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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

biotechboom..... how are youuuu? its been too long.. and a wonderful surprise to see you here,😃 great to know your still around..i had thought you werent coming back.. the pleasure is all mine.. though i have to say you tum krishi aur RK and mannu ke kaan pakhroo, for i first started with writing small parts and they kept sayin to write loonnggerrrrr parts 😆 so no worries read at your leisure or if you find it boring dooo tell meeee.for i'm always open to better myself.. thanks for coming out... greatly appreiciate it..

robina😃

@ aur krishiiii now that i have, yeah krishiiiii khahan bhagayhiiiiiii😡😆 maybe she got bored..i'll have to juice the story up to get her back😉😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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@Robina dii I finished reading it by noon but couldnt make to reoly..Sorry dii😊

And then coming to the business..

It was WONDERFULL, AWESOME,FANTZTIC,FANTABULOUS and....REFRESHING,NEW,HOT,KOOL,REAL,SUSPENSE FILLED,HOOKING and what more the flow is like... reading Marloy Towers😃..You are doing the FANTAZTIC job dii😃 and Devu is the considewrest maa ever..Ofcourse yeh dill maangei more dii😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
just cought up wid ur ff dii 😊 its amazing 👏 👏 dii lyk ur imagination its fantabulous i wonder how u get an interesting ides 😆 😉 nd dis suspence is killing me 😆 now u hv 2 continue ASAP dii 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: nrasheed

@mimi,, hey kiddo🤗🤗, i wrote the last part really quickly cause you were online and wanted to read it, so thanks for pushing me to get part 7 done otherwise i would have dragged my feet.. and stalled... do keep pming me for it will give me fuel to keep posting parts quicker...your like a cheer leader for me and i luv it.. tons of luv and hugs robina diiiiiiii

Haha... cheer leader! Dii, as long as I'm here, I will make sure you keep writing! That reminds me... when are you posting part 8? I cant WAIT to read it!

--Mimi

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Posted: 17 years ago
#85

@Gaps..🤗. wowwww all that praise for little moi??😳 your too kind with your words, and you leave me speechless with them...thank you for liking my work, i am amazed at you more then me... in such a younge age you are writing a fanfic, once you write one you know the time it takes and for you to have that staying power says alot about you and your strong will power to complete something you started..takes guts..so proud of youuuu!!! keep up the good work and there is no way my writing should be compared to anyone... for english lit classes i use to take i was an B student...nothing great..i wish my english lit teacher could read all of wonderful feedback and all of the girl's words of praise,... 😆

robina diiiiiiiiiiiiiii😳

@Princess 15, thanks soo much for taking time out and lending me your ears oops i mean your eyes.. 😆 seriously i feel really happy that you liked my convoluted storyline.. and seriously i've got too many thoughts running through my head right now..hope to sort it out ASAP...

hope to see more of your great comments means alot thanks sooo much.

robina diiiiii

@mimi where were youuu, and dont worry will continue soon..

robina dii

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nrasheed

@ aur krishiiii now that i have, yeah krishiiiii khahan bhagayhiiiiiii😡😆 maybe she got bored..i'll have to juice the story up to get her back😉😆

Oyyyyeeeeee U r the one who is updating slowly... I have been seeing the same title Part 7 on page 9 since the past 2 days and I was waiting for u to update the FF😆😆😆 But tum tho update hi nahin kar rahi thi😆

But I know Its my mistake tooo tat I forgot to post my comments yaar..... Kay said it correctly tat u r following BT steps of leaving us with a heart attack😡 Wat was the need for u to stop at such a high point.... I was literally biting my nails off with that suspense expecting Robbie to see Kas any moment😆😆😆

U know wat? More than Kas, I am luving how u r portraying Robbie's feelings and hurt in ur FF... They are coming out beautifully and they are very touchy.... Aaaaawww how I wish I was there in the FF instead of Kas and Robbie luvs me like tat😳😳😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: Robbie is looking to overtake Saberwal Enterprises. Shivani bumps into robbie and wants to play match maker btw robbie and kasturi. kasturi sneeks into Robbie's office suite to see the Statue Ondheen for herself.. but Robbie comes back unexpected and Kasturi hides in the bathroom...but leaves the towels in plain sight....

Part 8.....

