Short FF: Heart to heart- All parts- page 38 - Page 16

Originally posted by: kuku..

i had three reactions reading this part!
1. ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe and GOOD GRACIOUS LORD!😕
2. awwww and aaaaaah😳
3. yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!😃

okie.. the yaaay for.. he is framing sentences in his head for the confrontation😆
What else the poor guy can do.😆
awww for the cute michi interaction, and Prachi thinking abt their childhood sleeping arrangements (or difficulties with Milind-i-sleep-diagonally-Mishra) and aaaah... i realize tht there was nothing romantic in her relation with Neev, 'coz she loves Milind. Well, let's see what she has to say when asked about love... so wht was she apologizing neev for? then i got it! Neev was being bullied in his college by some big bullies, and Prachi was the only person in his friends circle who has a black belt, and since he cudn't afford to go to classes, she was teaching him, but they had a few more lessons to finish, when Prachi's marriage got fixed and she was busy with the shopping and all, so cudn't continue Neev's lessons is spite of much pestering from a very desperate and helpless Neev, so she promised to teach him the last few tricks be4 she left but unexpectedly she had to leave on the day of her wedding, and she was apologizing to Neev for not keeping her promise and reassuring him that he will find some1 better than her, as in a better teacher who wud keep her promise! which Milind being a duffer misunderstood! *YES* i got ur story!😈
Neev wasn't her classmate... Prachi wasn't teaching him at all..😆
and tht ewwwe for... upma! and GOOD GRACIOUS LORD! Milind likes upma!🤢... tht totally killed Milind for me!🤣... but if he promises to give up upma, i will still have him☺️
I love Upma.. While in India I hated it.. but now I cook and eat.. I love it.😳
So your hatred for Upma is more than your love for Milind.. (like Ayesha- her hatred for Prachi is ....

okie... sorry for the very idiotic, stupid and unnecessary long, wierd and crazy comment! it is 2:53 am here... and that is the time, i go crazy and (also get creative😆 'coz mostly thats the time when i write my fanfics... now u understand why/how i get whacky ideas for my whacky fanfics😆)
I loved your comments had a great laugh.. thanks for the efforts to write it down here..

Originally posted by: Tina_Johns

nice part though im confused with Prachi

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Shubs, I don't know what u are talking about..this part came out well. Milind has so many unanswered questions, hope he confronts Prachi gently in the next chapter. Love the ligh little teasinfg between them.

Thanks

Loved this update Shubs. From this part it feels like Prachi loves Milind just as much as he does her, their teasing was a delight to read. Milind must be so confused – here he was thinking that she'll be heartbroken sacrificing her love and here she is now laughing, teasing and fondly remembering their childhood. From this can I assume that she didn't really love Neev at all but always loved Milind? Milind is always left with his thoughts and unanswered questions, I hope he gets a chance to talk to Prachi so that he can eliminate his confusion and enjoy his married life just like he dreamed, and at the same time we can find out the real truth about Neev and Prachi😆. I have some thoughts but I dare not say anything because I know I'm hopless at guessing, My forte is just enjoying the hard efforts of all you kind writers.

Hi shubs..
Im new to the forum..just joined few days back..

just read all the parts of your FF together...
Part 1..
It was sweet and simple and conveyed what Milind wante to convey about his feelings to Prachi...loved this line"See you tomorrow, my yet to be wife!" and also the brother sister conversation..

Part 2..
So Milind did not shave his beard for Wedding and Prachi said beard suits him..Good for her..even though had she said other way round..i dont think there was anything Miling could have done at that time..

Just when i think..everything is good ..whats the problem..there comes the last line..

Part 3..

poor Milind...his heart broken on what was his most memorable day of his life...
Milind was sweet in the car despite his own inner turmoil..he gave her a shoulder to cry...
So if Prachi was in love with Neev then why she dint convey it to milind..Im sure he would have understood her..but im still having hopes on Prachi rather ur Prachi that she must have some good reason for not telling Milind about Neev..

