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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: storyteller

robbie and kasturi going for dinner 😃 ... cant wait ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ nrasheed: jus read part 10....awesum again!!! 👏 👏 👏

thnx for telling me abt da statue...mite do sum research on it once ma exams r dun....oh n thnx for the gud luck 2!

bac to part 10: it was gr8....m guessing dat robbie was da one who bid for the portrait...jus to annoy kas. n see how much she wants/needs it....

i wish raunak n shivani were this good in the real story!...just watched today's epi. n was really disappointed in raunak...but i like him in ur story! 😛

ok...no need to tell u...update soooon...plzzz!!.....n if u can lemme know that u did...thnx!

bye..n keep up da brilliant work! 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

@mimiii i'm still waiting for you pm to tell me when your fan fic is starting....

@Pragalbha, i was biting my nails writing roka intial meeting... hats off to you for doing it twice... you have quite an imagination..👏 and thanks for the sweettttt words...😳

@Manuuu🤗🤗🤗 your back tumhari yaad aarahi thi... good to see you back... aur tumharah comments are sooo cute, yes robbie is for sure alot smarter then kasturi and shivani, aakhar ithna successful buisnessman hain😆 aur woh bathroom scene, mera baraah jee charaha tha ke roka ki pehla meeting bathroom main hoi, lekin phir luvstory to comedy banaaha paregha..😆

great to have you back...

@Paddy, i am thinking myself what i should do with devika.. should i or shouldnt i turn her negative... lets see kya hota hain... and paddy, your one sharp cookie...your right on about how can robbie buy his own auctioned item.. and you answered it well tooo...chaal i want you to write a fan fic. cause i know you have it in youuuu...

okay next part i'm gonna try really hard to make it longer....😃 and thanks for liking the ring... i have my eye one just like it😆

@farii, i luv your comments, so too the point... and yes dinner...i'm scratching my head here....roka's first date scene...

@shewts🤗🤗🤗 i was wondering when you'd come backkkkk, and so i puruposely worte ronauks' part hoping to get you interested..soo glad you like it... yaar. and thanks for all the words of encouragement, means the world to know you took time out of your busy schedule and read it...luv youuu robzsss

@rosyyyyy🤗🤗 hiya kiddooo, your sweet words of describing what i wrote and what stuck with you, leaves me speachless. and yes i'm wondering on how to get KP to know about his father, how he will react...wish me luck for i have to concenrate and come up with a way to get devika's reaction of knowing roka past, plus robbie and JP's showdown of the truth... thats gonna be tough...

okay good to know your all caught up... and your posts means the world to me luv diiiiiii

@manojisthebest okay i think your looking foward to the dinner date as well😃😃....??

robina...

Updated to reply to Starsmile: hiya, good to see you came back.. and your comments are a pleasure to read.. for me.... and good luck finding ondheen i've googled her to death and cant come up with the right spelling..i'll let you know if i come across her...😕

and i will foresure pm you when i update...

yup robbie is foresure gonna be playing games with kasturi for awhile... he's gotta whacked sense of humour in my fanfic...😆 sooo glad you liked part 10.. i thought it was a bit mundane but needed to help move the story forward...

havent seen today eppy, doesnt sound too good by what you just said.. yikesss...

robina😃

Edited by nrasheed - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 👏 great part again Robina 😃

Raunka being stuffed inside a locker during college days 🤣 🤣 🤣 the image just had me in fits 🤣 🤣 🤣

i wish i could do that to him now....lock the door and throw away the key 😆

Im glad Kas is slowly putting the pieces together about her past.......

