Dastak Dil Se Pt 8 PG 22 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Herman_4u

wow di, i luv this fanfic of urs, kas is really different from the whisper and the serial kas, robbie is also different from whisper robbie,

hey Herman...aww yippeee she luves it.. i was fretting wondering if you would read it... great to know that its got something worth your time😳

but he seems kinda same robbie as the robbie in the very beginning of the serial. his attitude, wen he said third class ppl was kinda same. but then his care for his sis and homemade food is somethng very different

there will be similarities with whispers but i will try to make them as different as possible as the story moves on.. For once robbie isnt anyway remotely interested in kasturi type girls...😆 and then this robbie has a family that luves him...

. and ur like obssessed with blackberry, and all these brands di, 😆 u always mention then, even in whisper u mentioned all these brands. dis robbie with all his electronic devices seems like my bro, he too is like him, and he's also very brandy. 😆

naah your bro isnt brandy he's enjoying life to the fullest... actually i'm not all that brandy, lol.. my husband though i have to say is a Mr. Gadget...plus yeah he's a really brandy type guy.. me nahh i'm totally casual... you'd rarely catch me wearing branded clothes...i luv me jeans and my sweats...😳but when i was growing up yeah brands like Roots, Polo, Nautica were soo in... i dont think they are now...

and i think i'll grow up to be the same.😆

yeah if you cant beat them might as well join them😆

continue soon di. u really have an interesting start.

thanks herman..i'll try to tone down the branding a bit.. and try is the key word here.. okies...luv diiiii
love
harman 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
#42

In love with Dastak Dil Se☺️☺️

Amazing Part dii👏

Divya seems a nice person😳

All girls worry about their Gifts/jewllery/make-up etc etc etc lol😆

Kasturi sitting next to Robbie😉 luck girl😆 i wish i can sit by him☺️

What kinda men you are Robbie 😕you hate women smeel sweet😆 😆 😆

OMG 3 rules are really shocking and hillarious🤣 😲 🤣 😲

1. And with his hand drew an imaginary line and between them and said don't come near my space okay.

ummm i will lol😆

2. Don't talk to me

Correction Robbie you suppose to say "talk to me"

3. Don't look at me

cant help it😆

continue your both FF dii

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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
Aah............so it started with a fight, did it?? It had to!! Both of them have personalities that will revolt against each other till the revolt turns into attraction 😆

Very nice start! This part gives us a slight insight into their characteristics........I am waiting to see how you build them in detail!!! 😃

The humor was very good in the part specially the sitting on the lap part!!! 😆 And I swear I loved KP's rules!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 I could imagine him saying those!!!!

Waiting for the next part and take your time Robina! With guests and 2 FFs, I can only imagine how you must be managing!!! 😲 But you are doing a fantastic job!!! 👏 👏 👏
Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *princess*15

In love with Dastak Dil Se☺️☺️

ahhh shucks mani thats really kind of you to say.. you make my heart sing!!!!😃

Amazing Part dii👏

thanks a ton....😳

Divya seems a nice person😳

shes a bit bratty and sassy... lol!!!

All girls worry about their Gifts/jewllery/make-up etc etc etc lol😆

well said maniii👏 sooo true!!

Kasturi sitting next to Robbie😉 luck girl😆 i wish i can sit by him☺️

ha!!! right now kasturi dont think sooo!!😆she'd gladly give it up to you!!! your welcome to mr. 3 rules...

What kinda men you are Robbie 😕you hate women smeel sweet😆 😆 😆

yeah robbie is just one of those types of guys...lol.. he's very confused..dont worry kasturi will set him on the straight and narrow.😉

OMG 3 rules are really shocking and hillarious🤣 😲 🤣 😲

glad you got a good laugh out of it.. thanks...

1. And with his hand drew an imaginary line and between them and said don't come near my space okay.

ummm i will lol😆

2. Don't talk to me

Correction Robbie you suppose to say "talk to me"

3. Don't look at me

cant help it😆

continue your both FF dii

i luved how you broke down the 3 rules, robbie would be uggg.. if he heard kasturi saying those lines to his rules..i will continue just need a couple of more days thanks a ton.. hope you have fun with this fanfic, cause its nothing serious...

luv diiii thanks so much for reading manii your a sweetie!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Aah............so it started with a fight, did it?? It had to!! Both of them have personalities that will revolt against each other till the revolt turns into attraction 😆

I dont know how many countless times i've read stories where the great love stories start out with a fight...😆and bingo Prags👏 you've got their characters pegged down.. i dont think i'll be able to surprise you much in Dastak...😃

