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Posted: 17 years ago
Diiii update soon .Waiting waiting 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Amazing!! But you left us hanging with the accident, that's not fair...I am even more curious now... 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: knumnum

^^^ Ohh Hermoo, u r too cute yaar😆 But sadly, ur prediction is wrong😆.... Ppp already told in the prev page tat its not Gia's joke and tat Kas did meet with an accident but its not a serious one though Robbie doesnt know it yet😆


oye maine yeh bhi to keha thai, that this might be true, (the accident). so i had 2 predictions, one it can be true and the other it might not be true and gave the reason, for the accident, to bring them emotionally close, hehehehehe😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey! 😃 How's it going? Wow I just read parts 11-22 in a day 🤣. LOVE the story! During the comedy theater date, when Roka had seperate seats, I was thinking to Robbie-have Kasturi sit in your lap🤣.. after all, she won't mind😉.

And Kasturi got in an accident?? 😲 😲. Hmm.. I hope this will help strengthen Roka's relationship😳. Please continue......
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Posted: 17 years ago

Friends sorry for the delay in replying to your comments!!

Sofia! I missed your comments!!! But I understand how busy life is and so I appreciate you and everyone else taking the time to comment on the FF! 🤗 I love Robbie here too!! He is a sweetheart! If you have liked the emotions between RK then you will love it even more in the future! 😳 😃 Their love is definitely deep! I wish the same were portrayed better in the serial!!! 😕

Thanks a lot for liking the parts! 😃

Originally posted by: Kay

Prag i am so late Being the Murgi of the week is taking up time 😆 😆 and also i had to get over the excitement of having two parts to read! 😃 😃 Arre Jay, I am even more late than you! And don't worry you are very busy this week, gettin burnt!!! 😆

Double Dose!.....Prag you spoil us 😳 😆
The andolon worked then 😆 you were up late night posting......thankyou 🤗 🤗 Yes, it did seem to work!

Ok coming to the parts.....
First part was good but disappointing...ye Ajay ka phone ussi waqt ana tha? RoKa were so upset.....i hope Ajay dosnt make it a habit of getting in between RoKa and their plans 😡
But we can keep Ajay occupied with his own love life 😉 so he find out Alaana is Robbies sister....the world is a very small place 😆 😆 Unfortunately Ajay will interfere quite a bit! 😕 But I will try to keep him as busy as possible! 😆

Gia is so funny......i liked their conversation so real...friends are always their to soak up the details and gossip 😉 😆 Yep, that is the fun part of having such close friends! 😆

Part two....RoKa date 😍
at first i found comedy circus a bit weird but i guess it fits with Robbies character.....and ofcourse the way you wrote the scene out was great 👏 RoKa enjoy each others company no matter where they are 😳 and Robbie darling learn to control yourself 😉 Kya karegaa bechaara, testosterone kicks in everytime! 😉 😆

Prag you should have included some of the jokes from the comedy show....humbe toda hasslete....it would have felt like we were watching it with RoKa 😛 That's a great idea! I will try to implement it next time, if such a situation arises!

RoKa going to an ordinary place to eat was sweet....Kasturi might be a high class girl but is still down to earth...im glad she agreed and enjoyed herself 😳
Yes she did. She is trying to be as normal as possible!
Wohoooooooo the last scene 😳 😍 😆

all the way from the restaurant to the car i could feel the heat being produced 😳 😆 😆 and ofcourse the kiss finished off the night 😳
Their physical attraction is so obvious and hard to resist each other......i hope they emotionally click aswell 😳 Emotionally, its going to take longer because Robbie is a hard nut to crack! But when he doe open up, Kasturi will be flooded with love! 😳

Devikas reaction was understandable.....Robbie means alot to her....but Prag ye kya Robbie dosnt have a mobile? 😲 why not Prag? 😆 how are RoKa going to talk all night,send romantic messages and whisper sweet nothings to each other Prag Robbie kho ekh mobile de dho yaar meri taraf se 😉 😆 😆 Uskaa intezaam agli part mei ho jaayegaa! 😉 😆

and you had to end it there..........Kas had an accident 😲 oh no.......why does it happen to Robbie Hope Kas is ok and this brings them even closer together 😳 Waiting for next update 😃 Il answer your questions soon aswell 😛 😆 Kay Next part will be up shortly!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hermoo.............you will find out soon! About to post the next part!