RoKa candle light dinner........cant wait!! 😳 😳 😆

update soon! 😃

Kay
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Posted: 17 years ago

@kay your right ronauk has been a very very badddd boy recently i think thats why i thought of him being put into the locker... 😉 you read my mind!!!! hope to not dissappoint the candle light dinner,(thanks for the idea, i wasnt plaaning on the candle lite i had something else in mind.. but you've perhaps changed my mind😉😆)

alwasys a pleasure kay

robina😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
@kay and robbzzzz raunak in a locker with the key thrown away 😈 my sentiments exactly... 🤣

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Posted: 17 years ago
@ robina: it was my pleasue reading it!....keep writing...so far i think i luv ur ff da best...if not 2nd best...hehehe...

will b waiting to see the naugthy n fun robbie here.... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Robina i just read part 8, sorry for the late replying. the part was excellent. so finally kasturi escaped from robz bathroom 😆 the part so gud, the changing room scene was also well described. and i'm just waiting to read the next part. but ur doing a great job. please keep it up. on the week end. i'm gonna catch up with ur ff.

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Posted: 17 years ago
Robina diii my wishes r always with u 🤗 . I knw u really doing hard work for making this FF a wonderful one . Don't wrry di u will surely get wonderful ideas on how to reveal JP truth to Ro .
Thanx di for entertaining us like this and giving us some very good stuff to raed 👏 .

Keep up the good wrk diii 😃 👏 . We all r with uuuu 😳 . Beast of luck 👍🏼

Now update soonnn

Rosy
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Posted: 17 years ago

Recap, at the ball someone out bids kasturi for the Ondheen Portrait. The Saberwals and Shinghania's were seen talking..Ronauak proposes to Shivani who whole heartedly accepts...Robbie drives kasturi home and pursuades kasturi to join him for a dinner..

Part 11.

Kasturi walk into her house with a huge migrain she closed the front wooden door and leaned against it. trying to gain some inner strength against the storm raging inside her mind...just then a loud knock on the door made kasturi jump, dammit kasturi says what now and pulls the door open to see robbie standing there..

kasturi: Aub kya hain

Robbie: andhar aanah ke liya nahin kahogi😳

kasturi: Is ke liya mujhe phela aap koi mera ghar pe bulaanh hogay, aur mera khayal hain kai aap koi kiss ne nahin bulayah hain...right😡

robbie: OUCH....😆

Kasturi: jaaldi bakoi kya chaayai

Robbie :tum

kasturi: what 😡

Robbie: TUM aapna bag garhi main chordiya tha, toi main sooncha that was your way of inviting me in for coffeee😃

kasturi despite her headache and finding robbie the most infuriating man she has ever met found herself smiling..at him...😛 she shakes her head and laughs a little..and says: Robbie thank you for returning my bag, lekin raath bohut hogayi hain aur mera saar bohut duhkh raha hain, so please if you dont mind,

robbie about to say he understand and leave is interupted by Ajay...

Ajay:kaun aayah hain kasturi

kasturi: koi nahin bhaiyu and she motions with her eyes for robbie to leave nowwwww😡

Ajay: kasturi dont be rude, hello i'm Ajay Saberwal and you are...

Robbie: Hi I'm Robbie Raichand. and i just dropped kasturi off from the ball. i was just heading out...

Ajay:aap aasai kaasai jaa sakthai hain, kasturi ka dost😉 please come in and join me for some coffee...

Robbie:if you insist i accept..and robbie takes kasturi's hand off the door and puts it to her side and walks in smiling at her..while kasturi glares at him....

kasturi thinking to herself if looks could kill robbie should have died a thousand times already🤢

Robbie and Ajay shake hands and sit down on the burgandy chaises.

Nandu enters bringing coffee, and sets it down on the coffee table, and askes kasturi: Aap ke liya coffee laou

kasturi looks at nandu and her features soften up naturally, for kasturi has always cared for the man who has taken such good care of her and her family. and says: nahin nandu main khud le lungi..thank you, aur bohut dheer hogayi hain aap jaakeh araam kareley...

Kasturi excuses herself and goes upstairs to change.

Ajay mean while askes robbie: so robbie sunah main aayah hain that your here to buy out some companies, so should Saberwal Enterprises be worried

Robbie: saahi kahan ajay and yes in all honesty i am looking into all the Businesses that are in the Hotel buisness.. size isnt a prerequisite..

