Whispers in Wind (the game)Pt. 40PG 115 - Page 12

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Hehe. I'll write one- but it wont be as good as yours...

there is nooo way i'm buying that...😡 i know it will be awweessommmeeee....cuase it will be yours...

Firstly I've got to learn how to stay committed too one topic. Otherwise my FF will make all the readers loose their minds- and I'll be known as the second Ekta.

and look how successful she is even after playing with our emotions, we all still watch her shows..😕 so dont go underselling yourself...😃 diii

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Posted: 17 years ago
Robzi...jaldi post karo na...am waiting. 😆

Just wanted to tell you that I am really upset 😡 with you for depriving us all these months of such awesome writings! ab toh tujhe nahin chodenge! 😉 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh Robina Dii. You can convince someone into anything! Hehe, I thought I was the only person who could talk their way outta everything- but you sure beat me in this case.
I'll write one.... I'll let you in on the progress 😆

--Mimi
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Posted: 17 years ago
Robina...........part 9 was awesome!
Both their emotions were shown beautifully!!! I felt so bad for both Robbie and Kas!!! 😭
Aahhhh I hope they become close again and maybe fall in love all over again!!!!

Great job dear!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Recap: Robbie and kasturi finally meet at the ball, and robbie realizes that kasturi still doesnt remember him...

Kasturi has flashbacks of her past upon seeing the picture that is being auctioned off is of Ondheen.. and now realizes the women drowning in her flashbacks is her and the person that saves her is robbie.

Part 10...

Kasturi feels very light headed and just then ronauk comes up behind her and says :kasturi kahaan chaali gayi thi tum? yaar kuch karo, mein aur Alaana koi bardaasht nahin kar sakta? help me she's suffercating meee with her overt passes all night long.. if she pats me on the butt one more time, i'm gonna sick Ajay on her with a Sexual harrassement case😡 ewwwee

Kasturi trying to make sense of her last flashback and dealing with what ronuak has just said.. says: kya ronauk, tum hain patah hain nah alaanah has always had a next door neighbor crush on you.. just chill and deal with it..

ronuak staring at kasturi like she has tomatoe on her face says: what kya? i didnt know that about alaanah.. ajay ne khabhi nahin battaya mujhe...geeze yaar main ne toi tum dono behnoi koi aapna behnai maanah hain... and you know i've luved Shivani since college days.. when you both would tease me endlessly...😍

Ronauk says: uff here come Alaanah again.. lets go take a seat for the actions and leads Kasturi to the front row.

kasturi still staring at the Ondheen Portrait she cant help it, the painting is riviting it looks like shes been carved into ice.. kasturi decides to bid for it...and raises her paddle.

the MC says we have a bid for 50,000 rupees. going once going twice going

just then someone else raises their paddle and the MC says we have a challenger for 100,000 rupees..

kasturi looks around to see who it is, but due to back lighting cant see the person. and she wants no she NEEDS this painting its connected to her past.. she feels it in her gut. and raises her paddle one more time praying that the opponent leaves the bidding war...

MC seeing kasturi raise her paddle : the young lady bids 150,000 rupees..going once going twice going The Gentlemen in the back bids 175,000 rupees..going once

kasturi is soo fustrated that was her limit, dammit...what are her options now sneeking back into robbie's office, yeah right.. shivani was right he's a menace and a rat...😡 and puts her paddle firmly in her lap and hears the MC saying Sold to the Gentleman in the back...for 175,000 rupees.... the next item up for bids is..

just then Alaanah walks up to kasturi saying, ohhhh check out the guy talking to mama? he's gorgeous....😍 do you guys know who he is?

both kasturi and Ronauk look at devika dressed in black saree and say: Robbie Raichand.. and ronauk continues by saying alaanah he's super rich.. makes me look like a pauper..😆

Alaanah lookin at ronauk and saying: Shut up money isnt everything you know...

Ronauk says: but to you it is.. right?

Alaanah hesistant on wheather to go and introduce herself, says kasturi will you please come with me..?

Kasturi says: no i dont want to meet him again.. trust me the guys weird to say the least.. and he rubbs me the wrong way..

Alaanah: chaaloo at least a guy rubs you someway.. i was beginning to wonder about you😕 and grabs kasturi's hand and half pulls her towards Devika and Robbie..

Devika seeing her daughters says: mm Robbie i'd like you to meet my two daughters kasturi and Alaanah..

