Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 61

Originally posted by: GAPS

Pragalbha dii U R shocked to see me nah..😆 😲 I certainly am!!! And I started wondering if it is the weekend already! Very good to see you!Well well well as usual my BIG BIG HUGS for dii. How cute that was ..👏U R really very natural in writing dii......😃Thank you!

Okkie i could imagine Ro trying to contro his feelings while talking to Kastoo on phone. 😳Thank god katoo is not seriously hurt 😃 yeah.....she was quite lucky! and dii know what I am really like Chutki.😆 its exactly what i do. Sit crosslegged on sofa and drink Boost😆 My sister was a big boost drinker 😆 though I never liked it! And Shivani is learning calculus🤢 i HATE it😡😆 I loved Calculus, I hated Algebra! 😆

Robbie deciede to buy a cell.. Dii plsssss atleast cell which model is it as i nw u'll never gimme the number😭😆 I myself will not know his number, so can't tell you! 😆

Pragalbha dii U are making my head boil here too.. at schl i have tons of computer programming to learn and here too i was actually trying to solve the matter😆 That is too funny!! 😆 😆 Jaanu, trust me I was a little wary of getting too tehnical but I had to write at least this much to explain the situation!Okkie so Ajay and Ro are so stubborn on what they want. well thats excelent 😳 becos Ajay u want allu and Ro you want Kas. so keep up this habit ok😆 I agree 😆 😆 and I love the nickname you gave Alaana......Allu!😆 Devu and Kaush are two sweet hearts here.😳 MWAAAAHS for both the moms.😳They are very sweet.

Kasturi u came to the office👏 And U called Ro's home too 👏Shows how much our cute couples love each other. But yeh Ro bhi nah. He gets immersed in job🤢😆Arre, dheere dheere sab seekh jaayegaa 😉 😆! After all nayaa aashiq hai!

OKKIE now like a good BT creative pls😉 di make Kaushi blind to see what was b/w RoKa, becos their love is so young to face any whips...😳OK 😆 UPDATE SOON

Jaanu

Originally posted by: nrasheed

Pragalbha, the part was amazing, i raise my hand up for wanting to see more of robbie and kaushalya interaction, heck i even look forward to robbie and Ajay's interaction. forthe way you have depecited these 3 characters i just really enjoy reading there interaction. Robina!! I knew you will like Kaushi-Robbie interaction! I also feel there is a lot of potential to their interactions, just like Ajay-Robbie interactions! 😆 I am soooo glad you think the same! i just find these characters together gelling beautifully.👏and i luved Kaushalya in Karam Apna Apna..and totally think she was perfect for the role that you essayed for her here...😃 Thanks a lot!!!

The only complaint i have here is that robbie saw his parents die in a car crash and you've written his fear very well, now my complaint is that he's crazy for speed?? that had me throw a bit off. Yes, that is a contradiction, right? 😃 Well, here is the explanation! Reason tells him not to, but his inherent risk-taking genes push him towards speed! And he is young, very young...so cannot control the spirit always! In fact, I am going to depict this struggle in him, more in the future! as for describing the whole accident of kasturi's i got goose bumps cause i was in an accident my first ever.. brought back some horrible memories...oh that's terrible! Its never good! and man the way you described the door, yikes wayy too real..Thanks! [/coor>and the car was totalled kasturi was very lucky to escape. no doubt...😭 and robbie's gripping fear when he talked to kasturi wayyy too good😳 found it very moving...👏Thanks a lot! 😊 these two are defintely moving closer and closer together.. i really felt bad that robbie couldnt come over and be there for kasturi she was dying for his touch.. 😳I felt it too!!! The way Kasturi broke down, it was very touching for me! I felt so bad for her!

Okay my fav. part Ajay's feeling towards Robbie, next time can you please give more dialogue between these two i really thing they have a bomb btween them and they keep passing it back and forth, neither one wanting it to go off, yet feeling the heat.😉Excellently said!!! 👏 That is exactly how it is!! And yes I will provide more dialogs to them in the future! Robina, I am soo glad that you and others have liked this part too....I was a tad concerned about this, because there was not much RoKa in this! 😳

and i luved both devika and kaushalya's motherly trigger button that goes off where their respective sons feelings were concerned. died laughing at devika overhearing robbie's conversation or bits of it typical mom😆 and Ajay thinking he could hide something from his mom, too cute.. mom's truly have a second sense where their kids are concerned, bravooo Pragzs luved it...Thank you Robina! I was trying hard to match the standard you have set for parents in your FF! 😃

and ohhh soo cute kasturi had to see robbie, she a really sweetheart in your fanfic, i totally luv how in luv she is with him and cant help herselfShe is such a cutie! I really like her here inspite of some of her thinking...and what you gave me a heart attack with your ending, please update soon this is not fair...i cant wait to see what kaushalya saw or didnt see....great part prazs..luved it....OK, this time I am keeping my lips sealed! 😆 You will have to read it in the next part! 😉 😆 robina....😃