Rosy.....the next part will be up shortly!

yummys : Thanks a lot! 😃 Well, a little suspense is always needed fun, right? 😉 😃 Next part will be up soon!

Pooja.........Good to see you!! Yaar, where did you disappear??? I was wondering about you! But thanks for stopping by and loving the story! That must have been some reading!!! 😆
And no, Kasturi probably would not have minded but the other audience would have had a tough time 😉 😆
Next part coming up ! 😃

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Hey friends...........here is the next part. This is laying a base for the future set of parts. For those who wanted to see Robbie-Kaushalya interaction, here it is and also wanted to bring everybody back into the fold. We have been dealing only wth RoKa in the last 4 parts! 😃

Re-cap : Robbie and Kasturi are enjoying the after effects of their love declaration. Ajay proposed the idea of Kasturi and Raunak hooking up. Kasturi refuses to accept that proposal! RoKa go on their first date! Kasturi enjoys herself thoroughly! On the way back she has met with an accident!

PART-23 : BECOMING RESPONSIBLE, ARE WE???

Robbie finally finds his voice and asks......"Kaisi hai woh?" 😔
Gia replies : Ab woh theek hai.....zyaada chot nahi aayi but the car was completely totalled I believe!! 😕 Do you want to talk to her?
Robbie is surprised and says : Woh tumhaaare saath hai??? 😲
Gia : Actually, mei Kasturi ke ghar mei hun. Subah hote hi uss seh milne aayi thi. Yeh lo, baat karo.
And she hands over the phone to Kasturi. They both are sitting on Kasturi's bed. Kasturi had been very lucky to have escaped with minor injuries inspite of it being a major accident! A couple of glass splinters had lodged on her left cheek and left temple. And her left arm and leg had scratches and bruises. The only major injury was on the right side of her stomach/waist. The car handle inside the right driver-side door......had smashed against her side, when she was hurtled against the door by the impact of the crash!!! As a result her waist was bruised badly and she had a concussion, but there was no fractures of any kind. The Doctor had cleaned her up very well and had advised that she take complete rest for atleast 10 days before undertaking any heavy or strenous task. And dancing was a strict No!
Kasturi is nervous to talk to Robbie! After all he had warned her about drunken driving over the weekends........
She says nervously : Hi Robbie!
It was a huge relief to hear her voice! For a moment he had lived that nightmare 😒 and Robbie could actually feel relief flooding through his veins!!!! If anything would have happened to her, he would have been devastated! 🥺 He blocks his mind from further pursuing that thought process and instead concentrates on what Kasturi was saying! Her voice was conveying that she was doing fine but still Robbie feels compelled to ask......."Are you OK?"
Kasturi replies : Haan! Bas thodi chot lagi hai.....nothing serious!
And then she says hesitantly....."Tum.......jaisa tumne kahaa wahi hua............the guy who hit me was completely drunk!"
She expects a "I told you so.....😡" from Robbie but she is extremely surprised to hear him say
Robbie : Galti meri hai! I should not have allowed you to drive back alone! 😕
Kasturi protests and says : Nahi...nahi issmei tumhaari galti kya hai? It was just some bad time!
Robbie says feelingly : No! It was not bad time...........it was good time! Good time...ke....ke tumhe kuch zyaada chot nahi aayi!!!!

