Paradise:Milind Prachi ff Part 11 updated

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Paradise

Part 1 & 2:page 1

Part 3 & 4:Page 2

Part 5:Page 3

Part 6 & part 7:Page4

Part8:Page 5

Part9:Page 6

Part 10:page 7

Part 11:page 8


Character Sketch

Prachi Shah:
She is the beautiful daughter of Inder Shah.She is the top glamour actress of Bollywood .

Milind Mishra:
He is a person who has a lot of dreams to make it big in the film industry.He looks eccentric.
Prachi Shah is talking to the press media about her new movie.
Journalist:Tell us about your character in the movie.
P:I play a modern girl who is the hero's love interest.I have good dance songs in this movie.I hope people will enjoy the peppy numbers.
A guys stands up:Always running around trees and romancing the hero...dancing with the hero....You are always supporting the hero for years.Are you not fed up of doing shallow characters?
Prachi is stunned.First time she is hearing criticism.
He:For long will you wear short skirts and dance?
Prachi has no answer.She sweats.
He:I mean...why don't you do meaty roles?You are a good actress.Please don't waste your talent by doing the kind of movies which utilises only your looks.
He leaves the place.
Prachi on location.She is thinking about him.Her manager Deep:Ma'am,what are you thinking about?
P:I was thinking about that guy...who was bold enough to criticise my selection of movies.
D:He is Milind Mishra.
P:You know him?
D:Ya...He always visits producers with his script.It's a woman oriented subject.So nobody is interested.Who is having faith in such subjects?
Prachi is sleeping in the bed.Her mobile rings.She picks up the phone:Hello!
He:Hi...i'm...i'm sorry for criticising you infront of everyone.I feel bad now.
She is excited:Milind Mishra?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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conitnue soon
the new concept
awesome one
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Interesting concept
Look forward to reading more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Paradise Part 2





Milind is surprised:You know my name?
Prachi:Yes,i know your name.Don't feel bad.I'm not angry with you.
M:I'm sorry.I hurt a lot.I'm very frank.My frankness hurt people.I realise it very late.To be frank..i'm your great fan.
She is surprised.
M:I feel sad when your talent gets unnoticed.That's why i over reacted.
P:No problem.Only a honest fan like you can improvise me.Hey...i heard that you have written a script?
Milind is surprised:You know everything about me.
P:Will you give me the script to read?
He is surprised:What?
P:Ya...i mean what i say.
M:Sure.I will come to your location.
P:No need.I will come to your house.
He is surprised:What?
P:Why?I can't come?
M:But...you are famous filmstar.
P:So i can't come?
M:You are welcome.
P:Give me your address.
M:I stay in a flat.

Milind opens his door hearing calling bell ring.That was a lady in burka.She enters the flat.
M:Who are you?
She unveils her face.
He is suprised:Prachi!
P:Ya...i had to veil myself to escape from the public.
They both smile.
P:Script?I can't wait anymore to hear you narrate the script.
Milind narrates the script.Prachi is completely involved in it:Wonderful!I don't have words to say how beautiful it is.
Milind smiles:Thanks a lot.Only you have told me that it's a beautiful script.The film producers hated it.They say that it will a flop.
P:But it will be a good film for sure.You must make it into a movie.This good script should not be unnoticed.
M:But no producer to willing to finance it.
P:I will produce this film.
He is surprised:What?
P:Yes.You just chose the actors since you are the script writer.
M:Now a days producers choose the acrors.
P:But according to me,the script writer should choose the actors apt for the characters.Because they only created those characters.
M:Thanks for the liberty.I wrote each scene of the lead role keeping my favourite actress in mind.
He points his finger towards her:You.
Prachi is surprised:What?
366791 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#5
That was nice
Oh so Michi will be making a film together
Look forward to the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey pls continue
soon awesome work
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Paradise Part 3


MiLind:Only you can do this role.
Prachi:But i have done only glamour roles.
M:You must break this glamour shell and come out of it Prachi.You must do the characters which have substance.
P:I want to do good characters.But my image....
M:Don't think about your image and waste your talent.Break your image and do good characters.
Prachi is dull:But your character is a simple girl.Will my face suit your character?
M:Only you can play my role Prachi.You are the only Bollywood actress who has a simple face.But you have hidden it with over make up.I will prove it.
He takes water and pours it on her face.She is shocked:Milind,what are you doing?
Milind takes a towel and wipes her face.
He stares at her:Now you are not acting in a filom.You are going to veil youself again before you step out of this place.Nobody is going to see you.Then what is the need of this much of make up?
Prachi has no answer.
M:I'm not blaming you.Because actresses like you can't live without putting make up.But i have wiped your make up.Now you look at the mirror.
She looks at the mirror.She is surprised:I can't believe it.I look so different.I'm noticing my natural face after a long time.
M:Now you look so simple.Still you are not confident to play the simple character i created for you?
She smiles:Now i'm confident.I will do this film.Nothing can stop me from doing this film.Thankyou for having so much of confidence in me.
He smiles:I must thank a superstar like you for agreeing to do a new comer's movie.
P:That's because it's a fabulous script.
They smile.

Inder Shah is shocked to hear Prachi's decision to produce a film without his knowledge.
I:What are you saying?You want to produce a film which can guarantee no box office success.
P:But it will be a good film dad.Through this film,the film world will get a good director/writer like Milind Mishra.
I:Everyone says that he is eccentric.
P:That's because he was depressed when he got rejected by the film fraternity.
I:Whatever it is...you re playing with your hard earned money.You will lose it.
P:If it's a loss also,i won't be shattered.I will be happy that i could produce a good women oriented film.
Inder is cut up.

Milind goes to the studio and meets Prachi.
He smiles:Why did you call me Prachi?About starting the shoot of our film?You know..i'm so excited about this project.This is a script which everyone rejected.Because of you my dream is coming true.
Prachi feels upset.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great part
Look forward to the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey awesome ff
its the first ff i am reading for milind prachi and belive me its really good
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Paradise Part 4



Prachi:I'm sorry Milind.Our film's shoot can't be started soon.
Milind is shocked:What?Why?
P:Dad is against this project.I can't oppose my dad.
He is shocked:My God!
He is depressed.She feels strange to see his new expression.
P:But don't worry.I will convince my dad and inform you.
M:No,you will not.Like others you are also rejecting me.Your style of rejecting me was different.That's all.
P:No..believe me...
Milind is sweating.He goes away.

Prachi goes near Inder:Dad,you have never went against my wish.You even allowed me to enter the film field seeing my passion towards cinema.But i could not do a meaty role till now.Milind is the person who saw an actress in me and he has offered me a strong character.How can i reject it?Please don't oppose it dad.I request you.
I:Don't worry..i will never make you cry.You produce this movie.I will support you.
P:Thankyou so much dad.

Prachi rings up Milind.He picks up the phone and shouts:Why did you ring up?Now everything is over.
P:Nothing is over.Everything is going to begin.We are going to start the shoot as soon as possible.Dad is making all the arrangements.
He is surprised:What?
P:Yes.
M:I;m sorry Prachi..i misunderstood you.It's ok.Tomorrow there is party.You are invited.We both will announce our movie's name.
He smiles:Sure.

Party...
Prachi has worn a saree.Milind can't take his eyes off her.
P:A happy news for everyone.I'm going to produce a movie.It's scripted by a newcomer..Milind Mishra.
He smiles.
P:He will direct the movie.He has assited some directors before.
M:I'm happy to get this opportunity.I will not disappoint anyone.It will be a movie which will make you think.The name of the movie is "Paradise".

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