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Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#551

wow wow wow idnt knw what to say...

he told neev abtprachi

and now she is going to meet him...

and she took sahana..

wonder what mili will think,,,

cant wait till the next part...pls pls continue soon akka!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#552

i dont know how to start!! ok may be like this😭

im not able to see milind this way opti! this is too much!!! and on top of that u write with so much life in it that it makes me feel even worse. its very beautifully written opti. very very very emotional. tear jerker. especially milind's thoughts towards his daughter are so heart wrenching. thisi FF is very...i dunno. im not able to find the most appropriate word !!! so far this FF has amazed me like never before and now it had just made me cry. im just waiting for it to give me pure happiness! thank u for the update.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: sailat@PA
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!! OPTI!! another cliffhanger :((( superb update!

Thanks Saima. Awaiting your detailed comments.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: ShubS
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Once you are done with your weeping, let me know what you thought of the update.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: gawker
ab kya hoga? can't wait to read your next update...
you'll give these tv script writers a run for their money with your cliffhangers, opti :)

Sorry, Manu. I started off this story as a short story but the updates are getting longer by the day, couldn't cover them all at one go. Had to break off at some point.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: y_tanuja
another tearful update u have written very well opti the feeling of milind for prachis words poor soul he is really hurt.what he thought was right just by giving a spern is not to be called as mother or father milind was the one who saw every need of the baby, prachi has to think well before she takes any decision. pls cont soon waiting to see what story does neev have.

Yes, Prachi's words really wounded Milind. Prachi has still not gotten over her feeling of inadequacy and seeing him with Ayesha only heightened it. Hopefully everything will clear up soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: ..kashish..
wow wow wow idnt knw what to say...
he told neev abtprachi

and now she is going to meet him...

and she took sahana..

wonder what mili will think,,,

cant wait till the next part...pls pls continue soon akka!

What will Milind think? That will be up next.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: aritha
i dont know how to start!! ok may be like this😭
im not able to see milind this way opti! this is too much!!! and on top of that u write with so much life in it that it makes me feel even worse. its very beautifully written opti. very very very emotional. tear jerker. especially milind's thoughts towards his daughter are so heart wrenching. thisi FF is very...i dunno. im not able to find the most appropriate word !!! so far this FF has amazed me like never before and now it had just made me cry. im just waiting for it to give me pure happiness! thank u for the update.

Thanks Aritha. Dont worry happiness is on the way, hopefully in the next update i.e., if the Neev-Prachi confrontation does not become too long.

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Niki

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Posted: 16 years ago

#559

Another heart wrenching update Opti. Again extremely well written with no emotion left unturned. Milind's state is unbearable to read about, but I do feel he did the right thing by narrating the whole story to Neev. At the end of the day when you love someone so much then you have to let them go too if that is what's best for them, but if only he knew that Prachi loves him just as much; if not more, and she is going through a similar trauma to him herself.

You seemed to remark that Prachi has made up her mind - wonder what it is - looking forward to the next update.

A remarkable FF Opti - simply love it.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: Insomniac
Another heart wrenching update Opti. Again extremely well written with no emotion left unturned. Milind's state is unbearable to read about, but I do feel he did the right thing by narrating the whole story to Neev. At the end of the day when you love someone so much then you have to let them go too if that is what's best for them, but if only he knew that Prachi loves him just as much; if not more, and she is going through a similar trauma to him herself.
You seemed to remark that Prachi has made up her mind - wonder what it is - looking forward to the next update.

A remarkable FF Opti - simply love it.

Thanks Nikki. Yes, both Milind and Prachi are going through some heavy duty emotional upheavals. Lets see if they are really keen to let go and yes Prachi has made up her mind. This is what I said when I had earlier remarked that their relationship makes them imbibe qualities of the other. While it has mellowed down Milind and curbed his impulsive streak to some extent, it would have made Prachi take actions rather than be a recipient of other's actions. It would make her firm in what she wants.

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