Devika looks up to him surprised! 😲 Eventhough she cannot catch all that he is saying, the intensity with which Robbie had spoken, attracts her attention! Robbie can feel her eyes on him and he tries hard to control his emotions!
Even over the phone, Kasturi could also feel his intensity and she can picture him all concerned!! Suddenly she is overcome with emotion and she breaks down!!! 😭 😭 Gia who was sitting right next to her, gets up and walks out of the room. She wanted to give some privacy to Kasturi.
Kasturi sobs into the phone : I was so scared!! 😔 Car door ekdum atak gayi thi.....na andar baith sakti thi, na baahar aa sakti thi!!! Mujhe samajh mei nahi aa rahaa tha kya karu! 😭 And on top of that my side was hurting like crazy!!! I felt.....I felt I was going to die!! 😭
Robbie grips the phone and closes his eyes!!! Her words were piercing him deep and she did not even have a clue how her words were yanking his deepest fears from their depths and bringing them up to the top!!! He finds himself unable to respond. 😔
Kasturi continues : I wanted to talk to you so bad! Lekin mere paas tumhaara number nahi tha! Woh doh minute, jab tak kisine aakar car kaa darwaaza kholaa.....woh doh minute, they were hell!! 😭
Robbie finally manages to simply say : Please don't cry!
Kasturi controls her tears and says : Mei tumseh milnaa chahti hun!
Robbie also wanted to meet her desperately and so says....."Milnaa toh mei bhi chahta hun tumseh, magar tumhaare ghar......"
He does not continue the sentence. They both had the same concern! Neither of them were ready to let anybody know about them. Specially her brother........it would be very sticky explaining to him why Robbie was with her! And they shared the same sentiments.....their relationship had just started and they were not at all keen to let anybody in onto this yet!! It was just too early!
Kasturi says : How about the studio, wahaan milne......
Robbie, interrupting her : Doctor neh tumhe rest karne ke liye kahaa tha na? Then you better rest.
Kasturi says : Lekin unhone bed rest thodi kahaa hai!! Ghoomne-phirne seh manaa thodi kiyaa hai and besides, mei bilkul theek hun.
Robbie says : But still I don't think its a good idea to stress yourself out. Let me think about this.
Robbie had been speaking very softly into the phone which has been surprising Devika! Robbie did not want to excite her imagination anymore because then he would have to answer her questions! And so he says
Robbie : Tum mujhe apnaa phone number doh, mei tumhe thodi der mei call kartaa hun. Mei aaj office jaa rahaa hun. I will call you from there.
Kasturi gives her cell number and Robbie notes it down. They again converse for a couple of minutes and Robbie ends the call promising to call her ASAP. He was feeling much much better after talking to her!!

Devika who has been listening to all this asks : Kya hua Robbie? Kaun tha?
Robbie says : Woh chachi......meri ke dost ka accident ho gayaa hai.
Devika, expressing concern : Woh theek toh hai na?
Robbie : Haan.....magar mujhe uss seh milne jaana hogaa. Aur waise mujhe office bhi toh jaana hai......
Devika questions : Sunday ke din bhi Office?
Robbie replies ruefully : Haan, chachi....kaam bahut pending hai! Mujhe bhi yeh bilkul accha nahi lag rahaa ke, I will miss our Sunday lunch!
"Aaj kal aap bahut busy ho gaye hai, bhaiyya!" sulks an irritated Divya! 😡 She was sitting with both her legs folded on the sofa and drinking the boost her mother had prepared for her. (Boost is an energy drink made out of milk; available in India)

