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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: siya..

u wont belive that its only shabir's rugged looks that got onto me to like men with rugged looks! otherwise m a total NO NO for such men! 😆

That's true. Had I not watched Kayamath and liked Shabir as Milind, even I wouldn't have paid a single look to such men. I might have gone for the chocolate boy sorts. But not anymore. They look like boys to me now and not a man.😆
And Divya dear, update soon nahin toh we would convert your FF thread into chat thread.😆
Edited by SaacheeSyna - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SaacheeSyna


That's true. Had I not watched Kayamath and liked Shabir as Milind, even I wouldn't have paid a single look to such men. I might have gone for the chocolate boy sorts. But not anymore. They look like boys to me now and not a man.😆


And Divya dear, update soon nahin toh we would convert your FF thread into chat thread.😆

Poo dear tum or siya already ise chat thread mein convert kar chuki ho 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -kiran

Poo dear tum or siya already ise chat thread mein convert kar chuki ho 🤗

Kya kar sakte hai yaar. We can talk about Shabir, Milind and in my case including Vicky endlessly. So chat thread toh hona hi tha.😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
divya yaar friday ayi aur janebhi wali hei humlog aap ka intizar karrahei hei yaar pls pls hun update jaldi se dedona pllllllllllllllllllssssssssssssssssssssss.
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Hello everyone, Here I am wrapping up everything in Ooty. Hope you guys like it. I am not very sure about the part myself. Cheers 😃
Part 39
Pooja looked at the man next to her from under her lashes. He was busy stacking the gift bags just like her. She still marvelled at the way she was smooth talked by Milind and Prachi into joining Vicky to help with the chore. And miraculously Peter's other friends who had been doing it before, have disappeared leaving them alone. She smiled as she recalled their meeting earlier. She was eager to meet Milind after hearing about him all evening from the girls and when Prachi called her to meet her boyfriend, she happily went along. She was shocked and surprised to find Vicky there and to know that he and Milind were cousin brothers and the best of buddies. She could see the resemblence in their wicked grins and naughty eyes. Milind is such a charmer and no wonder that girls went gaga over him, she thought to himself. And Vicky was no less than him especially when she was at the receiving end of all his attention. Her heart fluttered with an unknown excitement. He had kept the conversation flowing constantly and She must admit that he was a great guy to be with. Though playing safe, she couldn't help herself from being pulled towards him. She couldn't believe that they had exchanged email ids and phone numbers. Though a part of her mind chided her for being so stupid, the other part was dancing in merry. He was leaving the country that night along with Milind. She felt sorry for Prachi. Anyone with eyes could see the depth of love between her and Milind. Their eyes had done most of the talking than there lips. Her heart had constricted on seeing such love displayed in front of her that too between two such very different people. So true love does exist in the world and all you had to do was to find the right person to share it with, she thought to herself and her eyes automatically looked at Vicky who caught her eyes and flashed a brilliant smile just then. Her heart constricted even more.
The reception party was winding up and most of the guests had left apart from close family and friends. Lisa and Peter had gotten off the stage and sitting down among their friends. Milind sighed in relief. It was hard to be inconspicous in a big gathering when most people who turned up knew who he was. Once they spotted him, people didn't hesitate to mob him and tell him how glad they were to see him there and what a great friend he was to be here even amongst his busy schedule. He had smiled politely when people he had never met before, introduced themselves and started business conversations. Not wishing to hog the limelight, he had tried hard to blend into the crowd and Vicky was having a hard time too. Once he was spotted, they automatically looked for Milind. Now Sitting among friends, he was comfortable and relaxed. Dinner had been hurried but fun and they hadn't left a chance to tease Lisa and Peter about the upcoming nuptial night. It was fun to see even Peter blushing and they teased him even more.
