FF: Rishtey- Final PART - ENDING pg 25 - Page 10

Originally posted by: shabzc1

finally got a chance to read the last part of CH 50, it is beautiffully written JC, i was engrossed in the writing so much so that i could actually feel and in some way agree to why prachi did what she did. i guess im still shocked that prachi is going to die, hence the short comment..im looking forward to read how milsi deals with this revelation.... im going to keep my tissues on hand because i know its going to be another tear jerker.

looking forward to the next part JC.

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

WOW Rimzi you finally read it congrats to me.😆😆😆BTW i love your avi. Can't wait for the movie. I knew ever since Sawariya that Sonam would do good for herself.
Well, despite what I though....Aha! I wasn't the last so phew but here goes...*braces self for supernova like experience* lolz. Supernova i hardly think so.

First things first!! It was NOT a Fluke😳😆... ahaha sure sure. It was a very calculated, intellegent guess...but how I wish I was wrong!😕 I know.

Part 50:
Absolutely loved the dream sequence...Terrific👏 What more can I say? It portrayed all that you had wanted to show for Prachi. Prachi's strenght is something I both admired in the fic and got fustrated with her for it too but this little bit showed that despite it all, she's scared and alone and that is just heartbreaking. Rimzi this is why i was waiting for your comments because more than writing the fic i enjoy reading other people reactions to it. Though now i'd love to take all the credit and gloat but the truth is that i am not a intelligent as you give me credit for. When i wrote that dream sequence i wasn't conciously trying to show Prachi's side of the story.. or maybe i was but just didnt recognize it at that time. Now seeing it from your eyes things are much clearer.😕

Believe it or not...You've won me over for Anjali just because she brought a smile to that sad little boy's face when he needed it the most. I'll be forever grateful to her for it. aww..*tears* Gosh after all that hard work it takes a 2 min convo with a 5 year old to change your mind about her.😆 I think its just that you were ready to accept her by now.😊

She started in a calm manner, "Milind mein saari raat yeh khat pad rahi thi. Yeh jaanne ke liye ki isme aisi kya baat hai jo mujhe yaad aani chahiye. But..nothing..i remember nothing. Jaante ho kyun??" "Kyunki yeh tumne nahi likhe"he said defeated. The change in his tone and body language had surprised Anjali again.

I like this bit ALOT, alot, alot. Cant explain why, just do😊 and I think after the last couple of updates it was even expected, though I kept wondering whether it was actually soemthing else😆Over-thinking as usual but it kept me interested.lolz..now i want to know..what was it that you overthought????? TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!😆 I kept it simple tho didn't I.

She [Anjali] gave Milind the only explanation she knew for Prachi's behavior..that she couldn't face him after what Alaap had done to Sukriti.

You know what, I had never even thought of that...but it makes so much sense...of course. And it seems so simple now...but once again, I never thought of it...trust me, I should have written down the scenerios I had in mind...probably would have given you a good laugh😆but nonetheless, I applaude your water-tight explaination of the Prachi-Anjali confusion. Also liked the way Milind-Anjali talked in the car, just something about the talk, the location etc that made me very reminiscent. i had repeated that so many times in the beginning that Prachi felt guilty about what Alaap had done and still you didn't think that to be the reason?😕 Tho there is slightly more to it than that. I'd love to laugh at the scenerios you came up with. After all only you told me that Prachi could be terminally ill for all you know your scenerios might have crossed my mind too. I really would like to know.

Anjali ko tum meri nazaroon merin upar, upar hi leh jaa rahi ho yaar, and I'll admit it! Kya dimaag payaa hain usne, or more likely, tumne. So it'll all unfold in Panvel... haha..ya. There is a few more things to unfold tho all may not happen in Panvel.

JC, my memory is reallllllllly failing me. Anjali went to Turkey to meet Anjum? But I thought she died with her parents in Shimla? Confuzzled!!!Help!! ISssh..um i guess i'll really have to explain Anjum's story next otherwise i'll keep getting this question. It'll be clear soon enough.

LOVE, Love, love Alaap and Prachi's interaction in this. Thank you for it.🤗The mere fact that Prachi and Alaap have this secret between them and that he has remained her secret keeper for some time now just endears me to Alaap and we get to see a more realistic relationship between the siblings.. Thankx Rima. I think now Alaap is ready for the forgiveness he seeks don't you think so. HE's become a good boy now. Let c what i can do for him.

I like the sequence of events that you orcastrated to bring Prachi to the Hospital too. Cleverly done but NOTHING matches the INTENSITY of the final scene between Milind and Prachi. WOW, I simply have no words because I cant fault it.👏What was Brilliant was, "Pyar karti hai na mujhse.." that was timed wonderfully and because we've already heard Shabbir say that dialogue and the way he said it, I could imagine your Milind too and it just fit perfectly. The anguish and pain and hurt was portrayed by that. There is no question that was a direct lift from the show.😆😆 I loved that one scn between Michi where he holds her face and asks her the same and she in turn with all her vulnerabilty tells him yes ofcourse...its etched in my mind. Just that moment. And i had to do something of that sort only. I think thats why the scn was so powerful even to me because as i wrote it i was imagining those expressions on Shabbo and Panchi. It was beautiful wasn't it. aaah.

The way Prachi broke down was just...uff...peircing! She going to DIE?!!! I knew it and I asked you and you told me...NO😡😭 Well i couldnt' give it all away.. to be honset i was shocked when you just asked out of the blue if Prachi was terminally ill. I really didn't want to tell you.😆😆😆 I dont know what to think or say after that, will she really Die? OMG!!!!!!!!!!! The thought is so unbearable and yet I can imagine what the subsequent part of your story-telling will be and in a way, I would love to read about it however heartbreaking it will be. I'll try my best to do justice to it though it just seems all the more difficult.

JC, This update was Amazing...👏Really and I'm glad I waited and savoured it. I apologise for the lateness but I really did love it. ❤️Thank you so much for writing it. It was just Lovely.🤗 Don't apologize hun, your comments come just as my updates do so don't worry.😆


p.s.Can you please add the link for this N😆ew thread at the end (your last post) of the Old thread...I had trouble finding this one and went there first.YOu know its not my fault I did but then people commented on that thread and the link went from being on the last page to being on the third to last page. Anyway i'll post this link in MH> So maybe you'll have better luck next time.

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Originally posted by: jinc118

JCde nettiyil ottichu vekkanom ennu parannnu ente nettiyil ottikkanam ennu nirbandam illa.. ente ottikathe thanne ellavarkum ariyam , nyan oru pancha pavamanennu😳😆

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Does this finish before the serial itself?

Originally posted by: shivgauri

JCde nettiyil ottichu vekkanom ennu parannnu ente nettiyil ottikkanam ennu nirbandam illa.. ente ottikathe thanne ellavarkum ariyam , nyan oru pancha pavamanennu😳😆

Originally posted by: jinc118

nyan oru pancha pavamanennu

Pachcha ok. What is pavam?????? That word don't exist in your dictionary hun. Don't use words you have no clue of. You Pavam in your dream..wait not even in your dreams..thats where you are the most naughty.😆 I know the meaning of Pavam.. Pavam means Kuku😳😆... lol how do u know wht i dream off..huh?😆

Ente nettiyil ottichu vekenda avishyam illa. People mistake me somehow..strange..they think i look the most pavam out of anybody.. enne kettunavante mahaa bhagyam.😆 athe athe maha maha bhaaaaaaaaaaagyam!😔 they don't know the truth.😈 pavam chekkan... enthilekka poyi chadunnennu ariyunnundo?🤔😆