Whispers in Wind (the game)Pt. 40PG 115 - Page 11

Robina...just the loved the part to bits! It was fabulous! 👏You have brought Robbie and kasturi's feelings when they first meet very natural. they are bonded for life and will def. feel it! 😳 I loved the dialogues you gave them...no beating around the bush ...straight to the point! 👏 thats the way it should be as it looks so real! I am glad that you have made robbie to have doubts about her amnesia. Good that he is not misunderstanding her! It makes him so endearing! Poor kasturi...sh gets all my sympathy here unlike the show! 😆

Chal cant wait for the next part....when are u posting!

Robina part 9 was great! 👏

The emotions between the two have been portrayed so well 😳 😳 there love seems really deep..... 😳 😳

Kasturi recognises his presence and touch....thats a good sign then 😳

Again you stopped at a gripping moment 😆 😆 update soon! 😃

Kay

Robina diiiiiiii 👏 I wanna see your literature teacher.How can she put THE BEST MYSTERY CREATER in grade B.😡Dii its ............................... words fail for me dii..It just awesome.I love mystery and adventure books.And right now u are my favorite writer.Also dii you have another fan, Radha.She is my classmate.But love THIS FF the most.She is sending this to you 🤗🤗🤗

OK dii Update soon before my heart beats blast away the ribs....

Its sooo gripping😃

jaanu

read all parts Amazingggggggg,Brilliant superb ;holds attention of d reader & m short of words & yeh dil maange moreeeeeeeee ;plz update soon ;eagerly waitin…!!

Part 2 starts wid stock market ….u explained it brilliantly ! 👏
thought my 21 yr old daughter saw a pic of him and said he's a bomb, now tell me what does that mean?? Haha !! gd one ! 😆😆
Anita & shivani Pas cool !
D dilemma kasturi is facing ;nt able 2 narrow down on a guy she wants 2 marry ;nt able 2 explain it 2 her mom ;d 4 yrs of her life which she has no memory of & her efforts of unlocking those 4 yrs ;very well expressed!! 👏⭐️⭐️

Gd one --kasturi did you loose even more weight? bohut kamzoor hoka aayi hoi?(devika such a doting mom ;luv her lik dis 😳)
woh issliya mama, kunki wahan naanduu ka khaanah nahin miltah hain, in baarh baarh hotels main...infact jitnah mengha khaanah uthanah hi kaam khana hota hain plate par.. and she winks at nandu! 😆😆kasturi wid a sense of humour & all mom tell d same thing my mom & nani both kitni kamzor ho gayi clg mein kuch khati hai ya nahin ;d canteen food is bad !!😆

Wow pehi nazar😳 I listen to it daily while commuting via local trains ;my fav ;its music is better than d music of quarrels btwn 2 ladies !! 😆😆
JP –butler & Rob's dad & cant express it to him his fatherly luv ;his dilemma & fear is well –expressed too ! ⭐️
My poor Raunak 😳everyone is pulling his legs ;shivani kitna bhav khati hai & poor Alana no one pays attention 2 her but who can jhelofy her even if she is dressed in one of d costliest attire !! 😆
Devika's kashmakash very well put⭐️ -- Devika puts on her gray sweater that she had sewn when she was expecting kasturi, it was unraveling on the edges, and she thought to herself am i unraveling like this sweater? the decisions i have made are they about to tear the fabric of my family's life apart?wow 4 a change d bond btwn Puru –devika is so strong & filled wid luv ,trust & respect !! 👏

The scenes btwn RK Awesom ,beautifully written ; emotional & romantic & d background of folktale mak it more endearing ;evry scene of RK is soulful & u said u r nt good at romantic scenes I don't believe it ; ⭐️
D trial room scene was awesome too ;Rob listening 2 shiv-kas conversation & smiling & njoyin ;very cute !! 😳
Brilliant descriptions of sabharwal renovated home ;kas rooms;dresses ; d party ambience ;one can imagine it & d analogy btwn Rob's mask & Achillies of Greece for he was a Noble fighter/general, whose passion for a spartan women !
Robbie looked at kasturi and said hi.. may i have this dance.. I was waitin 4 dis 2 happpen !! gr8 robbie wat was he waitin 4 but luv dis Robbie who is so considerate ki kas ki condn bigad naa jaaye if he tells her d truth!!
D ending is brilliant too---d waves of thoughts goin thru kas's mind ;d watch ;d falshbac scene,d statue ,painting & d connection she is tryin 2 mak of all dis !!