He sneaked another look at Prachi who was standing close to Lisa. She looked very beautiful that evening and his heart swelled with love everytime she looked at him with a shy smile. He just had another hour and would be leaving after midnight. Just thinking about it upset him. It would be very hard for them to stay apart especially after spending five fantastic days together. They had become closer than ever before and his heart constricted painfully at the thought of leaving her behind and going away especially when he knew that Inder and Neev are set to create trouble. He and Neev hadn't exchanged even a single word after the confrontation in the morning. Seeing the questioning look in Prachi's eyes, he pulled himself together and smiled at her reassuringly.
The live band had started to pack their stuff when Robert stood up and announced, "Hey guys, lets give this beautiful ceremony a rocking end. Come on Milind,……Vicky, you are leaving tonight guys. Lets give something for Lisa and Peter. Then we can bid them goodnight and let them do whatever they had planned to do tonight", he said with a cheeky grin. Lisa blushed a bright red as there was a roar of laughter around.
"Why not? Lets rock guys", Milind smiled at Vicky and got up and the other men followed suit. Pooja looked at Vicky wide eyed as he grinned at her gesturing to join them before walking away with Milind. She looked at Prachi apprehensively and Prachi gestured her to carry on and with a smile, she joined a squealing Rita, Reba and Neelam while Prachi stayed with Lisa.
Get up..
Thats right
Stand up
Clap ur hands man
Ill make u wanna dance
I ll make u wanna move
Aa jaa tu soniya
I can u get in the mood
Ill make u wanna dance
I ll make u wanna move
Aa jaa tu soniya
I can u get in the mood
Holding Rita and Reba on either side, Milind twirled them around. Vicky pulled Pooja towards him and getting into the mood, Pooja synchronised her dance movements with him.
[Move your body now,
Shake your body now,
Balkha ke lehra ke,
Hit your body now,
Tujhe seene se mein apne laga lu,
Tujhe bahon mein chupa lu,
Come on closer to my body now..] -2
Moving towards Prachi, Milind gestured her to join him and she shook her head and moved away. Holding her hand, he pulled her towards him. As Lisa and Peter also joined their friends on the dance floor, Milind held Prachi close to him and slowing down his steps, he gently guided her, his eyes holding hers and reassuring. Being in his arms and looking into his eyes, Prachi registered only his presence and moved easily following his steps. Never letting her move away from him too much, one hand firm around her waist, their feet tapped in coordination to the music.
Ho Dhadkan badh gayi, badh gayi,
Ho saasen chadh gayi, chadh gayi,
Hassen ek ladki se,
Meri aaj nazar jo lad gayi..
[Sade naal kar le party,
Kudiye te lagdi hai naughty,
Feeki feeki raat ho gayi]-2
[Girls can go crazy,
Boys can go crazy,
Tu bhi nachle baby,
Lets get now]-2
Moving away from Milind slightly, Prachi sang in a sweet voice completley surprising Milind and a slow appreciating grin spread on his face.
Bina dekhe kabhi mujhko pukare,
Karta hai mujhe chup chup ke ishare,
Arey dekhe kabhi kisi ke bahane se,
Koshisein bhi maine kar dekhi saari,
Is ladke se aaj haari mein to haari,
Isne to naa sikha darna zamane se,
Eyes appreciating her sweet voice, Milind sang
Tu kis uljhan mein pad gayi,
Yeh kaisi baatein kar gayi tu,
Mohabbat kya wo mohabbat,
Jo duniya se dar gayi..
Sade naal kar le party,
Kudiye te lagdi hai naughty,
Feeki feeki raat ho gayi
Common sing along with me now,
Sade naal kar le party,
Kudiye te lagdi hai naughty,
Feeki feeki raat ho gayi
N tell my love story
Wud you do anything for me
Lagta hai mujhko tu chore
Because u stole my heart from me
Jaba jaba touch me slowly
Jaba jaba, put your hands on me
Jaba jaba just get closer
Jaba jaba chori chori
As the men pulled their women closer, Prachi shied away from his arms and sang
Khud se hi baaten karne lagi hu,
Teri hi khayalon se mein badhne lagi hu,
Anjaana ek dard hai seene mein,
Hoo hoo..
Jaane kaise kaise khwaab sajaun,
Jab jab kabhi tere paas mein aau,
Ab kuch naya khaas hai jeene mein,
Oh yeah…
Placing a hand over his heart, Milind sang and pulled her swiftly back into his arms.
Mohabbat mein tu pad gayi,
Tu ishq ki suli chad gayi,
Tere iqraar ko sun ke,
Khushi se aankhen bhar gayi..
Sade naal kar le party,
Kudiye te lagdi hai naughty,
Feeki feeki raat ho gayi
Common sing along with me now,
Sade naal kar le party,
Kudiye te lagdi hai naughty,
Feeki feeki raat ho gayi
