Kismath konnection(FF) PART 7* pg 13*** - Page 10

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

ok wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hatchoooooooooooooo lolz😆
Hey Jaanu u updated 8th woder of the world..right😆😳
keep up the gr8 superb fantasic fabulous work up 👏
jaanu ure awesome aww that was so so so sweet jaan.. i'm all the more humbled.....😳 thanchooooooo
ok raunak soooooooooooooo busy and robbie with his concert preperations.sure... and they are NOT behind the girls😛 😆
i know they are so lucky all the girls including kassy to be with robbie
hatchoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo 😆 😆 😆 neva complain jaani..😉
ok wowwwwwwwww their all going goa i want 2 go 2 😆 no ways i'm letting someone drool on Ro at a vulnerable place like Goa😆
Ok will raunak fynd out who snt hm those leters. Or do i hav a feeling robbie wil 😕 hmmmm quiet a good gues.😃... lets see...😉
i duno now jaanu u hav 2 update nxt part soon i jus cnt w8 2 read it
kepp up the gr8 work
👏 thanx jaan and this means tons to me... lolz love u loead and tons of HATCHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Jaanu
Luv u loadz
Hummy

@Robina dii.. do take ur time😃

@mimi lolz.. take ur time... 😃 and byheart all the science😃 BEST OF LUCK👍🏼👍🏼

Originally posted by: sahib29

Jannuuuuu ..my little girl .. Hi Mannu dii...not mentining how much i missed u.... Thank god u r up....😳Finally maine teeno parts read kar liye 😃u r my sweeeeeet di.. thachoooo🤗

Teeno parts veryyyyy Nice and Beautifull written 👏😳..thanchooo dii that was a lil honour to me😳

part 4 ..nice part ..but am confused yaar ...robbie kastu ka janta hai ..and kasturi robbie ko nahi janti ?😕..yee kya panga hai bhai ?😆...yaa tu humhe kuch memory lost ki story dikha rahi hai ?😆,,....jaldi bata i can't waitttt no it is just thatRo met Kassy like u meet ppl on train but on a valentines day. And since Ro and i beleive that love needs just a micro second to spark Ro remembered Kassy all this years 😳and he tried finding more abt her but in vein😭

part 5 ...very beautifull and emotional part 👏...jo tu likhti hai lagta hai mujhe koi bata chuka hai 😭...😊mera bahut hi pyara dost ..jisse main bahut pyar karti hoon 😳...really dii... oh i am just back to back in tears on writing the party and u know why???really yaar tune bahut aacha likha hai emotional part ..👏thanx diiii😳 that part was really so hard and writing down ones emotion is harder than describing the worlds best ptrait😃

Jannu ur nandu kaka is too much 🤣🤣...apni age meh majnu reh chuke hai 🤣🤣...but i love him ..cos wo mere robbie ki help kar raha hai 😳he is Made by Jaanu Nak .. and u dont think i supply defected goods😆

part 6 ....small but nice part 😳...but u know mujhe bikul aacha nahi laga ki nanndu raunak aur robbie ke realation meh koi problem create kare ..muje bhi

but i know tu wo nahi karegi jo serial meh huya ..unki dosti ko kisi ki nazar na lage 😳amen and dont worry dii main hoona😳

goa trip ki wait hai jali likh next part 😳sure....😳

chal ab jaldi se next part likh main wait kar rahi hoon 😳

Manpreet

love u a lot and missing u too dii.. do slip in whenever u have time..😃

LOVES
JAANU

Pooja(Heer), Sapna(KT),Kanya(Kanya of KIT),Gauri(Gauri of KAA),Tanu(KGGK),Adithi(KGGK),Baby(BBAB),Simmy and Sonia.[last 5 are teens OK]

PART 7

All the guys are off to goa and they reach Ro's beach house by 7.00pm..

It is such a cute house that all the gurls were mermerised at once. Kannu needed a reson very urgently to hate it becos she is the one who'll neva fall for anything..let alone a house owned by Mr. Rockstar. (Lolz it's a beautiful view from the living room to see the sunset.. a cosy fire blazing and the crimson red sun covering itself up in the blanket of evening sea…)

They all were so tired for the night so they quietly ate dinner and went to bed looking forward to get up early and see the sunrise.

The lights were just popping out of the nest when Ro was disturbed from his sleep. At first he thought he just got out of sleep but then he understood it was something that hit him made him get up at 6.00 in the morning. Ro removed his black and white striped blisters and a paper tied to a stone fell on the off white carpet. Ro more than confused rubbed his eyes and scratching his hair got out, oput on his slippers took the paper and went to the window. It is obvious that someone threw in the paper through the window sill. Ro checked but none was in view. So he opened the paper and read…

" My heart is just waiting for u Raunak. U'll never know how much u mean to me. U R just my day, my night, my tear, my smile… my soul.

