dhamaka for the weekend

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi guys

well weekends can be really frustrating...so here is something that shall ignite your imagination and hopes which will ensure a reassuring warmth till monday.....😉

presenting.....

TERE LIYE( a romantic fiction)

The engagement celebrations are in full swing.Decorations are glittering,the atmosphere is saturated with an air of festivity.Devika madam wants to let her mission of'KASTURI-TORTURE'reach its final stage.With diabolic malice flashing from her eyes she tauntingly tells Kasturi-"Kasturi zaara dekhna to robbie tayaar ho gaya hai ya nahi."Kasturi's face has donned the expression of her being hurt..pain spits from her eyes and tears cling on to her lashes...(background music

dard me bhi yeh lab muskurajate hai bheete lamhe hame jabhi yaad ate hai-from train )Scenes of kasturi-robbie together flash before her ....

Kasturi reches the room and sees HER robbie sir clad in a heavenly white sherwani...He is looking dashing and awesome as usual😳.He turns and sees kasturi standing at the entrance..his expression changes to one in great pain.

kasturi-Sir apko devika maam neeche bula rahi hai

Robbie- main aa raha hoon

There is an eye-locking session while

tere liye song from veer-zaraa plays in the background

Robbie-kya anita ready hai?

Katuri-ha sir sab aapka neeche intazaar kar rahe hai

Kasturi turns and walks out ...tears now freely slide down her cheeks 😭but she wipes them .

Robbie and anita are standing next to each other and robbie's eyes are constantly stealing glances at kasturi(my dil goes mmmm....😳)Devika calls kasturi and tells her to go and give the ring to anita.She does so...and in front of her eyes anita and robbie exchange rings🤢(the entire time robbie's jadoo bhara nazar is resting on kasturi)Then some ppl ask robbie to sing a song.

He takes the mike and announces 'Yeh geet us insaan ke liye hai jisne meri zindagi main aake mere duniya bana di'His eyes rest on kasturi as he says the last few words.He sings that

TUMSE HI song from jab we met.A loud applause👏 follows his song.And then he realizes that kasturi has vanished.He tries searching for her but fails.

Kasturi is walking on the road lost in her own thoughts unaware of everything.Flashes of all the times she spent with robbie blanket her.(

jag soona soona lage from OSO is the backgroung score)Suddenly the headlights of a car blind her.The car comes to a halt and hamara darling robbie comes out.She is shell-shocked.

Kasturi-sir aap sagaai chod kar yahaan kya kar rahe he?

Robbie-Jante ho main kitna parishaan ho gaya tha.

Kasturi-magar sir..

Robbie is standing close to her ...very close to her..he lifts his hand and touches her face...he brings her face very close -"kuch mat bolo...apni dhadkano ki awaaz suno"(Mitwa is playing as the background score)

He suddenly let's go and says "I am sorry galti se ho gayi" and clearly flusttered at what had passed he walks back to his car.Kasturi stands there watching his retreating back and an intense longing burning her eyes.She fights back tears...

And suddenly she is zapped back to reality.The car has just halted and the driver is making his appearance....

to be continued 😉

please do leve your comments and suggestions

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Woww ...very nice dear ..bahut aacha likha hai 👏👏..i really loved 😳...sirf ring exchange aacha nahi laga 😆😆

continue dear ..am waiting 😳

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh my lord! That was one of the best things I've ever EVER read!! Please continue- better yet why dont u start a FF?

I loved the adjectives you've used, it actually paints great pictures in my head. =D

Yay! Another great writer in our Kasturi section! 😛

Please continue!

Your friend,

---- Mimi*

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey dat was really good i cant wait for the next part 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey dat was really good i cant wait for the next part aur ye aap k liye 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG really kool 😍 i can imagine roka expressions 😉 im hooked wid it 😆 now u better continue soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 Great start......but why did you stop there?? 😆 😆

Continue soon! 😃

Kay
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOWWWWW!!!!! Gr8 job.

A can imagine that really happening. Only if something like that would happen on Monday 😆 😆

Hope you continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Livelygal

First off...interesting title. 😳
Secondly.....it took me a few minutes to read coz I spent that time gazing at your signature..... 😆 ....Shahid is awesome ...isnt he....such mature performance in JWM 😳

And now coming to your scenes....they are great though 👏 👏 heartbreaking ...yes....but i think a possible reality given the way things are going and that its a BT serial.

That apart.....you write beautifully 😳 ....thoughts move like a picture before the eyes....very well done 👏 ...do continue .....it will be a pleasure reading it

JW 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow... very nice... i cud see all des scenes in my eyes... plz continue...

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