Robbie thinks to himself i dont recognize that smell.. were the cleaning ladies here? they must have been and forgot to put the towels in the bathroom...robbie picks them up and starts walking towards the bathroom door..he turns the handle and the door opens, robbie filcks the light switch on and walks into the spacious and luxurious bathroom (which is a jack and jill concept connecting his living quarters to his office), their was black granite countertops and a huge mirror with a gold frame around it.. the pedastal sink was of a moss green, he opens the cupboard to put the extra towels there...kasturi sees his profile and ducks further into the tub, praying the God's be on her side...Robbie stands there and stares at himself in the mirror thinking what will kasturi think of me now, for have i changed much...Kasturi will hate my dress sense... too stuffy she would say..and probably laugh at the fact that his hair is cut short...back then it was longer..she use to tease me that i'm in competition with her...God why dont we have the power to turn back time.. to go back and right wrongs especially that horrendous night that changed the path of their lives irrevocably..robbie sighs washes his face as if to wash away the bad memories and turns the lights out and walks out of the bathroom closing the door behind him...though he has a weird feeling that he just cant put his finger on it. something isnt right..just then anita walks in saying: all ready to doo some serious shopping...

robbie:yikes heaven have mercy on my wallet...

for the second time that day robbie closed the lights and as he walked out he remembered what was bothering him he never closed the bathroom door the last time he left...robbie went back in and looked around and then went back into the bathroom turned the lights on and pulled the shower curtain back..😲

Nothing, robbie thinking to himself, i must be loosing it, all this thanks to you kasturi, your messing with my head... 😕 anita runs in after him saying: robbie kya huwa?😕

robbie very agitated for he knows something is amiss says:Kuch nahin anita, chaaleh...

and finally robbie and anita depart...closing all doors and lights...

a very scared kasturi who had already exited through the door that connected robbie's executive bathroom to his bedroom suite and out the Penthouse enterance...on the otherside. kasturi telling herself off for the stupidest thing she has ever done....😡 just then her cell rings and kasturi jumps out of her skin...and grabs her cell and a little to loudly says kya haiii???

Puru says: ummm kasturi kya huwa tum ithni ghabrayi vhi kyun hoi?

kasturi: dad kuch nahin sorry, sub teekh hain nah dad?

Puru: tum hari mama se baath karaha tha aur woh kehrahi thi ke tum behoosh huwi thi? aub kassi hoi beta?

Kasturi: daaadd i'm fine really, i luv you for your concern.. bus thori se kamzoori thi, aub i'm perfectly find... back to normal..

Puru aacha teek hain beta.. jaaldi ghar aajahnah...tum koi dheekh kai hi tasaalee hogai...i luv you kasturi...

kasturi: and I luv you dad..main rakh thi hooon aub..bye...

kasturi hangs up and thinks to herself, OMG baal baal bach gayii😡 thank god i got out of the tub when i did and left through his penthouse enterance...yeah Robbie Raichand is one formidable opponent...and he seems to be in luv with himself, kaasah ghoor raha tha aapne aap koi🤢 must think the world revolves around him....must have a god complex..disgusted with robbie she calls shivani..

shivani getting irritated by the minute: Hello??

kasturi:hiya shiviii sorry yaar thora dheer hogai hain but i'm leaving now, i'm just getting into my car kasturi luved her trust toyota... from the moment her parents gave it to her when she turned 18... it was getting old and Ajay was constantly telling her to change it for a sporty model...but for kasturi old was gold... as kasturi was backing out a black X5 sped by she had to break hard to miss it... disgusted with the driver she pursuded the Black SUV... kasturi thinking to herself kya hora hain aaj kaal these people with money seem to think they buy the road when they buy their big vehicles as well😡 Kasturi.. followed at a distance and eventually lost it as the car ran a yellow light..kasturi thinking chaalo it came out of Paradise Point, baadh main dheekloongi😡 and headed to Connaught Place..as she parked kasturi noticed the same Black X5 parked in the parkade.. she got out and wanted to deflate one of the tires, lekin chodiya..and went to go meet shivani...

shivani was waving to her kasturi ran up and said sorry again.. chaalai, yup said shivani who had spotted robbie going in with a girl just 10 minutes ago.. hoping to bump into robbie again but this time with kasturi at her side...

kasturi: shiv kya hogay hain shivani kis koi dhoond rahi hoi?

shivani: kissi koi nahin.. just then they bump into ronauk and Ajay..

ronauk: hiya, what a wonderful surprise.

Ajay: kasturi tum teekh hoi nah, mama batahrai thi

kasturi interrupts him and says haan bhiyu i'm fine..thanks😃

Ronauk: tum log bhi costume khareednah aayai hoi?

shivani: haan..

Ajay and Ronauk look at each other for they already knew this.. cause ajay had overheard kasturi telling her mom what her plans were before leaving the house...

