Tomorrow full of promises3-MichiFFPt87 pg181 12/12 - Page 59

☺️Divyaaaaaaaaa feeling HOT HOT HOT☺️☺️☺️

Originally posted by: -kiran

☺️haww ye kya kiya divya ☺️☺️ Awwwww ☺️☺️☺️
itni mushkil se aayi thi comment karne per tere update ne haalat khraab kar di ☺️ Tumhari yeh laal laal gaalein meri haalat karab kar degi meri abhishek, awwwwwww ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
pta hai mera glaa sukh gya padte padte ☺️
ek glass hot milk ke baad itna likhne layak hui main 😃 Hubby warmed it up, right?? 😉😳☺️😆😆






awwwwwwww bhuuuuuuuuuut achha hai yaar sab... pichle saare update bhut achhe the.... divya itna khoobsurat likhti ho ke kya khun ...sachi yaar m speechlesss👏⭐️ Aww, so sweet honey, thank you ye mera fav FF hai pta hai jab free time me mera dil koi story padne ka karta hai to yahi ff padti hoon ek ek word yaad hai iss ff ka thaaaaaaaaanx a lot jaan inni achhi story ke liye ....love u 🤗 Love you too, thank you so much for liking this story yaar 🤗🤗





i knw comment inne achhe ni ae chote se hain per dil se likhe jaan ji kabool karna Mujhe pata hai jaan. Tumhari ek word ki comment bhi mere liye bahut maynein rakhti hai. Thank you hun. Big hugs to you too. Love you 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: SaacheeSyna

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will comment later!! 😉😆😆😳😳

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Originally posted by: premspadhu

mein kya kahoon divya Kuch bhi keh do yaar 😉
its just awesome update Thanks hun
i read several ff's
but this ff and especially this update made me crazy yaaaaar
u done a fabulous job Aww, so sweet. Thank you 😳😳
wat aaaaaaaaaaa hot and beautiful and emotional raat hai
u written in very beautiful manner
thanks for pm,
update the next part asap Will do hun. Thank you for liking it 😳😳. Hugs
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: smashy

awesome...beautiful......lovely.......wonderful...fantastic...👏👏👏

plz update soon....

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

beautiful!! soooooow goooooood!! Thank you Saima 😳😳even I want a Milind join the queue hun 😉😆--mind you, this thought has been in mind for quite some time and NOT due to his excellent love making prowess that has come to the fore in this update!! hehe ;) oh, sure, I believe you 😛😛😆, but I am sure that this particular skill of his would have made that thought a bit stronger 😉😳😳😛😆😆

Originally posted by: SaacheeSyna

Firstly: ☺️... Awwwww ☺️☺️☺️

this pretty much summarizes my thoughts, opinions and feelings for this update😉😳😆 yes, it really did 😉😆

Hey Divvya!!....I seriously don't know how I am going to comment'.I read the first half and I was too shy and nervous to finish off the second half😆''.but I eventually did it!!....Well I will have to repeat what everyone else said that it was BEAUTIFUL!!👏😳.....It was very good considering that it must have been the hardest update of this FF....u did a commendable job.👏👏👏 Thank you Pooja. It was indeed the hardest update of this FF. I was terrified of getting it wrong 🤗

In the first half u brought out the vulnerability, nervousness and fear in Prachi about this big night really well'.with her.....even I was getting nervous .hehehe, why?? 😉😆...kudos to your writing!! 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼....Thanks hun .and Milind was being very supportive and understanding about it....But he was still being naughty with his comments😉😳😆....good thing he stopped it nahin toh na jane Prachi ka kya haal ho jata'.☺️ Phele se hi bahut buri haal thi uski, bechari 😉😆

It was all brilliantly written.....I am glad that Prachi took the initiative to stop Milind when he thought that Prachi was tired....Milind trying to bring her out of her shyness and nervousness was brilliant.😳😳😳 MilindDo you think she wou bringing the hot milk was cute.....Prachi still drinks milk😳😆....yes, she does 😆..hey ....why did Prachi not bring a glass of milk when she first enters the room??😳😉...Do you think that she would have managed it without dropping it and making a complete mess with all her nervousness?..And they went to sleep almost early morning......well hope no one disturbs them next morning'.😆 Well, Vicky and the whole clan will turn up soon 😉😆

All in all....it was beautifully written!!..😳....had a nice emotional touch to it as well😳😳😃 Thanks hun. That's exactly what I was struggling with

Writing a wedding night is so much harder....if on a show they could have picturised with a song....but here u can't even have a background song as it wouldn't have been realistic😆.....but u did a great job!!👏👏👏 Thanks again. A background music with everything left to everyone's imagination would have been so much easier but people would have strangled me to death 😆

I know this comment is much shorter than the other usual ones'.but I seriously don't know what else to write Divvya.....feeling too shy!!.....😳 No worries hun. I am glad you managed this much 😉😛😆😆

Again brilliant piece of writing!!.....will be waiting for the next update.....where Prachi steps into the shoes of a wife and a daughter-in-law!!😃😃..Thank you for this beautiful update😳😳😳 Will be just that in the next few parts

Update soon and take care and have a great week ahead!! 🤗🤗🤗 you take care and have a lovely holiday. Take care 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: sonakap1

Hey Divya. Hi Sona

Take a bow my dear friend!!! What an update. 👏👏👏Considering that the pressures were so high, you out did yourself completely. The whole part was simply BEAUTIFUL. Aww, thank you so much yaar 🤗🤗Generally writers tend to cross over the crass boundary while writing about lovemaking, but hats off to you and your writing because the whole update was sizzling HOT 😉😉😉 but was written so very aesthetically. Oh god, that is exactly what I was terrified of. Thank you so much for putting it so beautifully. There is such a thin line between hot and vulgar and I was so scared of crossing it. Thanks Sona, its such a relief to know that 🤗🤗

The way you described Prachi's nervousness, fear and vulnerability were fantastic. Loved the way Milind allayed her fears, he was completely attuned to Prachi's state of mind. He was even ready to apply brakes to all his passions just to make her comfortable. Set up a lab and clone such guys for REAL!!!! hehehe, I wish i could, but there would be a surplus of orders to clone him 😉😳😆

Prachi also did not disappoint by taking the right decision at the right time by letting Milind know that she is shy and nervous but not unreceptive and scared. Exactly😳

The name finding part was really cute. glad you liked it. Just tried to diffuse Prachi's fear

Milind has always been a great teacher for Prachi. He was at his zenith here; he stroked her passions slowly and expertly, and ensured that it was a night to remember; and what a NIGHT. yep and she makes a very good student too 😉😳😳

Okay really need one explanation, what was with the Glass of Milk. Isn't it traditionally the bride who offers the glass of milk to the groom? If it was an allegory I didn't get it. Please explain. I am completely correlating it to your sense of humour. hahaha, no hun. There are some small comfort things we usually do. Drinking hot milk before bed is Prachi's comfort thing. (I drink hot horlicks 😳😳) Her mom had always given her and also to Neev. I have mentioned that in the story before. With Milind trying to get her as comfortable as possible, he said he would get a cup the first time. And the second time when he actually brought it for her.......well, she would have been hungry and tired after such a looooooong time 😉😉😳😆😆

The morning has dawned and love birds are all set to catch up on much needed sleep before the family arrives. Hopefully Vicky will call; else Prachi will die of embarrassment. Vicky is a good boy 😉😆

Chalo ab jaldi say start on with the HM. such impatience!!😆 HM ke liye aur do din hain Sona😳

Hugs, Hugs to you too yaar.

Sona.