Move your body now,
Shake your body now,
Balkha ke lehra ke,
Hit your body now,
Tujhe seene se mein apne laga lu,
Tujhe bahon mein chupa lu,
Come on closer to my body now..
ki Dhadkan badh gayi, badh gayi,
ki saasen chadh gayi, chadh gayi,
Hassen ek ladki se,
Meri aaj nazar jo lad gayi..
Sade naal kar le party,
Kudiye te lagdi hai naughty,
Feeki feeki raat ho gayi
Common sing along with me now,
Sade naal kar le party,
Kudiye te lagdi hai naughty,
Feeki feeki raat ho gayi
Ok that's it..!
Hear this song with lyrics at http://www.youtube.com/watch?gl=US&v=pB-BwvlZBN0
The whole hall erupted in applause as family and friends gathered around them cheered and clapped enthusiastically. It was indeed a splendid performance and the dancers acknowledge their audience's cheering with wide grins and waving hands. Still in his arms, Prachi looked up at him in wonder. She had danced with him that too in front of a whole group of audience. Suddenly shy, she moved away from him and ran away swiftly. Milind frowned slightly as she slipped slightly but steadying herself ran away.
Very conscious of her surroundings now, with a shy smile at Vicky, Pooja moved away from him and went to join her father who was clapping happily, obviously impressed by his daughter's dancing skills. Lisa's and Peter's parents thanked everyone especially Milind and Vicky for making the occasion even more special.
Neev's face was ashen and he struggled to bring a smile on his face. Prachi had danced!!!!!!!, that too with Milind, ………in his arms and then the song……., the way she sang and looked at him……. Neev had faltered in his steps during then and had struggled to appear normal. How he wished this night to end quickly!, he sighed and wished that Milind would just leave then. Soon, he was pulled away by Reba and Rita and with a false smile, he followed them.
Running outside, Prachi sat on the bench near the fountain, massaging her ankle. Grimacing with pain, she cursed herself for being so careless. Slipping in her high heals, she seemed to have twisted her ankle and now it hurted badly. There was still so much work to do. A lavish suite at the nearby hotel was arranged for the night for Lisa and Peter and she will have to help Lisa to get ready. Milind said he would meet her before he left to the airport and now her stupid ankle!
"Hey, what are you doing here?", she looked up at the familiar voice and grimaced even more.
Worried to see her nursing her ankle, Milind kneeled down in front of one. Ignoring her protests, he lifted her foot on to his thigh and gently massaged her ankle, his fingers kneading her soft flesh.
Sighing, Prachi closed her eyes, "Hmmmmmmmmm, your fingers can work magic on my skin", she purred contently.
Milind grinned naughtily, "Thanks. Next time you run away from me, I will remind you your own words".
Prachi giggled shyly, admonishing herself for saying the wrong words. She should know better by now how he would twist her words and tease her. Feeling better, she pulled her foot back.
"Do you want me to work my magic anywhere else?", asked Milind rubbing his hands together, his eyes suggestively roaming over her body.
Feigning anger at his boldness, Prachi looked at him naughtily. Placing her other foot on his thigh, she relaxed back with a smile, "How about the other ankle now?", she aked him. Milind chuckled and shaking his head at her, he proceeded to massage her other ankle as well.
Looking for Prachi, Reba and Neev found them just then and Neev stood still taking in the scene in front of him with disbelief and anger. Clearing her throat loudly, Reba went to sit next to Milind and looked at both of them with raised eyebrows, "How much do you get paid for giving the foot massage, Milind?", she asked him.
Shocked, Prachi opened her eyes and tried to pull her foot back but Milind held her ankle firmly. "More than you could ever imagine", he said huskily and his fingers traced the soft skin of her leg just above the ankle effectively hidden under her ghagra. Eyes widening in horror, Prachi stared at him and struggled to pull her foot from his hold.
Reba's giggle was drowned in Neev's angry voice, "Prachi……….", he called out to her furiously. Startled, Prachi tried to stand up and slowly Milind let go of her ankle and stood up supporting her as she struggled to get her feet into her shoes.
"What are you doing here, Prachi? Lisa's mother is looking for you", Neev bit out throwing a nasty look at Milind.
"She twisted her ankle, Neev and I was massaging it before you came and disturbed us", Milind said mockingly.