Very nice start! This part gives us a slight insight into their characteristics........I am waiting to see how you build them in detail!!! 😃
mm i'll defintely try really hard to give them good roles but right now i'll continue the light heartedness in this fanfic.. kinda like a no brainer (excuse the saying..😳)


The humor was very good in the part specially the sitting on the lap part!!! 😆 And I swear I loved KP's rules!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 I could imagine him saying those!!!!
aww right on Prags i'm soo happy that you could imagine KP saying those rules.. lol... thanks a ton for taking time out.. i'm honored... luv robina
Waiting for the next part and take your time Robina! With guests and 2 FFs, I can only imagine how you must be managing!!! 😲 But you are doing a fantastic job!!! 👏 👏 👏

thanks for understand Prags.. but seriously its been such a joy to interact with all of you..i really cant imagine my life without ya'll... thanks for the accolades... means more then i can put down in words...take care Prags...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

Part 3:Stop overs....

Kasturi stared out the window wanting to strangle the arrogant, self absorbed, pig headed, loser next to her.

She's thinking about the 3 RULES!!! What a creepy jerk..

Rule no. 1. His space? Is he for real… drawing a line in thin air, like some border. Well I'll show him space…and she spread her elbow onto robbie's side of the arm rest.

Rule no. 2 Don't talk to him.. well Mr. 3 rules I wasn't dying to talk to you anyway… kya samaj ta hain aapne aap koi? Kasturi started to sing her fav. Song out loud.

Rule no. 3 Don't look at you!!! Ugg, kyun naa dheek hoon???

Aub to ghoor ghoor ke dheekoun gi…just to get on his nerves…

And kasturi began to stare at Robbie.

After 5 mintues of enduring the girls rude disregard for the 3 rules that he had put forth to her, he turned towards her and said: What is your problem?

Kasturi smiled sweetly and said: YOU!!!

Robbie pressed the air hostesse's button on his console and waited for her to come. She appeared right away and said yes how may I help you Mr. Saberwal?

Robbie: by finding me a new seat.

Air Hostess: why is something wrong with your seat?

Kasturi: No he needs more space for him, himself and his oversized EGO, you see he forget to check it in at the counter back at the airport.

Air Hostess couldn't help but smile and tired to cover up her laugh and said: Mr. Saberwal our flight is full. There really is nothing I can do but ask someone else if they'd like to exchange seats.

Robbie steaming with the arrogance of this younge lady next to him decided that he wouldn't move, infact he'd stay and give it back to her with interest. And he said to the Air hostess: Sorry to bother you.. no problem I'm just fine here. Thank you. But may I get a beer.

Air Hostess looked at both of them uncomfortably.She sensed trouble building up between the two. But she walked away saying: certainly sir.

Robbie opened his can and offered some to the girl next to him, who looked like he had offered her poison.. and he smiled to himself for getting the response that he was hoping he'd get from her. She obviously didn't drink (Robbie rarely drank himself.) Perfect he thought. After his 2nd beer Robbie started to slurr his words a bit and he smelled of Alcohol.

Kasturi wanted to throw up from the disgusting smell coming from him. When he said to her: So you have a boyfriend and he winked at her?

Kasturi wanting to slap him said: yeah and he's the size of a sumo wrestler.So stay away from me..

Robbie: Well if that is true, then its you who should keep away from him, cause he'd flatten you like a pancake.

Kasturi: We don't have that kind of a relationship.

Robbie:ohh your that type..

Kasturi: what TYPE is that?

Robbie rolling his eyes and says: well the type that wont let her boyfriend get to first base until she's married to him. Right?

Kasturi turned away from him. Robbie put his hand on her shoulder to turn her towards him and she turned around so quick her hand by accident slapped his cheek. Robbie just kinda stared at her cause no one had ever really tried to hit him, at least not since the 5th grade.

Kasturi didn't even bother to apologize how dare he try to touch her. What a total sleeze ball. Uggg…Just then the Hostess appeared with their dinner trays.

Kasturi stared at her vegetarian meal.

Robbie looked at his chicken meal. Wanting to say something to her but just didn't know what to say. She had totally caught him off guard.

Kasturi glad the man next to her didn't say anything cause she really believed if he did say another word she'd drop her veggie soup over his head.

They ate their meal in silence.Afterwards kasturi closed her eyes and rested her head against the window. And eventually fell asleep. Robbie noticed she had finally fell asleep for she kinda had a funny deep breathing pattern going.. he felt kinda cold so asked for 2 blankets and put one over her. Thinking to himself that the only good deed your ever getting out of me lady. He turned out his reading light and fell asleep himself.