Robbie all smiles towards the girls says: Kasturi and I have briefly met in my suit at paradise point. and he winks at her...

kasturi ready to step on his foot with her stilletos gives him her most sarcastic smile and says hi...

devika looking at both of them says to kasturi: aachah to yeh tha tumhara important kaam yesterday you wanted to check up to make sure his move was all properly done..

kasturi going a deep color red and praying the ground open up and swallow her ☺️ taking a deep breath to calm herself and says: nahin mom i had some updates to do on my presentation to the board next week... and sneeks a look at robbie who is trying so hard not to laugh...😆 just then alaanah interupts and kasturi could have kissed her for her timing...

Alaanah: mom i havent met robbie yet, and its a pleasure to meet you.. and if you need anything , and i mean anything at all i'd glad be able to make myself available..

robbie feeling a bit uncomfortable with alaanah's gazing looks around for Anita..

Alaanah asking robbie: so are you married yet?

Both kasturi and Devika say: ALAANAH😕

Alaanah: what?? just curious, oh yeah like that didnt cross your mind mom..

devika extremely embarassed says: you'll have to forgive Alaanah she's had a little too much to drink tonight.😡

Robbie smiling says: no really its okay i dont mind.. and Alaanah no i'm not married Yet...and looks at kasturi

Kasturi growin more uncomfortable as the moments pass looks towards the ground..

Alaanah say: ohh so you much be those types of guys that doesnt believe in the institution of marriage...you like playing the field?

Robbie: No Alaanah i'm not married becuase i believe very deeply in the institution of marriage, and would never let go of the women that i luv. i would follow her to the ends of the earth. and he keeps staring as kasturi... Devika notices this and is a bit concerned as to why is robbie staring at kasturi like that...😕

Just then Anita finally finds robbie and joins them robbie introduces her to everyone as his PA.. Anita stares at kasturi and instantly takes a disliking towards her..

Kasturi says she feels a head ache coming on and will be leaveing soon...and walk towards the women's bathroom...

Meanwhile in the same gazeebo that robbie and kasturi had previously occupied only 20 mintues ago, sat Ronauk and Shivani...

Ronauk looking deeply into shivani eyes and say: shiv i have something to tell you?

shivani looks heavens ward and thinks finally😳 ronauk delays what he wants to say by rubbing his hand over his hair and his cheeks...

ronauk bends down infront of shivani and hold her hands into his and says:Shivani you know that i'm not the most romantic type of guy, but mmmm i have always liked you. infact i have always liked you alot, since college days, the first moment when you helped me out of being stuffed into the lockers..as a raggin by the guys...and they both remember that moment where shivani had stood up for ronauak when they tried to stuff him into the locker...you stole something from me that day and have yet to give it back shivani.

shivani feeling very nervous: what ronauak are you talking about? saaf saaf bolo please.

Ronauk: shivani i have luved you soo deeply and for so long.. truely, madly and deeply i doo...and he has unshed tears in his eyes..

shivani: ohh ronuak as she puts her hand on her mouth. and a single tear falls down her cheeck.

Ronauk wipes her tear away and takes a silver box out and puts it in her palm... and get up and cant face her...out of fear of rejection..

shivani opens the box and a single solitaire diamond of .5 carrot surrounded by platinum band.. with a blue sapphire stone embedded into the band layed glittering in the moon light...roanuak walks back towards her and says shivani kya tum mujhe se shaadi karoi gi?

shivani kisses him on the cheeck and says with my whole heart Haaannnnn and they hug soo tightly......and talk about their future they will build together...😍

Kasturi splashes some water on her face in the fancy bathroom... she doesnt want to leave the place, for robbie's an enigma that is eating up inside her...she cant think straight when he around. kasturi needs to clear her head, just then anita walks in...

kasturi takes one look at her and think great aub iss koi kya chaaiya, already inka sir to meria sir khaah chukah hain, robbie na zaroor behjah hain is koi meri pass...disgusted with robbie's antics kasturi says: mujhe aapse kuch baath nahin karni so please if you'll excuse me, and kasturi tries to pass by anita.

anita graps kasturi arm and says:tum hain sunah hogay.. tum robbie se dhoor hi rahoi to tumhari liya aachai hogay.. warna?

kasturi just simply fed up: warna kya karlogay tum log? hmmmm

Anita: ek baath bathoiu kya tum robbie koi jaanti hoi?

kasturi : aasai aadmi se mera koi lenah dehnah nahin..😡

anita: make sure it stays that way.. tumarhi liya aur tumhari family ke liya aachah hogay...and she leaves.. kasturi shaking sits down on one of the chairs in the bathroom.. and just wants to go home...usska saar daard ke maarah patha jarahi hain.. kasturi leaves the bathroom in search of shivani and ronauk.

