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NosVemos

@NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: _angel_
I just finish reading part one Shubs which was really fantastic dear👏

but u have to wait for me to finish reading part 2 and 3 to post my full comment and thought dear

thank u very much for starting anpther FF hun🤗

thanks Angel. will wait for your comments.. take your time.😊

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NosVemos

@NosVemos

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Heebs

Shubs i think im the slowest updater among all of you...but i'll try to update for tonight

😆You should pick up speed now!!! Opti tops the list though.

Edited by ShubS - 16 years ago

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NosVemos

@NosVemos

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#133

Part 4

It was the early hours of morning by the time the Mishras reached their home in Mumbai. Many of the relatives who had come for the wedding from different parts of the country were going to stay for a few more days in the Mishra house. Prachi woke up as the car halted at its destination. It took her a moment to realize she wasn't in her bed but actually in her husband's arms. As she saw Mishraji getting off the car, she tried to wake Milind too. When Prachi shook Milind's shoulder, he suddenly jerked out of his dreamless sleep. Milind's aunt and Sukruti had asked the newly weds to wait outside the house as they wanted to perform the rituals to welcome the daughter in law of the house. Though Prachi had visited the Mishra house umpteen times in her life, this time it all had felt different. After the aarti and finishing with kicking the pot of rice, Prachi was first taken to the pooja room along with Milind where they all prayed to God. Milind had quietly followed the instructions his elders gave him and his mind was half asleep.

Wanting to take a shower and get out of her heavy bridal wear, Prachi looked for her suitcases and she was informed that they were loaded into another van, which hadn't yet made it to Mumbai. Sukruti had told her she would give her a change of clothes and took Prachi with her.

Daadi hadn't been able to sleep through the whole journey and her body ached more than ever before. Milind took her to her room; she insisted she wanted to have a bath though Milind suggested her to rest. Keeping his mobile alarm for 9 am, Milind went to his room, changed into comfortable clothes and within a few minutes he had hit the bed immersed in a sound sleep.

Prachi had taken a shower and worn a sky blue cotton chudidar with Lucknow chicken work, that Sukruti gave her. As it was only 5 am in the morning, Sukruti suggested her to take some rest in her brother's room. Prachi feeling vaguely shy had asked Sukruti if she could stay with her in her room as she didn't want to disturb Milind who must have been asleep by now. Sukruti had smiled teasingly and told her she needed to accommodate a couple of her cousins in her room and her brother's room would be the only place for her sister-in-law. Though it was not the first time she was entering Milind's room, Prachi had felt quite awkward but had finally made her way towards his room. The room's door was closed but not locked. Prachi entered the room without making noise and she felt so familiar looking around. She had found Milind sleeping diagonally on the bed with his arms and legs spread out.

Prachi smiled thinking Milind still slept this way. She remembered her childhood holidays where Sukruti, Milind and her would be given one bed but Milind would occupy more than half of the space. Sukruti and her always had to fight him out to obtain some space for themselves. She contemplated for a minute which corner of the bed had more space where she could lay herself down. She quietly sneaked herself into the bed by his side. Feeling cold she pulled the large blanket on the foot of the bed on her, as well as her husband, to soon join him in sleep.

After a few hours, Milind opened his eyes as his hands felt the touch of a soft form while he changed sides. As he took his hand back, his eyes met with a face inches away from his, shining bright as the sunrays fell on it. If Prachi had looked breathtakingly beautiful yesterday, she had looked ethereal in her sleep. Milind had lost himself in filling her features in his eyes but he had tried his best to suppress an urge to touch her. Right then, his alarm had rung, that got Prachi out of her sleep instantly. When Prachi opened her eyes she had caught Milind's eyes on her, but soon averted her gaze feeling embarrassed. That had brought Milind to ground from the world to which he had travelled.

"Good morning" Prachi had said getting out of the bed.

"Good morning" Milind had replied looking at everything else but her. In seconds he was in the bathroom. Taking his shower, Milind had recollected the previous day's events and calculated how and when he should talk to Prachi.

Wondering if Milind didn't respond to her properly or whether she was assuming things, Prachi had gone out of the room to get Milind some tea.