"Aap bataiye na apne boss koh, ke aap weekends kaam nahi kar sakte!! Ke aapki teen behne hain aur unki oor bhi aapki kuch zimmedaariyaan hai!!" 😳
Robbie smiles and says : Accha?? Sorry madam jee, ke mei apni zimmedaariyaan ko bhool rahaa hun! Thanks for the reminder! 😊
Divya says : You are most welcome Bhaiyya......ab jab reminder mil hi gayaa hai, toh.....Are you going to do something about it? 😉
Robbie smiles and says : Jab itnaa sab kuch tu bataa rahi hai......toh yeh bhi bataa de ke mujhe kya karnaa hai !! 😊
Divya says excitedly : How about a picnic or a weekend outing?? 😃
Robbie says : Great idea, chutki! 2-3 hafton mei kuch plan kar, tab tak meraa bhi kaam nipat jaayegaa! 😊
Devika says to Divya : Chutki, pehle tu apni zimmedaariyon ke baare mei soch....ab tu college mei aa gayi hai, kab padhna shuru karegi?
Divya says : MAA!!! Aaj Sunday hai! Sunday ke din kisi koh padhai ki baat nahi karni chahiye!
Just then Shivani enters the room and says : Maa! Yeh calculus problem resolve nahi ho rahaa hai! Kal raat seh try kar rahi hun! Please, thoda help keejiye na!
Devika raises her eyebrows to Divya and nods her head towards Shivani indicating Divya that here was a studious student who was studying on a Sunday too!! 👍🏼 Divya quickly gulps her boost down and rushes away before she is asked to open her books, giving Shivani a dirty look! 😡
Devika laughs 😆 at a rushing Divya and turns her attention to Shivani's problem. Shivani NEVER sought help from anybody so easily....she always tried to resolve her problems. She was a lot like Robbie! So, if she was asking help, then the problem really must be tough for her!
While she is helping Shivani out, Robbie is thinking hard.....how to meet Kasturi?? He had to see her, he absolutely HAD to! His thoughts are interrupted by his uncle calling out excitedly to him! Puru was just coming back from his morning walk........"Robbie!!".......he calls out to Robbie. Robbie turns around to see his uncle just entering the living room.
Puru : Puttar.....abhi teri bike dekh keh aa rahaa hoon! 😳 Wah! Kya kaam kiyaa hai Balwinder Singh neh usspar!!! 👏 👏
Robbie asks him surprised : Already ready ho gayaa? Unhone toh agle hafte kaa vaada kiyaa tha!!!
Puru : Haan....lekin lagtaa hai woh raat-din usi par kaam kar rahaa hai! 😉 Aur kyu na kare.....tum neh usse itnaa interesting kaam jo diyaa hai, varnaa toh sab sirf puraani gaadiyaan repair karvaane ke liye hee uske paas jaate hai!! 😆 😆
He chuckles and says : Abhi jab mei walk seh waapas aa rahaa tha toh mujhe le gayaa apne garaage mei, aur bike dikhaane lagaa! Ekdum kamaal kaa kaam kiyaa hai!

Robbie was a bike freak! 😳 He loved bikes passionately and had always dreamed about owning one!! He had bought a Kinetic Laser a couple of weeks ago. The bike came with a standard 166 cc engine, but that was not enough power for Robbie!! It was too slow for him and so he had asked Balwinder Singh, the auto garage owner around the corner to customize and enhance the bike. He had given instructions to increase the engine power to a 250cc engine which would come with the maximum power of 26 bhp @ 9000 rpm. With this kind of power engine, he could speed upto 130 km per hour! He had also asked the front and rear disc brakes to be enhanced, which would give him control on the bike in any speed. Balwinder Singh had been very excited to do this!!! It was very rare that anybody came to him for customizations!
Puru says : Woh tumhe ek baar aane ko keh rahaa tha. Sab kuch finalize karne ke liye.
Robbie : Abhi office ko jaate jaate, raaste mei dekh letaa hun.
Devika says : Pataa nahi tumpar yeh kya bhoot savaar hai! Saari duniyaa Car khareed rahi hai aur tum bike ride karnaa chahte ho! 😡
Puru says : Arre Devika, tum nahi samjhogi! 😃
Robbie says : Haan chachi, aap nahi samjhengi! Its a guy thing! 😛
Devika shakes her head at both of them and says : But worrying is a 'woman thing' na! Ab yeh ek aur vishay hogaa meri chintaa kaa! Ke tum bike kaise chalaa rahe ho, kitne speed seh ride kar rahe ho!! 😡 Uff! Kabhi toh mujhpe taras khao! 😕
Puru laughs and says : Don't worry Devika........bas thode dinon ki baat hai! Phir toh koi na koi chinta 'karnewaali' aa hi jaayegi! 😉 😆
He and Devika smile knowingly 😃 and Robbie says......."Kya chachaji....aap bhi!" 😳
He quickly gets up checking the clock and says......."Ab mujhe nikalnaa chahiye."
He picks up his and his aunt's empty tea cups to put away in the kitchen sink. Half an hour later Robbie is ready to leave. He finishes his breakfast and is about to leave when he stops and turns to look at his aunt and says
Robbie : Aap sahi keh rahi thi chachi....lagtaa hai ab mujhe ek phone le lenaa chahiye!
He smiles at Devika 😊 and quickly leaves before a shocked Devika can ask him any questions! 😲 And yes, she was shocked to see him agree so quickly to something he had been resisting for 2 years!! Robbie was never keen about carrying a cell-phone around as he felt it was more an invonvenience than an advantage!

