Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 56

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Posted: 17 years ago

ok pragz diii
wowwwww 2 parts

Ok i knw u updated l8 but i guess 2 parts mde up 4 it 😆😆😆

Part 21

what a part ok robbie i knw u were diappointed with ajay phonin.

but yh kyaa?? ajays palnn on getin kasturi married with raunak but i dnt thnk thats going to be happenn

Lolz n as manu syd ajay ask ur sis what love is????? dnt look at pplz statues jus because alaanas robbies sister 😆😆😆

Part 22

One of my fav parts ever

what a part omg i loved it ok a date hmmmmm

ok i started 😭 when robbie n kasturi had 2 sit apart 4 15 minutes 😆😆😆 but i guess thnx 2 dt bhai saab who is willing enough 2 give his seat up lolz.

robbie u culd w8 till outside as ustarted kissing kasturis hand inside the place 😆😆😆 so yh the food hmmmmmm wheres our invite???😆😆😆

Then d car scene wow that just made me so happy lolz. 😆😆

hw u described it n hw they were wowwwwwww 👏

ok whats this yh let robbie hav a mobile atleats then he cn call his cha chi n yh kasturi 2 😆😆😆

Whats this Kasturis accident????????????😭😭😭

robbie dnt get 2 worrie

nw pragz dii u hav 2 update soon pleaseeeeee dnt make us w8 more longer 😆😆😆

keep up d gr8 work

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hummy xxx

Edited by PrInCeZz07 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

WOW 2 parts together😃

PART 21

Awesome part dii👏 loved it absolutely😳

I bet Ajay will create problems between RoKa😕 which i dont want

one of my fav song inn dino😳 and yes your right dii this song suit the situation perfectly😃

dii i have a suggestion😉 aap jaldi se Ajay ko Alaana ke saath busy kardo 😉fir vo RoKa ke bare mei kud hi bhul jayega😉 lolz😆

Kasturi's rejection to the Raunak's pruposal was expected😆 how can she accept😆 galti se bhi usne accept kar diya to i wont let her 😉lolz😆

PART 22

Awesome part as usual👏 very well written👏👏👏

im shocked dii 😲how did he manage to control his feelings 😆wasnt that hard for him lolz😆

i liked it when Devika was worried for him😳 but dont like when she shouted at him 😭 poor Robbie😆

u stopped at a curious stage dii plz continue ASAP😆 im curious to know is this accident is true😕 or she is just pulling his leg😆

CONTINUE ASAP😡😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

oyye Mani pyar se bol ok 😡..nahi toh main teri Pitayi kar doongi 😡😛😆...wo teri diii hai 😳

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
pragz you have been such a sweet gal yaar listening to our andolan and stuff

updating it in the middle of the night
this is for you 🤗

parts have been awesome yaar 👏 👏
and your song selections is also good
seems like you go first for lyrics and then for tune

you have been reminding some very beatiful songs
thanks dear

😭 but you have again put me on the edge yaar
stoping at accident 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sahib29

oyye Mani pyar se bol ok 😡..nahi toh main teri Pitayi kar doongi 😡😛😆...wo teri diii hai 😳

Manpreet

dii apne pyar+ladai vali language nahi suni kya😆 yeh vahi vali hai😉😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow praggzz 👏 ... two parts together... chalo it was worth the wait 😳 ... love it absolutely the way u r taking the story fwd... Ajay wanting kasturi to marry raunak 😕 .... loved part 22 more .. loved the way kasturi and robbie had to sit away from each other and how they felt disappointed... 😆 .... the song is really nice and appropriately describes robbie's sentiments right now 😃 ... par yeh kiya.. kasturi kaa accident . 😕 .. plssss dont let it be anything serious.... waiting for ur next part 😳 .. brilliant dear... these two parts were excellent 👏

Fari
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Posted: 17 years ago

Pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp😃

Iam suppppppppppeeerrrrrrrrrrrrr happy with both the parts. Iam glad tat finally u did some justice Ajay-Alaana😆 Whew!!! At last, Ajay knows tat Alaana is Robs sis and Idiot kahin kaaaa, he said bye as soon as he knew abt her😡.. Kaise kaise hote hai yeh ladke😆😆

Iam liking the pace with which u r taking RK's relation yaar. Take ur time cos Iam definitely luving this😳....

The date was awesome. It was something I never expected, First a comedy show and then Parathe wali Gali. Its ssooooooooo natural and realistic unlike these serials where they show only 5* restaurants all the time. U got full points on tat one👏

Uhhooo I thought Devika will know abt it already, atleast I thought she will guess it but i think u have different plans😛😆...

And yeh kyaaaa, Accident??? Ohhhh nooooo, Please dont make robbie cry again😆... Iam sure this is only to make RK relation more stronger😳😳😳

Now tat u finished YuRa FF, Iam going to haunt u to update this more frequently now😆 Write soooooooooooooooooooooon and post sooooooooooooooonn😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hai Pragalbha diiiiiiii 🤗 🤗 🤗 hope u r doing well 😃 .I knw its been a long time since I posted here and I am srry for that .But my wishes and love r there with u always diii 😳 .

Well what can I say now u r the best romantic writer over here 😳 👏.This FF is soo close to my heart and I love how the story is progressing 😳 .Ro confession part and the last two parts r my favourite ones 👏 😳 .Their fist date was soo romantic 😳 .And I love the way u r giving us every details like the name of the theatre restaurant then thier dresses etc etc 👏 👏 .

Now di u will have to update soon coz u have gave us all a big cliff hanger ( serial mein tho nahin milthi atleast u r giving us 😆 ). I am feeling this accident may make Ro tell all that about his past to Kas which he hadn't shared yet with her .Or is this a joke of Sia 🤔 no no she will not joke Kastu's accident OR will she .Look di I am confused 😕 😆 so please update soon.

This is for entertaining us all with ur wonderful FF 🤗 🤗 👏 👏

All the best 👍🏼 .Update soon. 😃

Love
Rosy
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Ppppppp di,

nice to see that u have posted two parts, 😃 first i was planning to have a nice fight with u for not posting for 14 days, after saying i'll post after 10 days. but ur forgiven after reading the parts. and yes, it was worth waiting for sure. u know something, I think i told u this before, that whenever I read ur ff, i always have wide smile on my face, now i know why, it's cuz of the use of emotions in ur ff, man. the way u describe a person's emotions, seems sooooo real, and i feel so attached to it, makes me smile. the part 21 was very gud, i loved it, so ajay found out that she's Robbie's sister, same thing happened to robbie, she had to be sister of ajay, 😆 and i love that song in dinoo dil mera, was suitable song for his situation. 👏 I loved everything in this part. and now i have to go with my mom. wen i come back i'll read the next part and comment. alright. see ya.



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harman 😛
Edited by Herman_4u - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Pragzz long time,but i really hope all well with you,

well its really gr8 to see 2 parts back to back congratulations thanks for this and sorry to say could not read as yet 😳 actually going out of city for some work

As always add my comments later

Take care,Have a good day 😃

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