Great Expectations-Part XXXI- Pg 202 (23/5)

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: kuku..
hahahahaha funny update opti!
poor Milind, already he is in emotional pain and thanx to wifey he is in physical pain too😆😆😆
Love how Milind tries to keep his distance with Ayesha...
he is already noticing her dimples, looks and all... waiting to see when he will start appreciating all this😛
continue soon😊

Thanks kuku. Yes, he is being subjected to physical pain as though the emotional one was'nt enough to handle but at least his wife is trying to make amends! Milind knows that he has to maintain the sanctity of his relationship with his dream girl turned saali and he will always strive to do so. Over time they will become thick friends as is already witnessed in the present sections. Yes, Milind is noticing his wife's attributes but his problems with her will be on another sphere. So it will take time before he completely accepts her.

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Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#262

hai...that was so cute! tryin to apologise...but...loved the last scene! hope u continue soon akka! loving all the parts!

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Monu-SunNaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#263

Opti..edited my msg :) great chapt.

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Isa_de

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Posted: 16 years ago

#264

Ok opti..all i can say is the relation between MM and PM is growing very beautifully.............

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Shabz.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#265

poor milsi, his feet get trampled by his wife and his heart faces turmoil because of his love...the guy needs a hug🤗im glad michi have made some sort of progress, prachi applying ointment to milsi's feet was sweet and our hero finally noticed his wife's dimples yayyyyyyyyyy!
looking forward to the next part opti.

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mehanandita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#266

nice to see deep love between michi
like ur book selection dear,
poor guy trying to make a excuse from prachi
felt bad for milind, getting hurt both mentally and now physically too
nice to see them with little conversation at the end,
and thnks for making milind notice her dimples😊
continue soon

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Thanks Opti..this chapter (the past perpective) was so sweet, and funny at the same time..! Sweet because of the akwardness between Milind & Prachi, and very funny with Prachi stepping on his poor toes and also how Ayesha has no clue about the predicament her poor Jiju is in..sandwiched between two beauties..😆!! Great part.Thanks Yas. Michi are just beginning to know each other and yes, Ayesha is blissfully unaware of the turmoil Milind is going through.

I just love with the past and present perspectivies, you highlight the complete constast between Michi now and then. Glad that this writing style has caught on.

Btw..simply adore Milind as he apologised to Prachi and ditto same for Prachi..rather than create a wall of silence, they both took the initiative to apologise. Actually these two are quite well meaning but the sharp contrast in their character and more improtantly Milind's expectations of what his wife has to be will keep creating problems for them.

Hiopefully, this will be the first step towards friendship. Let's see.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: ..kashish..
hai...that was so cute! tryin to apologise...but...loved the last scene! hope u continue soon akka! loving all the parts!

Thanks Kashish. Will try to post my daily update later today.