FF: Rishtey- Final PART - ENDING pg 25 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Making banners?? Oooh.. Of humara shared Benji? 😉 Yup, he is the cutest! And Mayank is the hottest.. 😆

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: shivgauri

hehehe was just askin... even i am a mallu😊😊

Originally posted by: jinc118

I think i remember the mention somewhere. Nice to meet you fellow kolayaali. 😉

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

What's Up Doc?😉😃... lolz.. where's the carrot?

So, I'm here now😒...the ABSOLUTE last person😡 but have started reading... whats with the emoticons are you obsessed too like i once was.



Part II,

Good God woman!😆...So you get ANJALI involved?!!! I knew this was coming but why god why herGrrrrrrrrrrr...so I was saying, Go Prachi Go when she was giiving Anju her "Mind your own business" talk. Now...I know it's imperitive that Anjali is involved so that this gets sorted, so I guess I shouldn't be complaining. I still don't get your dislike for Anjali. Do explain that after you read the next part.


Also, I still find it weird and am very much looking forward to the explanation about how not many people know about Anjum. Not many ppl know about Anjum...very few do. You'll get the explaination..when Kavya comes back.😃

Why is Prachi breaking little Ritwik's heart yaar...😡😒 that was harsh and sad. The poor kid and also poor Prachi. I really love their relationship and it's heartbreaking that Prachi feels compelled to behave like that towards him. You need to read the next part girlie.. i am waiting to see your reaction.

AHHHH and so thats the truth behind the kiss. 😲...Ankhoon pe patti!!!....Yaar, you are genius, incoperating Milinds tendancy to injure himself into the fic. And then comes Prachi madame, ofcourse, this time adopting her future husband's brand of Patti-ing. What can I say but....well done darling!😉

I did (like you predicted) find it slightly stange...Milind sprouting the "romantic" (Can call them that???) dialogues to Prachi in the hospital. I dont know if it was intentional but they seemed to be kept at a minimum, perhaps to minimise that strangeness?
You know i'd watned to stretch that scn out in the hospital with a lot of details going in behind how he ended up there. But well the strageness part really bothered me so much that i kept it short..even cutting out Ali's part. But now i feel maybe i should have explained more.

BUT otherwise, it was still very well explained and I did like the anklet twinkling...that was nice. I dont know if this had any relevence and I can be wrong, but didn't Milind buy Prachi some Anklets in Dehli?
Ofcourse there is relevance. Everything in the fic is there for a reason. If you read the last para on part 2 you'll c Milind make the connection to Prachi, because it was in that Delhi trip that he realized Prachi loves anklets and he remembered that she used to wear them in college.. because he didn't notice such kind of details about her consciously while they were in college.


Okay...now on the Part III...think I'm purposely stalling😆...have some expectations of my own dear😉...chalo lets see what you have planned. Will be back later😉
Oh c'mon Rimzi I am waiting eagerly for your reaction to that part only. I am sorry to say but your expectations will go to waste. But i am still hoping for a certain reaction from you. It'll just make my day.

Originally posted by: Heeba

WoW how long did it take you to catch up.😆

I knew it ...i knew it...that it was Prachi who was the one who sang at PL's birthday....remember i asked you and you said it was Anjali...i guess u wanted it to be a surprise...and you were very convencing too...
I am sure when i replied to you i wasn't direct about my answer. I probably said something like Milind saw Anjali holding the mic so how can Prachi be singing? ofcourse to throw you guys off. It would be no fun if everyone guessed everything from the beginning.😆

But the kiss part...hmmm WOW JC, that i would have never guessed it..LIKE NEVER...I really liked it...it was a different side of Michi... Thankyou.😃

Now coming to the last part...it was really beautifully written...my favorite part is when Milind hurts himself so Prachi can admit that she cant see him in pain....that part was simply WOW...the way u wrote it was amazing...i actually felt like i was witnessing everything... thats everyone's favorite part. Even mine. I read it over myself and i felt like crying.😆 Silly me. I donno how i will write the rest.

So finally we get to know Prachi's secret...to be honest with you...while i was reading the part where Prachi signed the papers to donate Ritwick a kidney...i kind of felt that maybe something is wrong with Prachi...but then again..i was like nooo...it cant be...Prachi, cant die...so i put the thought aside....But i guess she is...
Yup she is. I had hoped that no one would go to the extent of thinking i will kill her in the fic so it will definitely come as a surprise.😆

I really hope that whatever she has is not as serious as she thinks andthat she wont die...oh please dont make her die...i'll seriousely cry... you will see what she has and i can't really make promises on Michi future, i might not be able to do it that way.

Cant wait for the next update...how is Milind going to react to all this??? And Anjali too...At least some are curious.😆 ahem..i'll start writing it next weekend. Currently my extra time is going into my new fav show.

Thanks a lot for the updatesss....really SORRY i couldn;t comment on time...Thanks once again😊 No problem hun. I am glad you did finally tho.

Originally posted by: michifanreal

Hello JC,
Finally finished reading your FF. 50 chapters with sub parts- that was quite long!! It was so detailed with some heart-warming and heart-wrenching situations.
Congrats on geting thru it all.👏😆

My favorite part was "Trip to Delhi" chapter. My favourite scene be ping Milind scaring Prachi when she is sitting by the window railings enjoying the rains.
That probably is the only true happy moment Michi had in the whole ff isn't it. now i will have to go read it again to make myself happy.

And now I understand why Opti Akka was categorizing your FF as the most mysterious one or something like that in my FF awards thread. Anjali-Prachi that was quite a suspense..
really. hahaha😆😆 ahh mystery..i tried. Its my favorite genre..more than romance.

But are you going to make it a sad ending. Please for Milind's sake don't this to him. Save Prachi, create a miracle..

Do you belive in "sad memories are sweet" kind of thing? I hope not.- though my favourite movie ever remains Anand (Hrishikesh Mukherjee's)...

It was an engaging and lovely read JC. Please update soon and I really hope you end it on a happy note.

*Sigh* i understand exactly how you feel hun. i felt that way about a few stories told right here on the forum. There are about 3 ppl so far who are willing to read on the story just the way i plan on telling it. Hope you'll join them. I can't promise a miracle or a happy ending but hopefully it'll be something you won't grudge me for. I'll update after next week.