Robbie makes his way to work. He was so lost in thinking about Kasturi that he forgets to stop at the auto garage. Once at work, he has to put a stop to her thoughts, as there was just too much work to finish. 😕 He and his teamlead Ahmed Rasool have managed to come that Sunday. After a few hours, Robbie is surprised to see Kaushalya Chawla ! Kaushalya usually did not come to office on Sundays, but today she had come as she wanted to read up a proposal document for a new project they were starting up.
Robbie is working away furiously. One program is giving him a lot of angst.....and after several rounds of debugging he realizes that the basic design in one of the modules is flawed!! 😲 He tests it in several ways to confirm his suspicion. And when all his tests come back negative he immediately walks over to Rasool and shows him his findings! Rasool quickly repeats his own tests and confirms Robbie's suspicion that it was indeed a design issue. The problem was hidden till now, but a change in a different module has caused this error to become visible now! He and Robbie quickly research on a fix for it and realize that this module was used in several places and quite a bit of coding changes will have to be made as result of the spillover affect!! 😲 😔
Rasool sighs deeply and says : This is not good at all!! 😒 Waise hi hum logon ke paas time nahi hai! Now, this is going to push the date further by a couple of weeks! I think I better talk to Kaushalya maam immediately!

He walks over to Kaushalya's office while Robbie walks back to his office and starts working on a solution for this problem. In half an hour he gets a call from Kaushalya, asking him to stop by. Robbie quickly walks over. When he enters the room, he sees Rasool, Kaushalya and Ajay in a deep discussion. Apparently Kaushalya had called Ajay to join them. Kaushalya waves Robbie in and asks him to take a seat.
She smiles at him. 😃 He stares at Kaushalya!!! Kasturi smiled just like her mom!!! 😲 They both had the same sweet and infectious smile that lighted up their whole face and made it look even more beautiful! 😳 He breaks out of his thoughts when he hears her say
Kaushalya : Great work Ranbir! 👏 👏 Yeh bahut accha hua that we caught this atleast now! But it is a fact that this is a huge problem. Mei, Ajay aur Ahmed abhi yahi discuss kar rahe the. Ahmed neh suggest kiyaa ke tumhaara input bhi bahut helpful rahegaa, isiliye meine tumhe bulaaya. 😊
Robbie says : Thank you, maam!
Kaushalya looking at both of them : Toh aap log kya suggest karte hain?
Several ideas are put forth and discussed but one common factor in all the ideas is that the prototype presentation was going to be delayed! Ajay who was listening quietly till now, scowls and says
Ajay : We cannot afford to delay the prototype! 😡 You don't seem to understand that yeh performance-based contract hai! Agar hum deadline meet nahi karte hai, toh there is a high chance that the contract might be taken away from us!
Robbie says : But we cannot ignore this flaw either! 😲 This will seriously jeopardize the database profiling aspect of the robots! 😒
Ajay says : I understand that! But if the delay will cause the project to be scrapped then none of this will make any difference! 😡 So its crucial that we do make a presentation on the given date. If we do not make the presentation, then among the 3 companies that are doing this project, we will be the only one who will be a no-show! I cannot allow that!! We have to move forward with whatever is available! 😡