Ronauk kept staring at shivani....ajay gave him a slight nudge in the rib cage.. as to say stop staring like an idiot..

Ronauk: mm shivani who do you want to go as?

Shivani: i was thinking me and kas were gonna do the mideval damsels you know with the grand gowns and with taffta silk and small bows around the dress... lekin dhektha hain what we find , kyun ki ek hi toi dhukhaan hain that specializes in masqurade costumes...chaale?

everyone walks towards the store, as they enter shivani looks around for robbie he is no where to be seen.. very disappointed shivani and kas go looking for their gowns, the guys take off in the mens section...they want to be one of the famous knights of the round table...a lady walks up to them and asks them if they need any help? and she then leads them to the area where they can find their costumes.. and that is where they bump into robbie..

Ronauk: excuse me sorry..

robbie: no i'm sorry seems to be a bad habit i have developed..your the second person i've bumped into today..

Ronauk:you seem familiar? aap koi kahin dheekha hain...hmmm yes your..

robbie finishes his sentence for him robbie raichand, hi and you guys are?

Ronauk says: I'm ronauak Shinghania and this is my best friend and buisness rival Ajay Saberwal..

robbie's eyes cant believe it... Kasturi's elder brother... duniya waqui main kithni chooti hoti hain. all the men greet each other, and Ajay says i guess we'll see you at the Ball..

robbie: i look forward to it...see ya guys tomorrow.

robbie head to the dressing area to try on his knight outfit. he tries the first stall and a younge lady's voice says excuse me, this stall is taken...robbie says his apology and tires the next stall. the song Pheli nazaar main is playing in the background and kasturi was humming it... Robbie also sorta hums its.. and the younge lady's voice says excuse me are you mocking me by copying me?

robbie : says no sorry i just really luv this song..

kasturi says me too...okay... sorry to bite at you...

robbie no problem..Robbie thinks that voice...OMG is that kasturi in the stall next to me? robbie feel very nervous. he doesnt want to meet kasturi like this.. for what reaction she will have he doesnt know.. perhaps he was more afraid of how he would handle her reaction to him more then her. No i'm not ready to face her yet... i'm not mentally ready to meet her..he quickly tries on the outfit .

shivani walk up to kasturi's stall and says kas kaasai lagrah hain?

kasturi well its a bit tight on the waist, but

shivani, well thats how the dames would wear it in the old days...stupid...

kasturi: who you calling stupid, stupid??😡

Robbie cant help but laugh but covers it with a cough at that exchange of words..

kasturi says shivani did you try your outfit on already? yes and i have my mask as well... i look hawwwttttt, and she makes a sizzling sound Ronak is bound to notice me ...kasturi starts laughing. Robbie heart skips a beat. her laugh hasnt changed. she laughs openly and without hesitations. robbie koi yeah kushi hain kya at least kasturi sounds happy...shivani then says, you know kasturi aaj main robbie Raichand se takhrai thi?

kasturi aachai? whats he like? kasturi getting goose bumps from hearing the name... she thinks for abhi toi main usski office or kamarah se bhaag ke aayi hoon...

Shivani: he's sooo good looking kasssiii,☺️ but not in your conventional type of way.. but one things forsure tum dheekoi gi usskoi to tumhair hosh hi urjahyengah...

Robbie thinking to himself shivani you have nooo idea...😆

kasturi thinking, shivaniii you have noo idea how close i was to doing just that 1 hr ago.Instead kasturi says: lagtha hain ronauk ke chooti hojaygi...

shivaniii, thinking kasturi kasturi kab tum aapne baareh main beh soonchoi gi?😡

shivani says i was actually thinking of youuu and how you both would look perfect together... and you dont have a date for this ball...

robbie cant help but smile huge...😃 and says (to himself)yeah we were perfect shivanii.

kasturi starts laughing and says, aacha. yeah match making choroh and help me with this zipper.. so i can get this dress off...and we then can be off... shivani enters kasturi's changing room and robbie slips out of his and takes off.. not looking back...

Robbie runs into anita and says done

anita says;kab se intezaar karah hi thi...

robbie sorry yaar, chalo lets go pay for this stuff. mujhe bohut buhook lagi hain..

robbie and anita depart robbie realizing that yeh shivani probably wanted to accidently bump into him again with kasturi this time...chaalak larki.. iss se hosiyaar hona hogah...

shivani and kasturi leave with ajay and ronauk.. and their bags for tomorrow nite....shivani very down that her match making never happened...

the night of the ball.. everyone is getting ready.....

