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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: blackcurrant
Didn't know Prachi could be so fiery. Maybe it's best she vented all her anger on Neev instead of holding it all in. But now hopefully she will listen to his side and be able to move on from it. Premlata once again shows how good and sensible she is and good to see Baba on the mend. Is this FF coming to an end soon? I feel that all the various storylines will be resolved before the triplets make their apperance. Going to miss it.

Prachi has not properly vented out her feelings after her father's death. If you recollect she had refused to meet Neev before and sort of shut herself out to the rest of the world. So in a way it was good she was able to pour her anguish out. As to her fiery, her pregnancy hormones also had a role to play here since one tends to get more emotionally worked up during such times. Milind will be the one to make her see Neev's side. Yes, PL knew that once Prachi's wound was opened, Milind can be the only one to make her see the larger picture. Baba is on the road to recovery. I am trying to finish it soon as it has been going on for far too long that even I am getting tired of it. Can only imagine my poor readers. I still have to resolve a few issues like Neesha should realise their feelings for each other and then confess to each other, Suki-Saket plan has to succeed, Ayesha's dad needs to be found and then ofcourse the triplets have to arrive. So definitely it would require at least another half a dozen parts.

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Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#172

hey akka! an excellent part..got to see most of the characters in here!...hai neev is so cute..well caring i shud say..getting her matternity clothes...but is it his guiklt that is making him do all this...i kinda feel sorry for him!..glad that prelata forgave him..now its just prachi..and by the looks of things she will need some time to do so...wonder if mili will be able to explain it to her and will that allow her to forgive him! cant wiat for to see what will happen between both of them and also to see how the neesha love story is progressing....

glad that prachi and the babies are alrite!...continue soon pls!

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Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: optimist

I have trouble thinking straight Kash. I have done half the update but am not happy with what I have written. I'll try to finish it and post something by tonight although it is boring even to me!

akka trust me what u write is not boring! its minblowing work...,u shud think of publihing things....and i am not saying it just like that!...the work that the ff writers put in on their stories is excellent...

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Saima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#174

hellow HELOOOW!! don't ask me i just felt like greeting you!! :D

Coming to the Update--okay so altho i did get worried that Prachi fell ill due to the stress of dealing with Neev....i am glad that she did stumble upon him at her mom's place and not have learnt that Ayesha is living with him!! that wud've really pushed things for her!! btw, PL is some mahaan woman--to forgive Neev for being the primary cause for her husband's death and kinda upsetting her daughter....wow!! atleast Prachi seems more believable to me as she hit the roof after seeing him at her mom's place!!

also--Michi had such an adorable New Year's start!! really sweet! hope Prachi doesn't have prob later coz of this added stressor!!

Thanx Opti for the update despite hitting that writer's block!!Thoroughly enjoyed the update!!

Edited by sailat@PA - 16 years ago

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: chillingal16
hey akka! an excellent part..got to see most of the characters in here!...hai neev is so cute..well caring i shud say..getting her matternity clothes...but is it his guiklt that is making him do all this...i kinda feel sorry for him!..glad that prelata forgave him..now its just prachi..and by the looks of things she will need some time to do so...wonder if mili will be able to explain it to her and will that allow her to forgive him! cant wiat for to see what will happen between both of them and also to see how the neesha love story is progressing....
glad that prachi and the babies are alrite!...continue soon pls!

Thanks Kash. I am always wary about emotional parts. Don't feel I do justice to them. Happy to learn you liked this though.Yes, Neev bought her maternity clothes not out of a sense of guilt but because he genuinely loves his friend and wanted to gift her something during this special time. At the same time he knew she despised him so in all probability she may not accept the gift.That is why he asked PL to give it to her. PL is a mother and a woman with experience of the world. Hence she was more forgiving than Prachi. She was willing to give Neev a ear which Prachi was not. My next part is about how Milind will tell Prachi about Neev. Yes, Prachi and babies are fine.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: chillingal16

akka trust me what u write is not boring! its minblowing work...,u shud think of publihing things....and i am not saying it just like that!...the work that the ff writers put in on their stories is excellent...

That is vey kind of you Kash, thanks.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: sailat@PA
hellow HELOOOW!! don't ask me i just felt like greeting you!! :D

Coming to the Update--okay so altho i did get worried that Prachi fell ill due to the stress of dealing with Neev....i am glad that she did stumble upon him at her mom's place and not have learnt that Ayesha is living with him!! that wud've really pushed things for her!! btw, PL is some mahaan woman--to forgive Neev for being the primary cause for her husband's death and kinda upsetting her daughter....wow!! atleast Prachi seems more believable to me as she hit the roof after seeing him at her mom's place!!

also--Michi had such an adorable New Year's start!! really sweet! hope Prachi doesn't have prob later coz of this added stressor!!

Thanx Opti for the update despite hitting that writer's block!!Thoroughly enjoyed the update!!

Hello Saima. Yes, this was a much better way to slowly come to know about Neev. If she had learnt about Ayesha and Neev first, it would have been disastorous. Now atleast there is a possibility that if she accepts Neev's side she may not have much reservation about Neesha. PL has seen a lot in life to let these things affect her. She is a woman who bears no grudge. Yes, Neev was in a way responsible fo her husband's death but she knew him well enough to suspect that there must be some reason for his behaviour and hence was willing to hear him out. Once she heard him she knew it was only an unfortunate chain of events which lead to the tragic end of her husband's life. There is no point holding on to the past and taking it out on Neev. As to upsetting her daughter, this too stemmed from the same event which she has already let go. So she could emphathise with him. PL is not the ordinary woman. She has supported her daughter-in-law against her son. How many mothers would do that? So PL's reaction was in tune with her character, which though strong is also very soft.

Prachi is much more human. She has not got past grieving for her father. Seeing Neev again has opened up the old wound. Milind will have to step in a sort out the issue. As long as Milind is around he will not let it get worse.

Thanks Saima for the comments.

Edited by optimist - 16 years ago

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GoGreen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#178

Opti....so prachi dint kept charvachauth😲..i mean her second KC as she is pregnent...knowing prachi i am sure she might have kept....enlighten me with a cute FlashBack. 😛

Please please please....😳

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: MichiDespo
Opti....so prachi dint kept charvachauth😲..i mean her second KC as she is pregnent...knowing prachi i am sure she might have kept....enlighten me with a cute FlashBack. 😛

Please please please....😳

Sumu, I am trying to finish a story here and you want me to add more and more scenes which will never let me do so? Do you really think Milind would have let her keep vrat in her state? It would be high irresponsible of her to keep a vrat knowing she was carrying three babies (see KC would have come sometime during her 3rd month and she knew she was carrying triplets by then). Morover, the guy has been having two spies to ensure she eats well and on time. There is no way Prachi could have kept a vrat. Maybe milind would have kept a vrat both for his wife as well as his unborn kids.