Fustrated she cant find them anywhere looks for her mom, but alaanah tells her mom went home already... kasturi says:alaanah kya tum mujhe ghar chor sakti hoi. ronauk kahin nahin milraha hain.. and i have a major migrain coming on...please...

Aalaanah sorry kasturi main khud aapne sahelioon ke saath aayi hoon, and were staying...tum taxi le loi..bye

Kasturi head for the front exit and bumps into robbie yet again.. kasturi: ohh no not you again...

Robbie: kahan jarahi hoi kasturi?

kasturi: Not that its any of your buisness, i'm leaving.. good nite and i hope we dont ever meet again...and she tries to get past him...

robbie:kasturi tumhari dost to nazar nahin aarahi hain, toi tum kiss ke saath ghar jarahi hoi?

kasturi: main taxi lerahi hoon.. fine with you your majesty...😡

robbie laughs deeply and kasturi notices his dimples, its soo bloody unfair that god makes men like you..kasturi thinks to herself..

robbie :kasturi main tumhain chordeh tah hoon..

kasturi just wanting to leave says fine chaale... robbie says give me a minute...i'll be back...

robbie goes in search of anita to inform her that he's taking kasturi home.. he sees her and tells him his plan she nods and goes and calls a cab...for herself..

Robbie gives the Valet guy his chit and he goes and recieves his car..

Kasturi sitting in robbie's car looks around, robbie is secretly stealing glances at her... her perfume of lavender mingling with his cologne is intoxicating to him..

kasturi breaks the silence by saying: you sure like your gagets robbie

Robbie shrugs and says boys and their toys...

Kasturi stealing a glance at his strong profile and wondering why do i get a weird feeling around him.. and she asks: robbie Kya main kaal aap ke office aasakti hoon?

robbie thora sa confused and wondering what kasturi is up to? says : kyun?

Kasturi: mujhe Ondheen koi dheekh nah hain, i need to see her statue please..

Robbie: Theek hain lekin ek shart pe?

kasturi : kya?

Robbie: tum mera saath dinner pe jaanah paregah? manzoor?

kasturi: kya, yeh kaasai shart hain..😕 okay robbie shayad aap koi lagrah hain ke main interested hoon aap main, lekin main bathana chaati hoon aasai koi baaath nahin hain.. so can we please not make this personal.

Robbie: to late for that.. dinner for Ondheen? bolo manzoor hain yah nahin?

kasturi upset ke yeah naubauth hi nahin aathi if she could have bought the portrait of Ondheen...fustrated kasturi says fine manzoor hain... kush..

robbie : bohut...😃

robbie reaches kasturi's house and she askes him robbie yeah joi tumhari ghari hain kitni saal puranah hain?

robbie laughs and says yeh kaasai sawaal hain kasturi?

Kasturi: robbie agar tum mera barreh main kuch jaantah hoi, toi bhetar yeahi hoga ke tum saaf saaf labzoi main keh do...

Robbie: Kasturi waqt hi batai yeh gah ke kaun kis ke baareh main jaantah hain...

kasturi totally infuriated by him get out and leaves here bag in his car and walk off without saying goodnite... robbie smiles and says see you tomorrow kasturi and sweet dreams...he drives off ....

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Posted: 17 years ago

First sorry for delay yaar,,,,i hope tujhe bura nahi laga hoga 😳

Back to parts

Hey robinaaa ..maine teeno parts abhi read kiya ..just mindblowing 👏...bahut aache likhe hai 😳...i love ..ki tumne har character ko explain kiya ..unki feelings ...everything is perfect dear ..hatts of u ...dear with three kids ..itna time nikalti hoon ..aur humhare liye likhti ho 😳...Thankuuu so much dear 😃

part 8 ..mujhe toh laga tha ki robbie ne usse dekh liya hai bathroom meh ...lekin nahi 😆..and duffer kesse shivani aur kasturi ki baate sun raha tha 😆..aur apne aap ko smart samaj raha tha 😆..jo wo hai bhi 😳😆

part 9 ..bahut hi aacha likha hai 👏..aur jis tarah tumne kasturi ko uske past ka ehsaas dilaya .bahut aacha laga 😳..and aacha huya ..robbie ko tumne kuch clue diya ki kastu theek nahi hai ..nahi toh wo use galat samaj baithta ...