Shivani and Ronauk went to the Saberwal house to get changed with their friends and they would all leave togther from there...kasturi and shivani are in kas's room listening to K.K.'s song Zara Si.. and getting ready... kasturi's gown is baby pink taffta silk with small bows, her bodice is sleevless and the work is with fine gold thread woven into the pink silk...she is wearing her mother's pink pearl necklace.. shivani's dress was in baby blue and pretty much the same she wore her mothers grey pearls neclace...both girls put their hair into a french twist.put on their masks with golden squences and feathers on each side of the mask with a few stray strands hanging loose.. they were beauty personified...both girls had stilleto heels on to increase their height

they girls came out and walked down the winding staircase to meet up with the ronuak and ajay who looked dashing in thier knight suits and their black shiny boots up to their knees and thier black pants tucked in. and their swords hanging by thier sides...as ajay is ready to leave with shivani, he complains about some pain in his stomack, and ronauk askes him kya hua ajay tum teekh toi hoi?

ajay says, nahin yaar bohut daard horah hain, i might have to cancel yaar, sorry lekin shivani i dont think i can go to the ball in this pain...

shivani no problem ajay, tum araam karoi...do you want us to call the doctor?

ajay says nahin i think if i take a pill for my stomach i'll be okay, lekin hamari date, ka kya

ronuak says: fiquar mauth karoi ajay main hoon nah😃 i'll take both these beautiful ladies.. i'll be the luckiest guy there..tonight..

ajay apologizes again and as ronauka and the ladies get ready to leave, ronuak turns and winks at ajay and ajay winks back...😉

The Masquarade ball: was a huge white mansion with collums on either side of the huge enterance infact as Ronauks car drove up to the enterance the girls could see right through the doors to the back of which was wall to wall windows.. there were light roping all over the place and huge ice statues the with rolling lush green grass beyound the windows...

Shivani, OMG kasturi this is sooo beautiful, i cant wait to get inside,

the car infront of them is taking forever to move its a black X5 the vallet parking guy is talking to the owner obviously... as the owner steps out kasturi can only see the back of his shiny black hair but his jacket was full of embroidry... and he's tall....and the lady that got out with him is quite beautiful in a stunning burgandy gown...with some very light work on the bodice but the rest of the gown was just plain burgandy silk...but had two bows to hold up folds of silk on the two sides of the gown.. kasturi and shivani give each other a look that says stuck up!!! and they both giggle in the back..Ronauks says whats so funny?

just then the their doors are open by the valet guy and everyone gets out ronauk says to both the girls as he offers his hand to them : are you ready ladies....

both kasturi and shivani excitedly say YESSSSSS... chaloooo...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Robzi...I am just loving the way you are taking the story. You are too good at detailing the things be it decor of a room or outfits...your explaination is too classy! 👏 Wow Robbie is so rich! 😳 And the way you explain Robbie or kastu they are almost close to greek Gods! 😳 😆 Just love Shivani for her match making idea! 😉 And you almost made my heart skip but thanks for the next part I realised that they didnt meet in the bathroom!

Kastu doesnt even have a faint feeling towards Robbie......Poor Robbie😭 he is missing her so much! I just love the way you have portrayed his feelings....he will be heart broken when he comes to know that kastu doesnt even recognise him.😭 Hai my heart strings are already pulling hard...looks like this guy is destined for heart breaks!😭

What is this...like Bt... you have made kastu turn Miss Karmchand!😆...somethings dont change!😆 It was so funny..she wanted to deflate his tire!😆 Ajay poor boy gave up for raS😆...please yaar Ajay ko bhi jodi mila dona!😆

Robina...comeon yaar...again you finished it at the right moment...OMG I cant wait for the next part dear....Pleeaaassee make it fast !😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow Robina I m surprised ;I really didn't know u dear .Awesom brilliant start ;u captured my attention ;ab tak kyun nahin likha ;d title is eye catching too .Devika wil hv a brilliant author backed role in ur FF I knew it ;kidding! 😆 Cool she is kasturi's mom & hamre pyaare puru ;he remains d same ;Ajay lawyer cool !!i luved dis line very much so emotional--
kids once grown up dont need them as much, the one small hand that needed us all of a sudden cant even fit in her palm anymore!! So true in 2day's world !!
👏 👏 d letter thing luved it & d way d scene is around Devika I felt lik I m reading Master of d Game ….!!!!!!!!!Superb ,Brilliant I read a lot of mystery novels ;d letter thing & d way u described it I luved it …
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Robinaaaaaaaaaaa Dear ..main baad meh read karungiiiiiiiiiii😳..i hope u don't minddddd😳

Manpreet

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