Ek Masoom Sa Chehra: P-2 posted on Pg2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ˜›I was wondering if anyone here is interested to read my fan-fic called Ek Masoom Sa Chehra and its about two innocent girls who face problem after their marriage. (Don't worry it has all the people from Kayamath in it, but only fact I added couple of people inside it. If anyone is interested to read it, šŸ˜† instead of thinking what's going to happen on Monday. Please let me now by tomorrow so I can post it by Saturday. šŸ˜‰

Your's Truly,
Mikey
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ya sure why not waise bhi we are tired of thinking what will happen on monday.so please post soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yeah waiting for the fanfic. Pls post soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah go ahead.. we wud luv to read it

Krishi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I would really want to read your fanfic.Please post it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yaa sure i am eagerly waiting for it 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh ofcourse we'll look forward to it....I always encourage new talent 😊
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ya pls post it soon
v r eagerly w8in 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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First of all I like to thank all the people who already encouraged me also I am mostly thankful to my cousins who gave me a idea to write this totally different from the show. Secondly if anyone wants to add any type of scene than please do "pm" me because I was want to see all you šŸ˜› and smiling. Back to the track I just wanted to let you all know this fiction is going to be based one Indian Air Force Academy.




Ek Masoom Sa Chehra - is mainly about two innocent girls who face problems after their marriage.

Main Protagonist

Prachi Inder Shah - A very docile, vulnerable, person Praachi cannot see anyone in pain, she always tries to help out them even her childhood friend Neev. After Prachi finished her studies in Air Force she joined the Indian Air Force. Her father wants her to get married and settle down in life, but Prachi had her own dream to become best squadron Leader in Indian Air Force.
Will Prachi sacrifice her dream to accomplish her father's dream?

Nikita Sahil Shah - She falls in love with Karan, the rich, arrogant industrialist, oblivious of the fact that one day Karan would be the man responsible for ruining her life. Due to an unexpected twist of fate she ends up marrying his best friend Adi Mishra. This is the beginning of a serious misunderstanding between Karan and Nikki and from there on, Nikki's life takes a new turn. She follows the path that is to be her destiny and will come to question all the beliefs she ever stood for.
Will Nikki be able to move on forward and except Adi as her husband in future?

Will these two sisters except their destiny or fight for their right stay tune to find out what happens in Ek Masoon Sa Chehra.

Supporting cast
Inder Shah - Father of Prachi
Premlata Inder Shah - Mother of Prachi and Nikki (after Nikki's mother passed away)
Sahil Shah - Father and mother to Nikita Also member of Indian Air Force
Dadi - Prachi and Nikki's grandmother
Neev - Best friend of Prachi more than Nikki
Karan - Nikkis Lover
Monika Vikram Kocchar - Happily married to Vikram and his a mother of two girls Esha and Nisha.
Vikram Kocchar - Married to Monika and his father of two cute girls Esha and Nisha.
AOC Suraj Singh - Air Commodore of the Indian Air Force and father of Monika.

I hope all these detail will help you guys understand the story of Ek Masoon Sa Chehra and if there is any further question please don't hesitate to ask.



Scene One - A small Puja at the Shah Mansion

A small boat is moving on the water with two couple holding hands but all of a sudden the boat started to sink slowly, slowly underneath the water. After few second later a huge water splash a small figure sleeping on the bed.
"Hey, what was that for?"
"That was to wake you up Queen of England"
"Haha haha, very funny"
"Oh really
than get up in five minute for puja"
"but, why did you have to wake me up from my romantic dream Prachi"
"My dears sister Nikki there is no such thing in love only compromise"
"Hey sis, you keep your believe in compromise while I keep my faith in love"
"Whatever,
just get ready"
"Yes Ma'am"
"That's more like it"
Prachi went down toward the puja hall where everyone was waiting for her and Nikki after they arrived the puja began, but as usual Alaap came home half drunk home and this time only god knows (who is going to save him?). Inder was already to slap Alaap for coming into the puja all drunk but as usual Mamma stops Papa from slapping Alaap, but today was odd Premlata didn't even stop Inder.
"Hey Prachi, what's wrong with Choti Ma today?"
"I don't even know what's wrong with Mamma?
Anyways lefts forget that but remember today we have to go airport to pick up someone special."
"Come on Prachi he can be special for you, but for me he isn't"
"What are you two gossiping about?"
"Nothing Dadi" answered Prachi
"Yeah Dadi, we weren't gossiping about anyone we were planning about the birthday party for Ritu."
Dadi just shook her head and left while everyone was taking aarti from Inder afterward Prachi and Nikki went toward the airport.

Scene Two - Prachi and Nikki are waiting at the airport for someone special

Since pass five hours Prachi and Nikki been waiting for there friend, but as usual his flight been cancel or delayed.
"Prachi, if his flight doesn't land in fifteen minutes than I am going"
"Please have patient because I know he will come today"
"Whatever!
I'll be sitting over there"
"Fine"
Three minutes later there was announcement that flight No. Ac25 just have arrived sorry for the wait. Soon as every passenger started coming out Prachi gets a call from the air force.
"Hello"
"Hello Flight Left - Handed Prachi Shah"
"Yes Sir"
Nikki waves her hand toward the special friend of Prachi but Prachi didn't even notice him because she was busy talking on the phone.
"Yes Sir, I will report in 20 minutes at the base"
Prachi puts down her phone than tells Nikki she has to leave when she notice him standing right beside Nikki, but Prachi didn't even have the time to hug him and left with her car while Nikki and Neev go home.

Scene Three - Prachi quicklty rush home and changed to leave

Soon as Prachi reached home her mother started asking question but Prachi was in a rush to answer any of her question after few second later Nikki and Neev (Neev will be played by Jay from Kayamath) reached home to meet everyone. Premlata was happy to see Neev, but again Prachi rushed out of her room all dress in her uniform. Soon as Premlata saw the uniform on Prachi's body she stopped with all her question and started to cry. Prachi looked at her mother and father with a smile and wipe their tears and said she is only going for a sortie not a mission so cheer up. Premlata told Prachi to wait for a sec while she gets the aarti ki tali soon as Premlata returns with a tali afterward she lets Prachi go while Nikki also didn't want her to leave because she wait three whole months for Neev's return and when he did she had to leave.
Prachi quickly sat in her car and drove off to the base.

I hope everyone will like this Prachi who is totally different from the show.


Your's Truly,
Mikey

Edited by Yuvraz-Krishna - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey mikey,

No milind in this?? 😭 😭 😭 ...

But dear, wonderful start... I am liking this Prachi shah... Gud tat Alaap is getting slaps even in this fan fiction šŸ˜† ...

Hey do tell us the persons who are portraying Neev, Karan and Adi...

Yaar is Nikita Mishra story is something like Kasturi??? šŸ˜‰ ... If yes then i wish she ends up with Karan šŸ˜†

Do continue sooo dear..I liked it very much šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Krishi

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