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Posted: 18 years ago
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THE ISLAND

Episode:3

Talk Between Father n Son

Alaap call his dad and told him everything then his dad get in the big shock.He be quite for few minute then he say to his son that how we can tell this news to your mom.now a day she is not feeling well and doctor say to take good care of her and don't tell her any kind of bad news.Because it's danger for her life and you will lose her forever.

Alaap say if mom ask what airport people say about flight and when is flight is coming here?then what should I tell her. Dad say you are good in making story.Just make a story and tell her and Alaap say I will try my best.Ok dad I'm in my way then I will come home and see what I can do about this and his dad say ok then hang up phone.

Inder And Amrita

After hanging up phone his wife come and ask her whose call it's was and he relpy it's Alaap call and he is coming back home.She again ask him that is Prachi with him and he din't relpy to her question and went to his room.Look very upset and his wife follow him to room and ask him that what happened?is everything ok and he is still quite then later he say plz leave me alone for few minute.She say plz tell me what's wrong?Then he tell her that there is some business problem and that why I'm so upset about and his wife say don't worry.Everything going to be alright then she leave the room.

Alaap,Amrita and Inder

Then later Alaap come home and his mom see him then ask him where is prachi?i know she is hiding somewhere.so plz call her to come inside.Alaap say mom she is not coming because she call me that she have important meeting to do.Mom say what wrong with her why she is taking so much time to come here and you both know that I miss her lot.Alaap say I know mom and me and dad miss her too.She call on Prachi celluar and it's say phone is switch off due to out of reach.Alaap and dad looking each other and then his dad say we have few week left to her marriage so plz don't worry she will come soon.She say ok.

At Ayesha Home

Amrita is reading newspaper then Ayesha come home and ask her mom that if you are finshed reading a newspaper then can I read.Amrita say ok and I will get lunch ready then we can eat togther and Ayesha say it's great idea.Well she start reading newspaper and later she come to that news about plane crash and she read name of all passenger then she read a name called Prachi Shah and she is also get in shock.

Edited by mehvishrainbow2 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
😃 babe u omg plz cont its wicked 😃 👏

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
k guys dis is the first time i m trying dis ....so if its bad pllzz tolerate it
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Prachi is very scared .......tears come from her eyes...Neev turns around and he sees prachi crying he holds her hand 😳 and then finally prachi opens her eyes....
Neev: prachi tum ro kyon rahi ho
Prachi: pata nahin neev mujhe boht dar lag raha hai..

Post the rest later 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
hey very good story.plz con..soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ya very good i must say that you r very good writer
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi prettyzinta,

I like ur story and plz do write more and if u don't mind can i use this in my next episode.

here is a link of Noori story

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=607405

Edited by mehvishrainbow2 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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NEEV: dont worry prachi main hoon na

Then dere is an announcement dat the plane is ready to land and everyone must fasten their seat belts.......
and there is a ZOOM ZOOM sound 😆 😆 again the sepaker is on dey landed successfuly......finally prachii opens her eyes and neev is smiling at her....they both grin at each other.......Prachi gets up to pickup the luggage....
Neev: wait i will help u wid that
Prachi: its ok u already have helped me a lot
Neev: prachi wut are friends for ....u called me ur friend
prachi: yes neev u are a very good person

Then they are waiting in line.....for the passport checkup.....dis girl bumps in to the suitcase dat was prachi'ss
she turns around in anger and its none other than AYESHA
Ayesha: ayyyy apna saman nahin sumbhal sukti....to lay kar kyon aye
Prachi: i m veryy sorry...actually i dint notice u were there
Ayesha: tum apne aap ko sumajhti kya ho...Koi accident queen 😆
Neev: Mind ur language......tum hoti kon ho yeh sab kehni walli... chal hato yehan se...tumhare jaise both log daykhay hain
Ayesha: TERI TO AISE KE TAISE 😆
Passport officer : mam may i see ur passport plz
Ayesha: ya sure wait
she gives a dirty look to both neev and prachi and walks away.....
Prachi: neev tumhain ause aise behave nahin karna chaiye tha
Neev: u dunno noe prachii aise logon se aise he karna chahi
prachi: Ok nneev ab chalo naaa

To be continued........
whoever wants to continue dis can continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sure mehvish rainbow u can use it....dats the whole point of it to write a great story together 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi prettyzinta,

do u like to write for my story THE ISLAND next episode 4?

First go to this link and read then write a next episode #4

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=651997&TPN=1

plz do tell me if yes
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow yaar i just love all yr fanfictions 😃

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