Making a Deal with the Devil(NOTE p.27) Mar.17 - Page 10

Originally posted by: (**sia**)

awww...no need to b worry abt it hun🤗...this part was beautifully written...luv the father-son convo...glad mishraji has opened upto Milind and givin some fear to Milind as well😆...nw the duffer has to work hard to work on his relationship wit prachi...haey cant wait for the suhaagraat😍🤣...continue soon🤗

Thank you! :D Glad you liked it :D...His relationship w/ Prachi's gonna be an uphill battle :)

Originally posted by: AH01

brilliant part!

your writing style is great.

loved the father-son moment it was very sweet

update again soon plz!

Aaliyah

Thank you! 😊

So atlast MICHI in the room and prachi want to settle with milind for sleeping arrangements.

I've been meaning to comment on this FF for sometime but just haven't got around to it. First off, you're a BRILLIANT writer, sweety 😃👏👏... I love it, what I need like a paragraph to express, you express it in like a line or two... Honestly when I first read your FF, it was your style of writing that stood out... The vocabulary you use, the sentence structure, it makes the text very smooth and enjoyable to read.. hehe...

Ok chapter 1: Good chapter, hehe, nice to know that Milind is referred to as the devil!!! 😆 I really don't have much to say here except that I love the premise of a contract-marriage storyline... so I had no problems with the storyline and your writing only made it seem before.. One thing I've gotta say is I like how you infuse humor into the situation, because it makes Prachi more relatable in the story and understandable... And yaa, I forgot to mention, I love how you end each chapter - they make such fabulous cliffhangers, makes you wanna read more!!! 😆

Ch 2: I absolutely LOVED this chapter. My favorite bit was where Milind sarcastically retorts back to Prachi when she made the blank call!!! 😆 Most of the time in FFs, people say so and so is witty, but its more of like tell than show, but I can't really complain with regards to that, because here that one dialogue expresses a lot about Milsi, hard to get along with, smart, sarcastic, extremely focused when it comes to work, hates distractions... And Prachi proposing to Milind??? 😲 I SO did not see that coming!!! Mainly coz the Prachi in the serial is sorta more mellowed.. 😆 but I loooooved the twist!!! Sorta really makes her relatable... Again brilliant conclusion!!!👏 I mean come on, Milind speechless??? Thats gotta worth something!!! Had me anxiously waiting for the next chap to see how Milind reacts!!!

Ch 2 (II): Ok I agree with JC, this is so not boring... and I too love the way you infuse humor into your situations... What I like most is your dialogues, they are very witty... and they express so much about the character.. I loved how Milind was being so nakhra-type what with him telling Prachi to call him Mr. Mishra!!! 😆 Prachi's nervousness is understandable!!! Yaa again I really liked the conclusion to this chapter, its sorta mysterious you know the way Milind says "Hmm" to her with respect to her requests... makes you wonder if he would go through it or not..

Ch 3(i): Omg Neev and Ayesha!!! 😃 I'm glad to see them in FF, I love them almost as much as Michi, and I really really hope they have some sorta role or story in this FF, yes demanding I know, its just that you write SO well!!!
Anyways this line by Neev was hilarious: " Waah, Ayesha You're actually looking presentable today. Kya bath hain?" So typical Neev, can actually imagine him saying that to Ayesha!!! 😆
I enjoyed the banter between Neev and Ayesha... its humorous!!! Not much happened on the MICHI front, but your ending was killer, liked how you brought a spin to the light @ the end of the tunnel phrase!!! 😆

Ok I need to run, will comment on the other parts later, plz plz update more!!! I love it!!! 😃

gr8 update Ada, so prachi has realised she has a hunk for a husband and milsi has realised that this marriage is for keeps, yayyyyyy! i loved the father/son convo.

eagerly waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

So atlast MICHI in the room and prachi want to settle with milind for sleeping arrangements.

poor milind i am sure going to hit floor instead of prachi as Sr.Misharji gave Gayan to him down stairs.

Plueez update soon.