very beautifull written 😳

and 10 part ..jo sabse pehle maine read kiya hai 😳..very nice parttt ..and raunak ka pyar ka ijhaar karne ka style bahut aacha hai 😆..wo usse school ki kahani sunane baith gaya 😆..chalo aacha usne ijhaar toh kiya 😆..

so ab lagta hai next part meh robbie kastu ..ki dinner par meeting hogi 😳..so ab flash back meh hi sahi ..ek lovely sa scene ho hi jaaye 😉😳😆

and yee anita apne aap ko kya samjti hai 😡..bewajah dhamki dene chali aayi ..arre pehle apne boss se toh pooch akheer wo kya chahta hai 😉😆

yaar ..ab jaldi bata ki akheer essa kya huya tha ..ki kastu robbie durr ho gaye 😭..jaldi bata na 😆

Thankuuuu for lovely's part ...😳..ab main saath saath read karungiiiiii😳

ab tu next part kab post kar rahi hai ????😛

Manpreet

Edited by sahib29 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks Robzi for the pm!

What is this kastu still doesn't remember fully what happened…I thought after the flashback she would regain her memory! Anyway I will wait! Alaana has a crush on Raunak and his comments about sex. Harrassment were funny! I am curious to know who bought the painting…as I know Robbie was auctioning himself ..how can he buy?? Or has he asked someone to do it for him! Haha…devika is the same sharp lady here…she wonders why Robbie is staring at kastu but wonder what she will do when she finds that they both were in love!

Ra and Shiv dialogue were so cute…at last he opened his mouth! And the ring looked so yummy!

You have made Anita just like in the show..akhir villain bhi hona chahiye! I am just too curious to read about their next meeting and also their dinner!

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Posted: 17 years ago
robbie and kasturi going for dinner 😃 ... cant wait ...
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Fari
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Posted: 17 years ago
Robina,

Am really really sorry that i am commenting so late.

I caught up with all the parts. Just want to say, it is Brilliant. 👏 👏 👏

I love the way u have played the characters around and have focused on each of them. So much so each stands out and is not lost in the crowd.

U have a wonderful way of telling a story which is interspersed with great dialogue between the characters and some great wit.

The way u write u neatly build up the suspense of what happens next. I am eagerly waiting for ur next part.

shwetha
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Posted: 17 years ago
Robina di robina di robina diiiiiiii 🤗 🤗 . Look I have completed reading the whole 10 parts 😃 .
Diii I just want to ask why didn't u start writing before . U have such a unique style of writing 👏 . I love how u r explaining each and every detail very accurately and how u r leaving us with suspences in each parts and making us eager to knw what happens next 👏 . It was a treat for me to read many parts together 😛 .I totally love this FF , it's characters esp RoKa 😉 ,
I really love our Ro , he is such a gentleman .
And Devika is a great mom here . And di I really like that scene of De and Kas after Kasturi fainted . I really like how Devika is angry with Kastu for not eating properly and went to take soup for her . I remember my mom then 😳 .
Puru too have attitude here and that scene of him with Devika when she reveals what happened to Kasturi in the past to him was very good , the way he told De that he too have the right to knw about his daughter was soo true yet he was soo sweet assuring Devika that everything will be alright, whn he understood De is distubed .When it was thundering outside I could really feel thunder i Devika's heart too . U really write the scenes very well and capture our attention di. 👏

Acha huwa Kaushi ko aapne maar diya 😆 , It will be really interesting when Ro comes to knw about his dad JP.

My fav part was 6th one where u described RoKa 1st meeting . That was so well written and I really love those scenes . And that folktale sounded interesting . U r soo sweet to share it with us . Hope RoKa will not have a tragic end like Ondheen's love story .Diiii please say us more about RoKa's past life . That is realy interesting 😉 😳 .

So Raunak and shivani started planning their future . Let them do it dii and we can concetrate on RoKa 😉 😆 .Soo good u didn't make Ra bad .

And Alaana is so irritating 😡 . I hate her 🤢 . She is sooo bad , not at all worried about her sis , instead partying with her frnds. Accha huwa Ro took Kas home 👏 . Ro is so cute 😳 .

Waiting for the next parts . Update soon diiii 😃

Rosy

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