I've lived my whole life in your name, darling,

I love you so much; you are my love, darling.

Darling, what state has your love brought me to?

Even flower gardens now seem desolate.

All of my loved ones now seem to me like strangers.

I remain lost in thoughts of you.

People call me crazy, insane.

Without you...

it's impossible to pass this life, darling,

the length of life, my love.

Don't abandon this love...

Don't break the bonds of passion.

Darling, what state has your love brought me to?

Through the flood of tears streaming from my eyes,

I saw you in the moon and stars.

I burn in the fire of separation.

Now I pray by counting the rise and fall of your breath.

For your sake...

every atrocity of this world is acceptable to me, darling.

Every atrocity is acceptable, my love.

I've lived my whole life in your name, darling.

My whole life, darling…."

Ra I love u and only u.. And I know when my love is as pure as the sea here, u can never turn back to it…

FOREVER URS

MEOW.. J

Ro screamed the name Raunak which echoed straightly into Ra's ears and Nandoo kaka who was in the kitchen making sandwiches ran to Ro's room along with Ra. They rushed into Ro's room and saw Ro standing by the window with an open mouth at Ra.

Ra( 3.999/4 sleepishly) Wats the matter Ro? Why are u screaming in the early morning?

Ro: Oh yeah.. just read this lil beauty and mark my words u'll jump into the sea.

Ra took the paper from Ro and read it. He just gasped as he fininshed reading the letter. Nandoo kakka the lil dtective sprang to action.

Nak: How do u get it Ro?

Ro: Hmmm I was asleep and someone threw it in… I guess through the window.

Nak: Ofcourse.. none could have come in becos they could have place it on the table. Ok when did u get it.

Ro: Hmmmmm Just 2-3 mins before.

Ra: but all the girls are sleeping I hope. I didn't heard any voice from their room.

Ro: Idiot u are still sleeping and came up with ur pillow and I wud have been shocked if u had heard some noise.

NaK: that's right Ro. So someone is really in love and we can cut it short to the 5 girls. Ra just check if u can identify this handwriting.

Ra looks closely and shakes his head negatively.

Ro: But the girl is such a brainy lot. Look at the versus she had written.. Just wish I got such a letter for my own one day.

Ra: But how come this letter landed on u if its meant for me.

Nak: Simple.. she just made a mistake.

Ro: hmmm And no doubts she have a very fine aim. Ra beware man. Today it's a stone, and tomorrow u cant guess what it is.

They all laugh and suddenly the door bell rings. Nandoo kakka went to attend it and RoRa followed the way to kitchen. Ro was making some chocolate milk when Na kakka came in with a guy dressed in plane black jeans and white shirt and an overcoat.

Nak: Ro see who is here?

Ro turned and looked at the visitor and was really surprised.

"LAKSH" he said and and hugged the guy all grinning.

"how are u man? Where's uncle? Aunty and Giya and all the kids.. how are they all? Missed u too much man. Last time I came u went UP. U'd never guess how bored I was. Ok fine any new places this time….." Ro continued without a break and when he stopped for a breath Laksh started. This continued for quiet a time and after all the askings were done Ro introduced Laksh Punj as Ro's childhood friend and son of Narayan Punj. Narayan was Ro's dad's friend and is the one who looks after this home. Ro respects Narayan uncle and see a mom in Leela aunty. Ro have an orphanage in Goa for the differentially abled kids and orphaned old people.Leela aunty and Giya, Laksh's sis look after the institution. Laksh is a software engineer and Ro had to part him when laksh got a placement in UK.

By 9.00 all the girls were up and they (including Laksh) had the breakfast. The most popular dish was the lime juice which Ro made with his own hands while laksh did the squeezing. Ra buttered the bread while the girls ate as much as the could.

After all the cleaning was done by te girls esp kassy and Gauri, they sat down to discuss the plan for the day.

Laksh came up with the idea of having at his house. The girls readily agreed and so does Ra. All through the conversation the boys made no motion abt the anonymous letter. So at 10.30 the everyone got ready and rode to Laksh's home on bycycles. Cycling under the shades of trees enjoying the cool breeze through the less crowded street with a cool air ( and ofcourse Ro beside) made a splendid start for the girls. On the way they stopped at the beach side restaurant and had some fresh fruit juices and candies. They were all thoroughly exhausted as they reached Laksh's home by 12.00 and Ro inspite of being the tiredest went and touched Narayan uncles feet and took blessing. He hugged Leela anty and Giya and introduced all the others.

Narayan was so happy to see the happy, chirpy Ro once again and invited all the 'kids' in. Leela aunty made a mouth watering lunch for them with spcl sea food dishes and Ro's favourite Goan special shrimp paste. J

After lunch the girls had a hearty chat wit Leela aunty and Giya while the boys sat for a round of cards with Narayan uncle.

