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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Darwin

Hey a gr8 update. 👏Sunil he found this chance to just abandon the girl. Didnot think how she wud survive in the big city alone.😡 For milind this is a blessing in disguise. Can't wait to see what happens next. Pls update soon.



Thanks dear I'm happy you liked it, Sunil already considered her a burden how could he not get rid off her in such trying circumstances. Yes for Milind it is indeed a blessing in disguise. I will be updating soon cause believe me I'm extremely anxious to finish it.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Darwin

Oh I liked Milind in action fighting it out with the gunman...



I like my man in action kiya faida body ka agar istimaal nahin kerogey to.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks Munee for that lovely update. your vivid description of everything brings alive the scenes befoire our eyes. Kudos dear. Keep it up. Now Milind is stuck with Prachi, not a bad deal after all since she can take care of baba while he tries to make some extra bucks.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice update Munee.
Its so good to see our hero is a greater fighter.....ahhhh...the great Milind qualities!! Sunil turned out to be a total looser....huh? Now I am really lloking forward to the next update......post soon!!!
--Nargis
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Thanks Munee for that lovely update. your vivid description of everything brings alive the scenes befoire our eyes. Kudos dear. Keep it up. Now Milind is stuck with Prachi, not a bad deal after all since she can take care of baba while he tries to make some extra bucks.



Thank you Opti looks like I'm following your foot steps with this one. Yes Prachi will do a lot more than just look after Baba. 😊 I do hope I'm able to pen the romance as beautifully as you've done in DC.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Nice update Munee.

Its so good to see our hero is a greater fighter.....ahhhh...the great Milind qualities!! Sunil turned out to be a total looser....huh? Now I am really lloking forward to the next update......post soon!!!
--Nargis



Thanks Nargis, our Milsi has a lot of qualities believe me fighting off gangsters is just one of them.😊 Yup Sunil turned out to be a total loser. I'm glad the anticipation for the next update is still high. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Munee a big chuma for u
Really nice update...Milind and Prachi now they will face the challenges together.
really looking farward.
With Prachi in house i think Milind will have some mental peace as his dad will be in safe hands.
So is Inder presumes Prachi as dead as her credit cards will be taken by police ....
I am sure...He wont repent for Prachi so called presumed Death.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Munee a big chuma for u

Really nice update...Milind and Prachi now they will face the challenges together.
really looking farward.
With Prachi in house i think Milind will have some mental peace as his dad will be in safe hands.
So is Inder presumes Prachi as dead as her credit cards will be taken by police ....
I am sure...He wont repent for Prachi so called presumed Death.



Thank you Sumu I'm really happy you liked it yes now Michi will face problems together. Milind will have lots of peace once Prachi enters his house though not initially but later on. Inder will not presume her dead there will be a certain twist but not now which will finally unite him with Prachi in the true sense. He'll accept her as his daughter from his heart. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Chap4 :

Munee..Is it that inder wanted to love his Daughter but Somehow couldnt???
So Prachi's eyes ..hair..skin .. reminded him of Lata...all the more he should have loved and Pampered Prachi..So now he wanted to marry her off???wht right did he have on her??she didnt even let her call "dad"!

Milind and Ali bonding is superb in all your FFs...just loved this part..as usaul very touchin and tearjerking..so now he was expectin his Pari to fly and and whisk him away...😳..Hmmm

Chap5..

My heart goes out for Prachi...poor girl misses her mom..Munee.. u cannot believe it..i guessed as much!! i assumed that ramukaka would send her away..the only thing w.i thought he owuld send her to his brother that is milind's father to take care of her..😆

So that varun was a gay..i was soo relieved to read sunil was married...with kids..Prachi is safe there.😆

Milind is "lattoo " over her at first sight??😳

Chap 6..

hmmm...Davidoff's Coolwaters..my fav😳..So Sunil runs off😆...Run Sunil run😆...leave Prachi alone with milsi...Munee this update was toooo good..the Goons encounter was very well narrated...i could visualize the entire broil...i feel soo bad for Prachi..ripped off everything..nobody to call her own...i hope Milind makes her his own soon...Brilliant Munee.!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Grateful Dead

Three chapters in one go not bad 😊 Chap4 :

Munee..Is it that inder wanted to love his Daughter but Somehow couldnt???
So Prachi's eyes ..hair..skin .. reminded him of Lata...all the more he should have loved and Pampered Prachi..So now he wanted to marry her off???wht right did he have on her??she didnt even let her call "dad"! See hun to Inder Premlata was his world it came crashing down when he died and decided to close himself from the grief. But everytime he saw Prachi he would be reminded of his wife not being by him, the reason he did not want to see her so that he wouldn't be reminded of her mother. You'll know soon why he was hasty in getting her off his hands. 😊

Milind and Ali bonding is superb in all your FFs...just loved this part..as usaul very touchin and tearjerking..so now he was expectin his Pari to fly and and whisk him away...😳..Hmmm
Milind had to have some for emotional support here too my bhaiyya came in to help. I really love Ali... he's a wonderful brother to have. Milind never had the slightest idea Prachi would actually fly in his life.

Chap5..

My heart goes out for Prachi...poor girl misses her mom..Munee.. u cannot believe it..i guessed as much!! i assumed that ramukaka would send her away..the only thing w.i thought he owuld send her to his brother that is milind's father to take care of her..😆

Oh you had thought Ramu kaka was Milind's uncle even I didn't think of that quite innovative but then it would've been too simple and I like complex plots. 😊
So that varun was a gay..i was soo relieved to read sunil was married...with kids..Prachi is safe there.😆

Milind is "lattoo " over her at first sight??😳

Milind is only human hun, he had to fall for such innocence who wouldn't. Sunil arey eik hii scene key liye to tha woh who cares married or not.

Chap 6..

hmmm...Davidoff's Coolwaters..my fav😳..So Sunil runs off😆...Run Sunil run😆...leave Prachi alone with milsi...Munee this update was toooo good..the Goons encounter was very well narrated...i could visualize the entire broil...i feel soo bad for Prachi..ripped off everything..nobody to call her own...i hope Milind makes her his own soon...Brilliant Munee.!!!!

Do you like cool water I'm mad about it it's exquisite. Yeah i wanted hero to show his heroism make Prachi feel pressured to sympathize with him hahaha.... she'll be Milind's sooner or later.😊


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