Tomorrow full of promises3-MichiFFPt87 pg181 12/12

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Posted: 15 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: ASMI2010
cant comment.....too shy😳

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Awwwwwwwwwwwww Asmi, don't do this to me yaar. blush, blush 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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divvya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
awesome part divya really loved the way u have described everything gr8 part cont soon

Thanks for liking it Jyothi. Will continue soon. Ta

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divvya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: sneha_17
beautiful ☺️

excellent writing 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Thank you, Sneha ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😳😳😳😳😳😳

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divvya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: sinak
Hey Divya, How are you? Hi Seena, I am good hun. How are you?

Awesome, amazing, brilliant. I have no words to describe. So beautifully written. A very much hot update. 😳 😳 😳
You have gone way beyond our expectations. 👏 👏 Awww, that's very sweet of you. Thanks yaar. I am glad you liked it

Hey Divya we hope to see a much bolder Prachi by end of her 2 weeks honeymoon. Awwwww ☺️☺️☺️, Think of poor me. How can I write any bolder than this?☺️☺️ Can we please leave Prachi like this? I won't be able to handle a bold Prachi 😉😉😆

Seena

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divvya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: johnangad

dis was seriously wow-Thank you 😳 sum major blushing! same here ☺️☺️☺️😳😳😳

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divvya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: nandu71
Just one word divyaa "BEAUTIFUL". Thank you, Nandu 😳
I was blushing all the way☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ me too yaar 😳😳😳
Thank u soooo much for a beautiful update yaar,this is for u👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Loved it to the core. Thank you for liking it 😳🤗🤗
Will be waiting for next update. Will update soon.
Take care. You too yaar. Ta

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divvya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: janu_2006
hey divya
awesome part.. beautifully written..
cont.sooon

Hi Janu, thanks hun. Will update soon. Ta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: divvya
Me first! 😃

WIll read and comment later 😛 Hi Aaliyah, no surprises there 😃😃. I am way too impressed with your sleep times 😉😆 Im impressing myself too now 😆, your timings are just as impressive if not more 😉😆

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Divvya that was beautifully written 👏👏 Thank you yaar 😳 Welcome

Look forward to the next part to see how Prachi adjusts to married life okies, all in the forthcoming part. Ta Look forward to it , I would have written a longer comment but the part was so i didnt know what to say except you had done a wonderful job Bye and Tc 🤗

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Nithya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#579

Hey Divya,

Phew, what do I write for an update that was solely dedicated to lovemaking😳😳😳😳 I can't help but repeat what Prachi said- 'Wow'. It was very well written. BTW it was highly generous of you to lower the age limit to 16😆

I was kind of surprised that even after a year of courtship, Prach was really scared and terrified about the coming night. Frankly speaking, I was quite dissappointed when she turned her head when Milind was about to kiss her. Is it because she's still a bit young that she was this scared about the whole consummation or did you want to bring out the shy character in her? I was a bit confused there. It again reminded me of Bella in breaking dawn and her apprehensions before their consummation night. Are you a Twilight fan by any chance??😉 This is the second time that I see the traces of Twilight in here you know😉😉

All said and done Prachi did give in to her love for Milind and became his forever. Ah, I was pretty touched with your description of the whole process. The pain that a woman goes through during and after her first lovemaking was highlighted. For me it is all hearsay, so thank you for pointing out some home truths. Though I have taken Human biology in my uni, I was quite unaware that a woman goes through lot of pain post lovemaking too😲. I loved Prachi's thought process about how she transformed from a girl to a woman. Really, really loved that line for some reason⭐️.

What do I say about my Milind!😳😳😳😳 Wish I could get a guy who would show atleast half the care and consideration shown by Milind on his first night. Though he started off with innuendos and jokes that made his wife a bit uncomfortable, he soon drove away her worries and handled the whole situation beautifully. He indeed made this a memorable night for both of them. I would be waiting for the day when Prachi too becomes bold and uninhibitive in her husband's arms😃.

I am extremely sorry for the late comment. You chose a very wrong time to update as this is my exam week😭😭. Just finished one today and have got one day after, so am running off to bury myself in my books. But update soon, alright😉 I can't wait to read the morning after of Michi and their romance.

Take care

Nithya

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111priyan

@111priyan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#580

"Beautiful" 🤗 loved it specially that part was very touchy when he wished he had waited for her. 👏 Simply mind blowing......................👍🏼

love u Divya bye take care.😃

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