Kasturi got up first with her head lying on something soo silky soft. She shook her head and wiped at her eyes. When she opened her eyes she saw that her head was leaning on the guy's shoulder. Thank god he was sleeping she jumped off of him disgusted with herself…uggg… she got up and went to the washroom to wash up. When she got back she noticed that the guy was up already, and looking like he'd just walked out of a magazine, god how I hated guys that look perfect all the time no matter what. How unfair was mother nature sometimes giving some guys way to much and other nothing at else…

Robbie saw her coming out and got up for her and she passed him and said down. Robbie continued to check his messages on his phone, completely ignoring her.

The Plane began its decent into Heathrow Int. As the plane taxied to a stop. Everyone started to get up and collect their stuff. Kasturi grabbed her handbag and walked off never looking back.

Robbie being the slower one of the two took his time for his stop over was for 3 hrs. As he was leaving he noticed the girl had dropped her passport holder on the floor by his feet. She was in such a hurry that she must not have noticed. He picked it up and walked off after her, hoping to catch her.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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reserved!

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Dii! I've been the first to comment for all 3 parts! 😃 I feel SO special! Haha

You know what? It's so much fun reading Dastak, it has some sort of secret enery boost.. lol! Everytime I read it, I get so excited! I like it SOOO much- it's so awesome breaking free from the actual show, and reading something so new and fresh!

HAHHAAHAHA 😆 I think I started crying for laughing at how Kasturi breaks Robbie's 3 rules! Teehee, I loved how she nicknamed him Mr. 3 rules! 😆 What's he gonna call her?

I somewhat feel bad for the other passengers, I mean it must've been a scene to watch RoKa argue! lol

But you know what? Robbie's a real sweetheart! He tucked her in? AWWWWW! I wish she were awake to see it! But how can someone forget their passport like that? I hope Robbie doesn't decide to take advantage of the moment! lol

I'm really REEALLY looking forward for the next part! Will he find her? My god! So many questions! PLEASEEE UPDATE SOONER THEN SOON PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

-- Your Sunshine

Edited again:

Hahaha her boyfriends a sumo wrestler! LOL I cant believe he fell for it! I can imagine it all. Ka-Ro hand in hand- then comes Kas's ex boyfriend the sumo wrestler and he tries to squish Robbie- but Robbie takes a pin and disinflates his stomache!! 😆

Edited by mimi0295 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
yipeeeeeeeeeeeeee i m the second one🥳🥳 🥳

Now dear i kno sumtimes i c robz and feel how can god be so rude to others. giving everything to one. Now datz not nice. but datz ok coz its a visual treat for us.

Robz drinking just to irritate kas 😆 .oh dear!!! thatz so boyish. even my classmates do hings which irritate the girls most. i guess it is a typical male characterstic. 🤣

poor robz got a slap. koi baar nahi we will not let the news spread hereand there. 😆

So sweet of robz to cover her wid a blanket thats a soft side of robz.how sweet 😳

I think now robz will help kas by giving her passport bak to her. a perfect gesture.

The story is getting intresting as it is proceeding forward. Way tooooo gud.Keep on rocking!!!!!! 👏

Luv SUVI 😃
Edited by Super Kool - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
Yay Dii next part is up! 😃

Dii the parts in this FF are short and sweet im totally loving it! 👏 👏 👏

Oh dear more knokh jokh 😆 😆
loved the Ego line by Kasturi its hilarious 🤣 🤣 he forgot to check it in 🤣 🤣 will use that line if i meet someone like Robbie from Dastak on my flight next week 😉 😆

Kas has annoyed him enough it was Robbies turn now 😆 😆 Robbies lines about her BF were so funny 😆

cant wait for these two to fall head over heels in love with each other 😳 😉

So Robbie looks like a model even when hes just woken up 😍 😍 😉

interesting to see how and if he cathces up with her 😳 their paths are going to keep crossing now arnt they Dii 😉 😆

Great going Dii.....thanks for the read 😳

Kay
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50

RESERVED😆

Robbie is not less than Kasturi😆😆

My poor Robbie got a slap from his lady love😉 umm going to be lol😆

He is so sweet he put the blanket on her😳

Heathrow Airport😉 hmmm interesting😆 i hope the flight go delay😆 so they can go to see the bridge, big ben and most important thing ME lolz😆

umm dii can you plz tell them to wait😆 so i can give them a big hug 🤗lolz😆

dii it was a short part😭 but awesome👏👏👏

plz continue soon😃

Edited by *princess*15 - 17 years ago

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