All 3 of them argue it out for another 15 minutes. Kaushalya is listening quietly. Ajay was right from the business persepctive. Robbie was right from the technical perspective! How many countless times has she seen the same issue discussed!!! The same fight being fought! But she was really impressed by both her son and by Robbie! They both were very clear and passionate about what they wanted! And she also sees that both were adamant about getting their way, after all it was the young blood that was running in their veins!
But she notices something else between them! There seemed to be an underlying friction between them!!! It was like one was trying to prove that he was better than the other! And they were using this issue as the sounding board for that!! 😲 She wonders if this is just an employer-employee disagreement or if there is something else to it. But for now, she had to put this discussion on hold as it was getting out of control and so she interrupts
Kaushalya : OK! Both of you are right in your own way. Lekin Ajay, mei Ranbir seh sehmat hoon! Whatever Ranbir is saying about the quality aspect of the project, I am with him on that. 👍🏼 😊
If Ajay is upset, he does not show it!
Kaushalya continues : Yeh koi maamooli contract nahi hai...I want NO compromise in quality! You understand me?
Ajay nods his head. He was very upset! 😡 He had felt slighted, but his mother had groomed him well! She had taught him that being a boss does not mean that his decision will always be taken! She had taught him to take things in his stride and learn to accept other people's decisions!
Kaushalya continues : But I also share your concern, not doing the prototype presentation will reflect very badly on Chawla.E.
She turns to Ahmed and Robbie and says : Ahmed, Can we mask this issue? Kya hum kuch aisa kar sakte hai, where by we can do the presentation on some temporary logic while fixing the basic issue?
Rasool says : At this point, I will say this is possible. But maam, we will be able to give you a concrete decision on that, tomorrow.....after a thorough technical design meeting with the whole team. What do you think Robbie?
Robbie says : I agree. This is very much possible.
Kaushalya says : Good! Lets get cracking on it then.
And she turns to Ajay and says : Ajay, mei koshish karti hun ke presentation ek week ke liye postpone kiyaa jaaye! That will give us time to work this temporary solution out! Theek hai? 😊
Everyone agrees with the solution. Ajay knew the kind of clout his mother held in the business and government circle and he also knew that when she says 'I will try' it means she is 100% sure of it happening!!

Robbie and Ahmed leave and Kaushalya turns towards Ajay and says......."Tumhe itnaa buraa kyun lag rahaa hai???"
Ajay blinks!! 😲 He thought he had hidden it well from his mother! But apparently, she could read his mind!!!
Kaushalya continues : I have told you before too Ajay......never antagonize an employee! Sometimes we need them more than they need us! I know it is difficult but sometimes one has to keep his/her ego in control to move forward. Always remember that! 😳
Ajay does not reply. He is mad! 😡
Kaushalya says : Get a meeting arranged tomorrow afternoon after the technical team meets, we will finalize a solution then. And now, I would like to be alone!!
Ajay gets up and walks back to his office. Its true that they now had some kind of a solution for the problem but he feels they had arrived at the solution by walking all over his ego! 😡 And he cannot help but feel offended that his mother had sided Robbie!! But being the business man he is, he soon gets over it, but whatever anti-Robbie feelings he had, they have only gotten a little stronger! 😒

Robbie and Ahmed get back to Robbie's desk and together research on a solution for the problem. Time simply flies and before they know its 7.00 PM!! Checking the time, Ahmed gets up and says : Ab mei nikaltaa hun, varnaa biwi ki jootiyaan khaani padhegi! 😆 😆
Robbie says : Thoda rukiye Sir, bas yeh ek iteration ho jaane deejiye!
Ahmed says : Arre miyaan tumhaara kya?? Akeli jaan ho, na koi poochnewaali na daantnewaali!!! 😃 Magar mei shaadi-shuda hun aur usee tarah rehnaa bhi chahta hun!! 😉 😆 😆 Iss iteration ke chakkar mei kahin meri gruhasti na barbaad ho jaaye! 😆
He laughs but Robbie does not!!! Because he had suddenly remembered that he was supposed to call Kasturi!! 😲 😲 How in the world did he forget that?? Robbie is overcome by such guilt that his face reflects it! 😔
Ahmed asks him concerned : Kya hua Robbie? 😳
Robbie quickly manages to smile and says....."Kuch nahi! Mujhe bhi kuch kaam yaad aa gayaa tha, jo mei karnaa bhool gayaa!"
Ahmed says forebodingly and leaves : You better get to it quickly, kahin bahut der na ho jaaye!