Originally posted by: Kay

👏 👏 👏 Thanks Kay!
Kasturi is fine then......phew Yep, she is fine! 😃

Prag your cliffhangers are going to kill me oneday 😡 😆 😆 ........im wondering if Kaush saw anything or not 😕 its too early for RoKa to be seen together by anyone...their relationship has only just began Ha Ha....not telling anything tis time! You have to read it in the next part!!! 😉 😆 😆......Sorry for troubling you so!

No doubt Robbies feelings towards Kasturi were written so well...the worry and need to meet her when shes in pain...slowly but surly Robbie is opening up 😳 You caught that very well 👏 👏. Just like Kas, he is also trying to make changes. But he is not ready to tell everything to her yet!
The heat between Ajay and Robbie building up...already there was some friction...now this debate about the presentation has made the friction worse Yep, Ajay and Robbie are walsking on dangerous ground! We will have to see where this takes them! im glad Kaush can think from a business POV....and didnt side with Ajay just because hes her son 😊
Kaush is a pucca businesswoman!
At least Kaush appreciates Robbie for his hard work and determination...good impression Robbie 😉 Yes...😆 But will she be impressed after seing him kiss her daughter? 😉

Kasturi came all the way to office to meet Robbie 😳 The RoKa interaction was very sweet 😳 You know, when you are in love.....you will go to any lengths! Nothing seems impossible or unnecessary during that time! 😆
Prag update soon yaar........cant wait to find out if Kaush saw Robbie kiss Kasturi OK, I will try to.......but it might be Sat night before I can do it!

Kay

Pragg hamesha ki tarah bahuttt hi aacha part 👏👏

pragg robbie jab phone par kastu se baat kar raha tha i can feel his pain ..and very well written 👏...really robbie kitna majoor lag raha tha ..ki jo huya uski wajah se hi huya ..serial toh serial FF meh bhi robbie har baat ka apne ko hi dosh deta hai 😭..kyu itna aacha hai robbie ??...

Thanku pragg ki tune meri baat manni ..ki robbie ne phone lene ka dicide kiya and Bike bhi ..pragg kitna aacha lagega bike chalata huya 😍...wesse robbie ne kabhi serial meh bike nahi chalai na ??😆

i love robbie and kaushi interaction😳...mujhe tumhari kaushi bhi bahut aachi lagi ...a good mother and a brilliant Bis women👏👏...serial meh toh kisi kaam ki nahi 😡

and robbie kab bholna chordega 😡..pagla phone karna bhool gaya ..lekin main gussa nahi hoon 😳...bahut hi pyara hai robbie uski iss adda par bhi pyar aata hai 😳

and yee kya last meh kaushi ne kastu aur robbie ko dekh liya ??😲...pragg bata na kya huya ?? ..arre esse kesse itna jaldi pata chal jaayega ..abhi toh shuruwaat hai yaar ..itni jaldi nahi 😭...please please essa kuch nahi karna ..nahi toh mera dil ho toot jaayega 😭💔

Praggg pragg mujhe tere robbie se pyarrr ho gaya hai reee☺️ ..mujhe maloom hai mujhe essa nahi karna chahiye ..lekin main majbooor hoon dil par kabbu nahi ...yaar tune Robbie ko itna aacha apni FF meh banaya hai ..ki kisi ko bhi pyar ho jaaye 😳....pragg thankuuu very much for lovely FF ...tere meh toh jaadoo hai ...tu har part meh jaan daaaalll deti hai 👏...u are besttt 👍🏼😳

pragg kab likh rahi hai tu nextttt parttt ??😆 i can't wait yaar 😆

Manpreet

Originally posted by: sahib29

Pragg hamesha ki tarah bahuttt hi aacha part 👏👏 Thanks mannu!!

