FF-HAR PAL TERE SATH-uptd part-5 ,pg-2 on 14/10/08

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'M WRITING MY FIRST FF .THIS IS THE CONTINUATION TO KAYAMATH STORY BEFORE THE LEAP WERE PRACHI TRIES TO RUN AWAY FROM MILIND IN THE RAILWAY STATION.

'P1,pt2 ,pt3-PG-1

''She is trying to get away from him.She sees someone giving her the hand so she can get into the train.She tries to catch it but trips and fells off on the platform.Seeing the moving train her tears starts rolling on her'cheeks.Milind'was'in'the'great'relief'that'he'found'Prachi'sitting'there.He'hugs'
her'n says"kya'hoga.kyun'kar' rahi ho aisa.tum ek bar mera bare me socha thak nahi.teri bin ek pal bhi nahi jee saktha aur tum bhi mer bin jee nahi sakthi par kyun kar rahi ho aisa .kaha jayi woh vishwass jo meri prachi mein hai.Prachi'tells'isse'mein'sabki'balayi'hai'hamare'gharwalon'ki,'apki.mere'aur'
hamare'bachche'ki'bhi.
Milind is shocked by this word bachche and repeats "bachache.Ha hamre bachche honewale'hai'Milind.
bahut'kush'thi'mein'us'din'.sabse'se'phele'aap'se'share'karna'chathi'hoon.isse'
liye''kissi'ko'nahin'
pata'hai'mein.par'kya'pata'aap'ko'pata'ne'ki'maouka'hii'nahin'mili thi'mujhe'AUR'AISE'HALTH'PATANA'PAD''RAHI'HAI'MUJHE''YEH'KUSH'KABRI. saying'this'prachi'starts'crying.
'''''''''''''jho'hova'tha'usse'bhool'ga'aur'ghar'chalte'hum'sablog'
intezaar'karthe'honge'saying'this'Milind'lifts'
Prachi'and'hugs'her'saying''sab'kuch'teek'hogayenge'.'Prachi'slowly'gets'up'
and'turns'her'head'and'is'in
shock'and'scared.seeing'Prachi's'expressions'he'also'sees'in the'direction''in'which'Prachi''was'looking.His'expression'changes'into'burning'
rage'of'anger.


part-2

In shah mansion every were worried about MP as they did not turnup still.Neev was trying their mobiles
but
either did not answer his phone.Neev thought did is not of any use and decided to check in Mallika's house.In railway station M clutches P 's hand tightly and starts moving towards the entrance.P is worried seeing his anger.She had never that much anger in face before.As he came closer and abt to say something his mobile rings "main tho railway station mein hoon .woh bhi yehi pe hain teek hai jaldi aana.He disconnects the phone and gives a tight slap on Mallika's face. mein kabhi nahii socha ki tu itni giri uhi harkat karegi ayesha ke baad tumhe ek achche dost samjha tha par tum uski layaki nahi hoon tumahri vaja se mein mere P ko khone vala tha kya socha tha yehi ki P chali jane se mein tumhara hoga kabhi nahin P sirf meri biwi nahin balki meri pyar meri zindagi hain kya socha yeh kaam kiya tune mere P ko bahut rulaya aur ussski behen ko cheenliye usse ab isski keemat chukani padegi woh bhi mujhse jab P akele thi tab tune ussko damkaya tha na ab damkakar dekha do saying this he gives another tight slap on mallika's face . aise samjhane se ussko koyi farak nahi padega milind a voice from the back is heard .every one turns and sees Neev was entering with police.

HOPE'U'LIKED'THE'FIRST'PART'.IF'U'LIKED'I'CAN'CONTINUE'UPDATING'IT''