It was only then she realized it was already 9 am. The cook was already preparing the breakfast when she went into the kitchen. She stood chatting with Sukruti, Daadi and other relatives in the living room until she was given two plates of upma and two cups of tea and was asked to take it to Milind's room.

Milind had stood in front of the mirror doing his hair, wearing trousers and vest. Prachi had vibrantly told him it's his favourite Upma breakfast today and he had thanked her for getting it. He then had opened his wardrobe and chose a dark green shirt. As he wore the shirt, Prachi who had sat on the bed watching him had said, "Oh Milind, you are still the same. You sleep all over the bed and you still don't have any sense of colour".

"What's wrong with this colour?" Milind had asked.

"It's a pleasing colour. But it won't go with your dark trousers. Let me choose a lighter shade for you" Prachi had taken out a pale green shirt from his wardrobe. Milind tried to say the shirt he chose was fine, but Prachi tried removing it making Milind remember the little girl Prachi who used to always have a say on what others wore.

Milind took his shirt off and wore the one Prachi gave him. Prachi watched him buttoning his shirt. "What?" Milind had asked as he caught her looking at him.

"Nothing. Actually I was wondering you have grown so tall. Are you a foot taller than me or what? We used to be the same height when we were kids" Prachi moved close to him trying to measure how much shorter she was compared to him. Milind couldn't help smiling and he had said, "You are not even 5 feet".

Prachi had stood on her toe tips drawing an imaginary line from her head to his ears and said "I reach up to your ears".

"Do you want to stand on a chair?" Milind had teased noticing her standing on her toes.

Prachi had slapped him on his arm only to hurt her hand as she felt she slapped a rock. "Ouch" she had said making Milind laugh at her. Daadi was at their door by then ready to leave for the hospital. Milind and Prachi had eaten breakfast talking to Daadi. Prachi had complained to Daadi about how Milind teased her that she was just 5 feet tall while Milind had announced how Prachi cheated to increase her height.

Daadi's heart was filled with joy to see Milind and Prachi happy like this. She kissed both of them on their forehead. Later, Milind and Daadi had left for the hospital.

As Daadi underwent her blood transfusion treatment, Milind had reverted to his pool of thoughts. Things seemed even more bizarre to him now. Prachi had come across as the same old vibrant girl he knew a decade ago. He had found the same warmth and ease interacting with her that he had forgotten there was something bothering his mind. 'How could Prachi come across happy and bubbly having just sacrificed Neev? Is she truly happy or is she just acting out? Or is it an effort from her side to make this marriage work?' Milind felt a head rush again and the only solution was talking to Prachi and making her talk her heart out to him. He started framing sentences to confront her tactfully without creating trauma for his or her folks.

Edited by ShubS - 16 years ago

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NosVemos

@NosVemos

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#134

@All, I am not too happy with the way this part came along. Sorry- if it is not a good read.

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#135

Will read it later. Too sleepy.

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Shabz.

@Shabz.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#136

michi seem to have gotten on to a good start, i loved their teasing lol. hope milsi has that much awaited talk with prachi soon.

nice part shubs, i found nothing wrong with this update :D

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mi-neepearl

@mi-neepearl

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#137

i loved this update, i want to know the reason for prachi's behaviour now as well, hopefully miland will soon talk to her, is neev going to come back later on to explain everything or would prachi do it herself.

opti i have to complain that this update was tooo short for me! plz update soon! thanks

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NosVemos

@NosVemos

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Opti
Will read itlater. Too sleepy.

NO worries.. see you tomorrow. GN!.

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mi-neepearl

@mi-neepearl

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: ShubS
^ It's not Opti!!

oops! sorry shubs, i have been reading too many ff's at the same time that i only remember the storylines and get mixed up with the writers.😆

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Heeba

@Heeba

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#140

Shubs, another update...i think i better start writing mine...lol
I was getting for the confrontation between Michi...but guess i'll have to wait for the next update...
Like i said earlier, i have a feeling that Prachi wanst really in love with Neev...

My dear Milind, you will have to change ur sleeping habits a little...or not ur poor wifey wont be able to sleep comfortably...LOL...sleeping diagonaly...but i guess thats a habbit guys have...all my three brothers sleep like that...

Thanks for the update Shubs😊

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