Ajay is a bit taken back by robbie's blunt answer.. and doesnt quite know what to say...so he says: are you saying we might be looking at a corporate take over😕

Robbie: all companies are vulnerable for a takeover if they are profitable enough...

as they are talking kasturi walks down in her pink sweat pants in her hair in a pony tail..

robbie sneeks a glance at kasturi and thinks she's soo beautiful without make up...😍

just then Ajay askes robbie:aap chini kitneh letah hain coffee main

kasturi out of no where says ek..

Ajay is left staring at kasturi along with robbie...

Kasturi thinking where did that come from...and says: well i over heard him this evening..(shes lying and robbie and her know this and robbie looks at her with a smirk on his face saying liarrrrr)

ajay feels there something totally not right here and is about to say something when his cell goes off, he looks at it and realizes its ronauk calling, so he excuses himself and walks out of the living room..

kasturi and robbie are left staring at each other

Robbie breaks the uncomfortable silence by saying: so hows the head ache now

kasturi: i took a pain killer the worst is over now.

robbie: so tell me kasturi why is it you feel the need to see the statue Ondheen

Kasturi not comfortable with where this is going, wonder should i tell him... Ohh what the hell so she takes a deep breath and says : its a looong storyyyy

Robbie says: i luv long stories.

kasturi give him a pained smile and carries on: 4 yrs ago i had an accident in Europe, and i have partial amnesia..so i cant really remember much.. yet recently fragments of my memory are coming back and Ondheen, i mean the statue ONdheen was part of my memory. so i thought that if i were able to see her and hold her it might trigger something, anything and she shurgs her small shoulders out of sheer fustration of her situation...

Robbie soo wanting to hold her and comfort her tell her about the magical time they shared together, but he cant.. kasturi needs to remeber on her own, and if she is never able too, then perhaps robbie can build a new life with kasturi...with new memories...waasahi main guzrah huwa pal wapas to kabhi nahin aatah..

Robbie: I'm sorry that you cant remember a partof your life kasturi.. but the mind is an amazing thing.. i'm sure if its meant to be you'll remember..when and if the time is right.

kasturi looking at him and the sincerity in his voice is very soothing to her...and says:oops forgot about the coffee

robbie: thats okay most of the time i drink it cold anyway...for something is always coming up..

kasturi toi aap ek he chamach sugar leh teh hain

robbie: i use to, but now adays i take it with half a spoon of sugar...robbie remembers a time when kasturi luved making him her horrible coffee,she always put too much coffee grains and never enough water.. but he drank it like nectar..😳

kasturi added the sugar and cream and handed it to robbie and their fingers touched, kasturi felt like she touched a live current,they drank in silence..

Ajay mean while couldnt believe what ronauk was saying to him..

ajay: no bloody way yaar!! are you serious you proposed tonight

ronauk totally in bliss says ohhh yeah i sure did...and she accepted, can you believe it, shivani said yes...

ajay: man we have to celebrate this tomorrow night the 3 of us... my treat...

ronauk: foresure buddy... alright i'm off...g'nite

ajay, i'm soo happy for you rouank... you got the girl of your dreams...congrats bro😃

they hange up and ajay walks back as robbie is getting up ready to leave.

robbie: ajay it was nice meeting you and thanks for the coffee kasturi.

kasturi: so i'll be by your office tomorrow, kitnah bajeh aayou

robbie: make it around noon please i've got a busy morning..good nite

ajay and kasturi follow robbie to the door the guys shake hands and robbie departs....

kasturi: okay bhaiyu i'm off to bed bohut hi dheer hoi chuki hain.good nite.

Ajay: hold it right there kasturi aur mujhe batahoui what is up with you and robbie

kasturi: mm kya matlab

ajay: ohhh okay tum batanah nahin chaati hoi thats fine.. good nite kasturi, i'll wait till when you feel comfortable telling me.. one thing is foresure robbie raichand is a dangerous man aur mera kaha maanou us se dhur he raho..

Kasturi feel very guilty about not confiding in Ajay. but ajay was right robbie is truly one dangerous man...and she shuts the lights off and goes to her room...and has the worst sleep ever, for every time she dozed off she would see herself drowning and a hand reaching to save her...

