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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: sailat@PA
soo SADD!!😭😭 Milind and Baba have suffered so much!! give them a break, Munee! say in the form of ummmm PRACHI!! 😃😃

poor guy ko kya demotion mila...straight from financial advisor to cab driver!! :(( i sOO know that when Michi meet it'll be pure magic!!i can tell!!...u see i have an insight into the future *rolls eye*!! but yeah i am waiitng eagerly for them to meet...let the fireworks begin, Munee!!😍😍

There's a silver lining to all dark clouds Saima and so does Milsi's life. I know the demotion was tough but keeping Milind in mind if he'd have been asked to do that all again he would've. He loves his family too much. Yes Michi they'll meet I promise just lemme build the momentum first. 😊

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: chillingal16
OMG munee di..
milsi has been thru so much..

aww lets hope things get better when prachi enters his life...

aww i hve tears in my eyes readin what he has been thru...

will he allow prachi to get close to him after all this??

well i guess we have to wait and find out...

continue soon pls!

Sorry Kashish but I'll try making it better when they meet. Though it won't be all smiles even then but there'lll be this beautiful feeling hmm lets see how i get about it. 😊

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: optimist
Munee, you killed sameera! I was so happy there will be another Preethi in this one but alas, she's gone even before we got to know her. Three deaths and one stroke in one update is too much tragedy dear. Loved the way you ended it with the description of the moon. I too often wondered why is so much written on a blemished moon. Good going.

Hmm Opti i couldn't repeat KIt in here..... thus Sameera poor soul joined her parents in their heavenly abode. I know four deaths in one update but that was Milind's life summary had to sum it up to total tragedy. The moon came as a last minute addition I guess I'm obsessed with it too and often wonder what Milind thought here. While compiling geography books i come across clear pictures of the celestial object and realize hoe deformed it is. But then woh kehtey hain na "Beauty lies in the eye of the beholder" I guess that's the case here.😊

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GratefulDead

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Posted: 16 years ago

#154

'He could see the moon from his open window he wondered why poets wrote such long encomiums on it when it was scarred and deformed'.....wht a stirring line!! The update was tearjerking! I'll avoid reading the update of this FF at my workplace…I cant even cry properly…wht a brilliant narrative…each word pricks your heart and wants to make you cry…the contingencies however hideous they were evoked my senses…im just numb..but Comfortably Numb hoping Prachi would enter the picture soon!

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Grateful Dead

'He could see the moon from his open window he wondered why poets wrote such long encomiums on it when it was scarred and deformed'.....wht a stirring line!! The update was tearjerking! I'll avoid reading the update of this FF at my workplace?I cant even cry properly?wht a brilliant narrative?each word pricks your heart and wants to make you cry?the contingencies however hideous they were evoked my senses?im just numb..but Comfortably Numb hoping Prachi would enter the picture soon!

GD you better avoid reading it at workplace it's not going to be sweet and simple though not very heart wrenching either but it'll have enough to touch the heart.😊 I'm glad you've developed interest in this one too hope I can maintain it . 😊 Prachi yes will be coming to him..... soon I hope.😊

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Shachi-Michi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#156

very emotional update munee darling😭

but loved it👏

poor milis have seen so many things at a very short distance of time😕

michi are very similar when it comes to pain & suffering

both poor soul🤢🤢

plz continue soon😊

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139271

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#157

nice update... what happened to Milind and his family is really sad... felt like giving my poor baby a hug😳😆
continue soon hun...

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Shachi-Michi
very emotional update munee darling😭

but loved it👏

poor milis have seen so many things at a very short distance of time😕

michi are very similar when it comes to pain & suffering

both poor soul🤢🤢

plz continue soon😊

Thank you Saara Milsi too has had a rough life so it equates the sorrow in Michi's life will help them understand each other better.😊

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: shivgauri
nice update... what happened to Milind and his family is really sad... felt like giving my poor baby a hug😳😆
continue soon hun...

The poor baby will get hugs don't worry but from his lady love...😊