Milind..on the floor? 😉 hmmmn, we'll see

Originally posted by: meteora_smt

I've been meaning to comment on this FF for sometime but just haven't got around to it. First off, you're a BRILLIANT writer, sweety 😃👏👏... I love it, what I need like a paragraph to express, you express it in like a line or two... Honestly when I first read your FF, it was your style of writing that stood out... The vocabulary you use, the sentence structure, it makes the text very smooth and enjoyable to read.. hehe...

Ok chapter 1: Good chapter, hehe, nice to know that Milind is referred to as the devil!!! 😆 I really don't have much to say here except that I love the premise of a contract-marriage storyline... so I had no problems with the storyline and your writing only made it seem before.. One thing I've gotta say is I like how you infuse humor into the situation, because it makes Prachi more relatable in the story and understandable... And yaa, I forgot to mention, I love how you end each chapter - they make such fabulous cliffhangers, makes you wanna read more!!! 😆

Ch 2: I absolutely LOVED this chapter. My favorite bit was where Milind sarcastically retorts back to Prachi when she made the blank call!!! 😆 Most of the time in FFs, people say so and so is witty, but its more of like tell than show, but I can't really complain with regards to that, because here that one dialogue expresses a lot about Milsi, hard to get along with, smart, sarcastic, extremely focused when it comes to work, hates distractions... And Prachi proposing to Milind??? 😲 I SO did not see that coming!!! Mainly coz the Prachi in the serial is sorta more mellowed.. 😆 but I loooooved the twist!!! Sorta really makes her relatable... Again brilliant conclusion!!!👏 I mean come on, Milind speechless??? Thats gotta worth something!!! Had me anxiously waiting for the next chap to see how Milind reacts!!!

Ch 2 (II): Ok I agree with JC, this is so not boring... and I too love the way you infuse humor into your situations... What I like most is your dialogues, they are very witty... and they express so much about the character.. I loved how Milind was being so nakhra-type what with him telling Prachi to call him Mr. Mishra!!! 😆 Prachi's nervousness is understandable!!! Yaa again I really liked the conclusion to this chapter, its sorta mysterious you know the way Milind says "Hmm" to her with respect to her requests... makes you wonder if he would go through it or not..

Ch 3(i): Omg Neev and Ayesha!!! 😃 I'm glad to see them in FF, I love them almost as much as Michi, and I really really hope they have some sorta role or story in this FF, yes demanding I know, its just that you write SO well!!!
Anyways this line by Neev was hilarious: " Waah, Ayesha You're actually looking presentable today. Kya bath hain?" So typical Neev, can actually imagine him saying that to Ayesha!!! 😆
I enjoyed the banter between Neev and Ayesha... its humorous!!! Not much happened on the MICHI front, but your ending was killer, liked how you brought a spin to the light @ the end of the tunnel phrase!!! 😆

Ok I need to run, will comment on the other parts later, plz plz update more!!! I love it!!! 😃

Ok honestly your comment like MAAAAAAADEEEE my day! lol Thank you so much for being so kind :) I hope that I can continue to live upto your expectations now I'm kinda under pressure 😆 Neesha will have a role, but this will be mostly a MICHI fanfic, but Neev and Ayesha are much too important to be forgotten about :) Keep reading and commenting! :)

Originally posted by: shabzc1

gr8 update Ada, so prachi has realised she has a hunk for a husband and milsi has realised that this marriage is for keeps, yayyyyyy! i loved the father/son convo.

eagerly waiting for the next update.

Thank you :) hehe yep Prachi's just begun to realize what a hottie Milind is...ab to uski khair nahi :D...Thank you, ill update in the eve :)

Ok Aha sorry I've been late read it at work then forgot to comment, I liked this part though it didn't move on stroy wise but we got a lot of insight on michi. She believes he's handsome he thinks she's beautiful a good enough start to recognition I believe. Mishraji was a good enough father explaining him the vitals of marraige it was necessary and done at the right moment. I know the SR will not be a scintillating one neither would I want it to be that way at this point, let that come later when love has blossomed because I know you'll make it worth the read and wait.