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Hi Divya...... i'm back......
Just read the last two parts and I must say it was awesome, brilliant, fantastic, mindblowing, superb, rocking, marvellous, fabulous........ well I guess I am having a shortage of words......
Really it was a great update....
Well part 73 was just amazing...... it reminded me of my sister's wedding but it was no that great as grat you have written....... the whole ceremony was described brilliantly.......
Now coming to part 74......... Oh my my it was........
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☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Well now you should know what I mean to say.........
Update soon dear....Bye
❤️ Prachi
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Hi Divya before writting any single word about this update we For the wonderful update, we have no words left to express how to appreciate ur writting skills dear u have totally bowled us, like milind says he thought that he was incapable of loving her anymore than he already did, she just went and proved him wrong, this line is what we feel about u sweeting😉.

The way u have written this update was so wonderful i have read so many books in my life but was shocked when i read this update about the wedding night the way u have written not even using any kinds of indecent words, hats of to u dear this was my first story that i have read which was written so beautifully transcribing what they go through at first time.

Milind always is such a
adoring person who always takes first step in handling his shy wife,imaging prachi's lal lall gaal he has given her the right name cherry😳.

The way milind takes her fear out making her feel comfortable was mind blowing
dear I hope every girl will dream their life having their partners as understanding as milind, prachi is indeed one of the lucky girl .The whole scene padneke baad after so many years of marriage also I cant stop myself blusing crasy going through the whole scene I can imagine what would be ur condition while writting this divya😳,

Love the line after their union milind thinking of saving himself for his cherry girl was so beautiful written that shows how much he love hers ,hope prachi keeps her husband happy with her understanding and cooperation in her married life.

Now waiting to see what the new morning dawned brings to these lovely couple ,waiting eagerly to see how prachi handles her role as a wife and as a baahu, we even waiting for the long awaiting desire of milind remember he has one more place were he use to miss her😉.

waiting for the next part dear, have a great time Divya, dear
sweeting for all that u do for us.
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Originally posted by: ASMI2010

Divya Divya do u know how good writer you are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i read so many ff before .......but this one is the Best.......i can never forget this...........👏 Aww, Asmi, you are very sweet. Thank you hun 🤗

the way you describe each n every character, their roles, their emotions ............no1 cud match up with that👍🏼 I am glad you liked it, hun. Thank you for the appreciation 😳
Well what to say abt michi night it is always special......michi makes it special.......so i was expecting it but after reading your update on their wedding night.........😳 i must say it was more than what i expected........it was Fantastic.........Superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼 Aww, i am blushing now. Thank you once again 😳😳😳
Pl. continue soon........cant wait to see their morning after😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 ahem.....ahem......you are more impatient for the morning after than michi themselves 😉😆😆😆. I am tempted to give you an evening after........😉😳😆

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Originally posted by: _panna_

Hi divya, Hi Panna

Omgggggg divya what an update.....after reading this update first word came out of my mouth was WOW....honestly divya it was beautiful.....don't know what to say..... you left me speechless ..Thank you hun for liking it 😳😳.... It must be one difficult update for you to write but you did full justice dear .....Yes, it was very difficult and I am very glad that everyone received it so well.
and what can I say abt michi first night Embarrassed Embarrassed feeling shy now..... don't think I can comment on this....awww, don't make me blush more 😳😳😳. all am gonna say is it was full of love and passion and it was beautifully written....hats off to you dear 👏 👏 don't think any of us gonna forget this update soo thank you so much for giving us michians a memorable update.....
now looking forward to morning after.....That was a very sweet thing to say, Panna. Thank you very much. 🤗🤗
plz update soon...take care 🤗 🤗 🤗 Will update soon yaar. you take care too 🤗🤗

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Originally posted by: ada24

Hi Divya,...Hi Adi

What a wonderful update....so sensitive and simply beautiful....it really brought out the sanctity of a marriage .....👏 oh, what a sweet comment. Thank you yaar 🤗
Cant wait to read the next part... Will update soon. regards to you too. TC
Regards
Adi

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Hey Divya, Hi Nithya

Phew, what do I write for an update that was solely dedicated to lovemaking😳😳😳😳 I can't help but repeat what Prachi said- 'Wow'. It was very well written. BTW it was highly generous of you to lower the age limit to 16😆 Thank you hun. Yes, it was very generous 😆😆😆. I was going to make it 18+ and then at the last minute lowered it to 16 😉😆
I was kind of surprised that even after a year of courtship, Prach was really scared and terrified about the coming night. Frankly speaking, I was quite dissappointed when she turned her head when Milind was about to kiss her. Is it because she's still a bit young that she was this scared about the whole consummation or did you want to bring out the shy character in her? I was a bit confused there. That's Prachi's character. She had always been shy and way too nervous about her wedding night. It would have been way too out of character if she had jumped up and kissed him back 😆 It again reminded me of Bella in breaking dawn and her apprehensions before their consummation night. Are you a Twilight fan by any chance??😉 This is the second time that I see the traces of Twilight in here you know😉😉 Yes, I am a twilight fan and i like BD. But honestly I was not thinking of Bedward during this scene or during the wedding. I was way too much imagining Michi in these scenes 😉. Any traces of twilight is subconscious, may be 😉 but unintentional 😳
All said and done Prachi did give in to her love for Milind and became his forever. Ah, I was pretty touched with your description of the whole process. The pain that a woman goes through during and after her first lovemaking was highlighted. For me it is all hearsay, so thank you for pointing out some home truths. Though I have taken Human biology in my uni, I was quite unaware that a woman goes through lot of pain post lovemaking too😲. Oh dear, How can I answer this in an open forum?? 😲 😳 Okay, I am in the medical field and no book, academic or fictional warned me that too.........and I will just let you read between the lines😳😳. I loved Prachi's thought process about how she transformed from a girl to a woman. Really, really loved that line for some reason⭐️. Thank you. That's is one of my favourite lines too 😳
What do I say about my Milind!😳😳😳😳 Wish I could get a guy who would show atleast half the care and consideration shown by Milind on his first night. oh, you will find even better hun 🤗 Though he started off with innuendos and jokes that made his wife a bit uncomfortable, he soon drove away her worries and handled the whole situation beautifully. He indeed made this a memorable night for both of them. I would be waiting for the day when Prachi too becomes bold and uninhibitive in her husband's arms😃. Oh gosh, you too. How can I write any more bold than this? Are you girls planning to kill me with blush attacks? 😳😳😳😳😳😆
I am extremely sorry for the late comment. You chose a very wrong time to update as this is my exam week😭😭. Just finished one today and have got one day after, so am running off to bury myself in my books. But update soon, alright😉 I can't wait to read the morning after of Michi and their romance. Good luck with your exam results 🤗. Thank you for taking time to write such long comments in between your studies. Appreciate it very much. I will update soooooooon and there will just michi and romance in the upcoming updates. Don't blame me if give you all an overdose of romance 😉😆😆
Take care You take care too yaar. Hugs
Nithya

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Originally posted by: 111priyan

"Beautiful" 🤗 Thank you, Priya 🤗🤗loved it specially that part was very touchy when he wished he had waited for her. 👏 Simply mind blowing......................👍🏼 I am glad you liked it. Just wanted to show the depth of his feelings for her 😳

love u Divya bye take care.😃 Love you too hun. Take care 🤗

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