Paradise:Milind Prachi ff Part 11 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Thanks Jasmine for update.
Plz cont.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Just caught up with this ff. Interesting concept, Jasmine. Good work. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Nice update
Look forward to the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Paradise Part 5



Milind goes near Prachi:Thanks a lot for introducing me to others.
She smiles:You deserve a better introduction.But sorry...i'm bad at speech.
M:This is more than enough for me.By the way...you look very pretty in this saree.
P:Really?First time i'm wearing saree.I have not worn saree in films.
M:In my film,you will be wearing saree through out.Your new look will be accepted by the audience.
She smiles.

The shoot of 'Paradise' starts.Prachi gets involved completely.She becomes the character.
Milind:Prachi,you are doing a great job.Better than i expected.It will be a landmark in your career.
P:Thanks.You work as an experienced director.
He smiles.


Prachi works continously for hours and gets tired.
M:Are you ok Prachi?
P:Yes,i am.
M:But you look tired.Let us a have a break.
P:No,i should not desturb others.
M:But nothing is more important than your health.
He brings fresh fruit juice in a glass and feeds her.
They both look at each other's eyes.

Prachi is doing a romantic song with her hero.
Milind thinks:Earlier i used to enjoy her romantic numbers.But now why do i feel uncomfortable seeing her romancing another guy?
Prachi is also uncomfortable.She looks at Milind.He turns off his face.They both imagine performing together on this romantic song.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks jasmine great update..
Michi working together....someone is getting jealous...
Jasmine plz update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice update jasmine
plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Nice update
Look forward to the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18

Paradise Part 6





Milind is dressing up.The calling bells rings.Milind opens the door.A girl is smiling at him.She has a killing look.

M:Ayesha!

A:You did'nt expect me?

She gets inside his flat.
A:Heard that your dream is getting fulfilled.You are directing a movie.Congrats.But you did'nt inform me about your movie venture.I had to know it from others.

M:I'm sorry.I was so busy that i could not inform you.How about your projects?

A:Only if somebody gives me a project i can work on it.Right?

M:Means?

A:My dream to be a good item dancer is shattered.I danced before all the wretched fellows of the film field.But they did'nt see my dance.What they saw is only my looks.I slapped them and came out.I'm only for you Milind.
Milind is dull.She goes closer to him.He moves away.
M:I'm busy.We will meet later.
A:I came here after a long time.But you are avoiding me?
M:Actually...Prachi has arranged a party to celebrate four years of success in the film field.
A:Oh!When you saw Prachi,you forgot me.Who is an ordinary girl like Ayesha before a glamour doll Prachi?
M:Nothing like that.You know that i was always Prachi's fan.
A:Ok..ok...carry on.I'm going.
She goes away.

Party....Prachi has worn a green Indian outfit.

All are clapping hands for Prachi.Milind gives a flower boquet to Prachi:Congrats!You have a long way to go.
She smiles.
All are busy with talking and dancing.Prachi and Milind go to another room where nobody is seen.
M:Now a days you always wear Indian outfit.
P:That's your influence Milind.You only gave me an ordinary Indian girl's character.
Cool breeze....Prachi's hair is flying.Milind catches her hair.Prachi is wondered.He stands close to her.Prachi is standing steady.Suddenly they both move away from each other.
M:I'm sorry prachi.
She goes away without saying anythng.
Milind's face becomes dull:Oh!What did i do?

Milind and Prachi can't sleep at night.They are thinking about what happened at night.
The next day all are shocked to see a news in the newspaper.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks jasmine great update.
Plz continue.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Nice part
Is Ayesha going to be negative in this?
Thanx for the PM

Look forward to the next part

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