FF:Destiny's Children Pt XIV(2)(16/12)

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Monu-SunNaa

@Monu-SunNaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#671

Oh my... poor poor Prachi :(( her intentions were right when buying the shirts for her lovely pati. , kya soch ta aur kya hogaya...:( Milind and his misconceptions. *sigh*

Ok..update soon, so we know the mystery person is at the end.

Opti..Ive been reading the last parts the moment my eyes caught the updates, this FF is addictive, just not been commenting of late. Well written as always, love the simplicity of the FF.

Edited by $weet Ema - 17 years ago

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#672

Thanks Yas, for letting me know you are still interested in my fic.

Yes, poor Prachi. She always ends up annoying and antagonising her hot headed husband although that is the last thing on her mind.

Will post the next update as soon as I am finished with it.

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Saima

@sailat@PA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#673

Part IX (I)

Opti--ur such a tease!! enuf with the cliffhangers....my tender heart can't take it!! haha!!😆😆 i go, 'oh gosh!! i'll have to wait for TWENTY FOUR HOURS before the next update' do have some mercy at my plight!!😭😭....k, enuf with my melodramatic breakdown! :DD

onto some serious stuff--loved, loved, LOVED the update!! i was like, 'no prachi--don't give the shirt away'....by doing this you'll only cry more and be successful in making ur husband mad and annoyed at you yet agagin!!' excellent update!!

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

Part IX (I)

Opti--ur such a tease!! enuf with the cliffhangers....my tender heart can't take it!! haha!!😆😆 i go, 'oh gosh!! i'll have to wait for TWENTY FOUR HOURS before the next update' do have some mercy at my plight!!😭

Maybe you dont have to wait for twenty four hours. I hope to put up the next update in less than nine hours. you see I am as impatient as you to get on with it!

😭....k, enuf with my melodramatic breakdown! :DD

onto some serious stuff--loved, loved, LOVED the update!!

Thanks Saima.

i was like, 'no prachi--don't give the shirt away'....by doing this you'll only cry more and be successful in making ur husband mad and annoyed at you yet agagin!!'

Yes, Prachi was not thinking, was she?

excellent update!!

Thanks once again

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Kashish

@..kashish..

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Posted: 17 years ago

#675

hey opti di..

wow an excellent update...

loved it!

aww she went shopping forhim!

lolz..

wonder who is at the door??

hope u continue soon!

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#676

K i read the two updates together. You know i am loving this. Before i'd be just waiting for anyone to update and now i am just presented with updates every time i log on.😃 Its a wonderful feeling. 🤗

And more than that i am loving how you are talking this story forward. Actually at around the part where they were having dinner at the Iyers...i felt it a bit stagnating. Like the story is not developing much. But the next two parts were just awesome. Now their lives seem to be actually starting and they seem more like a newly married couple not in love trying to make the best of a situation instead of being two strangers in each other's space (which i know was a requirement earlier). I feel now the expectations are raised.😃

Ok now i think it was a good balance with Milind's mood swings confusing Prachi and Prachi just doing things wrong because of her lack of experience with such things. I strangely don't feel angry at Milind for his behavior. Keeping in mind his nature i'd be just as frustrated with Prachi. But being an outsider i can see that Prachi is trying her best. I feel for the girl. I hope she picks up pace in learning to adjust in her environment and that Milind will soon start to see things from her prespective too.

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 17 years ago

#677

Lol oh God Opti Arrow shirts no wonder the man lost it. Poor girl she'll learn how to shop for him in time can't blame her though for trying to make him look smart. Ah sigh he believes she doesn't find him smart. Now why is there always someone or the other on the doorstep?

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gawker

@gawker

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#678

if you leave us with a cliff hanger like that, you're going to be hounded to update all day!! i can't wait to read the next part...

that's a great story your'e spinning...and ironically, they actually remind me of some couples i know...

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Heeba

@Heeba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#679

Awww, my poor girl...All she wanted was to help...when she was giving it away...i knew Milind wasnt going to like it...maybe she can get it back from the guy...lol

LOVED the part where she is in confusion on what to buy...ans that she emphasized that he was handsome...how cute..

Now opti, u do enjoy leaving us on cliffhangers dont you...(cant blame you...i use to do it as well...lol)

Nice update...it was a nice break from my studying...now gotta go back...
Thanks😊

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#680

Originally posted by: chillingal16
hey opti di..
wow an excellent update...

loved it!

aww she went shopping forhim!

lolz..

wonder who is at the door??

hope u continue soon!

Thanks Kash. Yes, she went shopping for him in her bruised foot and got bashed up in the end for doing it!

You soon find out who is at the door.

Edited by optimist - 17 years ago