Suddenly Narayan uncle asked Ro, Ro do u had any news abt that UR girl?

All heads turned towards Ro………

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And there I leave u… Today I just was in a swing to write it down. I may update tomm too becos it happened to be a strike.

So do comment…

LOVE U ALL

JAANU

RESERVED 😆 *YAY* me first lolz😆

I love your descibing style its marvelous👏

OOO wat a suspense i cant predict anything😕 i thought the 5 teens are just fooling them😆 but now ROBBIE ummmm🤔

LAKSH OMG😲☺️😆

Dying to read the next part😆 phleez update soon😳

OMG jaanuuuu, i feel like i let you down, last time i posted my comments was on part 3!!! i'm soo upset at myself, i know last week i wasnt around much but to miss 4 parts to your fanfic, just should never have happened and unexcusable for me, your diii really has slacked off!!!🤢 soo soorry jaanuuuu.. i hope you can forgive me😭 well i'm back and will try my best to post my comments as you post the parts..😳🤗

Part 4:

Robbie was sooo cute totally mesmerized by kasturi sitting in the car...with her.. after five long years.. adorable... this is very suspenseful i cant wait for you to reveal it..

and what is this aub robbie butler ka kaam karaha hain, kas ka samaan uthara ha hain..😆 uffpyaar mein kya kya karna pardha hain..😆

SO adorable how nandu kaka told them to get out of robbie's room, i love his paritality toward robbie.. okay very short part. ohhh you know that question the girls asked kasturi if she saw SRK? i died laughing cause when ever i meet a person from Mumbai, thats the first thing i ask them tooo😆

Part 5

OHhh my God Jaanu this Kaka is the best character to date !!!! one i will remember for a long time to come, i love how he just says:I said nah Robbie baba I'm not seeing u for the first time in my life. I know evything.

nandu kaka is awesome too 😎 and robbie really needs him, kyun ka robbie bohut hi seedah hain yaar.. agar nandu nahin hota to robbie to kasturi ke sapana dheek dheek kar kush hota rehta.. aur tumhari story agah kabhin nahin bhaarti😉 awesome , Marvellous character Kaka is..👏👏 at least koi to hain robbie ka khayal rakhne wala..love it...👏👏aur ley charlie chaplin was a romeo once🤣 this is a classic line, i died laughing ufff my sides are hurting jaanuuu😡 you have the best humour i have read period... the gift to make others laugh thank you jaanu and god bless you always...😳

and what an entry robbie neh maara.. Jab we met ka song.. beautiful.. kasturi to gayiiiii😳

Jaanu i knew you were talented as a writer, but i never knew the depth of your ability to move a reader.. aaj pata chaala mujhe, OMG the way kasturi describes how death comes and takes someone away and leaves behind the sorrow and emptiness of life. had me just amazed.. your fantastic jaanu i'm just shocked at how well you described robbie's loneliness its just soo well done, i feel for robbie...more so then KP in the serial..thunderous applause Jannu.. you'v bowled over your diiii😳😭 uff Kismath Konnections is just soo heart touching...i love it...simply beautiful...and me too loves the color RED!! now i want to see if robbie takes on his responsibility of his father... poor robbie has missed his family sooo deeply, i really hope to see him happy soon.. please jaanu dont make him sad for long..

excellent and heart moving, made me cry jaanuuu😭

Part 6:

WOW robbie and kasturi after such a heart to heart with technically strangers totally realistic that they are ignoring each other, for after such an emotional breakdown i can totally understand.. bravoooo. very realistic...jaanuuu

and this Nan, what is her problem, Ronauk may work hard but so does robbie nah?? why does she have to cause interference btw ro and ra.. i loved how ronauk explained it ... i was like YEssssss way to gooo, ronauk told her that robbie is his brother sooo sweet...robbie is luck to have ronauk and nanduuuu😃

and finally goa trip, cant wait to read part 7 hope roka get friendly again.. and i loved how you wrote about Goa thank you for i knew nothing about such a beautiful place.. 😃 sound very rich in culture and big vactionion spot...

and the part was tooo short...😡😉

Part 7:

Jaanu you have such a gifted way of describing the most beautiful scenery, the imagery you use, the descriptive words take me to another world😍

OOhh kya suspense daala tum ne jaanu, i'm scratching my head trying to think who has written this deep love letter...??? ihope its not kasturi, i have a very bad feeling..

and jaanu i have enjoyed all the parts soo much they flowed beautifully, reading 4 parts together really made me wish that i could keep reading more.. so please do update soonnn i'll be waiting.. and if you can , pls pm me....

loads of luv.. and a totally die hard fan of kismath konnections..

robina diiii