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Posted: 16 years ago
Opti..Cliffhangers again😆😆

she spent 20 % of the Salary buying shirts for her handsome husband!!!Nowonder Milind hit the roof!!I feel soo sad for Prachi...Unknowingly she even hit his ego..

I hope one more Cupid is standing at the door..😳I hope thats the dhobi to return his shirt😆..God save Prachi😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jinc118

K i read the two updates together. You know i am loving this. Before i'd be just waiting for anyone to update and now i am just presented with updates every time i log on.😃 Its a wonderful feeling. 🤗

Thank you JC.


And more than that i am loving how you are talking this story forward. Actually at around the part where they were having dinner at the Iyers...i felt it a bit stagnating.
Well, newly weds do have to attend diners, you know. Its part of their obligation.
Like the story is not developing much. But the next two parts were just awesome. Now their lives seem to be actually starting and they seem more like a newly married couple not in love trying to make the best of a situation instead of being two strangers in each other's space (which i know was a requirement earlier). I feel now the expectations are raised.😃
Yes, both of them are doing right by their own standards. Only since they come from such different worlds, it takes time to reach the common meeting point.


Ok now i think it was a good balance with Milind's mood swings confusing Prachi and Prachi just doing things wrong because of her lack of experience with such things. I strangely don't feel angry at Milind for his behavior.
You cant, he is too lovable.
Keeping in mind his nature i'd be just as frustrated with Prachi. But being an outsider i can see that Prachi is trying her best. I feel for the girl. I hope she picks up pace in learning to adjust in her environment and that Milind will soon start to see things from her prespective too.
He will start seeing from her perspective pretty soon although he had to get that push from someone.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Heeba

Awww, my poor girl...All she wanted was to help...when she was giving it away...i knew Milind wasnt going to like it...maybe she can get it back from the guy...lol

We'll see what became of that shrit soon enough.

LOVED the part where she is in confusion on what to buy...ans that she emphasized that he was handsome...how cute..
Well, although I did not go around desribing my husband as handsome to the salesman , I just recounted what I experienced when I first went shopping for a shirt for my husband. I did not know what size he was and had to point to somebody at the shop so that the salesman could find his size for me.

Now opti, u do enjoy leaving us on cliffhangers dont you...(cant blame you...i use to do it as well...lol)
So you know better! Let me get my cheap thrills because my story is not a thriller otherwise.

Nice update...it was a nice break from my studying...now gotta go back..
Thanks for taking the time off to read my fic.

Thanks😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Opti..Cliffhangers again😆😆
Dont worry the suspense will be out by this evening.

she spent 20 % of the Salary buying shirts for her handsome husband!!!Nowonder Milind hit the roof!!I feel soo sad for Prachi...Unknowingly she even hit his ego..
Yes, she did. Right now whatever she does, she ends up antagonising him.

I hope one more Cupid is standing at the door..😳I hope thats the dhobi to return his shirt😆😆😆
We'll soon see who is at the door.
😆..God save Prachi😆
Yes God save her. He has already sent his angel who will do the needful, though.
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Posted: 16 years ago
why do u always leave us on a cliff hanger plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon this part was amazing poor prachi she would not wanna bhy shirts 4 a very long time now
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

why do u always leave us on a cliff hanger plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon this part was amazing poor prachi she would not wanna bhy shirts 4 a very long time now

Yes, Prachi will think more than twice before she buys him shirts again. Dot worry the ext update is just round the corner. By evening it should be up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Evening is how many hours away??? So i know if it'll be up when i wake up. Me coming here first thing in the morning to check.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jinc118

Evening is how many hours away??? So i know if it'll be up when i wake up. Me coming here first thing in the morning to check.

Its 12.30 pm. now. I am already half done with the update. Should be up by 3.00 p.m. or even before.
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Posted: 16 years ago
I've added the next section of Part IX. Please leave your comments on the same.
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Posted: 16 years ago

l.o.v.e.d. this part, opti. so our hero's heart softens towards our heroine.

"new found empathy and admiration for his one-month old wife."
waiting to see his interaction with her now.do hope you update on sundays too 😉

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