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Posted: 17 years ago
#21

QUOTE=PrInCeZz07]Ok wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww robina dii

hey hummmy soo sorry sweetie for the late reply, i was working in my part of whispers... [


uve started a new FF ok am i dreamin?????
another FF of yours. wowwww am i luky or wat im going hopefully be able to read it.

nope you aint dreaming 😆 but i really hope you like the new fanfic... see this fanfic is a bit different cause kasturi is going to be a more agressive person... and i'm the lucky one cause now i get to read double your comments which i have a blast adn luv to read sooo much, 😳


BTW u knw wat pleaseeeeeeee dnt stp with whispers thats such a gr8 FF i jus totally luv dt.
Ure 2 gud 😆 😆 😆

okay i wont stop whispers yet,😳 and thank you sooo much Hummy for all the support and words you have given me.. i dont really know how to say what they mean to me....🤗


Ok robbie a business man thats kul n divya hmm a spoilt brat, must be having a bro like robbie
Ok Kaushalya and JP divorced wowww n kasturi lives in canada thats kul
aww kasturi's going back afta 8 years wowwwwwwwwwww 😆 😆 😆 kasuhalya dnt wory kasturis 21 not 6 years old lolz

lol robbie again a business man..🤔 dont know much about rock stars find it hard to write about their attitudes..😆

hope the humour stays alive in this fanfic.!!!

😆😆e right totaly nn d gal who gave him d finger with the beautiful hair is kasturi obviously 😆 i thnk
Ok Robina dii congratz on this FF n u got a fan of this FF 2
Its kul n i lyk d beginin of it
so keep up the gr8 work
👏

i will really try to get you too feel the same for this fanfic!! tons of thanks hummy.. loads of luv right back at yah!!! diiii




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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *princess*15

WOW dii youv started another FF and its so cool👏

hey thanks maniiii, for the late reply!!!

but only time will tell how this fanfic goes... ummm dont know.... kinda nervous about it..🤔

But dii dont stop Whispers in Wind😭 that FF is just great👏dont stop WIW(Whispers in Wind) EVER😭
Divya spoil brat haha just like Robbie in serial well he used to lolz

awwww maniiii your sooo sweet to say that about wiw 🤗 i hope i can endear dastak to you as well...and yup divya is the mega brat.. in this one!!!😆

I think Robbie is a decent 😆punctual😆 that kinda guy😆 afterall hes a buisbess man😆 and all buisness men are like that😆 lolz

ha lol, your right,!! this is the problem you'll know my writing habits i dont think i can surprise any of you😳

Kausi and JP divorced lolz😆

Why Kasturi lives in Canada😭 why not in Britain 😭😆

okay if i ever write a 3rd fanfic i promise to base it from Britain...😃

That Guy is Robbie i think😕 but 1 ques does he live in Canada as well😕 or in India😕

nope he's from India..

Ok now let me remind you again😆 do not stop WWI😡😆 its the best FF in the world😃 lolz😆

YESSS maam...promise i wont stop WWI without your approval..😆thank soo much for all the wonderful support adn love you have given wwi and meeee.. i'll never forget it EVER!!luv you loads maniii 🤗 diiiiiii

Continue soon your both FF's😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kay

Diiiii another FF from you 👏

yup i'm back to bore you some more😉😆

I was so surprised to see your name besides this post....for a second i thought 'noooooooo Diii is going to end Whispers ' 😆 but im glad you will carry Whispers on for longer......you know so many of us are so attached to the story and the charactors (especially Robbie from Whispers 😉)

awww Kayyy, it warms me inside out that so many of you have welcomed Whispers into your lives... i'm soo humbled.. it soo grounds me man...😳🤗I really hope i can recreat that feeling here...wish your diii luck, i know i'll need it...😃

Im looking forward to reading a different style of FF from you 😃

i'm really going to try to keep it simple lets see if i can do it..