"Let's go, Prachi", Neev pulled at her hand ignoring Milind. Looking at Milind worriedly, Prachi nodded as he gestured with his eyes.
Having changed into a light silk saree and hair adorned with jasmine flowers, Lisa nervously walked towards their suite. Feeling Prachi's hand squeazing hers, she looked at her and gave a nervous smile. As her giggling friends left her, she closed the door and slowly walked in. The scent of the flowers overwhelmed her senses and she looked at the massive decorated bed in the centre of the room. Cheeks reddening , she looked around for Peter and found him standing near the open balcony doors looking at her. She blushed at the look in his eyes and stood there nervously wriggling her hands unsure of what to do next. Peter extended his arms towards her and she hesitatingly walked towards him. Cupping her face in his hands, he looked at his wife, "Lisa", his voice was husky and placed a soft kiss on her lips. With a shy smile, Lisa buried her face in his chest, hugging him tightly. The moon hid behind the clouds shyly acknowledging their union, the mating of their body and soul and their love for each other.
Relieved, Prachi got off the car and ran to her front door, her eyes scanning the road constantly checking for Milind's car. Waving to her friends, she opened the door and went in, glad that Ramu kaka was at his brother's house as he wasn't expecting Prachi or Neev home that night. She was glad that Neev had stayed back with the other men at the reception hall. Milind was not even picking up the phone and she was late in reaching home that expected. He was going to stop at her place for a quick goodbye on the way to the airport around half past midnight. But it was 1 am already and she agitatedly peeped out of the window, her fingers dialling his number again. A dread formed in the pit of her stomach. What if he had left already? Would it be just like the last time he left? She didn't get to say a proper goodbye to him last time and tonight …….again….. A sob escaped her and tears blurred her vision. Hearing a car pull up outside, without another thought she rushed out of her house.
Milind had just walked into the garden, when she rushed to him and with a sob hugged him fiercely. "Hey, Sweetheart, what is it, darling?", worried, Milind held a sobbing Prachi close.
"I thought………….you had left……….without even……meeting me…….just like last time", she said in between sobs and Milind held her tightly, kissing her hair and soothing her.
It pained him to realise how much he had hurt her the last time he left so abruptly. She was already in love with him then. Though he was very sad to leave her, he hadn't realised the depth of his feelings for her then. Not wanting her to stay in the cold, Milind walked into the house, still holding her close.
Making her sit down on the sofa, he pulled her back into his arms and lifted her face up, "How could I go without meeting you, darling? I was not going to repeat the same mistake twice", he kissed her tear stained face. Prachi opened her eyes and looked at him with so much love and pain, that he held his breathe. "Sweetheart, I will be back very soon. Just remember what I said and be careful about what you say to your father and Neev. Everything will be fine", he reassured her and she nodded.
Placing a quick kiss on her lips, he got up to leave, "I have to go, Prachi. Vicky is waiting in the car. We are already late and if we don't hurry up, we will miss the flight", he said the pain and helplessness mirroring in his eyes.
Prachi nodded and walked to the door, "Yes Milind. You take care and call me whenever you can. I know you will be travelling a lot, so whenever you can…….", her voice trailed away as she struggled with emotions.
Not trusting to speak, Milind nodded and turned to the door. He stilled as Prachi called his name softly, "Milind….". He turned around to look at her and she rushed into his arms. Her hands pulled his face down and her lips seeked his, kissing him with everything she felt. Milind kissed her back equally shaken and they moved apart still trembling. Without a word, Milind opened the door and walked out and Prachi leaned against the closed door and a loud sob broke out as she heard the sound of the car fade away in the distance.
The look on his friend's face and the tear stains on his shirt told him the whole story and Vicky placed his hand on Milind's shoulder. Milind turned to look at him and turned away without a word staring into the darkness outside. The car sped into the night leaving Ooty far far behind.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thank u Divya for the lovely and emotional update👏👏

