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Posted: 16 years ago
nice update,
loved michi scenes,
glad to see milsi asking prachi opinion in his hair style😊
poor prachi, as usual he broke her heart, 😭
😭alaap and sukriti scenes is also too gud,
continue soon


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Me first?

Will read and comment!


yoooooooo....its u 1st...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

That was really good

Just when Michi seemed to be getting on better Prachi had to mention Sukruti and Alaap
Wonder how Milind will react when he finds out about them
Cant wait to read more


well AlAAp And sukriti r in limit so milind will not be Angry Atleast for now...

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nihitA
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -kiran

awesome update dear 👏
michi to hamesha achhe hote hai per tumhare alaap sukriti bhi bahut sweet hai 😳 😳
plz cont 😃 😃


hehehe thAnkyou deAr believe me i Also like AlaAp-sukriti better thAn michi...

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nihita
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehanandita

nice update,
loved michi scenes,
glad to see milsi asking prachi opinion in his hair style😊
poor prachi, as usual he broke her heart, 😭
😭alaap and sukriti scenes is also too gud,
continue soon



thAnkyou deAr...will cont.soon

love
nihitA
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Posted: 16 years ago
to you Imran...

PArt-12

Milind carelessly threw his briefcase on bed and started tugging at his tie,he has been in his black mood all day and all thanks to his and Prachi's quarrel earlier,it wasn't he was dying to redo his actions but somehow the fear and wetness in her eyes undid something in him....all she asked was just little consideration to sukriti's feeling and heck he has been a jerk to her.He threw his tie and immediately went to search for her in the house and then it dawned upon him she wasn't even anywhere near the premises...god! what a terrible-shallow-jerk he was!He rushed to sukriti's room in a dash and found her cleaning her room...
Milind made his way inside and said in a loud tone:sukriti!
Sukriti got startled and immediately the vase she was holding earlier in one piece was shattered into many,she looked towards Milind and said accusingly:now see what you did bhaiya,what is it...i am just standing a nano cm away so you neednt shout!and with that she bent down to gather the broken pieces....

Milind shook his head and muttered a mute apology and started helping her,he asked in between:i want Prach's number!
sukriti stopped her task for once and looked at him quizzically:why?
Milind breathed and said:just give me!
sukriti boring her eyes at him:and why exactly i want to know!
Milind skeptically:because i think i shoud have her number!
sukriti raised one eye-brow:why?
Milind sighed and counted to ten then said:you know i love you alot but you also know when you play this nancy drew's game i hate you alot...just give me her damn number!
sukriti resumed collecting the broken glass pieces and Milind also did the same as soon As he got the clue when she said:i dont think you should have her number!
Milind groaned:what the f- he stopped when he saw sukriti with her shooting glare..
sukriti glared:no blasphemy!
Milind guilty:sorry...i really want her number!...she smiled at him knowing maybe for the world he was the tuff mishra but infront of her he was someone with his own vulnerability...
sukriti amiably:okay...i dont remember her number,take it from my cell...
Milind sighed at last:by which name?
sukriti:her name only!
suddenly Milind got up and took her mobile and extracted Prachi's number and punched it on his keypad,he was about to exit when sukriti shouted:who will clean this?
Milind looked back at her....his sister was a sight when he winked and said:YOU!and with that he left her room....

Prachi sat down numbly fingering the pattern on her dupatta,why was she still affected by his insult?he was a no-one,a complete no-one...she had cried alot after him but she wont now!her cell blinked and then she noticed she had kept her cell on silent mode,the number was unknown so she immediately picked it up!
Prachi:hello...
Milind with careful tone:hey!Prachi....
Prachi sucked a breathe in...she couldnt possibly mistake his voice...it was him when he said:i am sorry for the morning...!
suddenly Prachi found her dried tears becoming fresh again,wasnt it was a minute Ago when she decided she wont cry for him or becAuse of him...god!this was her one quality she despised most,crying at every other opportunity...she knew it was much better if she only listein rather speak....
Milind with remorse:i am sorry i hurt you and it hAppens All the time,i wouldnt say it wont happen again because i know its something which is quite repititive but i can surely promise i will try to lessen my anger down...
Prachi wiped her tears with the back of her hands And smiled,he was truly sorry and said:its okay only if you promise you'll keep your anger in check from this time forward..
Milind sighed happily:And As you know my favourite word is "try."...
Prachi laughed and said:yes i surely know....And then she stopped,followed by a moments silence which irked both.....it was awkward yet so charming...
Milind smugly:well i'll try to understand sukriti and alaap's relation too....
Prachi:i am glad Atleast you gave the matter your thought...
Milind:i said i'll try to understand and man if any matter involves fAir sex's tears then its worth acknowledging...
Prachi smiled And changed the topic And asked:so how was your day?
Milind relaxing on his bed:well dont ask...i was so upset because of the morning mishap that i spoiled and wasted my whole day...
Prachi:unprofessionalism Mr.Mishra....
Milind teasingly:since i came in contact with estranged lucknawis..
PrAchi instantly:now thats an insult and we lucknawis are too soft-hearted and cultured..they wear their heart on sleeve,no deceive nothing....hmph
Milind:wear their heart on sleeve...hmmm will have to see this...
Prachi was confused At whAt he meant by this stAtement but chose to remAin mum when he said:hey Prachi listein will cAll you after sometime gotta get fresh...okay cya...
Prachi hiding her disappointment:okay...he hung up....PrAchi looked At her cell-phone And knew she was disAppointed he hung up and smiled atleAst he cAred enough to call,she saved his number on her cell as "NRI"......