Already like the setting of this one it sounds interesting 😉 Kas showing the middle finger to.............Robbie i guess 😛 😆
i want to give kasturi more attitude. lol and make robbie's life fustratiing...😆
Great start 👏
Carry on soon Diii! 😃
thanks for sticking with me kay... cant tell you what that means to meee...luv youuu loads diiiiii
Kay

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh wow Robina.........Another FF!!! 😃
The start sounds very promising and interesting!!!! And I love the title too!!
Do update as soon as possible, I would love to read this!!

hiya Prazs... yeah, i have a whole bunch of small ideas i want to piece together.. into Dastak.. and i'm so glad you found the start promising, for i will be trying to keep it simple..hope i can pull it off...😳 and hey thanks for luving the title, your support and kind words means sooo much to me, i dont have to tell you how briliant i think you are as a writer.. and your comments have always been such pleasure to read.. thanks for staying with me... means the world to me...luv robina🤗

nice part..different than storyline..
I like title..i never read your whispers Ff but heards about you are good writer..first part i really enjoy..
waiting for next part..

hiya Pop nice to see a new reader... really hope you like the story... and i'm glad the title was appealing.. hey no problem if you havent read Whispers that might actually work in my favor cause then i can surprise you more...with my crazy ideas...lol...and thanks for the comments POP... take care adn will update soon..

robina😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wat kasturi gave robbie finger 😲 so, kas lives in canada, cool. i see some very diffent things going on in this ff. it was a very nice starting. keep updating it. i liked the character sketch, very different from the serial. keep it up di.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Herman_4u

wat kasturi gave robbie finger 😲 so, kas lives in canada, cool. i see some very diffent things going on in this ff. it was a very nice starting. keep updating it. i liked the character sketch, very different from the serial. keep it up di.

love
harman 😛

hey herman... yup kasturi is very brassy adn sassy in this fanfic.. very different from whispers...and i'm glad you like the character sketch, i wanted to write something different..but lol, sometimes i find it hard to write in a different style.. oh well lets see how it goes....😳

luv diiii

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2: destinations

Kasturi bought a recent magazine of Belle as she waited for her plane to board. She sat down and started to read about the latest fashions on the ramps of Europe.

Further down 8 seats, a younge man of East Indian decent was seated reading GQ (Gentlemen's Quarterly) when his blackberry rang and he picked up recognizing the number saying:hey cutie!!

Divya: bhaiya flight time pe hain ya nahin?

Robbie: haan baba bilkul time pe hain, see you in 17 hrs.

Divya: aapne meri shopping ka list purrah kiya yah nahin?

Robbie: woh actually Divs mm khareedha tha ,lekin I'm only allowed 2 pieces of luggage toi thora samaan mein rehegaya sorry….

Divya: kya?? Noo bhaiyyuuu, aub kya fayyadha ke aap Robbie Saberwal hain, jab ithna bhi nahin kar sake meri liya. How could youuuu!!!!! Ohhh jaaou mein aap koi lenay airport nahin aarahi hoon.

Robbie laughs at his kid's sisters childness and says: kya, divs..aasai kaasai chaalegya!!! Mein ghar 2 maheena ke baad aaraha hoon.. Aur agar tum mujhe leyneh nahin aayi to phir mein waqui mein tumhara samaan chod doongha yahaan par..

Divya: ohhh your too much, aap ki chernay ki aadat kab jaayegi? Ugggg…

Robbie: jub tum baari hojaougi..Acchai yeh bataaou ke mom mera liya kya khaana banaa rahi hain?

Divya: woh actually bhaiyyu, mom zaraa busy hogayi hain to issliya bahaar se khana bana ya hain .

Robbie really down cause he wouldn't be getting a home cooked meal, god how he missed home, and his family. They were his reason for pushing himself. To be the best that he could be for them.

Robbie heard the announcement of Air India Flight 007 will now be boarding their firstclass passengers.

Robbie says: okay divs mama koi meri pyaar dey denah, and tell her I'll be home soon..luv you kiddo..

Divya: bhaiyyu, suno..but the line went dead. Divya felt bad about lying to her brother, but he was just so fun to tease. And besides he shouldn't have lied about my stuff..ufff, forever teasing me…

Alaanah walked in and said: Diya bhaiya ka phone tha?

Divya: haan keh raha tha ke woh 17 ghantey mein poonchen gay.

Alaanah getting ready to leave for an inauguration party for the new Cancer wing for Pediatrics Robbie had just got built. Robbie had been invited but since he couldn't make it she and Puchky were attending on his behalf.

Nikhal walked in wearing a tux, and said: tayyar hoi alaanah, toi phir chaalein..?

Alaanah: haan..bye Divya.

Divya staring at Nikhal not really ever warming up to him for some ungodly reason she just didn't like him.said: have a great time.

Meanwhile back at the airport:

Robbie had been seated in his firstclass leather chair with a small screen in front of him and sipping his champagne glass. With his laptop open checking his email. When a girl bumped his arm with her bag and his champagne spilled on to his shirt.

Robbie: geeze lady watch where you swing your bag.

