Originally posted by: zcbcc34
Opti...Congratulations of the new thread!🥳Thanks Rima.
Now all the parts in the previous thread that I had left to read...were SUBERB!👏...I especially like Milinf retreating back when he realised his feelings for her...perhaps he felt guilty/disloyal? Neither. He felt inadequate for her selfless love.
And I'm kinda thankful for explaining Dahi Handi to me! LOL...I actually only ever seen it on TV and it's nice to have my facts right! Was it too factual? but the concequent scene was Brilliant! Milind breaking the handi...Prachi fainting...I liked the way you did that! Thanks again.
Okay! Dont dont kill me...but I kinda found reading Milind's diary with the emotions funny...were they supossed to be the doodles he had done? I know they were kinda funny. I wanted that to be the doodles. Only I could not find ones which were not animated!
But what was written in the diary😒AHHHHH Feel terrible for Milind!! and of course Prachi too and possibly Ayesha (if the lady in question is her) but then again...I'm thinking red-herring😆...Actually I was not too happy with the part. Did not get across my feelings properly.
And then Prachi decides to leave...and I swear ONLY Prachi would mention the milkman, electricity provider and Sabzi guy in her "I'm leaving note"😆Brilliant! Dont you think that would be typical Prachi-like. Initally I had made her leave without a word but thought it wouldn't be like Prachi to do so.
🤣Okay.......so so not a red herring then. It's Ayesha and with that realisation...I'm like this😒is that crazy? To be sad for her even though I love Michi so? No you are not. You always loved her.And the way she handles it all...Excellent! Actually I know you were a strong believer that what was between Ayesha and Milind was nevere really love and I've read your reasons too...that was all very evident in this part. Yes, This was one of the easiest parts to write because of my conviction in what I wanted to say.
Can I tell you how much I absolutely Love you for getting Prachi her own bathroom? 9or making Milind consdier it?)😆That just bought the biggest smile to my face!😆The bathroom issue was the first one to crop up after Michi got married when he mocked her about it. So I wanted it to be the issue which will finally make clear to him how much he really loves her to be doing all he did to give her that privacy, .
Thank you Opti! Wonderful! and now will soon catch up on the updates in this thread! There is only one update in this thread, the first one is a repeat from the previous thread. So do catch up and let me know what you feel. I am taking a little time with the next update since I think I have got a writer's block. My mind is blank.