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Posted: 16 years ago

Part XXVIII

Note: I had some other thing planned but because that update required some thinking which I am not able to do now, I've postponed it for later. Sorry for this insipid update.
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Sahana had not come down to the restaurant for breakfast the next morning. Milind looked around and asked "Where's Sahana?"

Ishan sighed and said, "She's still in her room. I knocked on her door before coming down but she just shouted out that I should leave her alone. She seems to be in a foul mood. Maybe she is still sulking over yesterday's loss in our chess game."

Prachi did not think that Sahana would react this way for just a chess game. She looked concerned and decided to check on her daughter. Milind volunteered to go with her and asked the rest of them to go ahead with their buffet breakfast.

They both went up to Sahana's room. Sahana did seem to be in a foul mood as she refused to open the door. After a lot of coaxing she finally opened the door. Just as she turned around, she doubled up in pain, holding her stomach. Prachi immediately held her shoulders and led her to the bed. Milind understood what the problem was and called up room service asking them to bring a bottle filled with moderately hot water to her room.

Sahana looked up at her papa in surprise wondering how he knew not only what her problem was, but also its solution. Understanding her quizzical look, Prachi smiled lovingly at her daughter and said, "Your papa used to take care of me before, darling."

She thought back on the day that Milind first took care of her in a similar situation.

Past (Prachi's flashback)

Prachi had woken up that morning with the sharp familiar pain in her lower abdomen. She quickly got up and went to the bathroom. Having taken the necessary protection, she returned to bed, turned on her stomach and tried to go back to sleep. Soon she felt herself being yanked by Milind.

"Wake up, you sleepy head. It is already 7.00 o'clock. Come on, brush your teeth quickly and join me for our daily swim," he said impatiently.

She opened one eye and turned to see her husband in his swimming trunks, pulling at her arm.

"Milind, I am not coming today. You go for your swim," she said and pulling back her arm, she picked up the pillow lying nearby and covered her head up, hoping he would go away.

Milind, however, was in no mood to give up so easily.

"Not coming? No way. I am not budging till you get up," he said and pulled the pillow away from her.

"Milind, please.... I am not well," she moaned.

"Not well?" he asked in alarm and immediately sat down next to her. "What's wrong? Are you having fever?" He felt her forehead and her neck.

"No, Milind. I don't have fever."

"Headache?" he persisted "Shall I get you an aspirin?"

"No. I don't have a headache. Just a mild discomfort in the stomach," she said hesitantly.

"Stomach pain? Wait, I'll get you a painkiller." He got up to leave. She pulled at his arm and made him sit back.

"Don't worry. This will go in a couple of hours."

"How do you know that for sure? I'll call the doctor," he said and was all set to make the call. She snatched the phone from him.

"Milind will you stop over-reacting? This is a normal thing which happens to most women, nothing to worry about." Just then she felt a sharp cramp and her face contorted in pain.

"You have stomach pain and you call it normal? Prachi, you may have the capacity to bear a lot of pain but I do not have the capacity to sit back and watch you suffer. I am calling the doctor, now." He tried to get up again.

She had no alternative but to tell him what was the problem. She pulled herself up and leaning into his ears she whispered the reason for her pain. He took some time to comprehend what she had just said and then it dawned on him.

"Sorry," he said hitting the back of his head with his palm. "You see, I have not had any female influence in my life. I lost my mom when I was just 3 years old. Since then it has just been my papa, Nandu kaka and me. Nandu kaka used to work for my Nanaji, who is no more. Since papa could not take care of the house and his work, Nandu kaka came to help him with the cooking and in taking care of me. That is why I am very attached to him. Although I had learnt about all this in school, I couldn't make the connection. So you suffer from pain every month?" he asked her.

"No, not every month. Only some months are a bit more difficult than others. I don't know why."

"What medicine do you take for it?"

"Nothing. Sometimes if it becomes too unbearable I keep a hot water bottle against my stomach."

"Hot water bottle?" he asked curiously. He then snapped his finger and said, "Will be back in a couple of minutes.