pragg robbie jab phone par kastu se baat kar raha tha i can feel his pain ..and very well written 👏...really robbie kitna majoor lag raha tha ..ki jo huya uski wajah se hi huya ..serial toh serial FF meh bhi robbie har baat ka apne ko hi dosh deta hai 😭..kyu itna aacha hai robbie ??... serial ki toh baat mat kar!! Wahaan woh majboor nahi bewakoof lag rahaa hai!😡

Thanku pragg ki tune meri baat manni ..ki robbie ne phone lene ka dicide kiya and Bike bhi Haan, woh dono kharred tahaa hai! 😆 😆 ..pragg kitna aacha lagega bike chalata huya 😍...wesse robbie ne kabhi serial meh bike nahi chalai na ??😆 Bahut smart lagegaa! 😳

i love robbie and kaushi interaction😳...mujhe tumhari kaushi bhi bahut aachi lagi ...a good mother and a brilliant Bis women👏👏...serial meh toh kisi kaam ki nahi 😡 Sahi kahaa 😆 😆! Yahaan peh woh bahut hi intelligent aur dignified lady hai!

and robbie kab bholna chordega 😡..pagla phone karna bhool gaya ..lekin main gussa nahi hoon 😳...bahut hi pyara hai robbie uski iss adda par bhi pyar aata hai 😳 Dheere dheere sab seekh jaayegaa! Abhi story thode aage toh badhne de! 😆

and yee kya last meh kaushi ne kastu aur robbie ko dekh liya ??😲...pragg bata na kya huya ?? ..arre esse kesse itna jaldi pata chal jaayega ..abhi toh shuruwaat hai yaar ..itni jaldi nahi 😭...please please essa kuch nahi karna ..nahi toh mera dil ho toot jaayega 😭💔 Abhi kuch nahi bataaungi! Agli part mei padh lenaa 😉 😆.

Praggg pragg mujhe tere robbie se pyarrr ho gaya hai reee☺️ ..mujhe maloom hai mujhe essa nahi karna chahiye ..lekin main majbooor hoon dil par kabbu nahi ...yaar tune Robbie ko itna aacha apni FF meh banaya hai ..ki kisi ko bhi pyar ho jaaye 😳....pragg thankuuu very much for lovely FF ...tere meh toh jaadoo hai ...tu har part meh jaan daaaalll deti hai 👏...u are besttt 👍🏼😳 Bahut bahut shukriyaa mannu! Jab app sab log jaise readers ho, toh part likhne mei mazaa aata hai! 🤗

pragg kab likh rahi hai tu nextttt parttt ??😆 i can't wait yaar 😆 Aglaa part Sunday shaam tak post kar doongi!

Manpreet

Originally posted by: lwfw

Pragzz 👏 👏 👏 Thanks Shara!!!
but agree that one day your clifhanger will kill me too
you will be responsible for so many of us 😆 Well.......😆 a little suspense is needed! Don't you agree??? 😳

oh my god did kaushalya see something ? My lips are sealed!
me waiting for the next part 😳 Will be ready by Sunday evening

robie is buying bike 😳 oh roka going on a bike ride 😆 😉 in serial tho it did not happen nice to imagine it in your FF Yep, they will be going on a bike ride and it will be fun!!! 😆

Originally posted by: yummys

Awesome! Yeh, you do have a good point and you left me with curiosity again. But you did an awesome job! Can't wait for the next part.

Originally posted by: stars_shine

praggggz!...wow...robbie aur ajay ki competition!...LOL....luved dat! Oh yeah...there will be other such situations to, in the future! 😆
aur so sweet...kas usse milne ayiii..

ok now frm the start:
1) glad dat kas is okay...only slightly injured Yep, it was nothing serious
2) aww she wants to meet him!...so cute! Dil seh majboor thi 😉
3) shayad devika ko shak ho gaya hain? Not yet....😃
4) aww robbie's a bike freak?.....but didn't his parents die in an accident?..sorry...just kinda confused me Ok, sorry for the confusion caused, let me explain this. Sure, Robbie lost his parents in an accident, but that does not mean he has sworn off riding or driving any vehicle. He is simply scared of loosing loved ones, but not of vehicles. Also, he has always loved bikes and speeding, that is just a natural liking that all people of young age like and he is just like them! 😃 Hopefully that was more convincing!
5) i like kaush being the great business woman...and being fair...its nice for a change She is very dignified in this serial
6) did she see themmmm??? i really hope so..and tht she is not against it!!!
Am not telling anything 😳
brilliant part as always...con't soon! Thanks and the next part will be up on Sunday evening luv, STAR ⭐️