Great Expectations-Part XXXI- Pg 202 (23/5) - Page 112

Originally posted by: may268

Me second

That was nice

it reminded of me of my first swimming lessons...lol

Lovely update opti we are getting to learn a new topic every update thanks a lot for this dear, loved the way milind was teaching his wife swimming lessons making her more confident 👏.Ayesha has yet not able to understand the changes in her sisters life after so long years.she is not the same old prachi shah she is know prachi mishra whose teacher is milind she has to be perfect in all fields ,over all a great update .waiting for a new lesson along with prachi.

Originally posted by: y_tanuja

Lovely update opti we are getting to learn a new topic every update thanks a lot for this dear, loved the way milind was teaching his wife swimming lessons making her more confident 👏.Ayesha has yet not able to understand the changes in her sisters life after so long years.she is not the same old prachi shah she is know prachi mishra whose teacher is milind she has to be perfect in all fields ,over all a great update .waiting for a new lesson along with prachi.

Opti Akka, your FF is turning out to be a handbook for general knowledge on various matters including politics, cooking, swimming, music etc.. Thank you so much for it. I loved to read through it.

Prachi's aquaphobia is removed now. Waiting to see how Michi finally unite.

Opti, we ougth to name them Michipedia.😆 But I knew none of that stuff about ghazals and swimming. 😊 I really like your story structure. I realised just how well though each part has to be so the past connects with the present and the stories in both time periods flow properly. 👏Really good stuff Opti and really enjoying the overall light-heartedness of this FF.

Originally posted by: ShubS

Opti Akka, your FF is turning out to be a handbook for general knowledge on various matters including politics, cooking, swimming, music etc.. Thank you so much for it. I loved to read through it.

Prachi's aquaphobia is removed now. Waiting to see how Michi finally unite.

Originally posted by: --BC--

Opti, we ougth to name them Michipedia.😆 Name what? The fic?

But I knew none of that stuff about ghazals and swimming. 😊 Had to do up some net surfing myself.

I really like your story structure. I realised just how well though each part has to be so the past connects with the present and the stories in both time periods flow properly. 👏Thanks Pam. Yes, it is tough, I did not realise just how much when I began. It is becoming increasingly difficult to connect to two time frames. So in some parts the connections may appear forced.

Really good stuff Opti and really enjoying the overall light-heartedness of this FF. Yes, I am trying to keep the emotional stuff to the bare minimum.

Oh and I'm so glad Milind apologised for the millionth time for what he did and Prachi made him squirm like that for what he did. Makes it easier for me to forgive him. Milind is really ashamed of what he did.

wow opti awesome part loved the way milind helped her get over her fears. gr8 part cont soon

Opti Akka, time to start a second thread!!

Good........