Kasturi: ooopps so very sorry sir…

Kasturi looked down at the guy and realized it was the man that she had given the finger to, she looked away as soon as she realized.

Robbie looked up and saw the back of the younge lady, same type of silky long hair…and wondered if it was the very same that gave him the finger earlier…and he shook his head…thinking what an odd coincidence. He asked for some soda and tried to wipe off the champagne spot.

Kasturi walked up to row 18 C and found it taken. And she turned around and asked the air hostess where she was suppose to sit, on the man's lap?

Man: I don't mind if you don't. and he winked at her..

Kasturi; pervert…and yes I do very much mind!!!

Air Hostess: so sorry for that mess up, and she asked the man for his boarding pass, he showed it and his said 18 C as well.

Air Hostess: well it would seem as though we have a double booking.. Let me see what I can do for you..

The Air Hostess comes back and informs kasturi that she will have to sit in first Class because of the double booking.

Kasturi really thrilled with her luck says: ohh no problem…lead the way.

The Air Hostess lead Kasturi to First Class and her new seat.

Kasturi had the window seat and she had to say excuse me to the man sitting on the isle. Robbie looked up to see who said excuse me cause he never liked sitting next to anyone. It was why he travelled first class, always requesting that no one sit next to him, Robbie had a rule about personal space, no one gets in it. Period.. He hated people getting to close to him.

Robbie said: Excuse me? Is that an apology for dropping champagne on me earlier?

Kasturi: what? NO, I didn't drop anything on you.. your mistaken.

Robbie: yeah and the world isnt round right?

Kasturi: listen i need to get over you to sit down so could you get up so I can sit down please?

Robbie: NO cause that is not your seat.

Kasturi: what? Listen buddy that's my seat okay, so now move or loose it!!

Robbie: I requested no one get the seat next to me. That's how I know its not your seat. And don't make a scene and go back to third class where you belong.

Kasturi: excuuusee meeee, but who are you to tell me what class I belong to ????

Robbie: its pretty obvious. And he shrugged his muscular shoulders.Kasturi noticed the tight bunch of muscle and wondered what made her notice something so stupid..and she walked away, looking for the airhostess.

Kasturi came back with the airhostess and she informed Robbie that due to double booking kasturi was being bumped into firstclass and since the flight is full this is the only seat available.

Robbie: oh really he said raising an eyebrow? Imagine my bad luck. And he got up and let kasturi through as she passed him her hair swept his face and it smelled very fruity. It totally got on his nerves and irritated him, Robbie hated women that smelled sweet..uggg…

All settled in Kasturi took out her book she was reading her fav. Author's recent book Judas Strain.

Robbie turned and looked at her for a couple of seconds and then went back to typing on his laptop.When the announcement to put away all electronic gagets.

Kasturi looked at him putting away his blackberry, his laptop and his blue tooth head set.

Kasturi laughed out loud.

Robbie turned towards her and said: are you laughing at me?

Kasturi: yeah I am, are you a electronic junkie? Or a electronic salesmen?

Robbie: Junkie? What does that mean?

Kasturi: an addict..

Robbie shook his head and gave her a rude look, and didn't bother to answer her. She was so infuriating. And no one had ever talked to him that way. People always handled him with a lot of care. Especially women.. they loved to capture his attention. But this girl was out right making fun of HIM??

Robbie turned back and said okay since I have to sit next to you I want you to understand 3 rules…

1. And with his hand drew an imaginary line and between them and said don't come near my space okay.

2. Don't talk to me

3. Don't look at me

Got it?

Kasturi staring at him like he was some weirdo, said: are you for real? I mean seriously what is your problem. Do you have some psychological problem?

Robbie laughed out and said: No but I can assure you that you do.now tell me do you understand the rules, are the simple enough for you?

Kasturi nodded like a child(sarcastically and stuck her tongue out and looked away. )

Robbie breathed out deeply saying: its going to be a looong flight home.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh my god Dii! Haha , I LOVED this part! It's so fresh, and full of jokes! My god- I love Kasturi already, and Robbie "I can't stand women" 😆 I have a feeling that I'm going to be enjoying this to the fullest extent!

I love your writing skills dii, comes out so natural! Unlike me, who has to look through dictionaries, and thesaurases to make a sentence come out right! How do you do it? Give me some tips dii!

And it was AMAZINGLY cute, Robbie and Divya! Ahww! See, he's not a bad guy at all! I'm looking forward to more of the borther-sister relationship! Haha Alaana and her Putchky! How does she come up with these names? It's so funny how she calls poor Nikhil that!

