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NosVemos

@NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: layla44
nice.. am surprised hes so responsible and down to earth but not many gurls are crazy about him..
prachi did really surprise me ..liked the way uve brout out d surprise..

but a bit upset milind didnt show his disappointment at tat time wen he knew tat tat was prachis daughter.

pls continue....

Layla there are girls who are mad about him.- as I said in part 2. Milind himself hasn't shown interest in any..
I am not giving away much about Prachi at this time.. she will surprise you more later..
Milind isn't friends with Prachi or doesn't really know her.. so he kind of kept it all to himself..
will continue soon.😊 thanks for the comments.

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Delena

@Delena-cious

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

wow shubs🤗...nice update...so prachi is a single mom and milind is already attracted to her😳...n u named prachi's daughter as rashmi here too...aww🤗..cant wait for the next,,,continue soon

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NosVemos

@NosVemos

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: (**sia**)
wow shubs🤗...nice update...so prachi is a single mom and milind is already attracted to her😳...n u named prachi's daughter as rashmi here too...aww🤗..cant wait for the next,,,continue soon

Yep, will tell you what exactly Prachi is in the coming updates.. Milind isn't sure what he is feeling. Definitely feeling something.. Rashmi would be Michi's daughter (MI or chi's) in anything I would write..
will continue soon thanks Sia.
What's up with your FF? Didn't see any recent updates.

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Mrs.Edward Cullen

@.Angel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

finished reading part wow,OMG me love it hun........

fantastic start dear👏

love the way Michi met each other not too much drama like Ekta soaps....lolzz

now me looking forward to reading part 2 and 3.

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NosVemos

@NosVemos

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: angel's life
finished reading part wow,OMG me love it hun........

fantastic start dear👏

love the way Michi met each other not too much drama like Ekta soaps....lolzz

now me looking forward to reading part 2 and 3.

thank you Angel. I am not a fan of over the top drama they show. So I try keeping it as simple and realistic as possible.
thanks for reading. Hope you read the other parts too soon.
😊

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Shabz.

@Shabz.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#96

im soooooooooo glad u started another FF shubs, this FF has started off well and im curious to know more about prachi's past.

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NosVemos

@NosVemos

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#97

Part 4

Prachi had reported for her job the next day. Milind himself had introduced her to everyone and showed her the cabin in which she would work. Within few days she had got herself thoroughly familiarized with her responsibilities. Milind, Ali or anyone hardly had any complaints though she was a newcomer. She had come across as an intelligent and equally dignified employee who wouldn't speak a word more than required. Though she didn't get too friendly with her colleagues or chitchat in the free time, she would assist them with a smile when required. Most women in the office always looked at her with a pinch of salt as she would neither mingle with them in gossips nor share anything about herself. The men in the office had an impression that she wasn't a woman to be taken for granted.

Prachi used to come dressed generally in simple but elegant cotton sarees with minimal make up. Her saree pleats would be neat; her small earings would match the colour of her saree, and she would wear a lone bangle and a watch. Occasionally she would wear a salwar kameez or long skirts. One thing that remained constant irrespective of her attire was her kohl rimmed bright, brown eyes that beamed a mutiny in her though none could interpret it and she didn't give anyone a chance.

While Prachi had gotten comfortable at her work place, Milind had the opposite impact. While he had greatly appreciated Prachi's professional skills, he found himself conscious of her presence whenever he had to deal with her at workplace. He would be happy that he only had meetings with her two or three times a week but then he would also long for a sight of her the rest of the days. His eyes would want to be fixed on her if he knew she was around him. But his brain would stop his eyes denying him a glance of her. He had bumped into her a few times at home too in the garden or entering or exiting his building where they would exchange a few words. Sometimes he would see her waiting for the bus or the auto and want to offer her a lift but then something in him would stop him. However, when he did accidentally made eye contact with her, there would be a deep silence for a second where his eyes would question her and her eyes would break the contact in the very next moment only making him all the more inquisitive, all the more conscious. He couldn't justify to himself why and what he was feeling for her. He had a private struggle in his mind where on one side he wanted to know everything about her and get close to her but his other mind would completely rubbish that idea thinking that it was all wrong and he might put himself in an awkward situation if he did so. He had recognized a fort she had built around her and something in him told him he wouldn't allow anyone inside it and no matter what he wanted to respect that boundary.