plz post ur comments so i can think of upadating the next part




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.Angel thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank god he didn't let her get away😆and thank u dear nice start sweetie👏👏I will be reading it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!is he going to let her go?
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hey sweety 😛😛
cool work yaar
pls do continue soon 😛😛😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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good! loved it!
con soon!😊
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Part-3
The police comes near them and shows the arrest warrant to Mallika .Ayesha ki murder tumko arrest kar raha hoon so cooperate with us varna tumhe keech kar le jana padhega.
Shocked Mallika starts shouting main tumhe nahin choodungi barbad karongi aur prachi ko mardalongi.Milind for one second he was shocked to these .He knew Mallika could do anything to get what she wanted.But Neev was less concerned about this "don't mind this stupid woman's words I know that she can't do any to Prachi until u r there with her n any how she (mallika) has no chances to get out of jail.it takes years for to get out from jail.i have already filed complaint against her and I have the strong proof of this.and now I'm thinking to add one more charge against her.Saying this Neev goes to police station.Confused what was going there prachi starts feeling dizzy .Seeing this milind takes her into his arms and starts towards the hospital."it's ok I'm fine it's just……… milind put his fingers on the lips gesturing not to talk more.After the doctor assured that everything is fine MP goes home.After reaching there everyone crowds around them and starts showering their questions for where they were such a long time.Milind breaks away from the crowd and goes near dadi who was standing near the pooja mandir."I think that was on rithwik's birthday party I remember you said that I and Prachi should have a child of our own but it took a long time to make it true",hearing him saying this dadi felt very happy and went near prachi and hugged her .After that everyone had joint celebrations.After the celebrations were over everyone went to their rooms thinking that happy days are ahead.Prachi had never seen Milind so happy before.He was waiting for everyone to leave them alone.he takes her to terrace ,makes her sit on the swing,kneels before her and takes her hand in his and "thanks for what u have given to me ,after few months we are going to start a family , I'm so happy and may this happiness be for a long time,and gives prachi a kiss on her forehead and sits besides her n hugs her.



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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dea kool ff😊do continue soon😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gud starting👏

waiting for more ff

keep on rocking yaar😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part -4
It's during navratri,the house is being decorated for the celebrations. Mishraji sat in his favorite chair in his room looking to the family album thinking how fast the five years had passed.He could still remember that past five years.It was fresh in his mind.A lot of changes had taken in that past five years and he could see that in the album.He starting thinking what changes had taken place during that five years.He was very proud of his family.He also knew who was the reason for that.For now also he couldn't believe this.He could hear the exciting voices of his three grandchildren Rithwik,Riya and Adwait.The name Adwait , Adwait Mishra son of Milind and Prachi Mishra ,the replica of Milind Mishra , made him smile.He could remember the day when he was born.He could see the features of his father (milind).He could not forget that day.Prachi had to go under complications during the delivery time and Milind who could not stand this bashed an intern of the hospital which made the staff to throw him (milind)out of the hospital .He had noticed his son(milind) changing so much.Previously his son would put up a fight for silly things and lose his temper soon.But he avoided these and became a responsible person in the family.He had changed from a arrogant ,irresponsible son to a responsible son who is ready to do anything for his father,from a husband who hated his wife to a husband to was ready to die for his wife, a loving and caring father and a ever loving brother for his sister. Mishraji felt happy at this thought. Now his son was one of the top businessman in India.He knows who was the reason behind all this happiness , it was because of his bahu, Prachi.She was Prachi Shah, his boss Inder Shah,s daughter. She was to become Shergill but destiny made her Prachi Milind Mishra.He thought all the happiness is because of .He had seen struggling all the life for his family,He could not think any other girl in place of as his bahu . Milind and Sukruthi kept her happy, Thinking of Sukruthi made him sad. He could not understand why her life was spoilt.He thought it was her mistake. The affair with Alaap spoilt her life entirely .This was the cause for her bad marriage.But seeing faith of Prachi, he left the matter out of his mind .For Milind , Prachi and his son is everthing more than life.Neev got fully engrossed into his business . He was the kids favorite chacha.After losing his love a had failed marriage he did not like have anyone in his life.Even PL had convinced him to move with his life,but he couldn't do that. Alaap became a guest in his own house.Milind had kept him busy in the business so much that that Alaap did not find time to spend with his mother and sisters.He really missed his family but Milind still thought that he was making excuses.PL now left mansion after dadi's death two years ago and she was returning back for the festival this year.Neev and Milind went to the market to get things for pooja before PL arrives and it was Prachi's order.Sowmya and Prachi went to station to pick their mom .At first Milind hesisted sending Prachi alone.Knowing that Sowmya was there with her ,he had agreed to send her.



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Posted: 16 years ago
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wonderful hun🤗...aww michi had a son n named in adwait? so cute😊...i ddn quite understand y dd milind hesitate to send her to station...is it because of that n8? wel,i gues that wil b knwn in the next update...continue soon hun😊

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