Oh and how awesome is this! RoKa get to sit beside each other!! AHWWWWW!!! Robbie dear, it's definately going to be a LOONG flight,but you're going to discover something! *hint

I LOOOVE them! LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEEE them! In whispers, RoKa are so serious and comitted, here they are funny and full of themselves! LOL omg! I especially loved how Kasturi's hair his his face, and his reaction! Normally I would expect "She smells so good, blah blah" But he's like "I hate people who smell nice" 😆

His rules made me laugh out LOUD!

1. And with his hand drew an imaginary line and between them and said don't come near my space okay.

Teeheee! What a bum! Imaginary line! 😆

2. Don't talk to me

Ahww! Robbie!! Don't be so mean! I hope she's a chatterbox! MWAHAHA

3. Don't look at me

😲 How can you say that! Aren't you a bit too good looking 😛 😳

All in all dii- that was FABULOUS! So youth oriented, and I enjoyed it to the CORE! Haha, keep it up! You're a writing wonder!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh my god Dii! Haha , I LOVED this part! It's so fresh, and full of jokes! My god- I love Kasturi already, and Robbie "I can't stand women" 😆 I have a feeling that I'm going to be enjoying this to the fullest extent!

OMG mimiiiii, what are you doing up soo late??? lol your comments always leave me smiling like a duffus, and plus i read them like 3 times before i reply cause you leave such warming in my heart... luv youuuuu🤗i'm so glad that you have a good feeling about this fanfic, cuase now i'm getting cold feet, wondering if i can pull it off..🤔

I love your writing skills dii, comes out so natural! Unlike me, who has to look through dictionaries, and thesaurases to make a sentence come out right! How do you do it? Give me some tips dii!

Mimii honestly your writing is wayyy beyound your years, and experience your writing always leaves me amazed at how beautifully it flows.. and your emotions in you writing always leaves me moved...and the only tip i could ever give you, is maybe cooking tips.. you dont need any help your doing awesomeeee all on your own...soo proud of you sunshine...😳👏

And it was AMAZINGLY cute, Robbie and Divya! Ahww! See, he's not a bad guy at all! I'm looking forward to more of the borther-sister relationship! Haha Alaana and her Putchky! How does she come up with these names? It's so funny how she calls poor Nikhil that!

lmao sooo true Puchkee was an amazingly funny nickname how does she come up with that, and whats funnier is how in god's name does she say it with a straight face!!!

i hope you like robbie adn divya' relationship...tooo

Oh and how awesome is this! RoKa get to sit beside each other!! AHWWWWW!!! Robbie dear, it's definately going to be a LOONG flight,but you're going to discover something! *hint

now thats soo cute, not yet Mimiii robbie has a loong way to goo till he can even look at kasturi without cringing..😆

I LOOOVE them! LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEEE them! In whispers, RoKa are so serious and comitted, here they are funny and full of themselves! LOL omg! I especially loved how Kasturi's hair his his face, and his reaction! Normally I would expect "She smells so good, blah blah" But he's like "I hate people who smell nice" 😆

ohh i'm soo relieved that you lovee roka here, cause like you said in whispers their soo comittmed (bang ON...😃) couldnt have said it better myself.. and here theirs alot of attitude that both of them will have to give up inorder to come together... and lol i'm soo happy you liked robbie's new attitude...😆

His rules made me laugh out LOUD!

1. And with his hand drew an imaginary line and between them and said don't come near my space okay.

Teeheee! What a bum! Imaginary line! 😆

hey seriously he's so lame..drawing lines...in the air...😆

2. Don't talk to me

Ahww! Robbie!! Don't be so mean! I hope she's a chatterbox! MWAHAHA

3. Don't look at me

😲 How can you say that! Aren't you a bit too good looking 😛 😳

All in all dii- that was FABULOUS! So youth oriented, and I enjoyed it to the CORE! Haha, keep it up! You're a writing wonder!

aww seriously i'm soo glad you find my writing different here cause i'm getting inspired from the youth around here adn wanted to write something more easy on the eyes...thanks soo much for such words of encouragement, cause seriously i'm really nervous about Dastak.. luv you laods sunshine...diiiiii

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome 😛

I can't believe that Robbie made a visible line.... between them.... 😆 and also made rules for her to follow.... I wish Kasturi said "why should I follow your rules when you aren't my boyfriend" that would have kept Robbie alert about Kasturi anyways its mind-blowing and please continue soon...

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Sincerely... Kashish 😳

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