Next morning, Saberwal house...

As Kasturi was in her room getting dressed in a pink salwaar kameeze with a chiffon duppata. when she heard a knock on her door, kaun hai, kasturi called.

Devika says its me kas, kya main anthar aasak thi hoon.

Kasturi: haan maa aajaoi.

Devika enters wearing a grey skirt and a silk maroon blouse..with a string of pearl necklace around her, she looks at kasturi very lovingly and says:Kasturi tum jaanti hoi i see alot of me in you. strong willed, loyal to the ones you luv..there's so many things i luv about you kas..

kasturi : mooom i luv you too. and goes and hugs her.. then they both sit on kasturi's bed. Devika says why do daughters have to grow up so quickly.. kasturi tum ne shaadi ke baareh main sooncha hain.

Kasturi: mama main jaanti hoon you want me to get married, lekin maa jab aap jaanti hain a part of me is missing is it fair to join my life to someone else without being complete, kya aap nahin samjhe thi hain yeah dhokah hoga

Deviak looking at kasturi and shakes her head slightly and says: Kasturi i agree isliya joi main tumse khena jarahi hoon us baath koi samjhne ki koshis kaaroi, please promise me you hear me out with an open mind and heart, waada karo.

kasturi: okay mom waada..

Devika :kaal raath meri baath nadini se horahi thi, and unnoneh tumhari aur ronauk ki baath chaalayi hain.. and i'm very interested kasturi, ronauk bohut hi aachai larkah hain yeh to ajay bhi battah saktah hain, aur tum dono ek dussrah koi bohut hi aachi tarah se jaanteh hoi..Ronauk knows about your parital amnesia. its a match made in heaven.. 😍 abhi jawab muth denah kasturi, take as loong as you need to think it through, tumhari zindgai ka sawaal hain, lekin kasturi kabhi na kabhi tum hain shaadhi to kareni hogi, agar tum hain koi pasand hain to mujhe bathoui main tumhar papa se baath karungi.

kasturi soo shocked, doesnt know what to say.. so she says i'll think about it mom..

devika puts her hand on kasturi's head and says i have full faith in you kasturi you'll make the right decision...okay i'm off to work see you at the hotel soon..

luv you kasturi and hugs her and leaves...

Kasturi sits there totally shocked and cant believe her rotten luck. great this just keeps getting better and better she says to herself and kicks her foot against the brench, and yells out in pain...

Mean While robbie is sitting on his desk thinking about kasturi, and wondering if he should tell her about their shared past..could he handle her rejection.. ohh what a tangled web we weave..

Anita walks in and says: good morning robbie how are you.

robbie very well thank you. .and did you have fun last night

Anita : i did, but i have to tell you kasturi Saberwal she doesnt seem all there,

Robbie squints his eyes at this and says: kya matlab hain tumhara anita

Anita: Kasturi seems like she's hiding something...and when i met her in the bathroom, she seems to totally dislike you. i think its gonna be great fun to bring down the Saberwals... and speakin of that here is the info on Mr. Bhatt, he lives in Mussori and his house is pretty much unreachable by car. you'd have to take a helicopter up to his helipad...

Robbie: Anita i'd perfer you keep your personal remarks about kasturi to yourself. i neither need or want to hear what you think kasturi thinks about me. okay

Anita taken back by the rude tone in robbie's voice. says: fine..and drops Mr. bhatt's personal info onto his desk and walks out..

robbie upset tries to concentrate on work but is unsuccessful.. dammit he says...

at 12 pm kasturi walks into robbie's office and robbie smiles at her..

robbie gets up to greet her and she shakes his hand and he offers her tea , coffee, what not.. and kasturi says no thank you i'm here to see the statue.. and i'll leave after that...

Robbie says sure come into the penthouse i thought you'd might like to sit with it alone... and he opens the connecting door to his living quarters and kasturi walks in and stares at Ondheen for the first time...

all of assuden kasturi imagines Ondheen her hands and she's running, and being persued by someone.. she all of assudden see darkness around her and faints....

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