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Posted: 18 years ago
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hwy very good ff..plz cotinue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
hi prettyzinta,

write more story and i like ur story it's a great story keep it up.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohhhhhhhhh waoooooooooooooooooo this fiction roxxxxxxxxx yaar.
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all parts r superbb!!!!!!!!mind blowing!!!!!!!!
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THE ISLAND

Episode:4

Next moring she call her father and ask him that how this happened and he say I really don't know nothing about that.Also we hide this news from your chote ma.
Ayesha:why you hide from her?
Inder(Alaap,Prachi & Ayesha father):because she is not feeling well & we ask a doctor if it's good to tell about our daughter prachi & he say no you can't tell her.
Ayesha:oh I see
Ayesha:what you will do now?
Ayesha:if she ask you about prachi
Inder:Alaap make up story and told her that she is business in some meeting
Ayesha:ok
Inder:I really don't know how long we have to hide this news from her
Ayesha:someday we have to tell about her
Inder:you are right but I can't do this
Ayesha:I'm thankful to GOD that mom didn't read this news if she have read it then I'm sure she will call chote ma then he will become mad at you for not telling you and also her healthy going to be bad too.
Inder:that right
Inder:now where is that newspaper?
Ayesha:I hide it
Inder:good
Ayesha heard footstep of her mom and she say Papa I will call you later because mom is coming ok bye and his father bye I love you my child and say papa I miss u lot and he say me too.

Amrita(Ayesha's mother):who you talking with?
Ayesha:I'm talking to papa
Amrita:is he coming today
Ayesha:I don't know
Amrita:let me call him
Ayesha:ok
Then Amrita call Inder and ask him to come home because I made your favorite food.
Inder:ok

Then he went to Amrita's home and Ayesha say papa don't tell her anything about Prachi.Amrita see both father and daughter talking about something then she ask them what happened then they say nothing.

Amrita say to herself i know there is something wrong here and they are not telling me about that.

Edited by mehvishrainbow2 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
wow di its very nice 👏
pls continue it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THE ISLAND

Episode:5

In The Island

Prachi is dialing her home # from her celluar phone again and again but signal is not going through and that make her very sad that she will ever going to talk to her family again.Then she start to cry and Neev see her crying then he come to her and saied plz don't worry we will go to our home very soon and these men are working on to get us home save.So pray for the best and crying don't work out this problem and I know you are very upset.
Prachi say I went to India to find my childhood friend.when we are young he went with his family to stay in India forever and I know he live in India but don't know his home address.We chat online but ever ask home address and I miss him lot.They both don't know that they are childhood friend.
Later Neev take out his childhood best friend picture from his wallet and starting talking to that picture & say I miss u very much.
In other side Prachi take out her childhood best friend picture & talk to that picture & say where are you?I miss you very much.
Now they both are crying & talking to there friend picture.Few minute pass & Prachi come to Neev and ask him what happened & why you are crying?he relpy that I miss my childhood friend very much and I lost her friendship because we move to India and she live in America with her family but we use to chat with each other every day and now her e-mail address is change and I can't chat or do voice chat with her that why upset.Prachi say oh I see then she say don't worry someday you will find her.

Prachi's Childhood Friend Picture Lost

Prachi lost her childhood friend picture somewhere and later that picture is flying all over the place and finally that get into Neev feet and that picture is face down and Neev pick up the picture and look at this and say to himself wow this my childhood friend picture.How this picture get here and later he know that she is here but don't know which girl is his childhood friend and he say to himself that I can throw my picture somewhere then I will see who is that girl.His picture get to Prachi and see it and that my friend.Neev is looking from far way and come to Prachi and take his picture and saied that me.

Finally they know that they are childhood friends

Finally they know that they are childhood best friend and prachi say why you din't told me before he I'm sorry I really don't that we are friends so they both hug each other and become very happy to see each other.
Edited by mehvishrainbow2 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THE ISLAND

Episode:6

Now Prachi didn't worry much because her friend is with her.
Neev:I can't tell you how much I'm happy to see you again
Prachi:me too
Few minute pass a way and Pilot say I call the control room & finally our call reach to control room and they say we have to wait for three days more and after that they will send us new flight so we all can go home very soon.Everybody say thank's to GOD that finally we all going to go to our home save.
Prachi eyes in tear to listen this good news from the pilot
Neev:I'm happy for the all passenger
Prachi:but my family thinking that I'm no more in this world
Neev:don't worry about this
Neev:when they will see you they going to be very happy to have you back
Prachi:I can't wait for that day
Neev:I will pray for you get to your family save
Prachi:thank's
Neev:your Welcome
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow di wonderful
i must say u r a gr8 writer yaar
y don't u join balaji camp 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THE ISLAND

Episode:7

After 1 month Prachi & Neev went to their home

Prachi's family is having lunch in the dinningroom and Alaap saw Prachi and he is surprise to see his younger sister then he say dad look who is here and dad is happy to see her and ask her if u life then why you didn't call us.You should know that we really worry about you.Prachi say i'm sorry dad because phone singlar can't reach and that make me very mad at this.Dad say i understand but your mom is very sick and today we are about to tell her about ur death but now we thank's to God that you are life.

Prachi ask then what told to mom about me when i didn't come for very long.Dad say i told her that she is busy in her work and that why she can't come here.Prachi say where is mom right now?Dad say she is in her bedroom sleeping and plz don't wake her up.Prachi say ok then she i just want to see her because i miss her very much and dad ok go head.Then Prachi went her mom bedroom and see her mom sleeping then she goes near her and kiss her and say mom i love you very much and i not going to leave you all like this anymore and her dad is listening to her then tear come in his eyes and Alaap say plz dad don't cry she is back and God give our Prachi back just for us.Then they both hug prachi and leave from that room.

When Amrita wake up she have feeling that her daughter prachi kiss her then she run outside to see her daughter.Finally she meet her daughter and she is very happy to see her home back.

End-Of-Episode:7
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THE ISLAND

Episode:8
Ayesha: Congratulates dad & chote ma from having ur daughter back home save
Inder:Ayesha don't say anything else in front of ur chote ma & u know why
Ayesha:don't worry dad
Amrita:what u both talking about?
Inder:nothing
Ayesha:chote ma I'm happy to have prachi back home
Amrita:me too
Alaap:I'm glad that today my sister is with me
Ayesha:I'm happy to have prachi as my sister
Ayesha:she is so sweet & whenever I didn't see her in front of me I miss her lot
Prachi:really
Ayesha:yes that true
Prachi:I'm glad to know that u love me so much that u can't live without me
Prachi:is that true
Ayesha:yes my dear
Prachi:thank's

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