Robbie quickly pulls out Kasturi's number and dials. The phone keeps ringing but she does not pick it up! 😲 He does not leave a voicemail but calls back again. Still no answer! After trying for 6 times, he finally leaves a voicemail! He wonders if she is with Gia?? 😕 He wished he had taken Gia's number too but then again thinks she is supposed to be taking rest, why would she go out with Gia?? He continues to work but in 15 minutes, he calls her again. Same status! 😔 He cannot sit still and work anymore as he is getting very concerned for her! He gets up to leave. While walking out he notices that Kaushalya was still in her office, still working! 😲 He knocks on her door and bids her goodnight. Kaushalya wishes him back and he leaves. He takes the elevator down. He decides he will try calling Kasturi again from a public phone. If she still does not answer, then he was going to her house!! He did not care what anybody thought.....he was going to meet her!!!!

He gets off the elevator and has just turned the corner when he stops in his tracks shocked! 😲 Kasturi was limping towards him!!! He stares at her extremely surprised and Kasturi also stops as soon as she sees him and calls out...."Hi Robbie!"
Robbie rushes to her and asks her in shock : Kasturi! 😲 Tum yahaan....tum kaise......tum yahaan kyaa kar rahi ho? 😲
Kasturi says : Tumseh milne aayi hun!
She turns a little and winces as the pain shoots through her ride side! Robbie grabs her hand and slowly walks her over to a sofa in the reception area. He makes her sit very carefully and sits next to her on her right, and says....."Yeh kya paagalpan hai?? Why did you take such a risk??" 😡
Kasturi replies : Aur nahi toh kya karti? 😕 You said you will call me almost 12 hours ago! Lekin koi call nahi aaya! Meine tumhaare ghar call kiyaa toh tumhaari behen neh bataaya ke tum ghar peh nahi ho. Toh phir meine socha ke shaayad tum abhi bhi office mei hi ho. Isiliye yahaan chali aayi!
Robbie says apologetically : I am so sorry!!! I really am!! Mei kaam mei kuch iss tarah phas gayaa ke mujhe call karne kaa mauka hi nahi milaa! Lekin abhi tumhe hi call kar rahaa tha, par tum phone utha nahi rahi thi?
Kasturi says : Actually phone mere bag ke andar tha, shaayad mujhe ring sunaayi nahi diyaa.
And she turns to open her handbag when the sudden movement again causes intense pain to her and she says......."Ouch!!" 😕
Robbie feels terrible to see her in such pain and says : Kasturi......Why did you take so much trouble??? 😡
Kasturi looks at him and says softly : Do you need an answer for that question?
They stare at each other. Her eyes start brimming with tears! 😭 And she leans on Robbie's left shoulder, suddenly feeling very weak! Robbie wraps his left arm around her and holds her to him.
Kasturi says simply : I just had to see you! I was desperately waiting for your call!
Robbie says feelingly : I am very very sorry Kasturi! Mei thoda laaparvaah hun! Kaam mei busy ho jaata hun toh mujhe kuch yaad nahi rehtaa! Abhi tak toh yeh theek chal rahaa tha, lekin ab shaayad mujhe apne taur-tareeke badalne honge!
He turns his head towards her and kisses her forehead and says : I will try to be more responsible in the future! 😳
Kasturi turns her head and looking at him asks : Promise?
Robbie laughs and says : Promise??? 😆 😆 That is so childish Kasturi!!
Kasturi gives him an angry look and Robbie gives up saying : Ok...Ok...Promise! 😳
She smiles her effervescent smile 😃 and Robbie's eyes are drawn to her left cheek, which was bruised due to the glass splinters. He touches them softly and asks......"Bahut dard ho rahaa hai?"
Kasturi says : Haan
Robbie slowly kisses on those bruises. 😳 😳 His sudden proximity sends her heartbeat racing and whatever complaints she had against him, slowly melt away in the warmth of his kiss!!! 😳 Kasturi says naughtily...."Abhi bhi dard ho rahaa hai!" 😉 😛
Robbie laughs softly 😆 and is again kissing her on the bruises 😳 😳 when they both hear Kaushalya's voice loud and clear..........."Kasturi???"