Part 4..
k..Now im confused..until previous update i thought prachi was in love with neev but did not tell it b'coz of some valid reasons...

but now the way she seems to be teasing him...im as confused as Milind...

poor guy on his wedding day he was so happy thinking that Prachi is in love with him as much as he is with her..but gets the shock of his life when he sees her speaking to Neev...

The next day he was thinking that prachi might be heart broken...b'coz she married him for Daadi's sake ..and here she is teasing and making fun of him..an other shock..

dont know what other shock is awaiting him...

Hope you put an end to this confusion if not completely atleast partially in your next update..

btw loved the way they teased each other...

Originally posted by: ShubS

Thanks Aritha. It may not exactly be what you are thinking.

Originally posted by: Insomniac

Loved this update Shubs. From this part it feels like Prachi loves Milind just as much as he does her, their teasing was a delight to read.
thanks Niki. One thing I can tell- Prachi and Milind are fond of each other from the childhood. Love will be discussed later.

Milind must be so confused ' here he was thinking that she'll be heartbroken sacrificing her love and here she is now laughing, teasing and fondly remembering their childhood.

Yep I think I put too many things into his head.. poor guy.😆

From this can I assume that she didn't really love Neev at all but always loved Milind?

Hmmm, Milind will probably ask her if she loves him in the next update.

Milind is always left with his thoughts and unanswered questions, I hope he gets a chance to talk to Prachi so that he can eliminate his confusion and enjoy his married life just like he dreamed, and at the same time we can find out the real truth about Neev and Prachi😆.

Milind will get justice.😆

I have some thoughts but I dare not say anything because I know I'm hopless at guessing, My forte is just enjoying the hard efforts of all you kind writers.

Do let me know if I end up finishing the story just as you had thought.

thanks Niki.

Originally posted by: aritha

but in the end michi will be together yea??? thats all i need. for starters its chinee love n michi frndship thats all yea???

Originally posted by: madhavi_v

Hi shubs..
Im new to the forum..just joined few days back..

Hello Madhavi, welcome to the forum.😊I hope you enjoy it here though I must say you are quite late.. the show is ending in 2 days.

just read all the parts of your FF together...
Part 1..
It was sweet and simple and conveyed what Milind wante to convey about his feelings to Prachi...loved this line"See you tomorrow, my yet to be wife!" and also the brother sister conversation..

I am happy it came out sweet and simple.. thanks.

Part 2..
So Milind did not shave his beard for Wedding and Prachi said beard suits him..Good for her..even though had she said other way round..i dont think there was anything Miling could have done at that time..

Just when i think..everything is good ..whats the problem..there comes the last line..

the reality is that I love Milind with beard. So both my Milind and Prachi had to love it so that it's not shaved.
😆
the last line was the twist in the story..

Part 3..

poor Milind...his heart broken on what was his most memorable day of his life...
Milind was sweet in the car despite his own inner turmoil..he gave her a shoulder to cry...
So if Prachi was in love with Neev then why she dint convey it to milind..Im sure he would have understood her..but im still having hopes on Prachi rather ur Prachi that she must have some good reason for not telling Milind about Neev..

MIlind has shared a sweet bond with Prachi from the childhoood. He will always give her a shoulder to cry no matter whatever she might have done to him.

Part 4..
k..Now im confused..until previous update i thought prachi was in love with neev but did not tell it b'coz of some valid reasons...

but now the way she seems to be teasing him...im as confused as Milind...

I wanted the readers to be confused.. so I confused the hero.

poor guy on his wedding day he was so happy thinking that Prachi is in love with him as much as he is with her..but gets the shock of his life when he sees her speaking to Neev...

The next day he was thinking that prachi might be heart broken...b'coz she married him for Daadi's sake ..and here she is teasing and making fun of him..an other shock..

dont know what other shock is awaiting him...

May be a few more shocks.. before it's a pleasant surprise.😳

Hope you put an end to this confusion if not completely atleast partially in your next update..

let's see if I can..

btw loved the way they teased each other...

Waiting for you next update..
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