Pooja and Vicky r already like love sick puppies their inner emotions was discribed very well👏👏 ,Even inspite of pooja being totally fallen for vicky charms she is comparing vicky to milind wow pooja😉.Their friendship has developed so fast they even exchanged mail id and contact number poojs and vicky r too fast.
liked the way pooja was happy for michi akir pooja and prachi ek hi ghar mei tho jana heina so better to stay together from right away😆


Bechara Milind apni friend ki shadi meibee woh business people se bach nahi saka ,after he is the business tycon .inder should feel lucky to have him,

The friends making lisa and peters marriage very spl was lovely vicky giving isharas to pooja was cute and pooja taking prachi signals was awesome they have so soon bonded so well.


The gang pulling lisa and peters legs talking about their spl night was well written👏.

Even being surrounded by his friends and businness ass still milind admiring his prachi and he is getting concerned for her was lovely,

The suprise milind heard his prachi sweet voice and the way he was shocked listening her singing was good. The song u have selected was perfect, The way milind made prachi dance was so romantic.


Neev bechara sab kuch dekhar shock hogaya, he is consoling himself after tonight milind will go away and prachi will be his he is such a fool he does not want to face reality.

prachi getting her ankle twisted and the way milind reaches her and he massages her ankles was cute,love the way she was trying pull his legs.the scene was so romantic.

The idot neev comes and ruines the lovely moment pls yaar do something fas t and make him go away from this whole picture😡

lisa and peter a bigspl night has finnaly arrived,we r waiting for the michi spl night😆

Poor prachi milind ki janese phelehi aapneap ko rokhani parihei bechari baad me kya karegi,The way she runs to the door and hugs him is so touching,

How is she going to face her problem all alone poor prachi we r really worried for her.milind reminds her to not to argue with her father and neev was understandable.

poor michi they can not stay away from each other they have bonded themselves together so very well it was a sad ending today divya we all know milind has togo but when we read that we felt someone is going away from all of us.

seeing milind vicky underastood what his friend is going through.

pls divya dont make milind stay away from him for too loong,and we have a rewuest before milind comes back make inder to know the true colours of niharika and what kind of mistake he is going to do if he will reject milind.
pls cont as soon as covienent for u
thank u



Edited by y_tanuja - 16 years ago
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divya 🤗 sorry maine abhi pada ni per like button click karte karte last 2 paragraph per nazar mari haaye kyon mari maine nazar 😭 😭 kitna emotional tha divya.... bechare mere michi