U r too sweet dear thanks 4 d compliment😊 ;U & Pragalbha;both r such gd writers ki comments apneaap hi acche ho jaate hain !!
Yup I luv sidney's thriller novels ;I hv read Master of d game awesome ; do read it ;awesome piece of work ; I hvnt read ny suspense novel since ages but ur FF is filling dat void!! 😊

read Jaanu's comments ur literature teacher didnt hv d talent of recognizing d awesom writer in u ;B grade no way!!!!!!!!!! A+ is 4 u !!

Asalamalikum ! how are you yar? well must say you are a talented writer i really enjoyed it yar even i'm in luv with Robbie 😳 but a little more length would have made it fantastic! still very good and very well written, though!

or 1 thing more jo mai bhool gaye woh hai... Tittle(subject) i loved it... but jaldi jaldi parts post karo 😉

Take care,Allah negeban

robbzzzzzzzzzzzz... why did u stop at such a crucial part why why why ???? 😃 .. chalo juldi say likho naa next part ... I am loving robbie and kasturi... can just picture both of them in their new avtaar... 😳
love it absolutely...

Fari

:O Dii! How could you say that this part sucked? It was SOO GOOD! Definately worth the wait. I am awe-struck! Now I am definately writing a FF dedicated to you for being my inspiration! 😛

--Mimi

@krishiii thanks for the feedback, for after posting i was a bit uncomfortable with how it flowed.. thanks helped me alot...😃 and you have your money totally on the mark, you have robbie in this fanfic totally peged the way you said that the character's graph suggests he's menacing gave was sooo right...👏 maybe krishiii you should also consider writing a fan fic, for you know robbie's character inside out..and i will post soon.. hopefully by midnite...

@starsmiles wow a new reader, soo thrilled that you liked it stars... and sorry even i cant find the statue's name on the net, but i remember in greek mythology there was an Merlady.. called ON-DHEEN(thats how it is pronounced) and i still remembered her story.. it touched me deeply a loong time agooo...

and yes your right kasturi doesnt recognize robbie YET😉 Robbie is aware of kasturi's memeory loss, just he wasnt aware of the extent of it, till part 9..now that he knows let see what he does...to jog her memory.. 😃

thank you for staying up and reading it all, thats soo sweet of you and humbles me greatly, thanks a bunch, and i wish you all the best on your exams...lets hope no memory lapses for you..😆(that happened alot to mee in my exams😕)though my dad never bought that excuse...😉

take care and hope to keep you interested enough to stick with whispers in the wind...

regards robina

@RK 🤗🤗 great to know you liked it, i rewrote their part 2 times yaar till i was some what satisfied. But if your satisfied i'm satisfied.....and yes i like to the point type characters.....too..for i hate duplicity...like what happens in the show...

@Kay part 10 will be soon.. hopefully by your morning... and i hope you like it... i'm glad i was able to convey the right emotions btw the two.... took me a bit to get it right to be honest..😳

@Jaaanuuuu 🤗🤗 your soo sweet for keeping up with the fanfic even with school and all the work you must get, words fail to tell me how i feel for you...kiddo..

and @Radha,(very beautiful name) welcome and hope you continue to read and i hope i live up to your expectations... 🤗

luv diiii

@sonali you picked out all my fav. parts tooo.. we seem to have the same taste... 😳 seriously i too am always listening to pehli nazaar as well and i died laughing when you said it beat the 2 ladies aruguing..🤣 i pictured you pied btween two bickering ladies... soo cute.. and yup i think ever mother worries about her kids eatiing, doesnt matter what the age.😃 thats mothers for you right?

look forward to your feedback again, its always such a pleasure to read from youuu .... and i will foresure be looking for master of the game at my library...

again you praise makes my heart singgg...tra lala laaaaa

but your very genreous with your words..and very kind hearted as well..apprecieat every word you wrote...

take care robina

@wajiha Walaikum Asalaam. thank you for the comments and the length i cant help it yaar cause of the household chores and the kids, i wish i could make them longerrrr. i will defintely try my best.. luv reading your feedback.. thanks alot

Allah Negeban

robina

@Fariiiii glad your enjoying it.... and you like robbie's avattar suchiii, i'm glad for its initally took me along time to get use to it before i started writing my fanfic.. and okay i'll try not to end on a shocking moment yaar... try is the key word here...😉

luv robzs

Edited for reply to mimi: ohhh you better now write your fanfic otherwise i'll jamb your inbox with requests,. soo get writing asap.. cant waitttt.

diii

Hehe. I'll write one- but it wont be as good as yours...

Firstly I've got to learn how to stay committed too one topic. Otherwise my FF will make all the readers loose their minds- and I'll be known as the second Ekta.. 😕