FF: Forgiveness Part12: Pg37: 21/09 - Page 14

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Sorry...it took me while to comment...But..(Shubs) I was the first one to read it...YEH!!!😆

I love this FF.....there is so much tension....I could literally feel uneasy as I read the update. Poor Milsi...so totally loves her...and doesn't want to hurt her...he is so lost. Even Prachi loves him to death too...but both Duffers won't talk it out.

Yep, inspite of everything they still love each other completely. But they just can't communicate with each other.

So is there a mis-understnding between them about Mallika? Because i can't imagine that Milsi would really sleep with anyone else...no matter how drunk he was???😕😕

Well, he was drunk and emotionally shattered, it will be a few parts still before it all come out.

Milsi is totally shattered when he see Ranvir...please claer this up for him...I can't see him in so much pain!😭😭

That will be cleared up, compared to their other issues, this is not too much of a complication.

Loved the idea of a Scholarship in memory of Kashma...so sweet. 👏👏

Well, Milind was always sweet and generous and this just reminds Prachi of that fact

Thanks for a great update...please continue soon...and make it a long update....(me greedy) no small teaser please!😃

Thank You!!

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

It seems my dear, you have made it your mission to make my mascara run everytime you update😡😭

Part 7: Urgh...this is so so painful. The whole process, the memories it dredged up. I was thinking...could they not just have donated the money from Kshama's insurance to a charity? But I'm assuming that Milind may invest it for Asha or something. I read somewhere you wrote that "the divorce looks likely doesn't it" and see I'm not sure 😆 as crazy as it'll sound, what would I want to see? If they can re-discover love for each other after divorce? If it's better they Divorce? If it all come to blows just before divorce? The last scenerio looks extremely likely but then again, you may surprise me...and do I kinda hope so?

Honestly, I don't know which I would prefer. Milind really sleeping with Mallika, Michi actually going through with the divorce. I'm tempted to go down that route but it will take courage to write something so unpopular. I now realise how brave you were to end your Neesha FF the way you did.

Maybe. Boy dont I soound like an anti-michian right now😆 but I have immense faith in your writing ability Ela and whichever way you take it, it'll be great I'm sure.

Awww, Rima I hope I can live up to your faith in me, I'm totally winging this FF.

Part 8: OMG😃Sumit is AD-OR-ABLE!! I'm saying it just like that...trust me! Why dont kids like Veg?!! They're yummy!😆

I LOVED it! Love it...the whole scene between Ayesha, Milind and Sumi😉Just served to show, Milind would have made a FANTASTIC father.

Mmmph, you hit on something here as you will see later.

and OHHHHHHHHH So thats what he plans to do with the money...I guess it's right as well. He hasn't bonded with Asha nor feels any connection to her for him to do as I suggested. This makes a lot more sense.😊

Don't worry about Asha, she is going to be more than well provided for no matter what happens. I know I didn't mention it but the Shah's still have their fortune in this FF.

I also like the paralleles you have drawn between Milind and Prachi. While Asha is a way for Prachi's pain to heal, she seems to be the cause of fresh pain for Milind. That was very well done!! I dont know what I hope for them (Michi), but I hope to see Asha bring some hope/happiness into Milind's life too.
You are giving me too much credit. Honestly didn't see it that way but so glad you did. 😊

Now...Ranveer...I wonder what went on there...🤔...in all your fics, all your characters have served a purpose, so I'll wait to see what's in store for us regarding this guy.

Again, you're giving me too much credit. There really may not be too much to Ranvir.

Thank you Ela for another WONDEFUL update! I do wish I could make you more often😵 but I'll take what I get😭😆 It really is a very well etched out story, my favourite out of all of them!

😉

Originally posted by: johnangad

they are divorced, now wat will happen?????

Originally posted by: optimist

Pam, this is simply wonderful. I am always a fan of your writing and read your first two Michi FF but did not read the one with the leap and Michi kids because the theme did not appeal to me. The title of this one put me off it because I knew it would be a tear jerker. Today, out of sheer curiosity I read the last part and was sucked in immediately. I went back and read the whole story. Though as expected it is painful, it is so well protrayed, I was literally clutching my hand to my chest.

Opti, thank you so much for reading and commenting. Really value your input. Try reading the LL&&EE sequel. It's actually my favourite FF that I have written . Shamelessly punting my own work here. 😆

Please,please, pleeeeeeease let them not go through with the divorce. From what I read there is no cause for it. I don't think Milind slept with that slut and must have kept quiet as some sort of self flagellation. The only one who can stop the divorce is Prachi since Milind seems to have resigned himself to the fate but then again would he have a large enough heart to accept the baby?

Truth be told, I'm not exactly sure how to handle the divorce. Yes, he has resigned himself to the divorce and as of right now Prachi doesn't see why she has to stop it. Very, very interesting point about the baby. There is a huge issue there.

Btw, with all that drinking, its surprising that Milind has not developed cirrhosis by now.

😆 Everytime I write a part about him drinking that's exactly what I worry about but I just convince myself that he has a healthy liver and he stopped a bit now.

Originally posted by: michifanreal

Pam,
Please update this FF. I love it as the pain in this FF is haunting me.

Originally posted by: chillingal16

hey BC i hve enjoyed readin this ff alot! as u hve brought out the pain and hurt in MP's realation..esp in this part where u can see that prachi still worries abt his health n is dissappointed when he leaves with out meeting her! and also milsi's pain when he sees her with asha!

wonder if they both will reconsider the divorce and work out things!

Originally posted by: they used-him

great fic yaar

keep it up.

it one of my best fic in the forum.

Originally posted by: lizzy_de

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

BC update it please......i think u have forgot about this FF.