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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shabz.

poor milsi, his feet get trampled by his wife and his heart faces turmoil because of his love...the guy needs a hug🤗im glad michi have made some sort of progress, prachi applying ointment to milsi's feet was sweet and our hero finally noticed his wife's dimples yayyyyyyyyyy!
looking forward to the next part opti.

Glad that people have started feeling sorry for my Milsi too. Yeah, it appears that they are making some sort of progress, but are they really? You'll have to wait and see.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehanandita

nice to see deep love between michi Yes, Michi's love has grwon over the years.
like ur book selection dear, It is one of my favourites too.
poor guy trying to make a excuse from prachi
felt bad for milind, getting hurt both mentally and now physically too Yeah, the guy's cup of sorrow is full!
nice to see them with little conversation at the end, They'll try to converse. Lets see where it gets them.
and thnks for making milind notice her dimples😊He'll notice a lot of things but dont know whetehr he will like all of them.
continue soon Will try.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Opti...you were right...after reading milind's perspective and thought of the reception...i can understand that he was truely not being rude...but fell asleep b/c of the slowness of the gazal. So nice of Prachi to put Iodex on his bruises....I hope this warms up Milind a little bit!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Opti...you were right...after reading milind's perspective and thought of the reception...i can understand that he was truely not being rude...but fell asleep b/c of the slowness of the gazal. So nice of Prachi to put Iodex on his bruises....I hope this warms up Milind a little bit!!

Yes, Milind was not being rude, just bored. Milind will be quite a mystery to Prachi.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

awesome part opti cont soon

Thank you jyothi. Am writing down the next part. Will try to post in the next couple of hours.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Beautiful fanfic Opti. I love the way you wrote this story with present time and flashback . Please continue soon hun .....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part X

Note:Sorry if this part is boring. Hope to make the next part better.

Present

After Milind and Prachi finished their dance, the rest of the guests joined in. Ishan asked Sahana's friend, the shy and reticent Swati, to dance with him. After some coaxing she agreed. Sahana was pleased to see the two of them dance as she knew it would help keep her friend's mind off her family problems at least for some time. Swati was a bright, intelligent, pretty and sober girl. She was the class topper and aced anything she took up. The last six-months had, however, been traumatic for her. Her parent's divorce had scarred her and made her withdraw into a shell. Ishan with his gregarious personality was just the right person to get her out of that shell, Sahana thought. While it was too early to tell, she hoped that the two will hit it off and Swati will come home as her bhabhi some day.

She herself sought the company of her grandmom, Prem Latha, whom she was very fond of. She wanted her to give her the recipe for making rich chocolate cake for her brother's birthday which was a month away. She could have asked her Mama but she would have insisted in baking it herself. Her Mama felt that her daughter, at twenty years of age, was still too young to enter the kitchen. Sahana suspected that the real reason was that her mom was very possessive about her kitchen. So she planned to invade her mom's kitchen in the wee hours of the D-day and bake the cake herself. Prem Latha was amused to hear her request but went about giving her the recipe which she carefully noted down in a note book she carried in her hand bag.

At the end of the dance, Ishan had requested his parents to share the secret of their successful marriage. Milind and Prachi looked at each other and smiled. Milind said that if it had not been for his wife's patience their marriage would have disintegrated within days. She smiled hearing that - yes, her mother's advice to be patient had stood her in good stead but many a times, especially during the initial months of their marriage, her patience was tested. She thought back on one of the many instances when it was.

Past (Prachi's flashback)

It was the third day after their wedding and Prachi had still not figured out her husband. He seemed to be considerate and at the same time stand-offish. She ascribed his brusque behaviour on their wedding night to his tiredness as he himself claimed. His coldness for most part of the second day could be her doing. If she had not made that thoughtless remark on his beard, which he seemed to be very touchy about, he may have been cordial enough with her, she thought. Her perception of his being a decent man strengthened when despite all that stamping he was subjected to during their dance, he had not lashed out at her in anger. Instead he had assured her that he was aware she did not do it on purpose. He even apologised for sleeping through her song. That night she went to sleep with a big load of guilt and uncertainty off her chest.

The next day had started off on a much brighter note. After breakfast her husband had asked her to sit by his side and asked her a lot of personal questions - about her hobbies, the books she liked to read, the music she liked to hear etc. She had told him whatever he wanted to know but the more she revealed about herself, the more he seemed to be displeased with her. She did not understand the reason why. He had asked her about several things, nothing of which she knew about. Finally in the midst of their conversation, he abruptly got up and said he had some urgent work to attend and did not return till that evening. She was at a loss as to what to do. She wondered what it was she had done wrong this time but as long as her husband does not share his feelings with her, she could not address whatever problem that he seemed to have.

She remembered waiting for him till midnight. She had practically dozed off on the sofa in the hall when she heard the key being turned on the front door. She quickly got up to open the door for him. He stood unsteadily at the entrance with blood shot eyes. As she stepped back, he staggered in. His breath reeked of alcohol. Her eyes widened in shock when she realised he was drunk. He ignored her presence and stumbled his way up to their room as she silently followed him. Reaching their bed he slumped on it and passed out. She removed his shoes and loosened his clothes, all the time holding her hand to her nose as the smell of the alcohol made her feel nauseous.

As she lay on the bed next to him, several questions ran through her mind. Where was he the whole day and why was he drunk? Could it be that he is unhappy with their marriage? If he was, it could explain a lot of things. But then if he was really unhappy with this marriage why did he get married to her in the first place? It could not be for money because he seemed to have loads of it himself, all of it earned solely by him. It could not be for position because he was not keen to merge his company with her father's. In fact her father told her that he seemed more enthusiastic about the marriage proposal than the merger proposal. If he was so keen to marry her then why was he shunning her now? Did she not measure up to his expectation? She had no clue what was in his mind but she resolved to find out when he wakes up the next morning.

Edited by Opti - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ariska

Beautiful fanfic Opti. I love the way you wrote this story with present time and flashback . Please continue soon hun .....

Thanks Ariska. I have posted the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
So we're getting to know the kids a bit better. Ishan with his gregarious nature seems to have taken after his masi, while in Sahana one can maybe see a reflection of her mum. Yes 'patience ' is definitely the key to virtue and in this case I'm sure Prachi relied heavily on extremely large doses of it to get where she is now with her husband. However she is only human so I am sure it must have been tested a few times and it's those times I'm looking forward to read about.
How sad that Milind abruptly got up and left during his 'question time', he's obviously trying to find something he can relate with - I don't know who I feel more sorry for Milind or Prachi. I suppose Prachi because she's totally in the dark whereas Milind knows the cause of his pain. Milind coming home drunk - hmm - brings back memmories of the good old Kayamath days. Hope Prachi will have her answers to her many questions soon. A great update Opti.
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part opti,
love ur ishan trying to make swati cool,
guess prachi must be more confused abt milsi poor soul,
but at last her patience had won

wonder wht qeustion milsi asked her?and whts her reply which made him disappointed,
cant wait fro next part to know abt it
continue soon


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