happy that at least I got a chance to do something for my land."
Monika thinking to herself (Prachi has the same confident like me and the same guts like me.)
"Ma'am, what are you thinking?"
"Nothing"
"Bye ma'am"
"Bye"
After talking with Monika ma'am Prachi was on her way home when Nisha and Esha can running from behind and hugged Prachi saying they want to come with her. Vikram personally wasn't happy about it because he knew how much pain his daughters can be alone, but Prachi convinced him that they won't be any trouble since Neev is back.
"When did Neev arrival?"
"Sir, he just arrived today when I got a call from the base."
"Oh!
that's great news and from my behalf tell him welcome back to India."
"Yes sir"
Nikki was busy reading her magazine when she receive a text message from her best friend Meera saying she is in big trouble since our new boss have arrived today. Nikki quickly drop her magazine and went running into her room and changed for work while Neev keep on teasing Nikki for reacting like that. Soon as Nikki leave Alaap enters with his friends while Neev was wondering where could Prachi be. Nikki reached her office saying please god make sure this new management isn't like the old one soon as Nikki knocks the door.

Scene Three: For the first time Nikki meets her new boss

"Come in"
Nikki opens the door leaving behind all her worrys and enters with a smile saying good afternoon sir
"Same to you
now tell me what am I suppose to think about this file"
"Sir actually I would have completed the file if it wasn't my unlce's birthday tonight"
"Okay than Miss..."
"um, sir it's Ms. Shah"
"You may leave now"
"Yes sir"
Nikki was about to leave when her new boss interuppts her by saying make sure this file is completed by Next Monday.
"Yes sir"
"Where do you guys want to go?"
"Um, lets go to a movie" said by Esha
"No, lets go shopping" said by Nisha
"Actually I have a idea why don't we pick up Neev"
"That's a great idea di" said by both girls
After decided what to do Prachi drove her car toward the Shah mansion where Neev was waiting for her at the door. Prachi quickly parked the car and got out with Nisha and Esha soon as the girls see Neev they went runinng there to ask him where is there gift.


I now this part might be boring and short please forgive me and next time I'll make it more enjoyable.

Your's Truly,
Mikey
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
nice going
keep it up 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
great part
realy love ur story tottal diff
pls cont soon

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