'4' KAHAANIYAAN ...Nu part pg 29 - Page 4

Jaanu.....meri jaan,
yeh kaisa toofaan??
Tu aisa likhti hai
aaj, jaane saare ROKA fan!!!! 😉 😆 😆

Whoa...whoa sweety...........where is this coming from????? 😆 It was great creativity!!!!

Part 1 : The characters you were comparing with, completely went above my head......sorry never watch cartoons and had no clue who any of them were! But I enjoyed it because I understood whom you were talking about!

Part 2 : Excellent!!!!! The moov ad and remembering Rupa as Draupadi 😆...........Too good!!!!

Part 3: LOVED this!!!!! I laughed out loud when you got the song stuck 🤣 🤣 🤣 Very creative 👏 👏 Humor was awesome in this part.

Part 4: Very sentimental part........and ultra romantic!!!! 😳

Great work.......a very funny take on today's episode!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Januuuuuu ...tu apne third part ko edit karke theek kar ..arre wo itna bright ho gaya hai ki main read nahi kar sakti 😕...jaldi kar main baad meh read karti hoon 😳

Manpreet

@Janu ...that was very Sweet yar ...i loved it 😃

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keep more updutanig !!! really iliked so much *specially part 4* love yaaaaaaaaa !!!

keep write more !!!
your's aisha !!!

ooooooo wat im seeing 😲 ur so talented👏😉

part1- well i noe sum of da characters😆 but half of thm i asked my bro😆 who r they nd he explain me everythin even he was reading wid me lol😆 very well written👏

part2- rupa as draupadi 😆aweome yaar👏

part3-awww it was vry funni🤣 i🤣 laugh so much😆 ur humour is 2 gud😉

part4-so romantic😳

gr8 wrk yaar👏 ur mindblowing😉

First of All I'm sorry becos i didnt showed up....I'm so sorry diis, aunties and Naanies...My Entrance classes kicked off yesterday..So i had to leave at 7.00 in the morning and will be back only by 6.00pm...😭

OK Now thanchoo di's for liking it...

@Rosy

Oye Rosy Ente Jackine nee enna moolu thattiyeduthadh😡😆OK..Just feed him well...

@pragalbha dii..Thanchoo for liking it😳Actually mein bhi ek kreative hoon..Story writing mein seriously had won so many gifts😳😳I wasn't joking😳OK dii now all you have to do is go to UR kids and ask them Tell me the story of Pokemon😆....Thanckuu dii again for liking it...i'm in cloud 5.😳

@jima dii...See its only a me here who works DAY AND NIGHT...Actually my Entrance classes began yesterday..So i had to leave early morning..thats why i'm not here on day times😭Oopps..Thanchooo dii for likking it.😳.Yeah will surely try doing better.😊..

@oooh hoo I'm sorry Maanu dii..I'll soon correct it.😊.OK read it and comment zooon....😉

@wajiha di..Thanchooo yaar for liking it😳

@Aishoo...OHH my baby "Itne Khushi..😭..Itne Khushi...😭"(like govinda in Partner😉)Tanchoo Aishoo😳..........will sure try to do some good job..And thanx for that woooooooooowwww..😳

@manni...Thanchoo yaar for liking it..Yeah did Ur bro actually read it.I was not sure of the characters names becos I dont watch it REGULARLY...😉And thanx yaar for liking the part..It was the frst time I handled humour..I used to write Fictions and literature..But Romance and Humour ..😆Thanx a loot u liked it

PS: Everyone I'm so sorry if I made mistakes in my Hindi..Becos all my Hindi comes From TVs and My stupid cousin.....Never even learnt to write HIndi(i mean in schl)..So sorry if i did any mistake...Anyway if you liked it..then i may probably continue...

tahnx once again to all who read it

Jaanu

jaanuuuuuu !!! no need to worry !!! im with you and your friend's likes very muchhh your wrting !!!

love yaaa (and you ??? 😳 !!!)

your's aishooo 😉

@ooooooohhh Aishooo my sweeeeeeeeeet heart...will surely continue..😃

But then Can I change the name of this post????becos i cant go on changing 5, 6, 7.....?????

jaanu

nice parts Jaanu 👏 ..it's so funny 😆 😆 ..and ya u really wanted to include Indus river in ur write up? 😆 😆 😆 ..just kidding yaar..keep it up 😊

@sindhoo di.Thanx diii and yeah I couldnt resist the Indus part😆

jaanu