Milind had went through Prachi's job application to and figured out she had ticked married in the tick box. He had often wondered who and where her husband was but never wanted to ask her thinking it wasn't in his right to do so. He communicated better with Premlatha and Rashmi whom he would frequently find in the common garden of his building where there were swings and slides for children. Premlatha would talk to him lovingly whenever he met her and often invite him for dinner, which he had kept on postponing.

That evening, Milind had returned home from work and sat working on his laptop in his patio. Rashmi was playing with a kid from neighbouring flat named Chintu. Milind had noticed the kids playing but then got back to his work. Few minutes later, he heard a child crying and noticed that it was Rashmi. She was persuading her grandmother to throw her in the air and catch her. Chintu's father had just arrived from work and he had swung and threw his son in air for a few times before he took him home. Rashmi had watched her friend enjoying and had wanted the same thing to be done to her too. Premlatha had tried doing it a couple of times but with her health not at its best wasn't able to do so. Little Rashmi was persistent and had started crying demanding her grandmother to grant her demands. Milind understood Premlatha was helpless and also that how desperately the child was pleading her. He had walked out of his patio and opened his arms inviting Rashmi to run into them. Rashmi was hesistant but then Milind himself had lifted her in his hands in a fraction of a second, before the child could react he had thrown her in air and caught her. Rashmi was thrilled as she in was in air for seconds and had chuckled in amusement and Milind had repeated it several times. Milind had told her he would do it for her everyday if she wanted. And Rashmi had giggled once again looking at her grandmother to share her joy.

Premlatha thanked Milind for making the child happy and Milind had said there was nothing he did worth thanking. Premlatha had taken Rashmi off of Milind's hands telling her it was time to go home, and as they turned around they saw Prachi who had stood leaning on to a pillar watching them. Prachi had noticed from her balcony that Rashmi was demanding something from her grandmother and was coming down to sort out the matter. When she reached the garden, she had seen Rashmi in Milind's hands and there she had stood transfixed watching her child in merriment. Milind's eyes had met with Prachi's, and even though it was dusky, Milind had noticed a layer of tears in Prachi's eyes that she forcefully held onto her eyeballs.

"Prachi, Milind ko khaane pe bulaa lo na aaj (Prachi, invite Milind for dinner tonight)" Premlatha had said in her daughter's ears and Prachi had nodded her head in agreement.

"Sir, would you like to join us for dinner tonight? My mother has cooked some tasty paneer" Prachi had invited Milind.

"I love paneer. I will join you on one condition that you don't address me as Sir. I often tell my employees not to call me Sir but take my name" Milind had smiled.

"Sure, Milind. I am glad you are eating with us tonight. The dinner is ready. You could join us right now" Prachi had turned around to the elevator where Premlatha had waited with Rashmi. Milind had followed them.

"Milind, Milind" Rashmi had giggled taking his name which was quite a tongue twister for her. Prachi had stopped her daughter saying Milind wasn't her age for her to call him by his name.

"It's alright Prachi. Rashmi is my friend. She can call me Milind. Isn't it Rashmi?" Milind had pulled Rashmi's pigtails. The little girl had responded with a huge grin for she was still all excited.

Prachi picked Rashmi's teddy bears and toys lying on the floor as Milind entered her flat. Premlatha and Prachi got busy in arranging the dining table with plates and cutlery while Milind sat playing with Rashmi on the sofa. As Rashmi got busy with her new Barbie doll, Milind had looked around the living room. His eyes stopped on the framed photograph of a man in uniform whom he seemed to recognize.

Edited by michifanreal - 16 years ago

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Shabz.

@Shabz.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#98

gr8 part Shubs, i love how Rashmi and Milsi are bonding...so milsi recognises the man in the pic..hopefully we will get an insight to the man and prachi's background in the next part.

seems like pl is fond of milsi and the feeling also seems mutual on his part :D

waiting for the next update.