AlAap was brooding all day,yesterday his pAssion went up the flames for one girl whom he couldnt afford to hurt at any cost and to top the charts they couldnt meet today when he needed her so much,it wasnt that they meet everydAy but somehow After yesterday it was a necessity...man,how desperately he wished that she can get over with her graduation so that he could mArry her....marry?he almost smiled yes,they'll be married And it wont be a problem since their families bonded too well....After marriage she will be his,all his..but before dreAming All this he need to tell her he had a fight today...at its remembrAnce he almost went into fury,he knew he shouldnt tell her but he also knew she deserved to know every incdent of his life small or not...before his thoughts could wander more he called her....
sukriti breathlessly:hello....
Alaap:why are you breathing heavily?
sukriti smiled over phone And said:hmm....I was in other room so c-
Alaap urgently:jaan,i need to see you...
sukriti with knotted brow:why?something happened?
Alaap:nothing...i was just missing you...
sukriti with concern:what happened?
Alaap hesitantly:well you know Asif right?he said something which blew my anger and then all hell broke loose An-but dont worry i am completely fine,it was him who needed to be carried home....
sukriti upset At his reaction:why do you always have to do this?i have told you how many times not to indulge yourselves in fight but you never listein to me...
Alaap in his defense:you know i listein to your every damn say,its just that he said something which had me angry...
sukriti:you need to ignore it then....hAlf of the time people say things which we hAte to even listei- he cut her off...
yelling he said:you hAve Any idea what he said?he said how many fu**ing times you have f***ed your girlfriend...
sukriti went silent,she wAs too embArAssed to say Anything when she whispered:friends just tAlk like that maybe he was just s-
Alaap Angry At the lAck of her understAnding:have you lost your senses?you have any ideA whAt it meant And As fAr As friends are concerned my whole gang knows i am bloody hell serious about you And its time fo you to also comprehend it and feed it in that brAin of yours...
sukriti:All i Am sAying i just dont want you involving in fights...she sighed lovingly And said please what if tomorrow your attitude affects our relAtionship?
Alaap:i am coming At your plAce then Milind will also wont object and then we can hAve a talk About it...
Sukriti:no,you should go home and take rest...i just cAnt see you doing Anything which Affects our relAtion negatively,you know i love you so much but still you hurt me,you know if you Are hurt i Am the one crying All night...alaap said in between:i guess i should have never told you....when sukriti remAined silent and he muttered A curse and said:dAmn you sukriti,you know i hate it when it comes to you....i have never treAted you as my girlfriend and you know that,i tAke you As my wife and when someone indecently says Anything about you it just blows my mind...i am sorry i know my habit hurts you but how cAn you overlook whAt i feel for you?
sukriti chided:its you who overlook whAt i feel when you pArticipate in something like this...yo-
Alaap sternly:the discussion is over sukriti....i Am over with it....when i cAnt tolerate something i just cAnt,no one says something About someone who i love....
sukriti shivered And heard the line going off...how could a possessive mAn like him will leAd the life hAppily ANd peacefully......

PrAchi checked call log in her cell-phone for the umpteenth time,he has called....suddenly she wondered whAt would he think if she messAges him,nervously she forwarded him a good night message and Atleast wAited for an hour for cell-phone to blink but when it didn't she lulled into slumber...Milind looked At the time it was almost over An hour,he didnt cAll her again on purpose....from hAlf An hour his hands literAlly itched to reply her good night but that was too nAive And immature to reply instAntly so he wAited for sometime And then typed "good night deAr..."no it should be just good night for now,he erased deAr And sent it to her And sighed....

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Posted: 16 years ago
me first 😃 hey thanks 😊
nice update nihita ⭐️ loved michi and alap sukriti👏I like it sooooooooooo much.....plz cont. soon 😃
Edited by -kiran - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -kiran

me first 😃 hey thanks 😊
nice update nihita ⭐️ loved michi and alap sukriti👏I like it sooooooooooo much.....plz cont. soon 😃


yup u 1st....thAnkyou dear...will cont.soon

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nihita
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Posted: 16 years ago
That was a very nice update, Nihita. Well written. Michi's conversation was cute. So, Milind is playing it safe huh, taking a little step at a time. Alaap's anger is a bit worrying. Hope he keeps it under control and not let it spoil their relationship. Pls continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ambul30

That was a very nice update, Nihita. Well written. Michi's conversation was cute. So, Milind is playing it safe huh, taking a little step at a time. Alaap's anger is a bit worrying. Hope he keeps it under control and not let it spoil their relationship. Pls continue soon


thanks dear...yup milind is really playing slow n safe...lets see wats in store for AlAAp....will cont.soon

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nihitA

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