"Milind, wait" she called out but he was gone by then.

He returned after a few minutes with a hot water bottle. Prachi was surprised seeing this. She knew that Nandu kaka does not normally wake up before 7.30 am which meant that Milind himself had got the bottle ready.

"You took the trouble for my sake?" she asked, deeply touched by his gesture.

"Trouble? What trouble? Heating up water? That is one of the few things I can do in the kitchen, remember?" he asked and without much ado, he pulled down the comforter, dragged up her nightie and placed the bottle against her stomach. As he positioned the bottle against her stomach, his fingers briefly grazed it, sending tremors down her spine. He quickly pulled down her nightie to cover her up and pulled up the comforter. The entire action was so swift that she was too stunned to react.

He then held the bottle in place with one hand and took her hand in the other, pressing it reassuringly.

Prachi's eyes filled up with emotion.

"Is it still paining?" he asked with concern written all over his face.

"No. These are not tears of pain," she said emotionally. "Thank you for being so caring."

"Thank you for what? For doing my duty? Wish I could take on the pain myself. Since I could not do that, this is the least I could do."

"I can manage now. You go ahead for your swim. You'll be late for work otherwise."

"No, I'll wait here till you are completely fit," he said and continued to press the bottle against her stomach. The warm water massage had the desired effect for after about half an hour, Prachi felt much better.

"Milind I feel much better now," she said and removing the bottle, she tried to get up. Milind hurried to help her up.

"I am not an invalid, Milind. I can take care of myself, don't worry" she said and got busy with her routine chores.

Edited by Opti - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
That;s it...its done already?? Just as i got into reading it...boom...it ended. Oh well.... Very sweet of Milind to be so concerned for Prachi....but just like a typical dense man...she had to spell it out for him!!! Looking forward to the next update!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AKANargis

That;s it...its done already?? Just as i got into reading it...boom...it ended. Oh well.... Very sweet of Milind to be so concerned for Prachi....but just like a typical dense man...she had to spell it out for him!!! Looking forward to the next update!!

Actually this was supposed to be the first part of a much longer update but what I had planned to happen after thisrequired a lot of thinking which as I said I wasn't able to do today. So curtailed it here. Men are not always adept at understanding women's problems. Had come across quite a few dense men including my hubby in my life.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Good part Opti, Milind the ever caring husband. Lagta hain, Milind ko aadat hogayii to have Prachi as company for his daily swimming excercise but wait did Milind put a hot water bottle cover on the bottle before placing it on her stomach...the water must have been boiling?Thank you Opti. Continue soon
This part was esp beautiful, Prachi's eye filling up with emotion at his gesture. Lovely 😊
Prachi's eyes filled up with emotion.

"Is it still paining?" he asked with concern written all over his face.

No. These are not tears of pain," she said emotionally. "Thank you for being so caring."
Edited by $weet Ema - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Good part Opti, Milind the ever caring husband. Lagta hain, Milind ko aadat hogayii to have Prachi as company for his daily swimming excercise but wait did Milind put a hot water bottle cover on the bottle before placing it on her stomach...the water must have been boiling?Thank you Opti. Continue soon

Prachi's eyes filled up with emotion.

"Is it still paining?" he asked with concern written all over his face.

This part was beautiful, Prachi is overwhlmed."No. These are not tears of pain," she said emotionally. "Thank you for being so caring."

Yes, Milind had got used to Prachi's company. Dont worry Milind knew just how hot the bottle needs to be. After all it had to be placed against his dear wife's tender stomach. Remember his instructions to the hotel people too, to get a moderately hot water bottle? Thanks Yas.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Me fourth I guess
Edited by may268 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
That was short ans sweet
aww Papa is so sweet
You just reminded me of that nightmare!!..XD
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow opti short but a very sweet update gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: may268

That was short ans sweet

aww Papa is so sweet
You just reminded me of that nightmare!!..XD

Thanks Mayuri. Yeah those are the days!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

can i unzip my mouth opti now.

Yes, you can Sumu.

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