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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks Manu, although i dont have much hope with Michi turning my brain into jelly.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Opti what r u doing here...
Come on ...concenrate on ur exams....we will keep this forum active and i am sure it wont get archeived.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Opti what r u doing here...

Come on ...concenrate on ur exams....we will keep this forum active and i am sure it wont get archeived.

I know Sumu. Just not able to concentrate on anything. I've been trying to read since yesterday but things just get in and get out in the same speed!
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Posted: 16 years ago

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thanks alot sweetie.

So finally are you going to read from where you left off? I thought you found it too boring to continue.
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Posted: 16 years ago
A diamond merchant from Surat. Marriage to an older man. How are you enjoying Bandini hun? šŸ˜‰ Got to admit really starting to enjoy that show but trying not to get too addicted like KYM.
Anyway back to your FF. My heart just bled for Prachi. 😭 She has been through. But she is such an interesting character. Her sleeping with Neev is just a symptom of her need to be loved but still she doesn't strike me as clingy or desperate. She is fragile but seems to have great reserves of inner strength. In contrast your Milind seems far less complicated and more straightforward. But this FF wouldn't work if he had issues galore. But still a sweet, strong character. Good work Opti. šŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Opti
Finally managed to read part 7...

poor Prachi ..she had to got thru so much..OMG Alap he is such a ..i have no words to explain him...All the men in Prachi's life have given her nothing but pain be it inder,Alaap, and even Neev..I dont blame her if she gave in to Neevs desire...She wanted to be loved...and she thought neev loved her and she trusted him.. but unfortunately he turns out to be just like the other men in her life...I guess so far the only good thing that has happened in Prachi's life is she stumbled upon Milind...

I actually kind off feel bad for Milind too...He must feel so hurt knowing that the one women he is in love with had to go thru so much off pain...unforunately he cannot undo what has happened but im sure he will give her all the happiness that would make her get over her painful past..

Now i think Prachi wouldnt take a step even though she falls in love with him..she might think tht milind should deserve someone better than her..So i guess it would be Milind who should take the initiative..

It was a great update Opti..You brought out Prachi's past really well..

Now relly looking forward for how Milind makes her get over her past and accept him...Hopefully Neev doesnt come bck..

I actually thought i would have missed a lot of parts..but looks like you werent updating on a daily basis..and then read a few posts and found tht you are preparing for interview..

All The Best Opti..

Will wait eagerly for the next update..No hurries ..

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: --BC--

A diamond merchant from Surat. Marriage to an older man. How are you enjoying Bandini hun? šŸ˜‰

You caught me there! Yeah, I am enjoying that show which is refreshingly different from the rest of the BT bakwas and I must say I have taken quite a liking for Ronit. the guy is a superb actor with great dialogue delivery too. Shabbo could use a few tips from him on that front. I wasn't consciously using part of the plot but maybe in my subconsciousness, I did get influenced by it.
Got to admit really starting to enjoy that show but trying not to get too addicted like KYM.
Same here. The cast is great and so is the script but since it is BT show better not get too attached to it. They do not have a great recrod of retaining their sanity.
Anyway back to your FF. My heart just bled for Prachi. 😭 She has been through. Yes, Prachi has had all the rotten luck in the world till she met Milind.
But she is such an interesting character. Her sleeping with Neev is just a symptom of her need to be loved but still she doesn't strike me as clingy or desperate. No she not clingy because she feels she just can't afford to be, given her painful past. She has always been the receiver and not the initiator. Even with Neev it was giving in to his demands more than getting something from him. Her emotional stress compromised on her ability to think about the consequences of the act. Yes, there is a deep seated need for love but she will never go out to attain it unless she knows for sure the other person wants to give it to her.
She is fragile but seems to have great reserves of inner strength. Yes, she has a lot of inner strength although in a weak moment she did try to commit suicide. She will never go down that road come what may and it is not going to be a smooth path to happiness even now.
In contrast your Milind seems far less complicated and more straightforward. Yes, Milind is one who goes with his heart rather than with his head. His impulsive and almost institive decisions are never governed by his head but will he remain so is what one needs to see.
But this FF wouldn't work if he had issues galore. You'll see what happens to Michi as the story progresses. Things may not be as simple now as they seem to be.
But still a sweet, strong character. Good work Opti. šŸ‘Thanks Pam.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Opti Akka, I came across "Rail Sneham" (K. Balachander's) on Rajshri.com. Guess it's the same soap you mentioned as an inspiration for this FF. I was so tempted to watch the last episodes- but they only have a couple of episodes uploaded as of now!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ShubS

Opti Akka, I came across "Rail Sneham" (K. Balachander's) on Rajshri.com. Guess it's the same soap as you mentioned as an inspiration for this FF. I was so tempted to watch the last episodes- but they only have a couple of episodes uploaded as of now!

Yes, that is the one. KB did a fabulous job in it. It wasn't a very long one (I think about 13 episodes) but the story was very moving. I have only taken the essence of that story and most of my story including the ending will not be like the one on the show.

There the heroine is no more and the entire story starts off with that and goes into flashback mode.
I do hope to use some bits of the show in the epilogue though.

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