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

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*EDITED*

Pragalbha dii U R shocked to see me nah..😆

Well well well as usual my BIG BIG HUGS for dii. How cute that was ..👏U R really very natural in writing dii......😃

Okkie i could imagine Ro trying to contro his feelings while talking to Kastoo on phone. 😳Thank god katoo is not seriously hurt 😃 and dii know what I am really like Chutki.😆 its exactly what i do. Sit crosslegged on sofa and drink Boost😆 And Shivani is learning calculus🤢 i HATE it😡😆

Robbie deciede to buy a cell.. Dii plsssss atleast cell which model is it as i nw u'll never gimme the number😭😆

Pragalbha dii U are making my head boil here too.. at schl i have tons of computer programming to learn and here too i was actually trying to solve the matter😆 Okkie so Ajay and Ro are so stubborn on what they want. well thats excelent 😳 becos Ajay u want allu and Ro you want Kas. so keep up this habit ok😆

Devu and Kaush are two sweet hearts here.😳 MWAAAAHS for both the moms.😳

Kasturi u came to the office👏 And U called Ro's home too 👏Shows how much our cute couples love each other. But yeh Ro bhi nah. He gets immersed in job🤢😆

OKKIE now like a good BT creative pls😉 di make Kaushi blind to see what was b/w RoKa, becos their love is so young to face any whips...😳

UPDATE SOON

Jaanu

Edited by GAPS - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Pragalbha, the part was amazing, i raise my hand up for wanting to see more of robbie and kaushalya interaction, heck i even look forward to robbie and Ajay's interaction. forthe way you have depecited these 3 characters i just really enjoy reading there interaction. i just find these characters together gelling beautifully.👏and i luved Kaushalya in Karam Apna Apna..and totally think she was perfect for the role that you essayed for her here...😃

The only complaint i have here is that robbie saw his parents die in a car crash and you've written his fear very well, now my complaint is that he's crazy for speed?? that had me throw a bit off. as for describing the whole accident of kasturi's i got goose bumps cause i was in an accident my first ever.. brought back some horrible memories...and man the way you described the door, yikes wayy too real..and the car was totalled kasturi was very lucky to escape. no doubt...😭 and robbie's gripping fear when he talked to kasturi wayyy too good😳 found it very moving...👏these two are defintely moving closer and closer together.. i really felt bad that robbie couldnt come over and be there for kasturi she was dying for his touch.. 😳

Okay my fav. part Ajay's feeling towards Robbie, next time can you please give more dialogue between these two i really thing they have a bomb btween them and they keep passing it back and forth, neither one wanting it to go off, yet feeling the heat.😉

and i luved both devika and kaushalya's motherly trigger button that goes off where their respective sons feelings were concerned. died laughing at devika overhearing robbie's conversation or bits of it typical mom😆 and Ajay thinking he could hide something from his mom, too cute.. mom's truly have a second sense where their kids are concerned, bravooo Pragzs luved it...

and ohhh soo cute kasturi had to see robbie, she a really sweetheart in your fanfic, i totally luv how in luv she is with him and cant help herself...and what you gave me a heart attack with your ending, please update soon this is not fair...i cant wait to see what kaushalya saw or didnt see....great part prazs..luved it....

robina....😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Kasturi is fine then......phew

Prag your cliffhangers are going to kill me oneday 😡 😆 😆 ........im wondering if Kaush saw anything or not 😕 its too early for RoKa to be seen together by anyone...their relationship has only just began

No doubt Robbies feelings towards Kasturi were written so well...the worry and need to meet her when shes in pain...slowly but surly Robbie is opening up 😳

The heat between Ajay and Robbie building up...already there was some friction...now this debate about the presentation has made the friction worse im glad Kaush can think from a business POV....and didnt side with Ajay just because hes her son 😊

At least Kaush appreciates Robbie for his hard work and determination...good impression Robbie 😉

Kasturi came all the way to office to meet Robbie 😳 The RoKa interaction was very sweet 😳

Prag update soon yaar........cant wait to find out if Kaush saw Robbie kiss Kasturi

Kay

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