baki free hoke padungi aur phir comments dungi 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
👏thank you dear for your wonderful update!
it was emotional and romantic.! pl. update sooon.....................
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update hun! Loved the ankle bit, specially P asking him to massage the other leg!
This Neev seems to be blind and brain dead😡😆 doesn't seem to understand wht is happening between M and P!
Liked Vicky and Pooja bit... did u decide who is going to be Vicky yet?
and the last bit was sad... the separation was well written... how many updates will it be for M to come back? just curious😳
u know wht i am waiting to see/read in this fic? Neev's reaction to P and M's relation... wht he will do once he realize tht M and P are deeply in love and wants to get married.. will he be Prachi's best friend or he will behave like Inder's chamcha!
pls continue soon.
P.S: You don't have Ayesha in this ri8? or did I miss her in this😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Divya, firstly thanks for the updating dear. As always the update was wonderful.👏👏👏
So Pooja and Vicky love story is slowly moving forward. He seems mighty impressed by him. They have even shared numbers and email ids- that fast. I don't know whether I would be that fast.😉😳😆
It's good to Pooja and Prachi bonding as well that she can feel sorry for her and see the love she shares with Milind.😳 After all they have to spend the rest of their life in the same family.😉😳
And now she has started hoping that she shares the same love with Vicky.😳😳 I am sure even she would be feeling bad the Vicky is also going. 😭
Ohhhh, people are mobbing Milind. Understandable. Half of them would have only seen them in front of the TV. Poor thing!!! He is here for a holiday with prachi but is being bombarded with business.😆
But this doesn't leave him from having a silent eye conversation with Prachi. Milind and Prachi will be feeling like hell that he is going away after spending such beautiful days with each other. They just can't bear it. 😳😳😳Moreover when Milind has started feeling that problems will be created by Neev and Inder.😕
Poor Lisa and Peter!!!!!! They are blushing like hell!!! People are teasing them too much. I wonder what would be michi state on their wedding night and people are tease them.😳😳😆
Did you change the song? I thought you were talking about mere naal aaja. But now I think this song is more apt for the situation. 😊So everyone had a blast dancing and singing around and having a complete ball.
Even Pooja and Vicky enjoyed it dancing with each other. That too in front of her father. Oh God, I don't think I will do that in front of my father. If it my husband, then ok, but not any random guy in a party.😳😆
That was really sweet and romantic of milind to invite and guide prachi through the dance. Prachi was completely lost and even started signing suprising milind. Milind must have wondered what has happened to his shy and demure Prachi.😳😳😆 They have kind of have declared their love to the whole world through the song.😳😳😳
Neev still sees all this in front of his eyes and is still ignoring the reality. Thinking once Milind goes he would be able to get some luck with Prachi.😡😡😡 I wonder whether he is going to throw tantrums a lot and not accept it easily and create problems for prachi.😡😡
Again a cute moment between michi. Milind massaging Prachi's ankles, who would not like it. And as always Milind being his naughty self and Prachi shying as always. Milind never misses a chance to romance with Prachi. And I don't know how many times have said it and is always the same. And I am sure Milind is never going to change and there is loads more to come.😆
Loved Reba teasing michi. Neev sees everything and all he does as always is get angry.😆😆 Chalo all this at least gives Milind hints that Neev is not about michi. He is pretty much sure about that now.
So finally Lisa and Peter united. Good, now they are going to be busy the next few weeks. 😳😳😉. So Prachi will have no one to confide her problems until Milind comes back.😕😕
And finally the moment comes when michi are temporarily separated. Poor Prachi felt that Milind left without saying a proper bye. Their bye to each other was very nice, although very sad. 😭😭😭
Lets see how Prachi reacts to the problems, keeping Milind's warning in mind.😕😕
Even Vicky understood Milind's state by just looking at him once. Of course, he might also not want to go as well considering he met Pooja only that night. Uski love story toh ab achhe se shuru bhi nahin huyi.😳😳 I am sure he is going to be in contact over his holiday.😆😉
BTW, how long is their holiday going to be? And how long Milind will be away from Prachi in terms of updates?
Update soon and make us wait for Michi and as Kiran says Pooky!!! 😳😳
Thanks again, Take care and update fast 🤗🤗🤗
Edited by SaacheeSyna - 16 years ago

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